Chapter 65 Editing
"Sometimes, I also look down on novels, although it's certainly not as good as you or Dai, but it's also discerning. Pen @ fun @ pavilion wWw. ο½ο½ο½Uο½Eγ ο½ο½ο½ο½β
"Oh...... Gladly so. Harusa nodded, stepped closer, and placed the notebook on the table.
"Then ask the store manager to take a look at it first, and then evaluate it...... I'm going to change my clothes now and get ready for work. β
"Okay, there you go. β
After seeing the boy leave, Rika looked at the notebook.
"It's actually all handwritten, and the handwriting is quite beautiful, it's really surprising that Haruta-kun still has this kind of skill. β
"'If you don't become a handsome guy, you'll die!'? hehe~ Is this ...... A novel based on himself?"
As soon as Rika read the title, she was intrigued and began to read it with great interest.
"The writing is pretty good, it's very comfortable to look at, the description is very vivid, and the narration is very interesting. β
"So many stalks are a little incomprehensible, but it's still fun to complain, and there is a wonderful sense of pleasure. β
"The girl is also very cute, heh~ I don't know if there is a realistic prototype......"
The beautiful store manager read and read, and gradually sank into it.
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This morning, the staff in the back kitchen felt a little strange.
The store manager, that is, the proprietress Amami Lixiang, appeared too late, and seemed a little absent-minded, and left for a while from time to time.
Her somewhat dull appearance is in obvious contrast with her usual calm and majestic image.
What the hell is going on?
The employees in the back kitchen were quietly talking when they were busy.
"Could it be that something happened at home?"
"I guess it's an old lover from the past who called. "It's ambiguous.
"Could it be that day?"
"You are all so naΓ―ve! Hmph, according to my eyesight, the store manager is actually wondering if he is pregnant!"
"Who's pregnant?" a cold voice rang out in the internal channel.
The male employee who spoke with a smug expression froze instantly, and the others looked at him in unison, looked at the microphone he had forgotten to turn off, and then turned his head away in unison, pretending that he didn't know anything and didn't know the stupid guy.
"Kato, deduct your salary or kneel down to apologize, you choose. β
"I'm sorry!!!
The staff of the dessert shop who heard such a teasing wail: "............"
"What the hell is going on in the back kitchen?" Harumi sighed as he adjusted the position of his headphones.
"Sa, God knows. Tanaka, who was passing by, was also puzzled.
After the busy time has passed, it is finally time to rest.
Harusa came to the store manager's room again and saw that Rika Amami was still reading the book.
"Harano-kun...... Come on. β
Sensing the boy entering the room, Rika looked up and smiled.
"Your work is pretty good. She was straightforward and gave a positive review.
"As a regular reader, this is a light novel that is worth my money. β
Harusa was naturally happy to hear such a comment.
"Thank you for the compliment, I'm glad that the work was recognized by the store manager. β
Tianhai Lixiang smiled a little more charmingly.
"I'm also excited to be your first reader, Wilderness...... Haruta-kun. β
"After reading your novel, the most impressive thing about the novel as a whole is the words. β
"Your descriptions, your narratives, are very well written, the best light novels I've ever read...... No, that's not enough! After all, I haven't read many light novels. β
"The text of your work is so good...... When I read a book, I can naturally imagine scenes in my head, and these images are moving, as if they are in front of me...... It's as if I'm not actually reading a book, I'm watching an anime!"
Rika was heartily amazed.
"It's so good, I can't help but read it repeatedly, you must have been polishing it for a long time, right? I can feel the great enthusiasm contained in it~"
Harusa smiled silently.
There's a lot of enthusiasm, but it's only one night to write this short story...... It's better not to say it, right?
Hey, it's too awesome to pretend.
"In addition to the text, your story and characters are also good, but I don't have a lot of experience, so I won't comment much on this. β
"I'm going to put you in touch with the editor I know, she's the female editor in charge of the fiction version of Dai's work, and she's a very nice person. β
Rika Amami took out her mobile phone and dialed a number.
"Hey, hello, Miss Yoshizawa. β
"I'm sorry to bother you at this time, there's something going on here, it's like this......"
Rika explained the request in succinct and crisp words.
"Did Dai mention him to you? yes, it's this high school student. β
"You're coming right over? Well, he's in the store...... I think he's fine. Rika glanced at Harusa.
"Okay, that's all. β
The beautiful store manager hung up the phone.
"Did you hear that, Haruta-kun? The editor is coming here right now to see your work...... And you as a person. β
Harusa nodded.
"Teacher Peach mentioned me to her, right?"
"That's right, Dai told her about going on a date with you. Rika sighed.
"Of course, Dai didn't casually say your real name, but only said that he wanted to go to the school festival with a first-year boy from Yuanhua Middle School named Yuanye Qingwu. β
"That's all but my real name!"
"Yes...... No way, she was Dai's classmate in high school, and she was one of the very few friends that Dai trusted, and it was natural for Dai to tell her about it. β
Harusa nodded again.
"You wouldn't mind, would you?" Rika blinked.
Of course, this is not a big secret. β
"That's right, but because Dai told her about it, she looks a little concerned about you......"
There was a subtle silence.
"Let me ask, this Miss Yoshizawa......" Harusa tugged at the corners of his mouth, "could it be...... Someone over there, huh?"
"No, it's not. Rika apparently understood the boy's hint and smiled bitterly.
"She's not that kind of person, but should I say that I formed a deep relationship with Dai when I got along with her in high school, or is it something else...... In short, she has a little bit of a special view of Dai...... Right?"
What is this very uncertain tone?
Seeing Harusa's eyes, Rika seemed to realize that the boy was complaining in her heart, and coughed slightly in embarrassment.
"Anyway, she's coming, and you'll see her soon. β
"She's a good editor, and she'll judge your work rightly no matter what...... Probably. β
What you said makes people a little worried, big sister!
Harusa suddenly felt that it didn't seem like a good idea to ask the proprietress to help introduce the editor?
Forget it, don't think too much, let's see people again.
About an hour later.
Harusa was called to the store manager's room again, and when he arrived, he saw a strange beauty sitting on the sofa inside, flipping through his notebook.
This beautiful woman was dressed in a yellow dress with a well-proportioned figure, skin-colored stockings on her long legs, long bright orange hair tied into beautiful long braids, slightly thick eyebrows, slightly pointed chin, ruddy lips slightly pursed, and dark yellow eyes with a hint of sharp light.
gives people the feeling that she is a cold and beautiful young professional woman, faintly exuding a sharp atmosphere.
"Hello......" Harusa said in greeting.
Suddenly, the woman raised her head and looked at his face with sharp eyes.
"You're Kiyogo Harano?"