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The plot is ups and downs, gripping, and handled very well at the convenience of the protagonist, especially the portrayal of the characters is strengthened, and even a supporting character is injected with soul.

His book, a little bit of Zhang Dongjun's "The Strongest Cultivation in History", is not an imitation of the plot and plot. Rather, it imitates the system of that book.

When those immortals in the heavenly court wrote books, they all made a mistake, that is, the protagonist was too smooth, and almost all of them passed the test in seconds.

There is no plot that can make the protagonist struggle, but when he writes to the end, he finds that the protagonist is invincible and has become a lonely man seeking defeat, and even makes the reader wonder what the protagonist is doing with such a strong cultivation, is it just to become the first in the world?

And Erlang God absorbed the essence of Zhang Dongjun's book, and the protagonist will have a goal on the way to strength.

Zhang Dongjun looked at it and told Erlang God the part to be modified.

Erlang God nodded like an open-minded and studious child. The main reason is that Zhang Dongjun's mistakes are all right, and he can't refute them.

Zhang Dongjun is also ten years old, and he has read no less than hundreds of books, and he can point out at a glance that there are some things that need to be revised.

In the process of reading, Zhang Dongjun also speculated and asked Erlang God about hell.

"Zhenjun, is there any powerful person in hell?"

After hearing this, Erlangshen's face suddenly became heavy, and he asked, "Brother Jun, why are you asking this? ”

Zhang Dongjun stared at Erlang God's face and pretended to be angry: "Zhenjun, I treat you as a brother." I promised you anything you asked, but I didn't expect you to hide anything from me. Forget it, don't ask, I'm sleepy, you go back to the room and change it slowly. ”

After speaking, Zhang Dongjun took the opportunity to put the Xianyu mobile phone back into Erlang God's hand.

Seeing this, Erlang God hurriedly explained: "Oh, Brother Jun, don't be angry, just tell you!"

Zhang Dongjun saw that his plan succeeded, and secretly laughed in his heart: "Hehe, you still want to hide it from me." Labor and management have learned thirty-six strategies!"

"Say it, I'll listen to you!" Zhang Dongjun sat up, leaned on the head of the bed, and looked at Erlang God.

Jirojin sighed and began to tell the story of thousands of years ago.

"The eighteen layers of hell, unlike the underworld, are each governed by eighteen judges, and the eighteen judges are in charge of the king of Yama, one of the ten halls of Yama. ”

Thousands of years ago, a mortal incarnated as a demon and ruled the demon world. openly started a war with Heavenly Court, and although Heavenly Court won that battle, it also suffered heavy casualties, and the Demon Realm was hit hard, and it has been in a state of collapse ever since.

However, the mortal who ruled the demon realm actually cultivated an immortal and immortal body, and the Jade Emperor had no choice but to gather all the immortals and seal him in the eighteenth layer of hell.

However, before he was caught, he put a demon seed into the mortal world, and falsely claimed that after a thousand years, when the demon seed blossomed and fruited, he would make a comeback and dominate the Three Realms. Now that the millennium period has come, he is still locked up in hell, and the immortals just take this sentence as a joke and don't take it to heart at all. ”

Jirojin said this, and also began to laugh.

But Zhang Dongjun's face became ugly, and a demon seed was put into the mortal world. If what that person said was true, the Heavenly Realm Passage had been closed, and the immortals would not be able to support the Human Realm at all.

How could he stop it with just himself and a few people from Erdeng, didn't this group of unreliable immortals go down to earth to find the whereabouts of this demon seed?

"Zhenjun, haven't you ever thought of going down to earth to find that demon seed?" Zhang Dongjun said the question in his heart.

Erlang God shook his head: "The mortal world is so big, how to find it? The demon seed will not emit demonic energy, at that time, everyone was thinking, if the demon seed blossoms and bears fruit after a thousand years, it will definitely cause a vision of heaven and earth, and it will not be too late to go down to earth at that time." ”

"...... hell, the Heavenly Realm Passage has been sealed by people, if the Demon Seed is a disaster to the world, wouldn't it be isolated and helpless? With the cultivation realm that is now dying in the world, can you resist? You are too unreliable, right?" Zhang Dongjun couldn't help but start to break open and scold.

Erlang God patted him on the shoulder and said with a smile: "Oh, Brother Jun, why are you in a hurry." Isn't there you in charge of the mortal world, not to mention that there is me, the god of war of the heavenly court, what are you afraid of!"

Zhang Dongjun really wanted to say that his cultivation was in the heavenly court, and he was afraid that even the land could abuse him. It's up to me, damn it, I don't even know how I'm going to die when the time comes!

"Alas, it's useless to rely on this group of immortals, it's better to cultivate seriously and save the world!" Zhang Dongjun sighed, thinking secretly in his heart.

He finally knew who was being held in hell, and it turned out to be a big devil. If you are sealed, you can tear out a hole in the passage of hell, so if you break the seal and escape to the world, I am afraid that the end will really come.

Maybe it was the power of the sealing channel that used all the power to seal the Heavenly Passage, and the combined efforts of all the immortals in the Heavenly Court did not break the Heavenly Passage, and the combined efforts of the Ten Halls of Hades were able to open the passage of hell and release Li Quan. It seems that the seals of hell are weaker.

Zhang Dongjun seemed to have thought of something, hurriedly took out his mobile phone, clicked on the private message window of the Ten Palaces Hades, and kept tapping on the screen with both hands, sending a message.

"Are the Hades here, the seal of hell may be opened again, you must take strict care, and don't let any evil ghosts run into the mortal world!"

The King of the Ten Palaces replied in seconds: "Brother Jun, why did you remember to have a private chat with us today, when will your novel be updated, we all love to read your books!"

"Don't worry about the passage of hell, it was just an accident last time, didn't the passage of the heavenly realm also loosen, it is normal for the passage of hell to be loose. But don't worry, it won't happen again. ”

Zhang Dongjun saw the reply of the Ten Palaces Hades, with a look of anger on his face, this group of guys actually regarded the last incident as an accident.

He didn't want to be fooled by the Hades, so he replied directly: "If it wasn't an accident, maybe it was the devil who was sealed in hell to do it? The three ghost kings came to the world for a purpose, and it wasn't caused by accident at all." ”

King of the Ten Palaces: "Haha, Brother Jun, you are thinking too much." That demon has been sealed for so long, and he can't even use mana, how can he break the seal? At first, we thought so, but then we thought it was impossible. ”

"Is there anyone else in the underworld who can be stronger than the mana of our Ten Hall Yama Kings? You know, we ten of us can work together to send Li Quan alone. (To be continued.) )