One sentence comment: relaxed style, a touch of reading (from reader Mu Ran: Cloud Book City)

     Idle in the world, leisurely see the field!

    "The Almighty Idler" is idle rather than omnipotent, full of a leisurely attitude to life, just like stealing a half-day of leisure under the bustling and hurried city.

    The opening chapter of "The Almighty Idler" cannot be said to be a masterpiece, but it can also be said to be a great success.

    The first three chapters, a lazy and leisurely atmosphere of life comes to the face, whether it is the classroom lecturer, or the roaring part of Zhu Xiaohua's phone, it all sets off the character of the protagonist Zhou Yi very well, and clearly shapes the image of the protagonist.

    However, the bridge section selected at the beginning is also a little unsatisfactory, and the bridge section where Zhou Yi took a taxi to the vegetable market has also been criticized by many readers, at least it gives people the feeling that there are more lazy elements than idleness.

    However, this is only a minor flaw. Looking at the existing full text, although it still can't get rid of the cool structure plot of pretending to step on people, its essence core is directly pointed to the word "leisurely", whether it is moving from the bustling city to the countryside and mountain villages, or in the complex society, the idealistic attitude of everything can be seen. In contrast, the contradictions and conflicts between the characters in the book, all kinds of pretending to step on people, and the plot have become petty fights.

     Although the plot of pretending to step on people can be a small fight, but it can't be abandoned, after all, the positioning of this article lies in the urban life text in online literature, and the needs of the online literature market cannot really abandon the structure of the cool article and turn to the story to interpret some life wise sayings.

    It's just because there are too many works of online Xiaobaiwen based on Shuangwen in today's online literature, so that people have the illusion that Shuangwen is an Internet Xiaobaiwen.

    Shuangwen is just a technique of online literature writing, not the main architectural pattern.

    For example, in the early stage of this article, the protagonist relies on the cooking skills of the system Xiaolu and the Hong Tieniu competition in the nursing home...... Plots such as these, in addition to highlighting the protagonist's leisurely pursuit of life from the side, can also make the reader smile, relax for a moment, and have a relaxed tone, but they are not as exciting and emotional as works such as fantasy.

     In terms of the details in the work, although the writing is smooth and the details are also in place, it is still slightly exaggerated for the works of urban life.

    For example, after the protagonist gains the ability to cook, whether it is cooking or tasting, the portrayal of food is very exciting, and even a little too exciting. This way of portraying and describing can't help but be reminiscent of the previous old animation "Little Master of China", which has its charm.

    As for the follow-up medical skills, planting, martial arts and other skills, the wonderful description is also slightly visible.

    However, in a work, the more elements, the higher the difficulty of control, in order to continue to maintain this leisurely and leisurely text atmosphere, it also takes a lot of energy to devote to it, I hope the author can make persistent efforts to continue to maintain.

    Overall, although the pace of "The Almighty Idler" is slow, it is quite a "leisurely" two-point charm, in which the author's light and dark heart is also cleverly interspersed with some life truths, so that readers can't help but smile in the busy life, get a moment of rest, and can also slightly expand some of the common sense of life that is ignored on weekdays, which is a masterpiece.