Fang Ling saw that her best friend had benefited a lot, and she couldn't help but have a little expectation in her heart, she hoped that the manuscript she wrote could be recognized and praised by professionals like the manuscript written by her best friend.

Fang Ling waited for a few minutes, but she didn't see Chen Mo pick up her manuscript, and couldn't help but say, "CEO Chen, can you read the novel I wrote next?"

Reading the manuscript is not reading a book, especially after reading it, he has to comment, can he empty his brain and rest for a few more minutes?

"Don't be impatient, I'll watch. ”

After finishing speaking, Chen Mo picked up Fang Ling's notebook.

When Fang Ling saw this, her spirits perked up, I don't know what CEO Chen Da would say about her work? Don't be "bullshit", otherwise she will buy a piece of tofu and die.

Chen Mo opened Fang Ling's notebook, and suddenly had the feeling of "why does the exam have a paper score", how can the gap between your sister and girlfriends be so big?

Zhang Qian's handwriting is beautiful, her manuscript gives people a pleasing visual experience, on the other hand, Fang Ling's handwriting is sloppy, and her manuscript makes Chen Mo look at it and can't help but be big.

Alas ~ there is no gap without contrast.

Chen Mo rubbed his temples and said, "Fang Ling, I think you need a computer." ”

Fang Ling looked puzzled, and blurted out, "Why?"

Chen Mo was not afraid of hurting Fang Ling's self-esteem, and said frankly: "Look at the words you write, don't talk about the scribbled font that you have separated, the key is that there are still a lot of scribbles and corrections, and there are typos after the corrections, do you know that this affects the aesthetics very much? It can be said that reading your manuscript is simply a kind of torture! If you have a computer and write and change codewords, won't this manuscript become an electronic manuscript? In this way, I don't have to have so much effort to read. ”

It's really not that Chen Mo wants to complain, he glanced at Fang Ling's manuscript at random, and he didn't even have the interest to read the manuscript, it is no exaggeration to say that Fang Ling's square words are only at the level of elementary school students, no matter how you look at it, you feel that it is such an ugly character.

Fang Ling was unceremoniously criticized by Chen Mo for her poor handwriting, but she didn't refute it, because she knew that Chen Mo was stating a fact, but was that the point? The point was the story she wrote!

Fang Ling wanted Chen Mo to take a moment, isn't it just that the handwriting is almost good, as long as the story is exciting. But when the words came to her lips, Fang Ling changed her words to "Then should I copy this manuscript on the computer first?"

Hearing this, Chen Mo glanced at Fang Ling: "Do you have a computer?"

Fang Ling shook her head: "No." But I can go to an internet café or go to Minmin's house. ”

Does Qi Min have a computer at home? Then why does she also use a pen to write, could it be that she writes well, and wants to add some "volume points" based on this?

Chen Mo was quite puzzled and looked at Qi Min: "Do you have a computer at home?"

Qi Min nodded: "Yes! It's just that my home has stopped the broadband, and the computer can't access the Internet." ”

Chen Mo nodded, and he said, there must be a reason why Qi Min's family has a computer and still writes by hand, and I dare to love that Qi Min's computer can't be connected to the Internet, so how different is this from not having a computer?

Fang Ling slapped her head: "Oh, look at my memory, I forgot that Minmin's computer can't be connected to the Internet." ”

Chen Mo's face showed helplessness: "Even if you can connect to the Internet, I can't let you transcribe, what a waste of time to go back and forth?" So I can only work my eyes first, I hope you won't torture me like this next time."

Fang Ling grinned: "I know that CEO Chen is the best." ”

Chen Mo raised his palm to make a blocking pose: "Don't sell cute, I'll help you read the draft first." ”

After speaking, Chen Mo concentrated on looking at Fang Ling's manuscript seriously.

First of all, what caught his eye was Fang Ling's tentative novel title, that is, "My Lily Life in Datang"!

Sure enough, girls don't have the same way of thinking about writing novels as boys.

Burst~

When Chen Mo took a look at the introduction of the novel "My Lily Career in Datang", he realized that he had underestimated Fang Ling's brain hole, and dared to love Fang Ling's writing was not simply crossing the lily, but transforming into a lily!

If you don't believe me, please see the introduction of "My Lily Career in Datang".

"Playboy Feng Hanxiao accidentally capsized and crossed into the Tang world written by Master Huang because he stepped on nine boats!

Wei Zhenzhen, Song Yuhua, Song Yuzhi, Shang Xiuxun, Shen Luoyan, Shang Xiufang, Shi Feixuan, Wan Wan, Shi Qingxuan, Fu Junyu, Fu Junyu, Shan Wanjing, Shan Meixian, Zhu Yuyan, Dugufeng, Li Xiuning......

Haha~ The beauties of Datang, your brother Feng is here!

Before the eldest prince Feng could be happy that a good man would not live long, and that the scourge would be left for thousands of years, and that he would not die in great calamity, he would have a blessing! However, he discovered an extremely terrible and sad fact, his body was missing a certain crime tool that he was usually most proud of, and at the same time, there were two more big balls that he usually loved to play the most!

Woo woo woo ~ I don't want to be a beauty, I want to soak all the beauties of the Tang Dynasty!

Playboy Feng Hanxiao turned into everyone's beautiful Liu Hanyan, but she didn't change her romantic nature of loving beauties in her bones, since she has no ability to change her personality, let her change the sexual orientation of the Tang beauties, and carry out the great lily cause to the end!"

Putting aside Fang Ling's ugly words, her novel is still relatively innovative, adding "transformation" and "lily" on the basis of the selling point of "homo", which can be said to have created a precedent for the transformation of lilies in today's online literature industry.

Looking at 2018, which is another time and space, it is not uncommon to transform into a lily, but in 2002 in the world of novels, Fang Ling created a new genre of online literature, which is the founder of the out-and-out transformation of the lily.

However, the transformation of lilies has always been a niche, and the audience is there, but it is relatively small, especially in this year, the stallion literature has not been flooded, and the readers' tastes have not been raised, and I don't know if there is a market for "My Lily Career in Datang"?

Regardless of whether there is or not, what he says doesn't count, everything has to be verified by the market, what Chen Mo can do now is to read the draft.

The author's poor handwriting really affects the reader's reading experience, and Chen Mo mourned for three minutes for his sinful eyes.

Half an hour later, Chen Mo finally finished reading Fang Ling's manuscript.

Putting aside the creativity of the novel, Fang Ling's "My Lily Career in the Tang Dynasty" and his friend Zhu Tian's "Saving the Beauty of the Tang Dynasty" are the same style, both of which follow the route of the stallion harem, the difference is that the protagonists of the two books conquer the beauties in different ways and in different orders.

Now let's see if today's readers can accept the transformation into a lily stream novel?

After a long wait, Fang Ling finally waited for Chen Mo to finish reading her manuscript, and she couldn't wait for Chen Mo to open her mouth and took the lead in asking: "CEO Chen, how do you think my novel is written, is it eligible to be published on the Internet?"

Chen Mo held his forehead: "Your requirements are really low." ”

Fang Ling was overjoyed when she heard this: "So the novel I wrote can be published on the Internet?"

Chen Mo nodded: "Well, your novel is full of creativity, but it's a bit off the edge, I can't guarantee you whether it can be popular." ”

Fang Ling didn't mind: "It's okay, as long as you think that the novel I wrote can be published on the Internet, I'm already very happy." ”

Fang Ling writes online articles because of coincidence, the novels she writes can be recognized by Chen Mo, a professional, she is as happy as passing the exam without having to make up the exam, you must know that before getting Chen Mo's answer, she who has been working behind closed doors will fall into confusion from time to time, I don't know if she is wasting time?

Now, Fang Ling seemed to have taken a reassuring pill and was overjoyed.

Qi Min saw that the novels written by the two best friends had been approved by Chen Mo one after another, and the whole person couldn't help but get nervous, and I didn't know if the novels she wrote could be recognized in Chen Mo's eyes?