Chapter 603: Lost in the [Realm].
Although he pointed out the problems in the manga manuscript completed by the real white girl, whether it is Makoto Takahashi or his new wife Eiji, they still have to admit one thing......
That's the manga draft that the real white girl completed in a short period of time, and the level of painting shown in it has reached the level called "Extreme"!
As far as the manga drafts completed by the real white girl are concerned, whether it is a single drawing or a storyboard, the level of completion of each page of the manga is quite high, whether it is the new wife of [Genius] Eiji or the [plug-in] Makoto Takahashi, if the same scene is completed, the two popular cartoonists of the weekly magazine "Shonen Jumk" can't draw the same level of manga drafts as the real white girl......
In other words, if the drawings of the real white girl are only of a single quality, neither the new wife Eiji nor Makoto Takahashi think that they can take this level of drawing to the next level...... After all, a true white girl with the level of a [world-class] painter, even if she can only be regarded as a pink newcomer in the cartoonist world, at least she is not comparable to a mere second-class cartoonist and a mere king of black flames!
"This is the strength of having the title of "world-class painter...... "Eiji, the new wife who usually burns like a hot-blooded fool and puts the manga manuscript on the table that has been read, but at this moment it is very rare to fall into silence......
"Oh, oh, oh, the King of Black Flame, after noticing the gap between them...... Do you feel the so-called [despair]?" Seeing a genius like his new wife Eiji, who was hit in the field he was good at, Makoto Takahashi should have shown a smile called [Pleasure] at this moment...... However, the fact is that Makoto Takahashi observed the attitude of his new wife Eiji, and recalled that he had a similar experience before, and the smile on his face was very reluctant, "Talent or talent...... Sometimes it's really annoying!"
“…… That's true!" The new wife Eiji subconsciously clenched the comic manuscript in her hand, and did not issue declarations such as "Only such a newcomer opponent will make my blood burn" as usual, but instead echoed the evaluation of a certain middle school cartoonist in approval!
It's also known as a [genius] existence.,Even the new wife Eiji who plans to draw comics as the most important thing in the rest of his life.,After seeing the painting talent shown by the real white girl.,It's clear that if it's just a simple painting foundation.,,I'm far inferior to the real white girl...... What makes the new wife Eiji even more depressed is that even if he spends the rest of his life trying his best to hone his painting skills, he still can't shorten the gap between himself and the real white girl!
This is called "talent...... Or "talent"!
Regarding the reaction of Makoto Takahashi and his new wife Eiji, the simple-minded real white girl didn't say much, just sat quietly on the side, and didn't have the consciousness to be the focus of discussion between the two cartoonists...... It's not that the true white girl has a strong mentality, but because when she studied painting in a foreign country in her early years, she was already used to such evaluations from others!
"Ahem...... It should be my turn next, right?" Makoto Takahashi put the manga manuscript on the table, motioned to his new wife Eiji and the real white girl to observe, and then turned his gaze to the empty boy who was thinking about life, "Young man, don't try to add drama to yourself there in the way of [I'm doing philosophical ♂ ♂ research ♂]! While the King of Black Flame and the True White Girl are trapped in my world, how about I give you psychological counseling?"
"That ......" to Takahashi Makoto's sudden kindness, the empty boy looked disgusted, "Please allow me to refuse cautiously!"
"Eh, boy, are you sure you really want to refuse? It's rare that I just said it this time,......" Takahashi Makoto looked at the empty boy with some surprise, and spread his hands helplessly, "By the way, you also know, because there is only one copy of the comic, so the King of Black Flame and the True White Girl must be close together to observe...... Have you decided that you are going to accept the power from the Forgiveness?"
"Uh...... I said uncle......" The corner of the empty boy's mouth twitched helplessly...... Let's not mention this, we're still good friends!
"Although I am a little unhappy that you use the irreverent title of [uncle] to me, but when I discussed with the King of Black Flame just now, your face seems to be a little abnormal!" Takahashi Makoto pointed at the real white girl, like a demon to persuade the empty boy, "I have a lot to say about the pressure from [genius] or [life dependent], as a person who has come over...... So I'll ask you again, boy, do you need to talk about your journey in private?"
“…… Okay!" I definitely agreed because I was coerced by the other party's force, not because I was poked by the other party...... Sota boy carried out self-hypnosis like this, and followed Makoto Takahashi to the next room!
As for how Makoto Takahashi reads the empty boy as [Psychological Counseling] Writing [Personality Reset] Let's not mention it for the time being, and now I will shift my attention to the real white girl and his new wife Eiji...... And the manga manuscript completed by Makoto Takahashi here!
Although the drawing level of cartoonists has a certain influence on comic works, it does not mean that every page of comic strips with extremely high drawing standards will be able to become popular comics or best-selling comics...... Regarding this principle, the best example is naturally the original version of "One Punch Man" with a painting style [full of magic]!
Well, in order to get rid of the suspicion of a number of crooks...... Or return your eyes to the new wife Eiji and the real white girl!
The sketch completed by Makoto Takahashi is not as good as the standard of the white girl...... The new wife, Eiji, knew this very clearly just when she first observed the manga drafts!
However, this does not prevent the new wife Eiji from continuing to observe the manga draft......
Even the new wife Eiji drew the same plot and the same character, and after a certain character appeared, the new wife Eiji knew what kind of plot would appear next, and who would be the next character to appear...... But at this moment, the new wife Eiji is still the same as the real white girl, and she looks at it with relish!
The so-called war ......
It does not necessarily refer to a large-scale armed battle between countries, but it may also be like the [Holy Grail War], where the seven Lords and the seven Heroic Spirits engage in one or more melee battles in the dark night that the world cannot detect!
In a sense, the [Holy Grail War] in the Moon World can only be regarded as a battle, not a war in the strict sense!
Therefore, if you want to successfully build this comic, the most important point is to combine the plot and character design given by Makoto Takahashi, and upgrade the scene that was originally just a scene of [battle] to [war]!
In other words, in the process of completing the comic, the cartoonist is very important to create the atmosphere of the comic!
Church......
Magician Misanjia ......
Homicidal ......
Students who want to prove themselves......
Magicians Guild ......
Interspersed with the plot of the summoning of the Heroic Spirits is the related plot that is complicated but not chaotic, so that the story of the [battle] between the seven masters and the Heroic Spirits has risen to the competition and competition between various forces around the [Holy Grail...... It became the so-called "war"!
The same character, the same plot...... Completely different from the world built by the real white girl, in the manga manuscript completed by Makoto Takahashi, just the scene when the Heroic Spirit is summoned can give people a premonition of the grandeur of the next scene!
Especially in the process of summoning the Heroic Spirit, Makoto Takahashi did not choose to depict the whole process from the summoning of a single Heroic Spirit like the True White Girl, but chose to stagger the ritual of summoning the Heroic Spirit by the six masters...... When each Master summons the Heroic Spirit, the spells they chant are different, but they are also in the order they were provided!
"Oooh...... It is worthy of the teacher of the Phoenix Academy!" The new wife Eiji became more and more excited the more she looked at it, and even completely ignored the true white girl who was also an observer, and shouted to herself......
You can't blame your new wife Eiji for not being a quiet [manga observer], after all, it's compared to the rhythmic chanting call that the real white girl did before...... This part of the plot completed by Makoto Takahashi is even more exciting!
Although "......" still put on a calm expression, he did not praise his new wife Eiji...... However, the surprise that flashed in the eyes of the true white girl showed the unrest in the girl's heart at the moment!
Although there is a gap in the quality of the drawing, it is more interesting than the manga I have completed...... Although she didn't open her mouth to admit it, the real white girl already realized that she had lost after reading the manga draft completed by Makoto Takahashi!
This is the gap in the realm...... Is it?
The white girl, who put down the comic manuscript, fell into silence thoughtfully...... 8)