XXII. Error
Bao Xiaoming closed the door of the dormitory, found the post he said, and thought depressedly: "It's really a closed-door house, the disaster comes from the sky, and someone really slaps him in the face after reading too many novels." Looking for his own head, don't you know that my brother has a cheat, and he decisively wants to slap his face. ”
After opening WeChat at more than 1 o'clock in the middle of the night, there was no one chatting in the group at all. Bao Xiaoming was not in a hurry, sealed 10,000 red envelopes of 10,000 yuan, and wrote: "The 10,000 yuan red envelopes are up, grab the red envelopes, don't grab them." ”
Not for a while. People who stayed up late came out in droves.
"Thank you, Brother Ming"
"Thank you Brother Ming +1"
"Thank you Brother Ming +2"
Bao Xiaoming saw that everyone had blown up, so he hurriedly asked questions.
"Modern poems that write scenes must be classic. ”
The WeChat brigade didn't ask why, anyway, Bao Xiaoming had done more weird things, so when he was bored in the middle of the night and came out to have fun, I really hope that this kind of fun will be more.
I got the poems recommended by everyone, and asked everyone to send the notes and thought: "In case I am asked, fortunately, my memory is super good, and the books I memorize will rarely be forgotten." ”
The large classroom of the Department of Literature has not yet left, and about 50 students who are more famous in the Department of Literature are thinking hard, and many classmates and friends are sitting in the classroom, quietly waiting for them to write.
Zhang Jie is Guo Fucheng's roommate, although he did not fight with him, but he also paid attention to the situation in front of the computer in the dormitory.
The night shift management of Huaxia Forum received a challenge post from Jingda, and Zhejiang University replied generously, and after the name of the student number corresponded, he helped him post the poem on the challenge post at Zhejiang University.
Jingda Feng Gong VS Zhejiang University Bao Xiaoming. The challenge sticker was officially established. PS challenge stickers can be fought in principle as long as they are Zhejiang college students, and Zhejiang college students will not easily fight for the honor of the school.
"Mistake - Bao Xiaoming
I hit Jiangnan and walked through
The face of the season is like the blossoming of a lotus flower
The east wind does not come, and the catkins in March do not fly
Your heart is like a little lonely city
Just like the bluestone streets are late
The sound of trampling is not sounded, and the spring curtain of March is not opened
Your heart is a small window closed to it
My Dada's hooves are beautiful mistakes
I'm not a returner, I'm a passerby......"
Zhang Jie refreshed the webpage and saw that there were already people in the school who were fighting, and when he looked closely, he recognized it, and then read it carefully, the poem was so beautiful.
Especially in the end, my Dada's horse's hooves are a beautiful mistake, I am not a returnee, I am a passerby. This is the charm of poetry.
After half a ring, I remembered that my buddy was still working hard in the classroom, so I ran to the large classroom of the Department of Literature in the teaching building, where the large classroom of hundreds of people was like a conference room, and I found many classmates who went to the classroom like him along the way. only to find out that they were all informed.
ps: Actually, the professor in the big classroom also brought a computer, and everyone was afraid that the professor didn't look at the computer to refresh. Just talk to your students.
There were more than 300 top students in the writing department in the large classroom, along with their girlfriends, boyfriends, boyfriends and girlfriends, and classmates, who were discussing how to use the words of a certain poem, when suddenly a large group of people rushed to the classroom.
Everyone was quiet, and Li Qiang, who was running at the front, just opened the classroom door and shouted: "Professor Bingqing, Bao Xiaoming has responded, Bao Xiaoming has responded."
When Professor Bingqing heard this, he returned to the front of the lectern laptop and refreshed the Huaxia Forum, and sure enough, Bao Xiaoming's poem appeared.
After reading it gently, Professor Bingqing couldn't help but indulge in the charm of poetry, and the students saw that the professor was distracted, and they also wanted to know what poems Bao Xiaoming had written, and the front row dared to shout: "Professor Bing, Professor Bing, can you write Bao Xiaoming's poems on the blackboard and analyze them for us?"
Professor Bing Qingqing came back to his senses and wrote "Error" on the blackboard, and when everyone had commented on it, Professor Bingqing began to interpret it.
"Error" depicts the change of mood of a woman waiting for her return. Time passed, the lotus blossomed and fell, and in the long wait, her appearance gradually aged. In this "city" - the east wind does not come, the catkins do not fly"
Another touching feature of the poem is the beauty of its language, especially the "beautiful wrong" numbers
Everyone was fascinated by this beautiful poem and read it softly. Professor Bingqing personally annotated the poem at the bottom of the poem for everyone to enjoy.
Like the crazy city, the main sentiment skipped and wrote about the willow trees in the streets of the south of the Yangtze River, which can be regarded as a scene, of course, it can't be the same as Bao Xiaoming's Guilin landscape, which is purely written scenery, Feng Gong also knows, so he is a combination of poetry and scenery, but I didn't expect Bao Xiaoming to be a situational poem, or a modern lyric poem, which is simply a classic. The poetry is so beautiful
The next day, Feng Gong logged in and saw that Bao Xiaoming had responded, and he didn't read the poems to see the results, he supported 50,000 yuan, Bao Xiaoming! Although I know that Bao Xiaoming's fans will vote fairly, but there is such a difference in my heart, how can I not be annoyed.
In fact, Bao Xiaoming's fan army has not moved yet. Waiting for third-party reviews.
At noon, the old Chinese writer Qian Lao commented, ""Error", author Bao Xiaoming. This little poem is light and clear, and it is a masterpiece that is still popular. The whole poem takes the small city in the south of the Yangtze River as the central image, and writes about the feelings of the woman looking forward to returning to the people, with a beautiful and profound artistic conception, which is a classic of modern lyric poetry. ”
"Wind City Dawu Mountain Collection", the author Feng Gong, the poet uses a lot of poetic imagery in this poem, this is an imaginative poem, the whole text is beautiful and very artistic. It's a good work. ”
As soon as Qian Lao's comments came out, Bao Xiaoming's fan group immediately took action, and "Windy City Dawu Mountain Collection" slowly rose to 80,000, and "Error" 5 million.
Then the post bar is happy.
A post by a student at Zhejiang University, "On Feng Gong and Bao Xiaoming. ”
"The main owner of this bar is the school of Zhejiang University, but the main owner can idealize the literary competition of this time, the author of Feng Gong Youth Magazine, and write poetry. Countless articles, and won the championship of the Youth Literature Award. It took a year to prepare for this challenge, and works such as "Windy City Dawu Mountain" were completed half a year ago.
This is a carefully prepared incident to block Bao Xiaoming, although it won the Youth Literature Award, but it is not highly evaluated in the hearts of readers, this time it is to step on Bao Xiaoming's position, Zhejiang University is just an excuse for him.
Zhejiang University did not notify Bao Xiaoming this time, it was Feng Gong who named him on the challenge sticker, annoyed Bao Xiaoming's fans, and then Bao Xiaoming was woken up by fans in the middle of the night, and Bao Xiaoming's "mistake" was released in about 20 minutes. This is called not dying, not dying. It's too early.
was pressed to the ground by Bao Xiaoming and slapped his face with 5 million VS 80,000. There is a disparity in the score. Finally, I would like to mention Bao Xiaoming's poem, the favorite sentence of the bar. I'm not a returner, I'm a passerby."
The downstairs reply was also very joyful.
"If you don't die, you won't die, Ji Feng Gong. ”
"Feng Gong was beaten back. ”