Today 101 began to revisit "Blue Blood Sword", who knew that when I opened the first chapter, it was about the king of the Boni Kingdom who admired the majesty of the Heavenly Empire, how to go to the Ming Dynasty to meet the emperor, and how the descendants of later generations revered the Ming Dynasty, and I was drowsy when I saw it. Pen ~ fun ~ pavilion www.biquge.info

Who knew that suddenly a certain prince was going to take the Ming Dynasty fame, and as soon as he got off the boat, he was killed by Liukou, and the master and servant jumped into the water to escape, and fled home in a panic all the way.

I wiped, my attention was grabbed at once, and here is the paragraph-

The governor of the muddy country, Zhang's family, was Zhang Xin after several passes, and there was only one son under his knees. Zhang Xin did not forget his homeland and named his son Chaotang.

When Zhang Chaotang was twelve years old, there was a scholar in Fujian who repeatedly failed to do business, abandoned Confucianism and started business, and came to the muddy country with the villagers. This person is not good at management, his capital is eroded cleanly, and he returns to his hometown without shame, so he lives in a foreign country. Someone recommended him to meet Zhang Xin and wanted to make a living. After Zhang Xin talked to him, he was overjoyed, so he was hired as Xibin to teach his son to read. Although Zhang Chaotang was late, he was gifted and intelligent, and in ten years, he had already mastered the four books and five classics. The teacher strongly persuaded Zhang Xin to send his son back to Middle-earth to take the exam, if he could get a show of talent and raise people, and with the fame of China, it would be very glorious to return to the mud. Zhang Xin also hoped that his son would return to his hometown to visit the country, so he rewarded the teacher heavily, beat the gold bank Li, and then sent his servant Zhang Kang to follow, and ordered Zhang Chaotang to accompany the teacher back to his hometown in Zhangzhou to take the exam. At that time, it was the sixth year of Chongzhen, although Wei Zhongxian had been ambushed, but in the seven years of the Apocalypse Dynasty, the country and the people were ruined, killing Zhongliang, and the vitality of the world was greatly damaged. Zhang Chaotang and the other three went ashore from Xiamen and hired a boat to go west to Zhangzhou. Unexpectedly, after only traveling dozens of miles, there was a sudden chaos in Sixiang, and a group of thieves rushed onto the boat, and without saying anything, they killed the teacher. Zhang Chaotang's master and servant fortunately knew the nature of the water and jumped into the water to escape, so as to avoid the misfortune of a knife.

The two hid in the countryside for three days, and heard that the hungry people of the four townships were gathering to attack Zhangzhou and Xiamen. This time, Zhang Chaotang was only scared of ambition, Denghua was in vain, and seeing that the dangerous state was uninhabitable, he still hurried home. At that time, Xiamen could no longer go, and the master and servant discussed it and decided to go west from the land to Guangzhou, and then go to sea by sea. The two bought two mounts, and in fear, they inquired along the road and headed for Guangdong. Fortunately, there was nothing to do all the way, through Nanjing, Pinghe, came to Sanheba, which is already the border of Guangdong Province, and then passed through Meixian and Shuikou, and traveled to the west. Zhang Chaotang heard that Guangdong is a rich place, but what he saw along the way, all the hungry people, thought that China is a vast land, and the life and death of the people are tied to the first line, muddy mud is only a small overseas state, but men, women and children live and work in peace and contentment, carefree, can't help but sigh, thinking that China's mountains and rivers are majestic, and those who see it have not got one, but so precarious, or go to sing and sleep under the mud coconut tree is much more happy.

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101 is very strange, after a careful analysis, it can be seen that the technique of turning is used, first, the first part introduces the identity of the protagonist and intends to do a good thing, and the latter part writes that he has encountered a crisis, and then the protagonist wants to escape.

It introduces the identity of the protagonist and wants to do a good deed, creating a sense of substitution, while the crisis and the desire to escape construct a sense of anticipation and attract the reader's attention.

101 Out of the mentality of doubting the faith, I tried to write a short paragraph according to this pattern, and the result was very good, and then a number of numbers, I erased! Only 133 words! Oh my God! This is incredible, isn't it? I used to have thousands of words and couldn't figure out the sense of substitution and expectation!

Below, release this magical beginning -

Waking up early in the morning, Fang Hao was busy dressing up, today was a big day for him, he wanted to confess to Xiaoyue.

Hurriedly went to the flower shop to pick up flowers, he hurriedly took a taxi to the school, at 10 o'clock Xiaoyue got off the first class, he planned to send her flowers between classes, and confessed in public.

And now, it's 9:30.

Just as Fang Hao was silently reciting the confession, there was a sudden bang, and the car shook violently, the sky spun around, and it rolled and flew out.

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It can be seen that the sense of substitution here is to write a protagonist who is not annoying, and wants to do a good deed, but he can't make it when he encounters a crisis, and then even if he fights with the crisis, he has to desperately realize his wishes.

The story can go on smoothly.

As for the world structure and character background information, it can be explained slowly in the crisis, as long as the pace is not slowed down.

Pinch haha~~~ I learned from Lao Jin again!