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Except for Wen Xia, a few people who stood on Chenyang's side, who were dissatisfied with my whitest provocation, the others listened to Chenyang's words, and their eyes lit up.

Even the location hosts, Yao Manman and Jiao Yingqiu, who remain neutral, can't bear to look forward to it.

As soon as Chenyang's voice fell, before I could speak in the whitest, Zhang Bolin spoke first, "Since the original author has said so, the whitest, you can talk about it, let us also learn and learn." ”

There are also fans next to it.

"Yes, you can talk about the whitest teacher. ”

"Teacher White, let's talk about it. ”

Everyone coaxed together, and the people who were standing on the side of Chenyang, Bai Yu and Wen Xia, were angry.

From just now, I made it clear that I was going to slap my face, and now I feel how embarrassed he is.

Still persuaded?

Could it be that if others don't speak, he won't say it?

Angry and angry, Shan Bai Yu and Wen Xia looked at Chenyang for the first time.

When I was at my most gray-haired, Chenyang stood relatively high in front and was easy to be seen.

Now, he just looked at me lightly, his face was full of lightness, and he still had a smile on his mouth, that look, that bearing, it is not an exaggeration to say that he is a passerby.

After being persuaded by others, I said in the whiteest, "I don't dare to say that I want to learn, I can only say that I am learning, but since the original author has no opinion, then I will briefly say it." ”

Although there is nothing wrong with this poem as a whole, it describes the characteristics of the goose in a very concise way, so to speak, it is a good work written from the perspective of an amateur.

But the most fatal aspect of this poem is that it takes the form of a near-body poem. ”

Xiao Lu Tanhua nodded and said, "That's true, our Chinese near-style poems are divided into five-character poems and seven-character poems, but obviously, Chenyang's "Song of the Goose" belongs to five-character poems, but its format does not conform to five-character poems. ”

I nodded and said, "Yes, everyone knows that the simplest difference between five-character poems and seven-character poems is the number of words in these kinds of near-body poems, five-character near-body poems have five words per sentence, and seven-character near-body poems have seven words per sentence.

So judging from the word count, this poem should be a five-character poem.

Five-character poetry is the most elaborate and demanding genre of near-style poetry, it is not simply piling up five words, but also paying attention to the rhythm. ”

First of all, the number of sentences is fixed, and the whole poem has only four sentences, each sentence is five words, that is, the number of words in the whole poem must be twenty words, not more and not less.

Looking at this poem again, the whole poem is only eighteen words, which is not in line with the requirements.

Secondly, his rhyme should also be strict, it can rhyme sentence by sentence, or rhyme with other sentences, and it should rhyme with flat rhyme, in short, the basic sentence structure is to add syllables between Ping Ping Ping or Ping Ping, which can be Ping Ping or Ping.

At this point, this poem can only be regarded as barely passing.

However, in addition to these, it is necessary to be neat and tidy, and I believe that everyone has learned about the battle in elementary school, and if you are interested, you can analyze it yourself. ”

Hima rush grass interjected, "The most white thing is good, so although this "Song of the Goose" is written very innocently, it can only be regarded as a pseudo-ancient poem dressed in close poetry, and it is not an excellent work. ”

Xiao Lu Tanhua added, "Speaking from the heart, with the rise of Chinese culture in recent years, we also encourage everyone to create, but we still recommend that before creating independently, we should study carefully, even if it is modern poetry, there are many doorways." ”

Shibai sighed, "Tanhua's words are actually what I often say to readers who come to ask me how to write poems, even if it seems to be a simple modern poem, it is actually not so simple.

Here I would also like to remind you that if you want to learn modern poetry, you must go to a regular bookstore to buy materials, and try not to look up on the Internet.

Because nowadays, many people just superimpose some seemingly gorgeous or tragic words and show them in the form of poems, telling everyone that this is modern poetry, and to put it mildly, this is a blasphemy against modern poetry!"

Yao Manlong asked, "Teacher Zhibai, what do you mean by blasphemy?"

I laughed and said, "I'm just talking about the phenomenon that is common now, such as the fact that some people now use microbroadcasting to put out their own poems, although it looks good at first glance, but it can't be savored." ”

Zhang Bolin nodded, "I also found out, and this phenomenon is still very serious now, and with the spread of microbroadcasting, these works seem to be very popular." ”

Hima rush deliberately sarcastic, "Maybe a new genre will emerge." ”

The more people talked, the more outrageous it became, the irony became stronger and stronger, and the direction became clearer and clearer, so they almost reported Chenyang's name.

Wen Xia Qi shivered.

Shan Bai Yu also clenched his teeth angrily.

There are also people in the fan group who can't get used to it and start muttering.

"Isn't it just a poem, it's just a matter of analyzing and analyzing, and it's so sneering. ”

"That's right, Chenyang writes novels, and writing poems is an amateur, of course, it can't compare to their professionalism. ”

"I used to like my whitest and Zhang Bolin, but now it seems that these people are really too careful, and a big fart is worth it. ”

"What do you know, I'm the whitest, they're here to find a venue today, and this time Chenyang was caught in pigtails, can he still have a good time? Of course, cynicism is inevitable. ”

"I just said that Yang Shen was too stupid, knowing that people had dug a pit waiting for him, he still jumped in, and let others say, if this is me, I will suffocate to death!"

There was a lot of discussion on the spot, and there was an uproar on the Internet.

"Ah, Chenyang's poem is just a pseudo-ancient poem?"

"No, I still think this song "Song of the Goose" is very good. ”

"I think it's good, too, but I've said it at the very least, and it seems that there is really a problem. ”

"What other modern poems do they say, do you mean "Declaration" and "Answer" written by Chenyang?"

"Needless to say, isn't it clear, but seriously, are the two poems written by Chenyang really just a modern poem?"

"I'll just say, whoever writes poetry at the beginning of these years writes what despicable is the pass of the despicable, and the feeling Chenyang doesn't know how to write poetry, now I'm balanced. ”

""Answer" and "Declaration" were written by Chenyang blindly? Is there a great god watching the video to analyze these two poems for you?"

In an instant, Chenyang's prestige fell to the bottom in the hearts of many netizens, and even many iron fans who followed Chenyang began to doubt in my most gushing analysis.

Fans on the Internet looked very anxious, and the atmosphere at the scene was not very good.

Yao Long hurriedly went up to play the round, "I heard that Mr. Chenyang's poem was written from the perspective of a child, it should have been a moment of negligence and didn't think about it so much, isn't it Mr. Chenyang?"

Besides, Chenyang only writes novels, how can he be stronger than me in the field of poetry?

Adhering to the principle of taking a step back and opening up the sky, he subconsciously put Chenyang in the position of retreating, and placed the steps he thought of at the foot of Chenyang while playing a round.

The microphone was handed over, and the camera cut to Chenyang.

Almost at the same time, everyone's eyes were focused on Chenyang.

There are worries, distress, doubts, sneers, sarcasms in these eyes, in short, after I finished speaking, the morning sun at this moment has completely become the target of everyone.

Haruka encouraged with his eyes.

Although it is a bit embarrassing to be pointed out in public, I am the whitest professional, and there is no shame in planting a heel in other people's professional fields, and what they say is also very right.

Therefore, Yao Manman only hopes that Chenyang can catch his own step now, don't be reluctant.

It's a pity she was wrong!

When she put the microphone in front of Chenyang, the eyebrows and eyes of the young man who had always maintained an elegant smile suddenly changed, and then, I heard him snort softly, shook his head and smiled, "You people, but that's it. ”