Testimonials
Anyway, it's finally finished.,Actually, I wrote the testimonial in advance.,But I really didn't expect that when I uploaded the last chapter.,It's going to be like this.。
White is my second book.,When I first opened the book,,I would rather change slowly.,I also want to write it well.,Looking back,Overall, I feel like I'm still a lot better than sick Jiao.,The most real point is that the plot of this book is not beyond my control.,Until the end was according to the expected path.,Didn't repeat the mistake of walking on the otaku line in the middle of the book and never returning.。
However, it must be said that if it is out of the expected range, it is still the ending. It's not that the ending takes the snow vegetable line.,It's a possibility to leave a trace of the ball at the end.,It's probably because I communicated with you in the two days after the liver exploded.,I think this book can actually write a cc chapter or something.,Although this book doesn't have an if line like sick Jiao.,But I think it's still possible to write a CC extra-fan.,Although it's estimated to be a lifetime series.,But everyone also saw that the sick Ayase Fanwai on the other side was also written.,So,Perhaps,Probably,You can hope for the follow-up CC chapter of white.,The plot should be combined with the linkage of the two works. 。 The main plot is a rematch of Tuan Xue (well,This snow is Yukiha).,And then you may add sick characters.,For example, senior sister, senior sister, senior sister (laughs),But this is still a very shallow brain hole period.,It's okay to put a satellite anyway.。
And then there's the ending.,The general form of the ending was determined when I watched the just because ending last month-I think that in the end, Eita and Natsume still feel like they want to be in the first second.,The next second.,The feeling of re-meeting in an unexpected but reasonable way is particularly good.,So I wrote the ending in this way.。 Well, of course I'm the Natsume party.
Referring to the influence of this ending, in fact, the way Yukina handles the last plot is still a bit like Natsume, mainly referring to the part where she was abused, including some hypocritical psychology - of course, Yukina's personality does have this side, including the interaction and competition mode between Dango and Yukina in the end, and it must be false to say that the competition mode between Komiya and Natsume has no effect on me. So when the forty-fifth chapter was released, I was still quite nervous, because I thought that if a person didn't have a tendency before, that chapter was a chapter that deducted points for Yukina, and then I was worried that Yukina would be provoked, but it didn't seem to show up - probably everyone got used to my routine (laughs)?
To get back to the point, in general, in this final triangular choice, to make the suspense of the party struggle generated, the author has a greater lead in his heart, well, (or is it the king's name?) The heroine must be a wave, and the backward side will definitely work hard, because the author has a scale in his heart, which is playing balance, but the ending has long been predetermined. However, if the reader or the audience doesn't know this, what they see is often how hard the side that is behind is working, and how hypocritical the side that is leading, so if there is no inclination before, the viewer will easily tend to the side that loses the dog, so when I read JB at the time, I felt that I was particularly familiar with the plot development model of the old thief of Kamoshida, and Natsume was not in suspense from the beginning, because in fact, this book is the same, Yukina END has long been established in my mind, and everything before is just a false trick to play balance.
Well, so that's the end, at least from the beginning I decided to go with the pickles, it hasn't changed, that's the best. And then there's the whole book. I remember that I made a lot of complaints in the second half of '15 to the first half of '16, that is, in my senior year, probably because I talked about philosophy in this book, and I thought very highly of it, and now I look at the remarks at that time It was also quite secondary, especially in the first half of '16, at that time, I was afraid that I was too snorting in Poland, so I talked a lot of nonsense. But seriously, this book still wants to say something.,Although I didn't understand it in the end.,Half of it is because I think some of the secondary two are too can't write.,The other half is because it's really a little mismatched in the late style.,Well,But I think you can still feel some of what I mean.。
On the whole, if I rate white, I feel that I have about 65 points - in fact, I have quite high requirements for myself, and it would be good to pass, and if I think I have a work with 80 points, I will have to blow it myself. There are still passing grades, the plot hasn't collapsed, the characters barely haven't collapsed, and everything that should have been written has been written, but that's pretty much it. Of course, there are still a lot of problems.,As I mentioned before.,In the writing plot,,Non-heroines are gradually marginalized.,At the last moment, Brother Chun and Dongma took it out as an important plot NPC.,And then the big teacher was completely beaten into the cold palace after losing the role of NPC.,So the group friends will complain.,And I'm afraid I don't have a friend (laughs),It's actually a pity.,Because the original outline of the big teacher and and also have some rival play.,I still want to play some brainstorming of ideas.,I still wrote some such plots in the early stage.,But,Basically, from the penultimate volume onwards, after the emotional line became obvious.,I feel like I can't hold it. ,If you have to say it.,After all, in fact, I don't write novels and think about the plot for a long time every day.,Writing and writing only cares about the main line.,So I humanize some relatively less important characters.,Take it out and use it when it's useful.。 The other is the processing of the last card to other people.,Actually, I've avoided the continuous centralized card issuance of the ending of the sick and coquettish.,But if I can,,I still hope to be able to write the final ending of Xue Nai and a color more impressive.,In short, I think those two parts are still worse than the requirements in my heart! The last problem is Yukina.,The mistakes made from the beginning of the sick Jiao to the present have not changed.,It's the same as the sick Ayase.,Xuecai, as the last heroine.,It's not surprising from the ending.,After all, the opening favorability MAX,But because of the favorability MAX,So there is still a lack of enough interactive plot.,Originally, I seriously considered designing a plot where Xuecai asked the ministry to help.,It's a pity that I didn't find the right time to insert at the beginning.,I can't extricate myself after falling into the emotional line in the later stage, and I can't add it.,So,The whole emotional line plot of Yukina and Kazuya is the opening favorability MAX The two people continue to misunderstand and misunderstand. - Misunderstanding is actually good to say a few words, so I can't speak, so it still seems that Yukina's plot is a little weak, which is more remnant.
But it's over.,15 years of summer vacation open pit.,It's almost two and a half years now.,It's actually quite satisfying to stick to it.,From the time I started writing books to now.,It's been three years.,Two finished books.,One is still writing.,A total of more than 300 w words.,In addition to the least reader-friendly Hosaka symbolically signed a contract.,About 300 yuan through a reward and a monthly pass or something (probably,Because I didn't count.,I didn't care),I'm writing books with my own interests.,To be able to persist until now,I think it's still worth blowing.。 In fact, since I went to graduate school, I have been under a lot of pressure, so I can't write, I didn't have a straight PhD at the beginning of this semester, and now I'm taking a doctorate in my own school, because it's an application system, so the pressure won't be as big as the predecessors' Ph.D., and the update can be more stable, but there is always a problem in front of me, so there has never been that kind of complete relaxation, including the two days when the liver burst ended, and I didn't review it for two days, and I felt a strong sense of guilt, but I still insisted on finishing the book, which is actually a pretty big achievement.
Actually,I haven't paid attention to the recommended votes for a long time.,And I haven't cared about the increase or decrease of the collection for a long time.,Because look at everyone's complaints and comments.,And then someone in the group discussed the plot with me.,In fact, I can recognize the people who can discuss or comment on the plot.,There are only 4 or 50 people in the group plus the comment area.,It's not much.,But it's already very happy.,Although I've rarely replied to comments recently.,Mainly because I'm worried about spoilers in the comment area (although I've been spoiling in the group),But everyone's comments and complaints I've seen it.。 So I think that although I am old and do not have the state of the code words of the year, I will still stick to the code words.
Finally, there is a possible new book, how to say, everyone is expected to be happy with a new book, but the content of the new book is estimated to be more troublesome. Obviously there aren't many people who read my book.,There are few people who discuss with me.,But I guess I'm going to die again.,Obviously, the audience of readers who have accumulated now is reading my campus BG polyamorous love essay.,Or stomach medicine or harem towards.,But the next one does change a lot in direction (I also have this feeling when I communicate in the group.,It's not good to leave most of the previous readership behind.,Look at the sky.。
But the new book still wants to write the previous lily text project.,The swan song of the war queen + muv-luv.。 In fact, I have probably written five versions of the first draft and setting of this book, but the keywords have basically not changed, lily polyamorous, machine war, hodgepodge, group drama.
I've actually always wanted to write about lily expensive ramblings.,It should be said that the original intention of this project is this.,Lily degree is probably the degree of the battle queen swan song and Yuki Yuna.,It's estimated that it's higher than citrus.,The type of Fangwen's daily cute system is more suitable for comics than writing.,So I still chose the universal lily degree of the magical girl.。
Machine war,To be honest, I'm not actually a radish fan.,It's still a hard time to set up.,MUV kitchens seem to be a very picky group of machine war cooks.,I'm almost certain that if I write it, I'll find a lot of setting faults - but I really think that the post-apocalyptic background provided by the MUV series is very suitable for the hardcore Xiang Lily I want to write.,And the machine war text must play with human nature.,Ideology and other stalks.,I still want to try.,In the end, I just want to write and see the sound of the god tearing insects with bare hands and the like.,So I'm still ready to write with interest;
The hodgepodge means that I am ready to add all the characters in various anime to the text to open the mecha.,Make a re-setting on the basis of the original.,Similar to the original MUV to add the Junwang character to play.,Now the preliminarily set protagonist team is Xiao Hinata Miku (well,It's my book guest ID,Battle Ji swan song,Also the heroine of the book),Kumiko Huangzen (Kyobuki),Chitanda Airu (Ice Confectionery),Tianhe Maihime (Qualidea)。 Code), Karasuma Chitose (girl number), Ryoko Asakura (Suzumiya Kasuga series), and their related characters will basically be added, and other characters can continue to be added later, depending on the situation;
Group drama, although she is the heroine in the future, is expected to carry out multi-perspective writing, and the emotional line and plot line will also be multi-faceted.
In short, if anyone has the patience to read this, they should know that my next book is a project that I have never written, that is difficult to fire, that I am not familiar with, that is very demanding, that has a big goal, and that may lose many readers, is probably the peak of my sense of self-satisfaction, so I am probably prepared for worse grades than Hosaka, but if anyone is interested, then they can see how far I can die. The re-examination of the doctoral exam is in March.,After that, I knew if I had studied in the second half of the year.,So this book is estimated to be released in April.,If nothing happens, I won't put it here.,Just go to a guest opposite.,Dian Niang convulsions from time to time to ban a few chapters of content This makes me very unhappy.,You see a doctor Jiao is still forbidden now.,I'm too lazy to apply for unblocking.,That's probably it.。
Of course,Finally, I would like to add,The white CC chapter can still be expected (there should be more HHHH interested in this than the project upstairs),Anyway, how long has it been since the IC and CC of WA2 were released?,I can play with the stalk according to this time (laughs)。 Of course, everyone is welcome to join the group discussion: 317867958.
Finally, thank you for your continued support of this book, although it is a work for self-entertainment, but if there are no readers, I will not be able to finish the book, and I am really grateful to the people who have paid attention to this book.