Discussion about the plot and the male and female protagonists
I've been reading book reviews myself, and I've seen some readers think that this book has no plot, is too realistic, and not very enjoyable.
I think he's right.
Nowadays, the novel at a certain point is basically to set goals, and then create conflicts, and resolve conflicts, so as to achieve tension and drama, and advance the progress of the plot.
I'd love to write that, but I can't.
Why, because the premise book must have a main line, you can play like this. Countless small goals are advanced layer by layer, and finally reach the end, completing the great harmony of life.
I don't even have an outline in this book, and I still have a hairy main line.
It's basically based on the protagonist's personality and reality, speculate about what might happen to him, and then write down.
So it's normal for readers to say that it's too realistic, because in a sense, this is one of Zhou Kun's diaries.
In reality, if you have the same money ability as him, and then do the same thing, the result should be similar.
It's just that there is a difference in the speed of pushing down, and I can't be 100% realistic, otherwise Wang Pin's female employee would not be able to fight with him, and the two girls of JW Marriott would not be pushed down so quickly. But it's nothing more than a matter of time.
If you really want to look forward to the plot, at least after the protagonist's career starts, you can get in touch with a wider range of people and things, such as venture capital and contact with all kinds of entrepreneurial teams, and you can invest in some very interesting cases.
Do blockchain and do the Internet and then brag with Ma's father, go to Zhihu with Ponyma to answer questions, and go to MBA with Gou Dongliu to soak female college students.
And what can be spoiled is that there will be a very interesting person in the book.,It's also the protagonist of a realistic novel at a certain point.,The timeline of that novel happens to be about the same as this book.,I'm going to let Zhou Kun vote for the male protagonist's project.。
As for now, it's just drinking, eating, and playing with women, and by the way, it's obscene development. How much can you expect the protagonist to be out of the low-level interests as soon as he has money, and become a noble person to change the world?
Unrealistic.
Speaking of which, by the way, let's talk about the character of the male protagonist.,It's very simple.,It's just an ordinary person.。 Saying that he is a dick, I am teasing him.
Labeling is inherently a boring thing to do, and it's too one-sided.
If you want to say that he is a dick, in fact, you are not a dick yourself, I am also a dick, why bother with dicks.
If you want to be realistic, the character design will actually change, because people are a very complex thing.
There is rarely a pure good guy or a pure bad guy, everyone has a shining point, and everyone has a disgusting side.
If you want to write comprehensively, it's actually quite unpleasant, because it's not easy to write features when you're tired of writing. It's better to set up an interesting template and put it all the way in.,I like to watch this kind of thing myself.,For example, the male protagonist of a certain water bird.。
But this kind of writing is too boring.,I wrote the book for my own cool.,So it's still slowly pushing the male protagonist to experience different people and things.,I don't know what kind of person will come out in the end.。
It's fun that way.
As for the female owner.,Good girl, I'm reluctant to push it to the current male owner.,**There's no need to depict too much.,Anyway, it's going to be changed soon.。
The male protagonist can't meet any good girls in his current state of life.。
Every day, in addition to the hotel restaurant is a nightclub club, what good girls can you meet?
The kind of girl who even though I drink and get tattoos and have promiscuity, I know I'm a good girl?
What's the difference between this and finding gold in a dung pit, even if you open it for him, the end result is that the girl is ruined.
The current Zhou Kun is not capable of love, and a few days ago I saw an answer on Zhihu and said it was quite good.
The topic is "Why I feel that young people's romantic relationships have become more tense than ever before?"
The answer is Dake, and there is a passage in it that says: "They are like two hamsters in a cage, and the fast-paced life and skyrocketing prices make the space of the cage smaller and smaller, and force them to run in the cage constantly."
Running and running, she complained that he stepped on her foot, he said that she was the one who squeezed him first, she said that it was so tiring to be with him, and he said that it was not easy for me to be with you.
So they started complaining about each other and arguing with each other, thinking that the existence of the other person was the reason for their misfortune in life, and if the other person was considerate of him/her, he/she would definitely leave enough space for me.
But what they didn't realize was that it was actually because the cage was getting smaller and smaller that made them so squeezed. ”
Zhou Kun is also a hamster, but fortunately his space has become more spacious than ever, but now he has not deeply realized this, and he does not know that sharing is also a power.
Not only money, but also emotions, a purely self-centered person cannot experience the beauty of emotions.
If he has always felt that the relationship between men and women is an exchange of money and sex, then he will never have a good relationship in his life.
Even if he meets a good girl, he will not cherish it, because he feels that he has money and many choices, and he will not cherish it if he has not lost it.
Change takes time and opportunity, it is possible that he will not find that opportunity in his life, or he may be lucky enough to come across it, this thing is not easy to say, it can only depend on his creation.