Chapter 602: The Gap

Makoto Takahashi's resentment towards the empty boy comes from the name that determines the difference between himself and his new wife Eiji!

Why is it that the new wife Eiji is qualified to be called a teacher while he is also a popular cartoonist of about the same age, but he has to be called an uncle in aggrieved terms?

Therefore, the reason why Makoto Takahashi chose to tease and ridicule the empty boy like this is naturally because of his revenge for this simple teenager's previous mistake...... Of course, it is not excluded that a certain secondary two cartoonist did all this in order to get the so-called [pleasure] from the empty boy!

Ignoring the fact that the empty boy was subjected to a mental attack, he knelt on the ground and let out a sad cry like a negative dog in life, and Makoto Takahashi, who was satisfied, did not pick up the manga draft completed by his new wife Eiji, but shifted his gaze to the real white girl!

"Teacher of Phoenix Academy...... Are you going to start with the manga manuscript of Mahaku-chan?" Although there was no communication, the new wife Eiji understood what Makoto Takahashi meant...... Although I was a little depressed at the beginning, but after considering the painting talent of the real white girl, the new wife Eiji's original mood was still a little depressed, and it was instantly replaced by full of expectations, "Although I said it with some regret...... But the manga manuscript of the real white sauce ...... Say the same expectation!"

"Oh, the king of black flames, are you also optimistic about the real white girl?" Takahashi Makoto put the manga draft he had completed on the table, and then took the manga draft completed by the real white girl in front of him, and sent an invitation to his new wife Eiji to observe at the same time! "Should you say that [the Demon King sees the same]...... Now, King of Black Flame, do you want to observe the world built by the True White Maiden together?"

"Of course!" When the new wife Eiji heard this, she immediately sat down next to Makoto Takahashi, urging a certain middle school and second cartoonist, while not forgetting to say to herself, "Like the former teacher of Majo, the kind of eyes that Mahaku-chan has are the kind of eyes that only the protagonist of the manga will have......"

"The ...... of the main character of the comic Eyes!?" The empty young man who had gradually come back to his senses, although he was a little concerned about the name of his new wife Eiji for the true white girl, but after hearing what his new wife Eiji said, he immediately turned his eyes to the true white girl, "Uh...... It seems that there is not much difference from before......"

"Hah, the eyes of the real white girl are burning with fiery fighting spirit......" In response to the question of the empty boy, the new wife Eiji immediately lost her voice and roared! "Can't you see it?"

"Although the two demon gods are the opponents, there is no confusion and hesitation in the eyes of the true white girl, and there is no fear and fear......" Makoto Takahashi took the words of his new wife Eiji, and launched a frenzied [cognitive indoctrination] skill against the empty young man, "Yes, it's just the sharpness of not admitting defeat, and the determination to catch up urgently...... After all, today's empty boy is just a mere mortal existence, and his superficial knowledge can naturally be forgiven!"

Can you perceive such a wealth of emotions in the expressionless eyes of Mahaku, are cartoonists all monsters that exist inhumanly...... Originally, the empty boy wanted to sigh like this, but when he saw Makoto Takahashi, who had just made a serious speech, he shamelessly took out the baumkuchen cake and began to play the double play of [temptation] and [feeding] to the real white girl, and the empty boy was not good in an instant!

"I'm sorry, I was wrong......" After noticing Makoto Takahashi's provocative gaze full of [pleasure], the young man Kuta decisively folded his hands and admitted his mistake......

Not only because he interrupted Makoto Takahashi and his new wife Eiji preparing to observe the manga draft completed by the real white girl, but more importantly, ...... The boy suddenly realized that the real mistake he had made was to discuss the so-called common sense with two abnormal cartoonists as a normal human being!

Regarding the way the Heroic Spirit is summoned, Takahashi Makoto has provided it to his new wife Eiji and the real white girl...... However, how to show it through comics depends entirely on the cartoonist's own ability!

For example, a large number of summoning and reciting lines that do not conform to the logic of language need to be filled in by the cartoonist in different scenes...... If you concentrate all the text in a single drawing, it becomes a light illustration instead of a comic!

Switching between the scenes of the summoning from different angles, the movements and expressions of the magicians in each scene have subtle changes, interspersed with mysterious and unpredictable magic arrays......

From the calm at first, to the excitement when chanting the incantation, to the change in the expression on the magician's face after summoning the Heroic Spirit......

Although it is only the story of the magician summoning the Heroic Spirit...... But I have to say that the real white girl's control over the sketch has indeed reached the level of amazement of his new wife Eiji and Makoto Takahashi!

From quiet to fast, from calm to excited, from unknown to expectant and even shocked...... In the manga manuscript completed by the real white girl, the entire ritual of the summoning of the heroic spirit is completely described with her imagination!

In particular, the sense of rhythm that the real white girl showed in just a few pages of manga through the storyboard of the sketch made Makoto Takahashi and his new wife Eiji, who were observers, breathe faster as the magician chanted in the manga manuscript, and his breathing gradually became short!

“…… It's amazing, it's really amazing!" Makoto Takahashi put down the sketch, stared at the real white girl, and unabashedly praised, "True white girl, you can actually do it to such an extent......"

"It's really interesting!" Eiji, the new wife who was observing the manga manuscript with Makoto Takahashi, also had a surprise glint in his eyes, "Although I already knew the follow-up development of the manga because of the spoilers of the previous Phoenix Yuan teacher, but after reading the manga manuscript that Mahaku-chan you completed, I still had the idea of continuing to read...... If you only look at this point, the manga you've completed is enough to be serialized in a weekly magazine!"

"What needs to be added...... Where is it?"

The real white girl was not complacent because of the evaluation of the two cartoonists, but put on a serious face and stared at the two who had just read the cartoon...... Although it usually seems a little natural in daily life, as long as it involves comics, the real white girl has a perception that is close to [intuition]!

"Hmm...... Although the plot of summoning the Heroic Spirit is very well designed, the ritual of the Heroic Spirit summoning is very rhythmic, and the painting skills are also quite good......" The new wife Eiji pondered for a moment, then looked up at the real white girl seriously, and said seriously word by word, "But according to the plot of the entire manga, the scene is too monotonous...... Or maybe it's too simple!"

"Monotonous?simple?" The real white girl tilted her head and pondered for a moment, her puzzled gaze wandering back and forth between Makoto Takahashi and his new wife Eiji, "Didn't the white coat ask to draw the plot of the Heroic Spirit Summoning? I've already done ......"

"You're really done, but you're just drawing the whole process of the summoning of a Heroic Spirit......" Makoto Takahashi flipped to the end of the manga manuscript completed by the Mashiro Girl, and said in a very flat tone, "If it's just a single Heroic Soul Summon, the scene you depict is even better than mine...... But didn't I already say it before, the so-called [Holy Grail War] is a battle between the Seven Masters and the Seven Heroic Soul Servants!"

The "......" true white girl seems to have realized the mistake she has made, so she does not defend herself!

"In other words, in this manga, the protagonist is not a fixed character, but the seven masters and the seven Heroic Soul Servants!" the new wife, Eiji, looked at the white girl who fell into silence, and immediately made a serious supplementary speech, "Although depending on the frequency of appearances and the length of time, there will be a distinction between the seven masters and the seven Heroic Spirit Servants...... But if you are completely biased towards a certain master and his heroic spirit servant, it will drag down the realm of the entire comic and make the comic boring!"

Although the real white girl wants to complain, the reason why she will focus on portraying a certain pair of masters and heroic spirit servants is because in the whole character design and plot provided by a middle and second cartoonist, the information about that pair is the most extensive and detailed...... However, after hearing the analysis given by his new wife Eiji, who obtained the same information as herself, the real white girl really realized that the gap between herself, who is regarded as a genius painter, and a popular manga artist in the real sense, is what it is!

Gaps in the way we think...... And the mastery of the whole manga plot!

According to the character design and plot given by Makoto Takahashi, the real white girl herself is just thinking about how to draw the scene when a certain heroic spirit is summoned...... And the new wife Eiji, who got the same information, analyzed the character design and plot direction of the entire comic according to the information given by a middle two cartoonist!

The gap between the dotted line and the polygon...... It's also the gap between myself and the popular cartoonist of the weekly!

"It seems that the King of Black Flame has also sensed the key to the whole manga!" Although Makoto Takahashi did not make any comments on the analysis of his new wife Eiji, such a statement affirmed the analysis of his new wife Eiji!

"Looking at the development of the manga from the perspective of multiple characters," a trace ......of amazement flashed in the eyes of the new wife Eiji, "No wonder the teacher of the Phoenix Academy will worship this comic as a masterpiece...... This alternative way of plot development alone is enough to leave a name in the history of comics!"

It's no wonder that the new wife Eiji would give such an admiration...... After all, according to the character and plot provided by Makoto Takahashi, the way the plot of this manga unfolds is completely different from most of the manga serialized in the weekly magazine "Shonen Jumk"!

Leaving aside the manga with a single character as the main character, in the multi-protagonist manga, whether it is "Naruto" or "Pirates", which has been regarded as a national manga, although there are multiple main characters, most of these characters are in the same camp, or they belong to the hostile camp...... And like today's comic, the seven masters and the seven heroic spirits, because each of the masters and the heroes have different personal wishes, but they belong to a number of different camps, which is the first time in the history of the comic book industry!

"Of course, the king of black flames, I've already said it before......" Makoto Takahashi showed a natural expression at his new wife Eiji's praise, "This manga ...... But it can be enshrined as a "god's work!"