Since beating Chen Mo and starting to read the draft, Zhang Qian has stared at Chen Mo intently, and raised a heart to her throat, and her palms are sweating slightly.

Yes, Zhang Qian is very nervous, who let Chen Mo read the manuscript is the brainchild of her in the past seven days, although she is creating with the mentality of trying it out, but she still hopes that the work she writes can be recognized by "professionals".

Obviously, Chen Mo is a professional in Zhang Qian's eyes.

Fang Ling and Qi Min sat quietly on the side, their eyes flashing with curiosity from time to time, you must know that among their three best friends, Zhang Qian's language is the best, if even the novel written by Zhang Qian can't enter Chen Mo's eyes, the two women feel that they still silently take back their notebooks, because they don't want to be hit.

After a while, Chen Mo closed his notebook and raised his eyes to look at the author of the manuscript, Zhang Qian.

At this moment, Chen Mo found that his every move affected Zhang Qian's heart, and he couldn't help but laugh dumbly, and quipped: "Take it easy, you don't need to be so nervous, you look at me so unblinkingly, people who don't know still think that you are interesting to me, fortunately, there are only four of us here, if I meet your suitor, I can't even wash it when I jump into the Yellow River." ”

In the face of Chen Mo's jokes, the thin-skinned Zhang Qian made a big red face, and subconsciously cast a look of help to the two girlfriends, who knew that her two girlfriends not only did not help her out, but also secretly had fun on the side, which also made Zhang Qian's heart pull out the cold, and secretly spat "Accidentally making friends".

If the two girlfriends don't help her out, won't Zhang Qian solve the siege for herself?

Zhang Qian did not answer Chen Mo's words, but brought the topic on the right track: "What do you think of my writing?"

Chen Mo saw that Zhang Qian was concerned about the answer, and did not sell it, so he commented directly to the point: "Very good, the writing is smooth, the story is full of selling points, the style of the novel is relaxed, and it doesn't look tiring." ”

Huh~ Is this gone?

Zhang Qian pricked up her ears and looked at Chen Mo with a puzzled expression, God, this novel review is too short, isn't it? How does Zhang Qian feel that Editor Chen seems to be comforting her? This comment doesn't seem to have any substance.

Wow~ Why is this evaluation so short?

So what about the novels written by their best friends? OK or not? I guess it should be OK!

You have to take a breath when you hang yourself, can't you let him drink some water first?

Chen Mo took in the love of the three goddesses, he took a sip of the juice in front of him, and continued to comment: "Although the number of words in your novel is not much, only tens of thousands of words, but it points out the distinct character of the male and female protagonists, one is strong and domineering, quite a kind of heaven and the world, and the other is intelligent and independent, vowing not to be an accessory to men, and aspiring to be a daughter to be self-reliant."

Ancient Thought VS Modern Thought, Wushuang Prince VS Ace Female Agent, After the fierce collision of male and female protagonists, will the east wind overwhelm the west wind? Or will the west wind overwhelm the east wind? With this selling point alone, I dare to guarantee that Zhang Qian, your novel can whet the appetite of many readers and make them follow your novel.

In addition, your novel also has a lot of selling points, such as time-travel, counterattack, sweetness, alternate history, battle of wits and courage, etc. But here, I want to give you a piece of advice, since you are writing sweet texts, then you should not write about other male characters other than the female protagonist and the male protagonist in the future, or too much love-hate entanglement between the male protagonist and other female characters other than the female protagonist, and you must keep in mind that the style of your book is mainly 'relaxed', so when it comes to intrigue and treachery in the court in the future, you don't want to focus on it, otherwise a good sweet essay will be written by you as a palace fighting text, which can easily cause the loss of readers who expect you to write sweet texts. ”

When Zhang Qian heard this, she nodded frequently, and finally asked weakly, "What is Tianwen?"

Fang Ling added weakly, "Can you explain by the way what Gong Douwen is?"

Chen Mo was really convinced, what Zhang Qian wrote was a sweet text, she didn't know what a sweet text was?

Coincidentally, Fang Ling didn't know what Gong Douwen was?

Chen Mo saw that the three girls looked curious, and thought that the current online text was not as full of flowers as 2018 in another time and space, so he patiently explained: "Sweet text, as the name suggests, refers to the novel of 'sweet style', the main tone of the novel is mainly 'sweet', there is almost no plot of sadism in the whole text, the whole story makes people very happy to read, and the ending of the story ends with 'happiness'." Gong Douwen, as the name suggests, refers to the novel of 'Gong Dou theme', which is usually set in the background of the existence of facts or virtual ancient feudal dynasties, and tells the emotional entanglement or power struggle closely related to the struggle of the harem, the competition for favor of concubines, and the forbidden garden of the previous dynasty. ”

Oh~ The three girls finally have a preliminary understanding of "Sweet Text" and "Gong Douwen".

Chen Mo saw that the three girls seemed to understand whether they understood or not, and said: "Zhang Qian, taking the first tens of thousands of words of this novel you wrote, the style of writing is biased towards sweetness, and I can also see from the introduction and character introduction of your novel that you intend to use 'sweetness' throughout the book."

Take your novel as an example, your heroine is an ace agent, although she has crossed into an alternate world that is different from the history she knows, but as a modern person, she must have a lot of knowledge that ancient people do not have, and as an ace agent, she must also have a lot of stunts! Step by step, the process of struggling to the queen or emperor must be indispensable for a large-scale court struggle, so the main line of your article can be changed into a palace fighting text.

Of course, I don't say so much to let you change the main line and style, but to remind you to keep in mind the main line and style of your article, and don't change the main line and style on a sudden whim in the future, because in this way, it is easy to cause the loss of readers. ”

Zhang Qian humbly taught: "I know, I will pay attention to it in the future." ”

Chen Mo saw that Zhang Qian listened to his opinions, and couldn't help but reveal a teachable look, "Zhang Qian, although your novel has many advantages, there are also some shortcomings, for example, your beginning is a little procrastinating, if you can refine the beginning to make the story enter the theme as soon as possible, I think it will bring readers a better reading experience." Also,The first meeting between the female owner and the male owner,It can be made more shocking to the male owner.,So that the male owner will naturally generate curiosity.,Find out how the little waiter he used to discard is better than before? ”

Zhang Qian took out a pen and paper very seriously to record the main points that Chen Mo said, and after she finished recording, she looked up and asked, "Is there anything else that needs to be modified?"

Chen Mo shook his head slightly: "It's not for the time being." ”

Zhang Qian suddenly breathed a sigh of relief and asked, "So my novel can be published on the Internet after it is revised?"

Chen Mo nodded: "Yes, in fact, you can also publish it on the Internet now, but I think that if you revise this article and publish it online, the results you have achieved should be even better." ”

Zhang Qian smiled: "You are the editor, I listen to you." ”

Zhang Qian is not afraid of revising the novel, but she is afraid that the novel will be stillborn without even having a chance to revise it.

Chen Mo saw Zhang Qian's sincere attitude, and couldn't help but sigh in his heart that it was good to be new, and he could listen to the editor's opinions, and change the text when he said it, without saying anything.