"Beauty save the bear!"

When Yi Qing said these four words, Kasumigaoka Shiyu's originally nervous mood when she heard this, her pink lips pursed tightly, and she couldn't help but show a smile.

"What's so funny!" Yi Qing nodded solemnly on the table.

Seeing this, Kasumigaoka Shiyu snorted lightly, but also sat up.

After all, if she asks Yi Qing for advice, then the other party's status is a teacher, and she naturally can't take the importance of her own works lightly.

Yi Qing nodded with satisfaction, this guy just transferred to another school, and he was completely dirty, and now is the time to seize the opportunity to take revenge, but for the other party's work, what he said is not wrong.

Heroes save beauty, which is a beautiful topic in itself.

Ancient and modern, Chinese and foreign, extraordinary romance.

But by the time modern fiction was in vogue, heroes saving beauty had become synonymous with blood.

Whether it is a Chinese online text or a Japanese light novel, it seems that it cannot get rid of this cliché.

But Yi Qing also knows that this is the general trend.

Because online texts, like light novels, pay attention to fast-paced. And the author wants to speed up the relationship between the protagonist and the heroine, so that their feelings can heat up, and the basic means is that the hero saves the beauty.

Then it led to the hero's rescue of beauty, and it became extremely bloody. Basically, every novel doesn't appear once or twice, and it's uncomfortable.

Some books even appear several times.

In this way, it is strange that the reader does not look at it. So he is very optimistic about the plot of Kasumigaoka Shiyu, a hero who saves beauty.

This is also the reason why he has ten lines at a glance, basically as long as there is a plot of heroes saving beauty, then he can basically guess the direction from the beginning to the end of the story.

"It's... How can this beauty save the bear?" Kasumigaoka Shiyu sat sideways in her position, staring at Yi Qing, a pair of perfect legs wrapped in the short skirt of the school uniform, slightly leaning on the cold table legs, looking extremely feminine, at this moment she faced Yi Qing and couldn't help asking.

subconsciously lowered his head and glanced at the pair of black silk thighs, because the other party moved, the short skirt rose slightly, showing a touch of absolute realm, which made people want to stop.

Coughing lightly, Yi Qing didn't dare to look at it more, "It's very simple, but you need to remember two points." The first point is that the direction of the plot needs to be followed by the character of the character. The second point is that there should be no plot bugs. ”

"I understand the second point, but what do you say about the first point?"

Although he asked, the corners of Kasumigaoka's mouth curled, and he seemed to be smiling. Then he moved his thighs slightly, slightly cocked, and lifted Erlang's legs.

Her thighs are slightly upturned, she doesn't tidy up her short skirt, and the black stockings on her legs seem to be grinding, and as soon as she puts it on, her right leg slides off slightly, looking extremely smooth.

Yi Qing was dumbfounded, but the other party's Erlang leg sitting posture, no matter which direction he looked at, he couldn't see any scenery, which seemed to be a kind of mental torture.

"You did it on purpose!" Although it was very eye-catching, Yi Qing couldn't help it.

"What?" Kasumigaoka Shiyu looked at Yi Qing in confusion, her quiet and confused state looked extremely cute and deceptive, but a hint of cunning flashed in her eyes.

"What, what?" Yi Qing frowned and snorted coldly, "I'm lecturing here, you are making small moves next to you, don't think I can't see it." Hurry up and sort it out, what kind of system!"

Hearing this, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu glanced at Yi Qing, a strange color flashed in his eyes, but he still obediently tidied up the short skirt, and he didn't bend Erlang's legs, his legs leaned side by side, his cherry mouth opened slightly, and his eyes were disdainful: "It's obviously a crazy leg control pervert, and he has to hide it to hide his dirty psychology, it's really hypocritical!"

The black line on his forehead, Yi Qing pretended not to hear it, ignored the other party's poisonous tongue, nodded the table, signaled the other party to listen carefully, and his own eyes were not looking at each other.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu pursed her lips, stopped talking, and listened carefully.

"The so-called plot direction needs to follow the personality of the characters, which is actually very simple to understand. As far as the male protagonist you set is concerned, the protagonist you set is kind, gentle, and indecisive.

Then when he encounters a thug bullying a girl, his kind character will drive him not to leave easily, but to find a way to help the bullied.

But a person is complicated, and indecision also makes him hesitate, because the protagonist himself is only one person, so he naturally knows that it is impossible to beat the gangsters.

You can also use a short paragraph or two of psychological descriptions to tell the reader about the protagonist's psychological entanglement. But in the end, it was the kind character that took the top spot, so he would still make up his mind to save the heroine.

Instead of being like you, as soon as you hear the cry for help, you rush up recklessly, so that the character set in the early stage collapses directly, how to write it later?"

After saying a lot, Yi Qing's mouth was a little dry, and suddenly a bottle of mineral water appeared in front of him, and he subconsciously took it from Kasumigaoka Shiyu's hand, "Thank you!"

Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu had just opened his mouth and didn't speak, when he saw Yi Qing directly open the bottle cap and drank it directly.

Seeing this, she was a little speechless, shook her head, and didn't care that the bottle of water was something she had also drunk, but asked: "I understand what you said, and it is really incisive to show the plot with character." So how to set up the female protagonist to save the male protagonist. ”

"Think for yourself!" After drinking the water, Yi Qing was embarrassed, looking at the fact that there was still more than half of the water, and he didn't know whether to return it to the other party or put it himself.

As a result, when he hesitated, the mineral water was directly taken back by Kasumigaoka Shiyu and put into the table.

Seeing this, Yi Qing continued: "This book was written by you, so the plot naturally needs you to imagine and set it, I just help you solve your doubts, if you don't understand anything, you can ask me, and you can also show me if you write it." But the story itself needs to be sketched by yourself, otherwise how can you improve?"

Hearing this, Kasumigaoka Shiyu couldn't refute, and he also woke up.

In terms of writing, it seems that he is too dependent on the other party, thinking of this, Kasumigaoka Shiyu thanked him in a low voice, and then turned around, and began to revise the manuscript.

Seeing this, Yi Qing smiled slightly and did not disturb the other party.

At this time, the two discussed for a while, and the students gradually arrived at the school, and time flew by.

After two or three days of transfer, Yi Qing also got acquainted with some students in the front row and could talk.

This is normal high school life, Yi Qing sighed after his youth, and then looked at the Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu next to him who was still immersed in his novel world, and he didn't say anything, after all, he was a scholar, and it shouldn't be anything if he didn't listen to class.

And just after the first class, after class, he wrote more than 2,000 words on his mobile phone, and wanted to use the class time to relax.

As a result, the next moment was patted on the shoulder, and he turned his head slightly, but it was the head teacher Harada Shi.

"You and Kasumigaoka-san, come to my office. ”

Yi Qing looked confused, and then he pulled Kasumigaoka Shiyu, who was still immersed in the novel, over with him.

"What do you think is the matter?"

"I don't know, but I know my train of thought was interrupted by him!"

Speaking of which, Kasumigaoka Shiyu gritted her teeth a little.

Hearing this, Yi Qing smiled.

Then Yi Qing and Kasumigaoka Shiyu came to the office with a confused face, but they saw Harada Zhi looking at him with admiration in his eyes, and Yi Qing was confused.

"You guys are in love, I'm not against it..."

As a result, Harada Zhi's mouth opened, and as soon as he opened his mouth, Yi Qing was completely shocked, and his eyes were incredulous.

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