"Uh...... I am. Pen Fun Pavilion www.biquge.info" Haruji blinked.

"It's rude, I'm a little emotional. Realizing that her tone was not quite right, the orange-haired woman put down her notebook and stood up, her posture very upright.

"Hello for the first time, I'm Saki Yoshizawa, the editor of Thunder Bunko. ”

As she spoke, she took out a business card, bowed her head slightly to Harusa, and handed it over with both hands.

"Hello, first meeting......" Harusa took the business card, took a look, and put it away.

"Miss Yoshizawa, you don't need to be so hard, he's just a high school student. Tian Hai Lixiang, who was watching from the sidelines, smiled bitterly.

"You could have spoken easily, but the way you look has made the atmosphere tense. ”

That's right, lady boss!" Haruji nodded in his heart.

"Really?" Saki Yoshizawa tilted her head slightly, "But whether you're a high school student or not, work is work and should be taken seriously." ”

"I didn't say I wouldn't let you take it seriously, I just ...... It's not an editorial office, it's not office hours, he's my employee, and you're my cousin's friend, so you don't have to make it look like a formal meeting. Rika shrugged.

"Serious talk is serious talk, and the atmosphere doesn't have to be stiff, that's what I mean. ”

"Oh......" Saki blinked, as if in understanding.

"Mr. Harano, do you think it's better to relax?"

"That's right. Also, you don't need to call me sir, just call me Yuanye. Harusa smiled.

Saki Yoshizawa squinted slightly when she saw the boy's smile.

"Okay, Yuanye, you can call me Yoshizawa. She said dryly.

Harusa's expression froze slightly.

Generally speaking, she should respond to the name "Harano-kun", right? It seems a little awkward to really call her surname directly, and she also asks the other party to call herself the same way, which is ......

Harusa didn't know how to complain.

Tianhai Lixiang, who was watching from the sidelines, was speechless and held her forehead.

Saki seemed to be completely unaware of this subtle atmosphere, picked up the notebook from the sofa, and flipped through it.

"I've read your work at a speed, Wilderness. ”

"Aside from the fact that the story is a bit old-fashioned, and the characterization is a little rough, this short story ...... The level of completion is quite high. ”

"Especially in terms of the words that Miss Tianhai has praised me so much, I have to admit that you have written a ...... Perfect!"

"Now I've just taken a look at it, and it's just that impression, if you make an evaluation......"

Saki said, looking up at Haruji's face, her eyes burning.

"It's a very attractive work, and it's up to the level of being published in the library!"

It has received quite high praise...... Harusa smiled.

This is an evaluation from a genuine light novel editor!

It is different from his own reading experience and the evaluation of the proprietress of light readers, and it is quite a weighty word.

"Thank you, for being able to get Yoshizawa...... I am very pleased with the editor's recognition...... It felt like a stone had been laid down in my heart. He scratched his face.

After all, he was writing a novel for the first time, and he was still quite nervous.

"If you want to submit this short story to us, you're welcome, but we usually accept electronic documents or printouts, so you'll have to type it into your computer. Saki continued.

"Also, although your novel is above standard without revision, it seems to me that there is still room for improvement...... If you want, I can read it carefully and give what I think can be improved, so that you can use it as a reference for modification. ”

"Please do it!" Harumi pleaded decisively.

Although he has a strong pen power with the system, he clearly knows that he actually has shortcomings in all aspects, and the improvement suggestions from the experienced light novel editor are undoubtedly what he needs.

Seeing Harusa's decisive attitude on this point, Saki Yoshizawa blinked and smiled for the first time since they met.

Her smile is not so much the beginning of the iceberg as the flower in the thorn bush, reflecting unexpected gentleness and beauty.

This is her nature wrapped in the cold and hard shell of a professional woman. Harusa couldn't help but think.

A female editor who is rigid on the outside and soft on the inside......

"Well, since you want to, then after you enter these into the computer, send a document to my mailbox, I will read it and write a suggestion, and then send it back to you so that you can complete the final draft. ”

"The email address, it's on my business card. With that, Saki handed the notebook in his hand to the other party.

"Okay, thanks. Harusa took the notebook back.

That's the end of the conversation.

Other things, such as how to submit the manuscript and what happens after submission, are to be known after the final draft is completed.

Ahem.

Just as Haruji was about to say goodbye, Saki Yoshizawa coughed.

"The matter of novels, that's how it goes...... Wilderness, I have something else I want to talk to you about. ”

The female editor's gaze became sharp again, and her eyes became even sharper than just now!

Harusa suddenly had the feeling that he was facing a female leopard.

"I heard that you are going to be with peaches...... With Dai, go on a date with the School Festival?"

That's what I said!

Harusa's face stiffened slightly, and he glanced at the proprietress at him.

Teenager, you can do it yourself...... Tianhai Lixiang gave him such a look, and calmly became a melon eater.

Hey, hey, this thing was initiated by you, eldest sister!!What kind of trouble is it to throw it at me!?Haruji complained hard in his heart.

He would love to sell the proprietress directly, but considering his salary......

"Hmm...... Yes, I have such an agreement with Mr. Peach. Harusa tugged at the corners of his mouth and said.

"She has a deep androphobia. Saki said in a low voice, taking a step closer to the other party.

"I know...... This is precisely to help the teacher cure her phobia...... It's not clear how much of an effect it can have, though. Harusa took a step back.

"Can you guarantee that you will protect Dai at that time? No, before that, as a man, can you guarantee that you will not hurt Dai!?" Saki took another step closer.

"I ...... I will try my best not to frighten the teacher and protect the teacher...... I promise!" Harumi stepped back again.

"What do you use to guarantee!?"

Sahi continued to approach, her face almost touching the other person's face, her eyes were as sharp as a knife, and her momentum was like that of a leopard about to prey.

What do you want me to use to guarantee it, big sister!? Haruji smiled bitterly in his heart.

He barely squinted at the proprietress for a moment, and found that Tianhai Lixiang was covering her mouth with her hands, and her shoulders shrugged slightly......

It's laughing, right? It must be laughing, right?

If you have room to laugh, you can appease this one!!

Harusa suddenly became inexplicably angry, and shouted out regardless of it.

"I ...... If I hurt my teacher, I will take responsibility for the rest of my life!"

Saki Yoshizawa froze suddenly.

Tianhai Lixiang was also stunned.

After Harusa finished shouting, he realized what he had said.

Damn, this seems to be very ambiguous!?

He just wanted to express that he would do it well no matter what, but on the spur of the moment, something seemed wrong with what he said.

"One...... A lifetime of responsibility?" muttered Saki Yoshizawa.

Then, she blushed.

A moment ago, she was as fierce as a female leopard, a strong and cold female editor, who was actually shy and blushed!?

It's really not too much of a contrast...... Harusa was a little dumbfounded.

Hey, I think I saw something like this last week?

"This ...... Such...... It's okay. Saki looked at the boy's face, blushed, and nodded.

"You actually have a deep consciousness of marrying Dai, which scared me...... Still, it's good. ”

Damn, this misunderstanding is big, hey-

Harusa shouted in his heart.

It's all a thing!?