Chapter 744: An Irreversible Difference
Although there is a movie plot as a reference, it is a visual picture after all.
What Zhang Chu has to do now is to transform the picture into words, how to set off the surrounding environment, what the appearance of the characters is, and what their expressions and motives must be explained clearly.
In fact, his writing is not a 100% copy of the content of the movie, but a certain degree of adaptation in it.
In the final analysis, "Artificial Intelligence" is just a short story, and if it is all written according to the plot of the movie, it will be derived into a long story of two or three hundred thousand words.
The plot of the story is actually very full, and some places in it need to be detailed properly, Zhang Chu is not sure if he can finish it in less than 20,000 words!
"It seems that I dug a hole for myself, and I said that I would write a short story, and this posture is developing towards a novella. ”
After he finished writing 3,000 words, he looked back and found that the plot had not progressed to the point where David was abandoned.
Now that Henry and Monica's son Martin have just woken up, he has to stop and consider the rest of the sentence, because what follows is a very cruel comparison!
From the baby in the eyes of his mother at the beginning, to the loss of all the attention later, David wants to win back the attention.
The plot must be portrayed well so that the story is more tense and exciting, so that the reader is not too dull.
Martin provokes David to eat spinach and causes damage to the line, David and Martin fall into the pool at the same time, and David is abandoned, these are all places where emotions can burst out!
If you can't write these places well, then the emotional expression will be worse, and you won't be able to experience how touching it is later.
He always wrote a long paragraph, and then shook his head to delete it, always feeling that this did not describe the tragic contrast, even if the robot and human look alike, there is a huge difference in nature!
"It's good to be honest as a copyist, it's too much of a toss now. Zhang Chu covered his head and was worried, he wanted to write a book to relax before the last final exam.
Who knows, but it takes so much brain power, and a lot of brain cells are killed.
In a blink of an eye, his stomach was already rumbling with hunger, but he didn't mean to get up to cook, but directly opened the takeaway software on his mobile phone and chose a steamed dish to deliver.
In winter, hot, spicy steamed vegetables are a great choice.
After Zhang Chu finished ordering takeout, he put his phone aside, and he continued to think about the plot.
Now after writing two sentences from time to time, I enter the space of the savior system to watch the movie, and through all kinds of details, I can determine whether I show the meaning of this plot by watching that clip repeatedly!
Fortunately, he has a system that can be referred to as an anti-heaven artifact, otherwise if it all depends on memory, it is estimated that he can remember the name and the main plot.
Sometimes writing is like that, always feeling that something is not right, but after changing it, I find that the original version is actually the most appropriate.
Now Zhang Chu is in such a situation, entangled in these details, constantly overturning and restarting, and then looking at the historical version of the document, only to find that the most suitable original has already appeared.
Kavin may last a long time, but if you get over it, it will be smooth sailing, and the thoughts will be well-flowing!
In just 30 minutes from ordering to delivery, he wrote more than 2,000 words in one go.
After saving the document temporarily, Zhang Chu went to the dining table in the living room to open the steaming takeaway package.
He knew that ordering takeout for a long time was not a good option, but now it seemed like there was no other way.
"I bought the villa before the winter vacation, and hired a special aunt to cook and clean when the time comes. ”
With such a big villa, Zhang Chu himself is definitely unwilling to do cleaning, and now this three-bedroom house is full of people from the cleaning company every week.
At that time, the aunt only needs to keep it clean and hygienic, and ask the labor company to complete the specific cleaning, otherwise the workload will definitely be very large!
Thinking of this, Zhang Chu couldn't help laughing, he was also a family with a house in Yanjing, how dare he think in his previous life.
Fitness is just to be able to eat and drink, and he doesn't want to become a muscular man like Schwarzenegger, so Zhang Chu took out a bottle of chilled fat house happy water in the refrigerator, which felt like ice and fire.
He really wanted to cook hot pot at home, but the smell of that thing was so great that a room with a bad exhaust system might remain for a long time.
After eating takeout, he looked at his phone and it was only eight o'clock in the evening, maybe he could upload the book "Artificial Intelligence" to Weibo in the early hours of the morning.
In recent days, there has been a lot less news about him on the Internet, Norway's forests, income of 350 million, and Sherlock, all of which are time-sensitive, and have been replaced by other news, movies, and gossip.
No one can always occupy the spotlight, this is a time of rapid change!
Just after he took the takeaway packaging box to the trash can in the corridor and poured it out, he actually received a message from Chen Muyang at this time, which has been made, do you want to take a look at this effect?"
At the time of the performance at the writers' annual meeting, Chen Muyang had just returned from Norway, and his agency spent a lot of money to shoot in the real Norwegian forest.
It's just that I'm editing and post-production all the time, so there are no reporters and passers-by in remote places to witness it, so online secrecy is very good.
Zhang Chu thought for a while, and said in his voice: "You send the video to my mailbox, and I'll take a look at it on the computer." ”
He has never been accustomed to watching videos on the screen of his mobile phone, and the iPad is already the limit!
Chen Muyang quickly replied: "No problem, I'll send it to you." If you have any opinions, please let me know in advance, and release this MV on time at 9 o'clock tomorrow morning, hoping to stimulate clicks and make "Norwegian Wood" get the first place on the hot charts. ”
"Then we'll have to see if we can win a championship. ”
Zhang Chu returned to the study, he was not in a hurry to write a book, but planned to watch this MV for a few minutes first to make himself digest.
The distant silence of the forest, shrouded in misty smoke, made the whole land look snow-white.
The combination of rugged coastlines, steep fjords and lush snow-covered forests has transformed Norway into a veritable forest country.
Winter is probably not the best time to visit the Norwegian Forest, where thousands of miles of ice and snow drift and it looks lonely.
But with the singing and snowflakes, it looks like it's the right time!
It seems to be isolated from the world, extraordinarily quiet, and the appearance of the aurora at night makes the whole video a little more erratic.
After Zhang Chu watched this MV, he replied to Chen Muyang with a few words on WeChat: "Very good!"
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