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The three chapters of gold, in this time and space, have never appeared at all!

Longruo Forum is a writer's forum, but, whether it is an occasional big god or a group of people hitting the street, when everyone shares their writing experience, the most they say is that the plot is king.

Plot is king?

Lin Chen looked at Song Ping and said with a smile: "You mean that you came in strict accordance with the theory of 'plot is king'?"

Song Ping said: "That's right, you see that the plot of my first chapter is wonderful, the second chapter is combined with the facts of the old lady's blackmail, and the plot of the third chapter is ......."

All right!

Seeing Song Ping's endless talk, Lin Chen knelt down completely, but it shouldn't be, damn it, it stands to reason that since this time and space are coming according to such a rhythm, then the audience of the readership of the online article should be the same!

While Song Ping was explaining, Lin Chen opened and read the top ten works in sales, and then opened the Longruo forum, and saw a lot of authors' feelings, Lin Chen understood.

Sister, many people say that the plot is king, but many authors with good grades have said that they must take the protagonist as the core, write cool articles, and make readers happy!

But look at the views of these street fighters, all of them are cool texts, brain-dead texts, and small white texts, we have to write novels with connotation and loftiness!

With this point of view, I write abusive and unhappy novels, who will fight the street if you don't hit the street?

Therefore, Lin Chen directly interrupted Song Ping's gushing and said, "Let me ask you, what is the selling point of your book?"

Song Ping: "Of course it's black technology, the protagonist will use his own technological heritage to dabble in mobile phones." Computer. Internet and many other technologies. ”

Lin Chen continued: "Since it's 'technology' as the selling point. Then let me ask you, do your 100,000 words have anything to do with technology?"

Song Ping waved his hand slightly, and said disapprerovingly: "Lin Chen, you don't understand, I don't want the protagonist to upgrade too quickly in the early stage, and besides, how can technology be learned as it is said." I'm going to lay the groundwork. ”

Lin Chen was completely defeated, he gave an example: "If you go to the cinema to watch a good movie, and half an hour ago, the staff of the cinema sends you a flipbook, so that you have to watch it for half an hour to watch the movie, will you watch it?"

"Khan, of course not. ”

Lin Chen said with a smile: "Since you are writing about black technology, and your name is also "Science and Technology Storm", readers want to read science and technology when they see this name and introduction." You don't mention the abuse of the Lord in the first three chapters, you 100,000 words. Does it have anything to do with 'technology'?"

"I ......"

Song Ping was a little stunned.

Wang Jing was already clapping his hands on the side: "I'll rub, Lin Chen, what you said is so right, Song Ping, that's how I feel when I read your novels, your sister, I'm here to see science and technology, what you wrote is pretending to be a slap in the face, but it's not an egg!"

"Yes, Song Ping, Lin Chen is right, I suggest you change it. ”

"I always felt that there was something wrong with what you wrote, but I couldn't say it, Lin Chen said what I thought in my heart. ”

Several other people who like to read novels also gathered around, expressing their very much agreement with what Lin Chen said.

Song Ping is not stupid, he has understood since he started writing novels, how the author is self-satisfied is useless, he must let the reader like it, since 100,000 words have not been signed, it means that there is definitely a problem with writing.

"But how can you change it? Did you delete all my 100,000 words?"

Song Ping said with a wry smile.

"No need to delete. ”

Seeing Song Ping's long sigh of relief, Lin Chen smiled: "It's good if you reopen a copy." ”

"Khan!"

"Haha, Lin Chen is right, delete the dry hair, just open a new one. ”

"I feel that Lin Chen's words have caused 10,000 points of mental damage to Song Ping. ”

Everyone was happy to hear Lin Chen's turn!

Song Ping said speechlessly: "Okay, I'll register a vest number and reopen a new one, so what do you mean by the golden three chapters just now?"

Lin Chen carefully recalled the many theories he had seen in that time and space, and said: "Actually, it's very simple, it's to get out of the protagonist quickly, out of the golden finger quickly, quickly out of the first conflict, and delete all the irrelevant words."

Take your "Tech Storm" as an example, since it is a crossing, the first three chapters should be combined into one chapter, directly talking about crossing, the second chapter will be a golden finger, and the third chapter will be conflicting......"

Lin Chen used to be half an online author, he occasionally wrote novels, but every time he didn't have the perseverance to write enough, but when Lin Chen was bored, he often went to the forum, and occasionally saw some talks about how to write novels.

Another time and space, about what golden finger, about the first three chapters, about the rhythm, routines, how to taunt and slap the face, how to quickly counterattack, etc., there is a lot more theoretical knowledge.

Therefore, Lin Chen just said a few words casually according to his memory, but the problem is that these casual words are not the same thing when they are heard in Song Ping's ears.

I rub, can you still write novels like this?

Sister's, the golden three chapters, crossing, golden fingers, conflicts, dependent, can it be so analogous?

It turns out that the novels I used to read were all routine texts, and I really have a lot of knowledge.

The desire for "opportunities", obstacles for "challenges, crises", and actions for "fulfillment and enjoyment" are the troika of writing online articles.

……

Song Ping was really shocked, Lin Chen's theoretical knowledge, which was so ordinary and ordinary in his time and space, was completely novel in this world!

Not only Song Ping was stunned, but Liu Jian, Gao Fushuai and the others were also stunned when they looked at each other.

My second uncle and grandmother, the fourth child really understands online literature!

Your sister, do you want to be so professional, is this an online article or a lecture?

Even I, who don't read novels, feel so tall!

Everyone was completely on their knees!

How do you know everything?

Damn, you're really all-powerful!

In the classroom, the others were also stunned to look at Lin Chen's chatting and laughing there, his mouth was like a river, pointing out the country. Bow down!

Zhang Dabao was also a little jealous and resentful on the side. The more outstanding Lin Chen. The more pressure he felt!

"If you know too much, you will offend a lot of people, and the broadcasting department will go to the radio station for an internship, but it doesn't depend on your other knowledge. ”

Zhang Dabao sneered in his heart, and he comforted himself psychologically.

Lin Chen didn't notice Zhang Dabao, he smiled at this time: "That Song Ping, I don't know if this thing is useful or not, you can decide for yourself." After all, I don't understand online texts. ”

"Rub, it's useful, it's so useful. ”

Song Ping didn't know when he picked up a small notebook and had memorized every sentence of Lin Chen, and when he heard Lin Chen's words, Song Ping also burst into a rough sentence.

Do you call this an online article?

This is better than editors!

This is almost the theoretical emperor who completely exploded those Longruo forums!

Song Ping, who was a little excited, had already grabbed Lin Chen's hand: "That, Lin Chen, accept me as an apprentice!"

"Khan!"

Lin Chen was stunned and said: "Song Ping, I really don't understand online texts, I'm just a theoretical emperor." ”

Song Ping held Lin Chen's hand tightly: "No." Lin Chen, you are not a theoretical emperor. The gang of Longruo Forum is far worse than you, you must accept me as an apprentice. ”

Seeing that Song Ping in front of him was so out of shape, Lin Chen said with a smile: "You let go of my hand first, this will not have a good impact, I will not do it." ”

Song Ping said as if he didn't care: "It's okay, Lin Chen, I don't have a foundation, you must accept me as an apprentice, just with your theoretical knowledge and my talent, I believe that the starting point will definitely be able to rise a great god, and I am the sixth hero of the starting point." ”

As he spoke, Song Ping directly took out his mobile phone, opened the photo album, and said to Lin Chen: "Lin Chen, what do you think of this sister paper?"

Lin Chen looked at the sister paper in Song Ping's album, cute and cute, a little tiger tooth, laughed like a porcelain doll, and said seriously: "Not bad, very beautiful." ”

Song Ping smiled and said: "This is my sister, she is also in Hangzhou Province, Lin Chen, you just need to accept my apprentice, then I will introduce my sister to you, how about it?"

I rub!

The black line in Lin Chen's head, this is too exaggerated!

Damn, am I really the legendary protagonist Wang Ba's anger flashed, this is the rhythm of sending my sister!

Not only Lin Chen, but everyone else was also drunk!

Wang Jing even shouted: "Damn, Song Ping, are you still a little disciplined? Didn't you say that you were going to introduce your sister to me?"

Mao Xin also saw the photo of Song Ping's sister just now, and said excitedly: "Introduce it to me, Song Ping, I will let the fourth child accept you as an apprentice." ”

"Damn, this girl paper is my favorite type!"

"Song Ping, I taught you to write online articles, and you introduced your sister to me. ”

There are still a lot of singles in the broadcasting department, and they all shouted to Song Ping like wolves.

Fuck off!

Song Ping said angrily: "It doesn't work for you and my sister to introduce you, she doesn't like you like this, my sister's favorite is the god of online literature." ”

Lin Chen smiled bitterly: "Song Ping, that, I am really a theoretical emperor, if I am asked to write a novel, my special sister must also hit the street, so your sister is not suitable for me." ”

Song Ping said again and again: "No, my sister must be suitable for you, you believe me." ”

All right!

This is really the rhythm of sending a girl!

But who is Lin Chen?

How could he give up his principles because of this one girl?

Therefore, looking at Song Ping, he said seriously: "Song Ping, don't say it, what do you think of me, and use your sister as a bargaining chip, your sister knows how sad it should be, and I really can't write online articles, but you can write a beginning first, and I'll help you see it when the time comes, but I can't guarantee that what I said is correct." ”

Song Ping was a little ashamed when he heard Lin Chen's words, and at the same time said with some excitement: "Thank you, master!"

Lin Chen said: "If you call me master again, then I will really turn my face." ”

Song Ping said: "Okay, okay, thank you Lin Chen, I'll invite you to dinner another day." ”

As he spoke, Song Ping directly prepared to sit in the back row and digest what Lin Chen had just said.

"Wait!"

Lin Chen suddenly said aloud.

"Uh, what's wrong? Lin Chen, do you think of other theories again?"

Song Ping was stunned.

"Theory, your sister, what is our sister's QQ number?"

Lin Chen said angrily. (To be continued......) 5858xs