Although Feng Gong was scolded, he was prepared at the beginning: "If you step on someone, you may be beaten back, the three poems you wrote are not bad, after this competition, the new book will definitely sell well, the editor is right, if the new book wants to sell well, and you don't have to pay advertising fees, it is best to find the author with the best sales of similar books in the country, no matter what the ending is, your name is also out, and the book is sold." ”

I didn't slow down and released two poems in a row, and Lu Ming was unprepared.

The literature lovers who stared at the Huaxia Forum refreshed and found that Feng Gong did not retreat, but issued two poems in a row.

"Walking Gently Through the School Garden" - Feng Gong

Gently I walked by,

Walking through this garden,

But I can't come into your heart,

My heart is being tested.

How much I wanted to:

Read the whispers of flowers,

Jingda Appreciation and Understanding:

Childhood is beautiful, but also curious, facing this beautiful and extraordinary world

"Everything" -- Feng Gong

Everything is fate

Everything is a cloud of smoke

Everything is the beginning without an ending

All hope comes with notes

All faith carries a groan

There was a moment of tranquility in all outbursts

Leave it all to time!

Jingda Appreciation and Understanding:

The whole poem is arranged in eleven rows, in one go, every sentence is wonderful, and every sentence is sharp. In addition to the first two simple and straightforward sentences: "Everything is fate, everything is a cloud of smoke", the remaining eight sentences, every sentence is paradox or irony, forming emotional and philosophical tension, very critical edge-

It is said that the battle between the author and Xiao Ming's fate is a fateful metaphor, it is all smoke and clouds, and it is the beginning of no ending.

The last two lines of the poem, after the outbreak, are quiet, and everything is left to time!

Even Xiao Ming's fans are infected by Feng Gong's courage, Feng Gong's talent is not inferior to Xiao Ming, and he is a new generation of proud talents who are born Yu and He Shengliang.

Whether it is infected or otherwise, Xiao Ming's fans, Feng Gong's own die-hard fans, passers-by have praised him, and more than 500,000 likes have given him for a while, Feng Gong looked at the 500,000 likes before putting it down, being able to conquer the opponent's fans, Feng Gong was already satisfied, and Feng Gong at this time didn't care about winning or losing.

Mr. Qian is also happy, and the younger generation of modern poetry has been inherited. It's also good to make trouble, I saw Feng Gongshi read it as soon as it came out, and I was very happy to comment on Qian Lao this time, I hope this kind of literary matter will come a few more times.

Qian Lao's book review: ""Walking Gently Through the School Garden" - Feng Gong

This little poem is beautifully written, elegantly worded, delicate in emotion, and meticulous in observation. This is a very good little poem, and it is worth reading. ”

"Everything" -- Feng Gong

The whole poem is eleven lines, and there are eleven "everything" in a row, forming a row of mountains and seas, and the tide of emotion is higher than the wave, and its worries are heavy, so heavy that people are breathless, but after reading the whole poem, they feel hearty and happy! ”

Qian Lao's comment is very pertinent, and Feng Gong has more than 1 million likes.

There was a lot of discussion on the Internet, and at this time, Bao Xiaoming was still in the classroom of the Department of Management, and no one in the Department of Literature was in the mood to go to class.

Seeing Xiao Ming come out, he shouted, "Lu Ming!"

Xiao Ming didn't know the president of the student union at all, and he stopped when he heard someone calling: "Hello." ”

"Hello, Lu Ming, I am Xu Hui, the president of the student union, and on behalf of the student union of the school, I invite you to compete with Feng Gong on behalf of the students of Zhejiang University. ”

Xiao Ming asked strangely, "Haven't I already published it?"

Xu Penny said: "Feng Gong posted two more articles in the morning"

Xiao Ming asked strangely: "Isn't it sent every morning in the early morning?" found that the two of them were gambling on the road to attract everyone's attention, "I'll go back to the dormitory now to take a look, since Feng Gong wants to end it quickly, then fulfill him, wait for me for two hours, I will publish"

Xu Hui watched Lu Ming turn around and walk towards the student apartment, so he didn't follow, as long as the notice arrived, it happened that a few people went to the cafeteria together.

Xiao Ming returned to the dormitory, boarded the Huaxia Forum, and after reading Feng Gong's poems, he sighed: "He is really talented and learned, and he is definitely not comparable to his own literary copyist." ”

Although I am sorry, Xiao Ming has already embarked on the road of no return for the copyist, and he has no regrets.

Or ask for help WeChat group. General questions Xiao Ming asked in the group, not to disturb Manyun.

The poem was sent over soon, everyone knew that Xiao Ming wanted a classic, but the general one was not sent, and I found that there was also a "Everything" similar to Feng Gong, and the annotation was that the meaning of the whole poem was very different, maybe the two regional natures, but also proved that "Everything" was classic enough.

What's even more interesting is that there is also a poem dedicated to refuting "This is Everything", he is going to vomit after reading "This is also Everything", this is really written to refute "Everything", do you want to do this, the earthlings are too good, and directly use other people's poems to refute this is completely a slap in the face poem.

Xiao Ming smiled and uploaded the two poems he picked up to the forum, and then went out to eat, and there should be no food in the school cafeteria at this time.

Mr. Qian had just had a good meal, sitting in front of the computer while drinking tea and poetry, happy, Mrs. Qian knew that the old man had this hobby, and she didn't bother.

The forum was refreshed, Xiao Ming's two poems came out, and Qian Lao skipped the previous one and stared at "This is Everything", and he knew that he was slapped in the face by looking at the name.

"This is also everything" - Lu Ming

Not all big trees

all were broken by the storm;

Not all seeds

None of the soil can be found to take root;

It's not all true

all lost in the desert of hearts;

Not all dreams

They are willing to have their wings broken.

No, not everything

It's all like you said!

Not all flames

All only burn themselves

without illuminating others;

Not all stars

All indicate only darkness

without reporting the dawn;

Not all singing

They all passed only by their ears

And not stay in the heart.

No, not everything

It's all like you said!

Not all appeals have gone unanswered;

Not all losses cannot be compensated;

Not all abysses perish;

Not all perdition is overlaid over the heads of the weak;

Not all minds

They are all trampled under their feet and rotten in the mud;

Not all consequences

It's all tears and blood, and they don't show joy.

Everything in the present is pregnant with the future,

Everything in the future grows from yesterday.

hope, and fight for it,

Please put it all on your shoulders.

Qian Lao sprayed as soon as he read two sentences, and this Lu Ming Qian Lao put the two copies together and studied them carefully.

In Lu Ming's poems, "everything" has room for reversal, and it is not a comprehensive negation, reflecting the poet's tenderness and romantic feelings. "Not all big trees / are broken by the strong wind / Not all seeds / can't find the soil to take root / Not all true feelings / are lost in the desert of people's hearts / Not all dreams / are willing to be broken off their wings / No, not everything is as you say!"

From this verse of the poem, it can be seen that Lu Ming uses a series of negative sentences, and the momentum is not very strong, which is a bit similar to telling the story, moving with emotion, and knowing with reason. Read the poem quietly.

It is easy to be moved by the deep affection contained in the poem, like the seed of a dandelion, which travels far away with the wind, and finally falls into the reader's heart, planting hope. In Lu Ming's view, "everything in the present is giving birth to the future/everything in the future grows in its yesterday", and "the future" is a positive future.

Because there is love, love is the endless nourishment of all things, there is hope, hope is the responsibility that we must adhere to. The words "big tree", "seed", "true love" and "dream" all contain hope.

And in Feng Gong's "Everything", "everything is fate/everything is a cloud of smoke/everything is the beginning without an ending/everything is a fleeting pursuit/all joy has no smile/all suffering has no tears, all language is repetition/all interactions are first encounters"

The poet uses a total negation, and although the words "fate", "smoke and clouds", "beginnings without an end", and "fleeting pursuit" are negative and depressing, they are very powerful on the whole.

The poet seems to see through everything, thus denying everything, and criticizing all this, it seems that the poem is deep and rich in connotation, and the poet's feelings are low-key and deep, silent, silent, not exploding in silence, just perishing in silence.

The two poems, one pessimistic and the other optimistic, are classics in modern poetry.

After Qian Lao finished commenting, he then looked at the poem in front of him