"Why didn't you come to class yesterday?"

Hearing the voice, Kasumigaoka Shiyu's eyes couldn't help but gather. The sluggish expression also became smart, and he looked like he was in a daze just now, not knowing what he was thinking.

At this time, Meimu looked at Yi Qing, and after reacting from the daze, Wen Jing's surface also changed a little, and her tone was puzzled.

"Yesterday I had something to do, and I asked the teacher for a day off. By the way, I wasn't there yesterday, did anything interesting happen in the class?"

"The earth still rotates as usual without you. Nothing abnormal happens just because you're not there. ”

Crit!

Yi Qing smiled bitterly, "That's right, it seems that nothing interesting happened yesterday." ”

He just had nothing to do, after all, it was still early, he had just gotten up for breakfast, and he didn't want to code words. It just so happens that there is a beautiful girl next to him.,It's still the only person he calls a friend in the class.,Naturally, I want to talk.。

He doesn't have any bad intentions, he just wants to chat!

"How's your novel going?"

Kasumigaoka Shiyu clasped his hands to his chest, as if asking inadvertently.

"Well, I'm almost done. Do you want to see it?" Hearing this, Yi Qing thought of the other party's request before.

"I'll talk about that later. You didn't mean before... Did you point me out?I wrote something the night before, do you want to read it?" Kasumigaoka Shiyu was still a little unconvinced, but it was indeed Yi Qing who pointed her out before, and this must be admitted.

And when she went back that night, she also chatted with the editor on the Internet, but the editor praised Yi Qing's thinking, saying that he had a whimsical understanding of the portrayal of the heroine.

"So, you should listen to the man a lot, it might be helpful for you to write an article. ”

The editors said so, and Kasumigaoka Shiyu couldn't help but be depressed for a while, and she couldn't accept it.

As a result, I finished writing with great interest the night before yesterday, and after being satisfied, I didn't see Yiqing the next day, so that she even ran to the classroom office to ask the head teacher Harada Zhi, but the other party's strange eyes made her uncomfortable.

Definitely misunderstood!

"I'll see. Yi Qing said speechlessly.

As a result, so much has been said, is this still the purpose?

Kasumigaoka Shiyu took out the printed manuscript of "Love Metronome" from the table and handed it to Yi Qing.

Put the schoolbag away, take the manuscript casually, support the chin with one hand, shake the manuscript, and read it. This look of inattention made Kasumigaoka Shiyu grit his teeth, but he didn't say anything.

After all, there is a request for Yiqing.

"Why did you write such a little?" and the manuscript that he showed him the day before yesterday, there was one more page.

The other party has been stuck for so long, according to normal circumstances, after this kind of cardin state is lifted, generally speaking, it is impossible to think about it for the next period of time... Bah... Wellsprings, but not just write that page.

If you look closely, you won't even have two thousand words. With this amount of updates, do you want to write it to the Year of the Monkey?

And this is still a light novel, the so-called light novel is actually similar to Huaxia online literature.

If you really want to distinguish between the two types.

One is a novel with illustrations, and the other is a novel without illustrations.

So in Yi Qing's eyes, there is actually no difference between the two, and the light novel is a little more lofty, after all, there are illustrations.

However, no matter what kind of novel it is, in addition to traditional literature and youth literature, the amount of updates is an unavoidable topic.

Yi Qing understands that Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu wants to write a high-quality novel, but you write a thousand words in two days, when do you want to write it?

"Look first!" Hearing Yi Qing's complaint, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu raised her eyebrows slightly, and subconsciously shook her flawless beautiful legs wrapped in black silk.

The guy didn't even look at it and started lashing out at her.

Ignoring Kasumigaoka's tone of voice, Yi Qing began to look at it again.

He didn't read it anymore because he watched some two days ago, and he almost forgot about the plot or something.

Of course, with the support of fragmentary memories, he saw it very quickly in front of him, almost at a glance. After reaching the last page, Yi Qing still has ten lines at a glance.

Yes, it's still ten lines at a glance.

After reading it, Yi Qing's face was expressionless, which made Kasumigaoka Shiyu feel emotional.

Yi Qing placed the manuscript page and handed it to Kasumigaoka Shiyu.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu, who took the manuscript nervously, although she was not convinced by Yi Qing in her heart, also knew that the other party's understanding of the novel must be higher than her.

Therefore, Kasumigaoka Shiyu held her breath at this time, her legs were no longer shaking, and her expression became slightly solemn.

"Just... I'm going to read your manuscript in two states. Yi Qing frowned slightly, and pointed to the manuscript in the other party's hand, "One is to read from the author's perspective, and the other is to read from the reader's perspective." ”

"Is there any difference between these two states?" Obviously, Kasumigaoka Shiyu heard for the first time that there are two states of reading a novel.

Nodding, Yi Qing said: "Of course there is, reading it from the author's perspective is to strictly check it, find out the shortcomings of the novel, and then let you correct it."

For readers, the purpose of reading novels is nothing more than to find the coolness, moving, enthusiasm or inspiration of the words.

Every reader's focus is different, but every reader's requirements for a book are not too high, and their requirements are to be able to make him read it.

And if they can read it, then a novel will succeed in the initial stage. ”

"What about me?" Hearing this, Kasumigaoka Shiyu's heart tightened, and he had a bad premonition.

"Change, overhaul! You don't need to change the previous one, just change what you wrote later. Although he didn't want to say it, Yi Qing also knew that Kasumigaoka Shiyu didn't want to be panicked, and the other party obviously loved literature very much.

Then Yi Qing will not be merciful.

Rain... to see the rainbow.

"Why? The heroine's character I set is written according to what you said. Pursing her mouth tightly, Kasumigaoka Shiyu was extremely puzzled in her heart, because she felt very satisfied.

"There's no problem with the heroine's character, it's a problem with the plot!" Yi Qing shook his head, thinking of the plot he had just seen, and said, "It's too vulgar! And as soon as you write like this, your male protagonist's character collapses!"

Kasumigaoka Shiyu opened her mouth, but before she could speak, Yi Qing continued: "The character of the male protagonist you set is gentle and indecisive, so it is impossible to be too strong in terms of personality, so if you want to save the beauty, he will definitely hesitate."

As soon as you write, the protagonist hears a woman's cry for help and rushes up to save people without hesitation?

Of course, it's quite a good character to muster up the courage to stop the little gangsters, but this kind of plot is now in a hundred light novels, and there are ninety-nine with this kind of plot, and if you want to write a masterpiece, this kind of vulgar bloody scene is obviously not needed. ”

Lightly opened her pink lips and opened slightly, but Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu found that she couldn't refute it, and finally held back a sentence: "Then how should it be changed?"

"......The other way around!"

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