Today, 101 has a major insight, which is related to the direction of online writing. Pen | fun | pavilion www. ｂｉｑｕｇｅ。 ｉｎｆｏ

We often hear comments such as "the writing is biased", "the writing collapses", "slow heat", "jumping off", etc., which is often a sign that an online novel has hit the street.

So, what is the core of the web article?101 has been analyzed before, it is YY.

In other words, it is to lead the reader into a fantasy story world and perform all kinds of YY, so as to get the pleasure of pretending to be slapped in the face.

Going down this line of thought, any online article, if it doesn't know YY, will not achieve the desired results.

If you can't compact YY's novels, there will be major problems such as "writing biased", "writing collapsed", "slow heat", and "jumping out".

So, how to YY?

Generally speaking, YY is to open the protagonist and open a cheat, and then the protagonist uses this golden finger to carry out various adventure activities, and summarizes it in a nine-line writing method, which is what makes a fortune, Debao, pickles girls, and so on.

It can be seen that the core of YY is to design a distinctive gold finger for the protagonist, and then carry out YY around this gold finger.

For example, the protagonist of Dou Po, Goldfinger, is Yao Lao, and Yao Lao brings him the following cheating functions - alchemy, advanced fighting skills, different fire exercises, superhuman experience.

Because this opening direction is very rich and malleable, YY is very powerful.

For example: The first opening is in the direction of alchemy, and Yao Lao prepares a foundation building liquid for the protagonist, and the protagonist's power increases greatly after using it.

Immediately afterwards, in addition to the alchemy can quickly improve the protagonist's cultivation, the pill can also be sold for money, so it leads to the alchemist's career system, the protagonist pretends to be a pig and eats a tiger, disguised as a bullish alchemy master, and conducts in-depth YY in terms of alchemy.

The second opening is the cultivation experience and exercises, Yao Lao instructed the protagonist to choose the palm fighting technique, and taught him the Eight Pole Collapse, which greatly improved the protagonist's strength.

The third opening is the ** different fire exercise, this is the most awesome and the most ** golden finger in this book. Because the different fire comes with upgrades, to upgrade, you have to find all kinds of different fires, which provides good material for the in-depth extension of the story in the future.

The above is the golden finger system of Dou Po, you can see that the malleability and YY divergence in each direction (a thing can be pretended to be forced in multiple environments) are very good, and they can also cross-ferment each other.

For example, different fire and alchemy, originally different fire is different fire, alchemy is alchemy, good guy, potatoes are processed - the acquisition of different fire can help to practice high-level elixir, the more awesome different fire, two different fire, three different fire, the more it can improve the level of alchemy.

Another example is different fire and cultivation, the fusion of different fire can create a terrifying big trick, fire lotus, this thing can even improve its strength.

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It can be seen that the design of the composite gold finger is very popular and can have a rich writing direction. Of course, the single gold finger is not impossible to use, and if you carry out divergent ideas, it is also very powerful.

For example, the small bottle of mortals, that thing is a ripening herb, and it seems to have a single function.

But the medicinal materials are ripe, and you can refine the elixir, and the elixir can quickly improve the protagonist's cultivation.

You can't eat the elixir, you can take it out and sell it for money in exchange for resources.

The medicinal materials are ripe, and the medicinal materials that are thousands of years old can also be sold for money, and others are crazy about robbing them.

The small bottle can also ripen the golden thunder bamboo, which can be refined into a magic weapon.

The small bottle can ripen the Xuantian Slashing Spirit Sword, which is a super magic weapon.

And what else...... Alchemy requires a pill prescription, whether it is right to ask for medicinal materials, so it derives the acquisition of pills and medicinal materials, and the refining of magic weapons is also associated with the next copy and the acquisition of heavenly materials and earth treasures.

It can be seen that although the function of the small bottle is simple, once it is extended, it is very obedient!

From this, to sum up, the richness and diversity of the background system is conducive to the fermentation of a single golden finger YY, if it is not placed in the grand background of Xianxia, the space that the small bottle can play is really limited.

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With a good cheat idea and a good background system, the direction of the story is also very important.

Many newcomers don't know what the signing criteria are, in fact, they want to throw an attractive gold finger or novel background system at the beginning of the novel.

For example: "Fat Exchange System", which is to exchange fat for wealth, this is the innovative golden finger.

For example: "Infinite Horror", which is a novel background system, which travels through countless movies, interacts with the characters and plots of the movie, and sets off the novelty and joy of YY.

The above two elements, as long as the beginning is shown (within two or three chapters), as long as you can follow it compactly, there is no problem with signing at all, and you can achieve good results.

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Speaking of which, some friends may be confused, is a book written as a story, or as a YY written with a golden finger?

101 believes that this is determined by the reader's reading expectations, they must first see a novel and interesting story, "novelty" and "interesting", often determined by the golden finger or background novelty; secondly, they want to see a refreshing and exciting, and long-term attraction of the story, "refreshing" and "exciting", plus "long-term attraction", which needs to be undertaken with a good story carrier, that is to say, to have the main line of a book and the relationship between the characters to support.

For example: Dou Po's divorce, which is the story carrier, and another example: the cultivation of mortal immortals, which is also the story carrier.

Without a story carrier, it is equivalent to YY on the sand, which is not cool at all, but with a very rich and exciting story carrier, YY will be very cool and cool!

So, here's the emphasis -

The development and development of the story should be guided by the story carrier, that is to say, the clue must be to write about people and things, but the sense of refreshment and expectation is basically achieved with a golden finger.

For example, Xiao Yan wants to go to the Fang Market to sell medicine, and the purpose of selling medicine is to exchange money and then improve his cultivation, and the purpose of improving his cultivation is to cope with the coming-of-age ceremony - this is the story carrier.

Then on this story carrier, add the characteristics of goldfinger, and the story becomes novel and interesting...... Because the foundation building liquid was refined by Yao Lao, it was very awesome, which caused Danny, who was also an alchemist, to be shocked, causing the beautiful stunner to look at Xiao Yan differently, causing a group of patriarchs to rush this foundation building liquid, causing Xiao Yan and his father to take out 40,000 gold coins to buy the foundation building liquid despite the opposition of the family elders, which led to infighting at home, and Xiao Xun'er took out 100,000 gold coins to settle down.

It can be seen that the protagonist pretends to be forced a little, stirring up the world, forming a strong drama, which makes people can't wait to see the protagonist continue to "drag" like this.

Strip the principle of it-

1. Story carrier;

2. Goldfinger.

The two stirred together to produce a wonderful story, which can be said to be indispensable.

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To sum up, the core of the online article is YY, YY is to write an interesting gold finger, and the development of the story is also based on the gold finger as a clue, but the carrier of the story is to accommodate and carry this YY idea.

Below, I will list a rough template for becoming a god, and you can compare and cultivate -

1. Learn to quickly establish a sense of substitution and expectation at the beginning, explain the protagonist and the background of the story, and pull out the crisis (for example, Dou Po is the fall of genius and divorce)

2. Immediately after that, the goldfinger is obtained, so that the reader has anticipation, and wants to see how the protagonist solves the crisis and obtains a life reversal (Dou Po is to get Yao Lao's ring in Chapter 7)

3. Next, set up a number of challenges around the protagonist's purpose, and then use the gold finger research and development to solve them one by one, the process of solving the problem should reflect the novelty of the gold finger, and there should be a pretending to be forced to slap the face (this is too detailed, you can go to see the fight, basically two or three chapters of a small plot, which have cool points or **)

4. In addition to the small refreshing, small **, the author must have the ability to arrange the big **, this is the key to determine whether the reader can be ruthless, otherwise the book is easy to not be distempered (Dou Po is the coming-of-age ceremony, the college exam and the Yunlan Sect)

5. The skill of the long layout, the characteristics of the golden finger and the background of the story have been established, and the number of words has passed 300,000 words, and there is nothing to write behind, will it become more and more nervous the more you write, or will it suddenly collapse, this should set the overall situation of the world, so that after a book enters the middle and late stages, the plot is not loose (after 3 million words for mortals, in order to soar and break through the gods, and find space nodes)

The above 5 articles,It's not something that can be mastered overnight.,101 didn't understand the sense of substitution at the earliest.,The protagonist of the story is written in a mess;After pounced on a lot of books,,And won't start quickly out of the golden finger.,It's equivalent to saying that the writing is wrong;After a few more books,,I can sign a contract.,But it won't YY.,The protagonist took the golden finger.,It's like a lost dog.,Chased by the enemy to run around.,The story direction is wrong;Wait until you continue to pounce.,Slowly there will be a little YY.,But the main line collapses.,The story has no clue.。

Now the main line is not collapsing, but Goldfinger YY has only paid attention to it, and it has been too neglected before, you must know that this is the core of the online article!

As a result, the style of the current book is not quite the same as the online text, and I have to read Doupo carefully and learn the direction of other people's stories.

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In general, the author of the online article, if he can come up with a creative idea and expand YY compactly, will achieve a good result.

For example, the author of the Dire Crocodile, such as the author of the Python Plague.

On this basis, there will be an explosive story background and contradictions, and the results can be even higher.

Further up, there are deeper skills such as long-form control, characters, suspense, and rhythm.

For 101, there were too many research skills and principles in the past, and the basic YY of online texts was ignored, which led to a deviation in the direction of writing, so we need to strengthen this aspect of learning in the future!