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Zhang Dongjun stood up with Lin Qiandai's support. After the pain in the head of the pen ~ fun ~ pavilion www.biquge.info disappeared, it was replaced by a burst of numbness, weakness, and a feeling that the body was hollowed out.

He had a question in his mind about why he had an unbearable headache as long as he reasoned down.

Is it because someone is afraid that he will discover the truth? Is it true that his reasoning is all right?

Lin Qiandai saw that Zhang Dongjun was a little distracted, shook her hand in front of his eyes, and asked with concern, "Are you really okay?"

Zhang Dongjun shook his head and said with a wry smile: "Don't worry, it's okay." It's just a headache ahead!By the way, is it really only the three of you who know about the dragon qi in He's bi?"

Lin Qiandai nodded, with a look of affirmation: "Well, except for you, only my father and uncle know." ”

After hearing this, Zhang Dongjun fell into deep thought, the three powerful ghosts sent by the mastermind behind the scenes in hell may be able to sense the dragon qi in He's bi.

They were just unlucky enough to run into themselves. If He Shibi is in the hands of Father Lin for a day, then he will be in danger.

And when Lin Qiandai said that the heirloom is He's bi, as long as she reasoned, she would have a headache, so it showed that she was unintentionally banned by someone. This man must not want to let himself know the truth!

Zhang Dongjun must be that all these mysteries revolve around the dragon qi in He's bi.

Thinking about it this way, it is no coincidence that the Erlang God descended to earth, could it be that the great power who sealed the passage helped him in secret, so that the Erlang God could protect himself in the lower realm?

"Miss Lin, thank you for trusting me so much. If I'm not guessing wrong, your father should be in danger soon!" Zhang Dongjun said what was in his heart.

Lin Qiandai's face was obviously a little flustered after hearing this: "Zhang Dongjun, what should I do then? Actually, my father asked me to convey these words to you." He hopes that you can be the son-in-law of the Lin family and always guard the He family. ”

"It seems that your father is also aware of it, but Miss Lin doesn't need to be nervous, at least your father has been safe recently. You make arrangements, I want to see your father as soon as possible. Zhang Dongjun patted Lin Qiandai's shoulder and comforted.

As soon as Lin Qiandai wanted to say something, she was covered by Zhang Dongjun's mouth, because he heard footsteps slowly approaching.

After a few seconds, Li Na appeared in front of the door of the room, and said with a smile on her face: "Two, am I disturbing your Yaxing? Breakfast is ready, do you want to go down to eat, or will I serve it?"

Zhang Dongjun let go of the hand on Lin Qiandai's lips, turned around and responded with a smile: "Let's go down and eat!"

Then he winked at Lin Qiandai: "Miss Lin, let's go downstairs first." After breakfast, let's rehearse the plot!"

"Okay, the new drama is about to start filming recently, so we have to hurry. Otherwise, when I get to the crew, I, the director, will be embarrassed!"

Lin Qiandai, who often acts, has a particularly strong ability to adapt to changes, and she fully showed her acting skills.

"Alright, two big stars, come down and eat. I'll go down first to serve that big stomach!" Li Na said, and then turned and went downstairs.

Zhang Dongjun just wanted to say something, but was interrupted by Lin Qiandai.

"Do you want to say that I should be wary of Li Na, so as not to go down the old path and be betrayed by my agent?"

Zhang Dongjun nodded desperately, he really wanted to say this.

Lin Qiandai sat on the edge of the bed and began to tell about herself and Li Na.

"Zhang Dongjun, don't worry, Li Na has been an agent for so long, and she has become popular with several celebrities, and people in the industry have a high opinion of her. Sister Na and I have known each other for many years, and I am sure that she will not betray me. ”

Zhang Dongjun shook his head, he felt that Lin Qiandai was still too easy to trust others, and she didn't have any sense of defense at all.

From the first time he saw Li Na, he thought she was suspicious, but of course this was just his conjecture.

Doubt 1: First of all, it is not easy to become popular with a star, but she has been changing, what is the reason for this?

Suspicion 2: Li Na is almost an agent and a nanny, she does all the work, and she has no shelf at all. While this is nothing, many agents are no different from babysitting. But Li Na is a gold agent, and it is a little suspicious for her to do so.

"Miss Lin, you have to keep an eye on everything you do, and it's better to be careful. so as not to suffer a loss!" Zhang Dongjun still reminded.

Lin Qiandai didn't think so, stood up and pulled Zhang Dongjun downstairs, and said as she walked: "Okay, I know, I'm hungry, let's have breakfast." ”

When the two of them came downstairs, Erlang God had already turned on the big stomach king mode, eating poached eggs crazily.

This guy seems to have a soft spot for eggs, and can eat more than thirty in one go.

After breakfast, Lin Qiandai did not go out today, but went back to her room to catch up on sleep.

Zhang Dongjun hardly slept all night, and he went back to his room to get some sleep, but Erlang God had to argue to help him change the text.

Zhang Dongjun felt that it was nothing to change the text, anyway, it would take at most half an hour to agree.

But when he got the Xianyu mobile phone, he instantly regretted it, but he looked at Erlang God's eyes that were ready to eat people, and swallowed the words back.

200,000 words, a full 200,000 words! It took Erlang God four days to write 200,000 words!

I helped him revise it a few times a few times in a few intermittent ways, and it was revised to a total of twelve chapters.

This time, Zhang Dongjun looked directly at the thirteenth chapter, and I have to say that Erlang God's writing level has really improved very quickly. The first few times Zhang Dongjun taught him how to write in the world, it seems that he is still very useful.

If you are a newcomer, you can write a good novel as long as you remember a few tips, and your writing is average.

First of all, we must start with the subject matter, and a good subject matter is the key to attracting readers. First of all, there is nothing wrong with the theme chosen by Erlang God this time.

The second point is the fluency of the novel. Fluency is not the same as running accounts, but allowing readers to read smoothly, and cannot use those rare words or repeat a content in a few paragraphs.

For example: Xiao Ming, Xiao Qiang and Xiao Hong's father are the same person. If it is written, Xiao Ming's father is Xiaohong's father and Xiaoqiang's father. This makes it much less fluent to read.

Thirdly, if you are not a great god and do not have any readership, then the pace of writing a book must be fast. What is the background of the protagonist's identity, directly brief, straight to the topic. When you get the gold finger, you start pretending to compare, and when you slowly substitute the life experience of the protagonist in the future, you can also make a mystery to write.

The fourth point is the problem of substitution, which is to allow readers to read the book and integrate into the book, as if they are the protagonist. And the best way to feel a sense of substitution is to write more about the protagonist's perspective, and the protagonist must be domineering. (To be continued.) )