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The two supporting actresses make their debut in the second half of episode five.

Yes, in the opinion of Hao Yunlai, the only female screenwriter in Cao Yifang's studio at this stage, the two important female characters in this drama can only be called supporting actresses, after all, she also finished watching the original work under Cao Fangfang's coercion and temptation.

After reading it, she realized that from a technical point of view, there is no female number one and no female number two, and from an emotional point of view, the portrayal of the male number two Wang Xizhi seems to be closer to the heroine.

How can this be done?

When they first adapted the script, Hao Yunlai struggled with this problem.

The original author had written a few books for ten days, but he didn't make much money, so this book made many concessions to the public's aesthetics for commercial reasons...... The public has an eternal demand for the existence of female characters, so he randomly added these two female characters.

When asked, he was not ashamed but proudly admitted that he was not good at writing emotional dramas, so he directly sealed the heroine's emotions and lifted the ban until near the end.

Since I'm not good at ...... That question was naturally left to the screenwriter in charge of reprocessing.

In order to increase production capacity through division of labor and cooperation, Cao Yifang took over other adaptation tasks, but the shaping of female characters and the refinement of the emotional line of the male and female protagonists were handed over to her.

Hao Yunlai was under a lot of pressure for a while.

Originally, there were two options. First, completely restore the original work, let the two supporting actresses play soy sauce, and their tasks are similar to many supporting characters with different faces and similar functions...... In the big genre of Shuangwen, almost all the characters don't need to have souls, they just exist to set off the protagonist from all angles.

In this way, the original party will not actually have any opinions...... After countless adaptations of bad dramas bombarded with eyeballs, even if the TV series can restore seventy percent of the plot, even if the scene is simple and the special effects are rough, they can meet it.

As for the lack of emotional drama, the creation of female characters has no sense of existence...... who cares？

But shortcomings are shortcomings after all, the first thing to consider in a TV series is the integrity of the entire work, facing a larger audience, if the weaknesses of the original author cannot be optimized, what is the point of the screenwriter?

Moreover.

Boss Cao would not agree to such laziness.

The incorrectly sized blue curtain was only two-thirds drawn, and in the messy share house, Hao Yunlai's thin shoulders wrapped around her legs, and the whole person was curled up in a relatively large sofa chair, and the larger desktop computer screen in front of her was playing Infinity.

She wanted to see what kind of effect her efforts were showing.

It's ridiculous to say, I have been working as a screenwriter for many years, and this may be the first TV that can see the traces of my own screenwriting.

……

In the copy of the haunted house in Shanchi, Qiu Shanqi and Xue Mengjiao make their first appearances in the play.

Six figures emerge from the white light in turn, appearing in the living room of a large European medieval-style mansion.

The overall grey living room is very spacious, with a closed ochre mahogany door directly behind them, a well-decorated fireplace in front of it, stairs leading to the second floor on both sides, and a total of four closed doors around it.

At this time when this drama was played, there was no eye-catching lifeform in the play except for the male protagonist and the second male.

They are still wearing the simple black clothes of novices, although the makeup artist in order to distinguish the difference between reality and the game, in the game world, all the characters' makeup is extraordinarily exquisite, but after all, the environment of these game copies is gray and depressing, and the protagonist's costume has not been changed, so it still doesn't look pleasing to the eye.

So the appearance of the two girls is quite amazing in comparison.

The settings of some Infinity Paradise games have been refined in the play, although it is said that in order to prevent indecent behavior in the game, the game characters cannot take off their clothes, but on this basis, the freedom to change clothes has been increased in the play, and if players find clothes in some dungeons, as long as they select change clothes in the menu bar, they can directly wear new clothes and bring them back to the landing space.

Therefore, Li Ruoyu and Gu Xiaoling in the play are all gray haunted houses and gray male players, with a dazzling bright color.

Xue Mengjiao was wearing a camouflage jacket, jeans and sneakers, with his hands in his jacket pockets, looking like a cool street style.

Qiu Shanqi's dress seems to be practical, wearing a hooded multi-pocket baseball jersey, a pair of multi-pocket cargo pants and a pair of hard leather boots.

The two of them are naturally not outstanding when they are dressed on the street, but in this game world that has not yet been tested, it is enough to make the eyes of these male players shine.

In this way, Cao Fang has even more reason to look at them a few more times.

When you first enter the game, players have their respective titles on top of their heads.

Cao Fang swept over Xue Mengjiao, looked at the top of Qiu Shanqi's head for a while, and then stared at her face unscrupulously.

At the same time, his Conan-esque inner monologue sounds.

"This game can modify the appearance,Usually female players care more about their appearance,Even if it's just a medium look,Not to mention that it is modified to be beautiful in the game,It's okay to modify it to a picturesque eyebrow...... This kind of murderous temperament is not a day's cold, in this era when appearance is justice, I must have suffered a lot of psychological trauma, so with resentment towards the world, I came to the game to kill all sides and vent my anger in my chest......"

Feeling the gaze, Qiu Shanqi looked sideways, "What are you looking at?"

In an instant, everyone's eyes converged.

Cao Fang snorted: "I think of your titles, ruthless beheaders, shrewd gunslingers, the titles of the two of you have a sense of déjà vu, ha...... Ha ha. ”

Qiu Shanqi ignored him, turned around and continued to look at the surrounding environment.

However, Xue Mengjiao took over and said with interest: "What a bad opening statement." ”

Hao Yunlai glanced at the barrage to see the audience's feedback.

[Hey, the heroine doesn't seem to be beautiful enough.] 】

[In the original book, Li Ruoyu changed his appearance in order to stay away from the harassment of you stinky men]

[Yes, I changed myself to ugliness]

[Smile and fry beautifully!]

[Xiaoxiao finally found a qualified makeup artist]

[The heroine seems to be a pure newcomer and has never filmed]

[Actually, it's okay, it's also a little beauty]

[Okay? The heroine was beaten by the second female appearance, okay]

[Wait...... Who is the heroine?Who is the second female lead?

[Long return line......

[But as long as the heroine is not the most beautiful in the whole play, she always feels unhappy]

[Although Ruoyu deliberately modified her appearance during the game, the reality is still beautiful!]

[Yes, how is the TV series organized?]

【…… Speechless to you straight men]

[Can't you really see that the makeup of the two of them is completely different?]

[This Li Ruoyu is almost without makeup now]

Hao Yunlai patted her little chest and was a little relieved.

At least, the audience has not yet reacted to the details of her modified role.

In order to explain the content of Hao Yunlai's work, let's start a small class in screenwriting.

In the process of adapting male frequency online literature, there is a big problem, that is, the advantages and disadvantages of male authors are often equally distinct and cannot be ignored.

General advantages: large pattern, rigorous upgrade system, and boundless brains......

Common disadvantages: The role settings are vague, especially the female characters are paper-based and prop-based, and the emotional scenes are not good at or are lazy to write.

In contrast, online literature pays more attention to longboard theory.

The reason is very simple, an author does not have to be good at all fields, as long as he has his own unique advantages, the long board is long enough, he is irreplaceable, and no matter how many other shortcomings are negligible, after all, readers have not been very demanding.

The TV series pays more attention to the barrel effect.

The amount of water a barrel can hold depends on the shortest plank.

Film and television dramas are limited in space, and redundant and useless characters or plots are not allowed. (In principle, this is the case, for the time being, domestic dramas do not comply)

If this drama is completely filmed in accordance with the original work, it will be of little use to other characters, but Gu Xiaoling and Li Ruoyu, two important female characters, if they are so wasteful, it is too extravagant for high-investment film and television dramas.

So, the next step is how to make both of their roles worthwhile.

First of all, solve the problem of blurred faces.

At this point, if you are lazy, you just need to amplify your personality traits.

Li Ruoyu is set up as a cold-faced violent woman, and her basic attributes are fine, but Hao Yunlai, as a female screenwriter who is good at romance, knows very well that creatures similar to the Iceberg Goddess genus, if they don't have enough down-to-earth side, their image is like love without a material foundation, and they will disperse when the wind blows, and they can't stand at all.

Hao Yunlai read the whole book, and she couldn't make up her specific image.

She is bold and has a rich personality.

is such a commercial drama with a lot of comedy attributes, and the heroine had better have a cute side, which is the so-called contrast cuteness.

Since Li Ruoyu has always been a cold-faced goddess, she gave her a small shortcoming that she couldn't get cold occasionally.

Hao Yunlai didn't think much about this link, and directly gave her the obsessive-compulsive disorder of Bai Di, the general manager of the studio.

The cuteness should also fit the character and story.

Her later soul is [Extreme Efficiency], and her character of pursuing extreme efficiency in doing things is too compatible with the obsessive-compulsive disorder of perfectionists.

In this way, the protagonist can have the means to bully Li Ruoyu and cause her to collapse in daily life...... It's a big deal to kneel on the keyboard after the cheapness is over.

After the cute point is set, then we have to consider the chemical reaction of the male and female protagonists.

This not only needs to consider the reason for the relationship between the two parties to provide sufficient logical basis, but also to consider the mode of getting along with the two in the later stage, whether they can rub enough sparks because of their personalities.

In the original work, Li Ruoyu is a fan of the book...... Considering that the protagonist writes reasoning, the protagonist himself is good at deducing riddles.

Hao Yunlai set up an ability and a character trait for Li Ruoyu.

Ability: Weaker than the ability to reason.

Personality traits: Competitive.

In this way, the two of them will have fun.

Originally, Li Ruoyu's love was sealed, and the protagonist and her actually couldn't erase any sparks, in this case, the sense of struggle can simulate a spark...... On the one hand, Li Ruoyu admires Feng Bujue's ability and literary brilliance, and on the other hand, he is not convinced by his stinky character.

In the game or in reality, the two people who are also competitive and love to use their brains get along competitively, and then whenever Li Ruoyu loses in her brainpower, she can sacrifice her personal force and reduce ten times with one force.

In this way, it is easy to pinch out a clear emotional path, some comedy jokes are greatly increased, and the protagonist Feng Bujue is more likely to appreciate such a girl.

As for Gu Xiaoling, first of all, as the name suggests, magnify its eccentric side, and then consider the basic pattern of strong women and weak men, so that she realizes that the male number two Wang Xizhi is completely different from the bewitching sluts who pursue her outside, and she chases after her in waves......

And then ......

Considering that this chapter is too many words, and the author is in a hurry to finish it, and you don't want to learn writing skills, skip it.

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In the copy of the haunted house in Shanchi, Cao Yifang and Qiu Shanqi were able to talk several times, and then each relied on their ability to find clues, dry firewood, friction and heat, Qiu Shanqi showed his skills and was amazing, while Cao Yifang was obviously slightly better in intelligence, leading everyone to break through the obstacle and complete the quest.

After it was over, several of them added friends.

There was a zombie copy in between, and after the game's open beta, Cao Yifang and Qiu Shanqi met again in the last two episodes.

A full moon hangs high in the night sky.

The camera moves down, in front of the gray fog, there is a campus standing quietly, the camera zooms in, and you can see a few big characters written at the entrance of Ye Kai High School.

The introduction of the opening CG is ghostly.

Cao Fang subconsciously looked at his teammates around him.

At this glance, Deng Shi was stunned.

Qiu Shanqi was also stunned when he saw that it was him.

The dark night is the background color, the white moonlight shines on the face, Qiu Shanqi's eyes are like autumn water, his lips are red and his teeth are white, and he has the amazing feeling brought by the retro filter of the old Hong Kong films.

For the change in the heroine's appearance, the audience reacted extremely fiercely.

[Is this the heroine?]

[It's over, I've fallen into the poison of love]

[The male protagonist won't fall in love at first sight, right?]

[In principle, this is the second view]

[How can it be love at first sight, only the intention of seeing color]

[What happened?!Why is it so beautiful all of a sudden?!]

[As if I saw Xiaoqian back then]

[Why is there so much nonsense? Can you lick the screen quietly?]

[It's just a good makeup and a hairstyle......]

[Didn't wear makeup before?]

[That makeup is very light]

【The Four Great Witchcraft of Asia Live Up to Their Reputation!】

[If you don't believe in how awesome makeup is, go search for photos of female celebrities before and after makeup]

[Wait, Li Ruoyu didn't change his face in the game at this time, right?]

Cao Fang's first reaction in the play was not to say hello, but to raise his eyes and open the game menu to confirm the teammates he was matched with...... Isn't she the one I've seen before.

After confirming that it was correct, he looked at it for a moment and asked, "Have you had plastic surgery?"

She clenched her fists instantly.

Qiu Shanqi's surprised expression instantly disappeared, and he said indifferently: "You should be glad that the rules of the game protect your personal safety. ”

"Tsk. Cao Fangfang had a clear understanding in his chest, and smiled: "I understand, everyone has a love for beauty, and the rain woman is also a ...... after all."

Qiu Shanqi got angry for no reason, although his tone was still cold, but no matter how he listened, he was explaining: "I originally adjusted my appearance, thinking that I could avoid harassment in the game, but later I found out that if my strength is too strong, I will be harassed, since this is the case, there is no need to use an unfamiliar face, and Xiao Ling is not used to it." ”

[Tsk, women are pleasing to themselves]

[Continue to explain, I love to listen]

[Gu Xiaoling: I didn't say this, don't wronged me]

[This is tempting!]

[What did the screenwriter change blindly?]

[It's okay that the character has collapsed, Li Ruoyu's love is sealed, and he won't be tempted at all]

[There's no need to add emotional drama, in fact, this kind of viewing is a brain hole]

Hao Yunlai in front of the computer looked a little uncomfortable, and she especially wanted to explain it to many dissatisfied original parties.

For example, she re-set the emotional line, and Li Ruoyu's love seal will produce cracks...... But she also felt that even if she said it, it was useless, and they would still be dissatisfied and think that this setting was too romantic.

As for the other, more complex reasons, not to mention, in fact, people have a preconceived notion that has nothing to do with right or wrong.

At the end, after the heroine cut off the female ghost with a sword, both of them gasped and looked at each other.

Qiu Shanqi finally showed a smile: "I'll see you later." ”

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The first season of Infinity Land ended unexpectedly.