"Boss, this is a script we bought, please take a look. Li Zhengyu's body bent slightly, and his hands respectfully presented the script to Shen Danqing.

Now Shen Danqing no longer needs to approve any official documents, so he rarely spends time at his desk, and at this time he is in the car exterior design team to guide the designers in design.

In order not to disturb the work of the designers, Shen Danqing reached out and took the script and whispered to him: "Mr. Li, come to my office and chat!" Then he took the lead and walked to the office.

The two of them went to the guest sofa in Shen Danqing's office and sat down, and Shen Danqing carefully flipped through the script.

Seeing that the boss began to read the script, Li Zhengyu, who was sitting opposite, was playing drums in his heart. This is the second comedy script he handed over to his boss for review, I don't know if I can pass it?

Shen Danqing only read the first few pages before closing the script, and casually threw the script on the coffee table. and said to Li Zhengyu: "This script is not good, it is written as a comedy love story that takes place in Hong Kong, and it can be left for you to shoot in the future."

I don't have time to go to Hong Kong with you to make a film, so this script is not suitable for filming now. I'll give me a simple outline of the story, you take it and write it down, and then you can go back and fill it in with the two screenwriters Huang Li and the master of comedy scene design that I asked you to invite. ”

At the beginning, when he heard the boss say that the script was not good, Li Zhengyu's heart was cold. Later, when he heard that the boss asked him to take a pen to record, he quickly stood up and walked outside, and he wanted to get paper and pen from Secretary Liu.

Shen Danqing saw that Li Zhengyu was going outside, so he said to him: "What are you doing outside? ”

"Whew!" Li Zhengyu answered, then turned around and walked to the boss's desk to get a pen and paper.

Waiting for Li Zhengyu to sit down with a pen and paper, Shen Danqing said: "The location of the story is in Huizhou, and the content of the story tells the ridiculous story that happened within a week when Mr. Bing went to Huizhou to find a job, and it should also be interspersed with a heroine.

The first scene is the scene where Mr. Bing and the heroine, who also came to Huizhou for the first time to find a job, met for the first time in Huizhou Railway Station Square. This can create some laughs.

In order to carry forward his gentlemanly demeanor, Mr. Bing took the luggage of two people with large bags and small bags and many thieves to stay in the hotel together. It can also create some laughs here.

In addition, in the hotel, they were told that there was only one single room, so the two had to share a room, which could also be designed with a lot of joke scenes.

Of course, you can't find a job in Huizhou, because Huizhou stipulates that employers can only recruit workers in the talent markets of cities around Huizhou, so Mr. Dabing has a gray nose. The focus here is on the soldier's facial expressions and disappointed emotional movements, as well as his surprise and facial expressions when he finds a suspected job advertisement. In short, there are several moods of hope, surprise, disappointment, and loss alternately. In the end, when the soldier was exhausted and discouraged, and his trip to Huizhou to find a job was about to be completely disappointed, he saw a recruitment advertisement for comedians in the newspaper, which was actually an advertisement for comedians auditioned by your dragon company. His kind of surprise and crazy facial expressions should also be filmed.

During the interview, you asked him to do all kinds of comedic expressions, which was also a good scene with frequent jokes.

The whole story needs to be tight and coherent, and there are constant laughs. In the end, Mr. Private was recruited by you, and he and the heroine cried with joy, hugging and kissing passionately.

I've only talked about the two male and female protagonists, and the other supporting characters are set up by you according to the storyline. ”

Shen Danqing told while thinking, and after making up the outline of the story in one breath, he stopped telling, and he waited for Li Zhengyu to write down the content of his speech, then asked him with a smile: "Mr. Li, what do you think of my comedy story?" At this time, Shen Danqing was like a student who was eager to get praise and affirmation from the teacher, although he was the boss, but he also wanted someone to have a good evaluation of his talent, which is human nature, and no one is an exception.

Li Zhengyu, who is good at figuring out people's opinions, still can't hear the meaning of the boss's words, so he immediately took advantage of the situation and patted his ass and said: "Boss, I really admire you so much, in just such a short period of time, you have made up a wonderful comedy story." I believe that there are few people in the world who can match your talent. ”

"Hahahaha!" Listening to Li Zhengyu's praise, Shen Danqing immediately laughed, and after he laughed presumptuously, he waved his hand and said to Li Zhengyu: "I'm not as good as you say, but I also think this story is good." Since it is for European and American audiences, our comedy movies should focus on shooting facial expressions and some comedy scene settings. For example: Mr. Private was carrying too much luggage, he couldn't see the road under his feet, he was mixed with something, and he was beaten on a big horse, which is a good comedy scene. Another example: when the soldier learned about the recruitment of comedians, he was so happy that he jumped up and raised his fists upward, forgetting the environment he was in, and his hand hit something, which hurt his teeth and cracked his mouth, which is also a good comedy scene.

In short, you have to use your imagination to create a lot of hilarious laughing scenes. Only foreign viewers can understand these contents. Of course, if you are proficient in English, you can also design a lot of wonderful dialogue that foreigners can understand. ”

After talking about such a big deal, Shen Danqing found that he had exhausted Jiang Lang's talents, and after thinking for a long time, he found that there was really nothing to talk about, so he said to Li Zhengyu: "That's it! Mr. Li, you go back and work with Huang Li, the two screenwriters, and the people you invited who are good at arranging comedy scenes, to improve this script, and then bring people to Huizhou to film! When the time comes, remember to inform me and let me shoot with you." ”

After saying these words, Shen Danqing remembered his daughter, the little guy wanted to make a movie, this little request. He, as a father, should meet her requirements in a reasonable way, anyway, it's just a gesture. So he said to Li Zhengyu again: "Oh! That's right! Mr. Li, you don't need to add a little girl's scene to the script, you just need to show your face a few times, it doesn't matter if you have lines or not." This is a scene designed for my daughter, so it is not suitable for many scenes. Anyway, let's do it!"

"Oh, boss, I see. The boss's request was not difficult, and Li Zhengyu immediately agreed. Then he was good at observing words and feelings, and he found that it was time to say goodbye, the boss said everything he should say, and if he didn't say goodbye, he would be expelled by the boss, so he would be very embarrassed. Therefore, he stood up and said goodbye to Shen Danqing: "Boss, if you don't have anything else to order, I'll go back first." ”

Shen Danqing just likes his cleverness, to be honest, he has exhausted his talents, there is nothing more to say, it is best for him to automatically ask for resignation, so he smiled and nodded to Li Zhengyu and said, "Well!

After getting the boss's approval, Li Zhengyu bowed to Shen Danqing and said, "Boss, I'm leaving," and turned around and left his office with the draft.

After Li Zhengyu left, Shen Danqing also stood up and walked out, anyway, there was nothing to do, he wanted to go to the car exterior design team and guide them in design. On this, he does have a say, and he also has a bit of dry goods in his stomach, and there is nothing wrong with guiding them to design. Although he didn't know how to draw, he could still guide them.

When he arrived at the car exterior design team, he stood unnaturally behind the designer in charge of the design of the commercial vehicle and looked at it, this commercial vehicle is a model that he values more, because this car will also be his car in the future, so it is reasonable for him to pay more attention to it.

Now that there is more flexible and convenient drawing software, and a work has been completed, the designer's proficiency and self-confidence are also more sufficient, so although it is only a few days, the general frame diagram of the commercial vehicle has been basically drawn.

Shen Danqing looked at it for a while, and found that the shape of the sketch didn't seem to be elegant enough, and the use of lines was still a little cautious. He whispered to the designer, "Stop for a moment, I don't think your frame is perfect enough." This is a sporty touring vehicle, so you can be a little bold. The lines are more elegant, more streamlined. For example, the line of your car is a little straighter.

I told you at the beginning that the VIP seats of this car are located in the middle row, which is also where the personnel go up and down, so you only need to pay attention to the height there, which is the place where the personnel get on the bus, and even the position where the VIP sits can be lower, so in fact, from the place where the personnel stand on the station, it is a long arc gentle slope, all the way to the rear.

In addition, the lines of your tail are not gracefully outlined enough, and they are a little dull. In short, this car is completely different from the executive model, and you have to sketch the lines boldly. I wanted a futuristic design style, and I could be bold in the design of the ribs. What kind of style is the future style? You can learn the design ideas of small household appliances and bathroom products of the borrowing company. ”

After Shen Danqing said this, he patted the designer on the shoulder and said, "You understand what I said carefully! I'm sure you'll succeed. ”

After Shen Danqing said these serious words, he went to look behind another designer who was responsible for designing the spring C1 model. The designer was left alone to ponder, how to design the appearance of the commercial vehicle with a strong futuristic style?

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