101 On Writing (81) "On Layout Again"

Recently, I have been thinking about the layout of "The Legend of Deer and Ding", although 101 also wrote a post about the layout before, but it is not specific enough, but it only points out a general direction. Pen, fun, and www.biquge.info

http://www./forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=798801&fromuid=556121

Today, I talked to the people in the group about the layout, on a whim, I talked a lot, let's release the content of the direct dialogue!

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101st rejection (630268437) 2:03:43

I've now learned the layout method

It is to design the background contradiction first

nondeep(2272359455)2:04:14

The big contradiction is not easy to solve

101st rejection (630268437) 2:04:21

For example, Kangxi unified the whole country

nondeep(2272359455)2:04:27

Maybe there will be new ideas later in the writing

The 101st rejection (630268437) 2:04:33

The contradiction between him and Aobai

101st rejection (630268437) 2:04:43

He and the old emperor

101st rejection (630268437) 2:04:49

Wu Sangui

nondeep(2272359455)2:04:49

The good thing about Lu Ding Ji is that the big contradiction is there

101st rejection (630268437) 2:04:55

Zheng Keshuang

The 101st rejection (630268437) 2:05:04

It's wrong, it's the Heaven and Earth Society

The 101st rejection (630268437) 2:05:10

Cult of the Dragon

101st rejection (630268437) 2:05:12

Rosa Country

nondeep(2272359455)2:05:18

You write non-historical fiction, and your big conflict may change

101st rejection (630268437) 2:05:39

There are several contradictions, and the characters related to the design are separated, and each has a contradictory relationship

The 101st rejection (630268437) 2:05:55

Next, the protagonist is put into an interactive adventure

101st rejection (630268437) 2:06:06

The natural first step is to introduce the main character

101st rejection (630268437) 2:06:32

Jin Yong designed Mao Eighteen's joke to introduce Wei Xiaobao

The 101st rejection (630268437) 2:06:55

With a background, a personality, and a smooth background, Mao Eighteen's task was successfully completed

nondeep(2272359455)2:07:07

Online articles are generally written to the end, and the big contradiction will change.

The 101st rejection (630268437) 2:07:09

Went to Beijing

101st rejection (630268437) 2:07:32

Then let's change to a larger map

nondeep(2272359455)2:07:33

Except for historical fiction

101st rejection (630268437) 2:08:03

went to Beijing, the next step is to meet Kangxi, right?

nondeep(2272359455)2:08:06

Halfway through your novel, you suddenly realize that you can actually make the final contradiction a little bigger, what do you do?

101st rejection (630268437) 2:08:26

Then use Hai Dafu as an introduction, his role is the same as Mao Eighteen

101st rejection (630268437) 2:08:46

However, Hai Dafu is still related to the old emperor, so he began to quietly lay the line of the old emperor here

101st rejection (630268437) 2:08:59

It also leads to the forty-two chapters

nondeep(2272359455)2:09:05

For example, it was originally a fight with the true immortals, but at this time, I suddenly thought of the extraterritorial heavenly demon, and it feels good, do you want to change it?

v(914219443)2:09:14

。。。。。。。

v(914219443)2:09:22

This should be laid at the beginning

v(914219443)2:09:25

You can't help it

101st rejection (630268437) 2:09:47

The forty-two chapters wore a large number of people, Mao Dongzhu, the white-clothed Shenni, the emperor, Prince Kang and so on

nondeep(2272359455)2:10:01

A lot of writing has to be changed to the end of the contradiction

nondeep(2272359455)2:10:18

At first, I couldn't think of how to lay it out

101st rejection (630268437) 2:10:48

Hai Dafu is the palace introducer, and his role made Xiaobao familiar with Kangxi, the eunuchs, and Mao Dongzhu, and the task was completed and he left with honor

nondeep(2272359455)2:10:50

There are a lot of ideas that come out of the day-to-day updates

101st rejection (630268437) 2:11:22

Next, solve the first contradiction, Aobai

The 101st rejection (630268437) 2:11:48

If you want to kill Aobai, you have to first foreshadow how brave and domineering this person is

101st rejection (630268437) 2:12:02

And then how to catch him with a trick

101st rejection (630268437) 2:12:15

Ao Bai was imprisoned, and the Heaven and Earth Society was introduced

nondeep(2272359455)2:12:27

101 This is not easy to get

101st rejection (630268437) 2:12:32

This is a downward detraction

nondeep(2272359455)2:12:39

The big contradictions are sometimes uncertain

101st rejection (630268437) 2:12:43

It's easy to get it

The 101st rejection (630268437) 2:12:55

It's so easy to get

nondeep(2272359455)2:13:01

Ask for advice

101st rejection (630268437) 2:13:04

First, identify the contradictions in the background

101st rejection (630268437) 2:13:15

This is that Kangxi wants to unify the whole country

nondeep(2272359455)2:13:26

How do we get it

nondeep(2272359455)2:13:29

For example, Xiuzhen

nondeep(2272359455)2:13:40

Then take the analogy of Lu Ding Ji

101st rejection (630268437) 2:13:44

The following are the branch contradictions - Ao Bai, Heaven and Earth Society, Wu Sangui and so on

nondeep(2272359455)2:14:12

I still don't know how to make the world composed

101st rejection (630268437) 2:14:14

Every contradiction is connected with key characters

101st rejection (630268437) 2:14:42

The earliest was Mao Eighteen, I said his role, introduced the protagonist, took him to Beijing, and introduced him to Hai Dafu

101st rejection (630268437) 2:14:53

Hai Dafu was a key figure in the palace

The 101st rejection (630268437) 2:15:20

Hai Dafu strung to Aobai, Aobai strung to heaven and earth

101st rejection (630268437) 2:15:38

One by one, they are strung down like a relay

101st rejection (630268437) 2:15:55

It's not obtrusive

101st rejection (630268437) 2:16:22

Then every contradiction is solved, and there is foreshadowing, such as killing Aobai, which foreshadows how hateful, difficult and powerful this person is

101st rejection (630268437) 2:16:37

The old emperor of Wutai Mountain went there twice

101st rejection (630268437) 2:16:44

This contradiction was not resolved all at once

101st rejection (630268437) 2:17:26

When these things are conceived, they must be considered as a whole, at least draw the plot clues and key characters

101st rejection (630268437) 2:17:51

Take the story of Xianxia as an example, I will talk about it casually

nondeep(2272359455)2:18:01

OK

101st rejection (630268437) 2:18:09

For example, the war between good and evil factions is a contradiction in the background

It needs to be refined, what are the grievances and grievances in history?

Maybe conceive of a great war 100 years ago

The protagonist's generation, although they don't fight much, there are several major sects that are hostile

Set 3 dedicates and 3 villains

The geographical location, martial arts characteristics, and resources of the 6 sects

Then there are the reasons for the battle between good and evil, such as the passage to compete for ascension, as well as the resources for cultivating immortals

6. The grievances and grievances of the main sect

Positive 1, positive 2, positive 3, anti-1, anti-2, anti-3

Anti-1 has resources, and positive 1 is going to grab, resources appear once every 500 years, and the protagonist appears in anti-1, so the first contradiction is the war of resources

As a result, the anti-1 was destroyed, and the protagonist was captured and taken to the positive 1 to become a servitude

Night Listening to Blood 2:23:46

101 This class has risen to a higher level. . . It seems that I have realized something recently

101st rejection (630268437) 2:23:51

Then Zheng 1 sent labor to Zheng 2 to mine resources

Trigger the second contradiction

For example, train secret warriors and prepare to destroy 2

Night Listening to Blood 2:24:37

This is the compilation of story threads, which is no longer a single thread, but a three-dimensional structure of the story line

The 101st rejection (630268437) 2:24:40

Isn't the protagonist just mixing up in 2?

Therefore, the beginning of the idea is not to think about how the protagonist is

Instead, think about the contradictions of the world first, and then put the protagonist into it to interact

With the contradictions of the world, it is refined to the contradictions of the characters

In this way, each section of the plot has a supreme goal of struggle, which looks cool

Night Listening to Blood 2:26:13

Yes, the missions are all pawns in the background

Night Listening to Blood 2:26:40

If there is any force stirring up the situation behind the scenes, the background of this story is very full

101st rejection (630268437) 2:26:43

If you don't control it like this, the whole book will collapse, and it will look good at the beginning, but it will be watery at the end

Night Listening to Blood 2:26:45

Characters, not tasks

101st rejection (630268437) 2:27:22

A book of deer and ding, let me gain so much

Night Listening to Blood 2:27:21

This also solves the problem of the close relationship between the characters and the background

nondeep(2272359455)2:27:42

It's hard to write

nondeep(2272359455)2:27:52

The social environment is paved in front of Lu Ding Ji

nondeep(2272359455)2:28:03

This kind of foreshadowing is not easy to do

101st rejection (630268437) 2:28:07

This is how the Legend of Mortal Immortal Cultivation is laid out

101st rejection (630268437) 2:28:16

Think about it

Night Listening to Blood 2:28:19

Coupled with the opposing emotions of good and evil, coupled with the feelings between men and women, this is the cliché story of Romeo and Juliet

The 101st rejection (630268437) 2:28:29

His background in the big era, when he was in the human world, was very well paved

Evil invasion, demon ruins

Night Listening to Blood 2:28:57

It's like Zhu Xian, smiling proudly in the rivers and lakes, leaning on the sky and slaying the dragon

Night Listening to Blood 2:29:14

Feelings are all such opposing stories

101st rejection (630268437) 2:29:21

The old monster has been active in the human world for a long time, looking for spatial cracks everywhere

Forgetting to say that he properly conceived the outline of the human world, and then began to write this story

The spiritual realm was conceived later, so it is not as compact and beautiful as the human realm

Night Listening to Blood 2:30:27

In fact, it's like a novel that is just like a lonely novel, and I can basically restore the outline now. His story is coming to an end

101st rejection (630268437) 2:30:31

The Seven Xuanmen is to let the protagonist embark on the road of cultivating immortals

Yellow Maple Valley was growing up, and suffered a drastic change and went to the Chaotic Star Sea

But there is a contradiction between the Seven Xuanmen and the Wolf Gang, and this is pre-designed

Later, the contradiction between the two factions broke out and pushed the protagonist to a high place

Huang Fenggu also has a competitive relationship with other sects, otherwise how could there be a blood trial?

The invasion of the Demon Dao is also a conflict between good and evil factions

What kind of city lord is the chaotic star sea, and the conflict with a group of evil sects

Every time, it's a big power contradiction, and then the protagonist is thrown in, desperately fighting

Night Listening to Blood 2:34:17

Anyway, you can't let the protagonist be left alone

101st rejection (630268437) 2:34:19

From a small person, he eventually grew into an optimus giant pillar who affected the contradictions of this force

101st rejection (630268437) 2:34:34

So this sense of accomplishment is fierce

Night Listening to Blood 2:34:49

hehe

The 101st rejection (630268437) 2:35:01

But it's not okay to keep repeating it

Gotta play tricks

Ao Bai is to win by force, simple

When I arrived at the old emperor of Wutai Mountain, I went there twice, and I wrote about the conflict between monks and lamas, and there were many more tricks

One of the highlights is the Eighteen Arhats of Shaolin Temple

Wei Xiaobao shaved and became a monk

101st rejection (630268437) 2:36:29

Hey! I'll go!

Lao Tzu is enlightened again!

Have you noticed it? Every contradiction in it is presupposed to have a bright spot

Wei Xiaobao is a monk, which is definitely a highlight

Night Listening to Blood 2:37:20

hehe

Night Listening to Blood 2:37:43

It's like cross-dressing, two points of changing identity

101st rejection (630268437) 2:37:45

The wine and meat monk with a hippie smile also fell in love with the flower girl

101st rejection (630268437) 2:38:02

I don't write about it, but I just think it's interesting to see this idea

Night Listening to Blood 2:38:05

I remember watching "Magic Apprentice" at the beginning, and the cross-dressing part in it was also very amazing

The 101st rejection (630268437) 2:38:31

Escort the princess to the wedding, the guard steals, and the princess

Another highlight

Wei Xiaobao was arrested by the Heaven and Earth Society, became the hall master, and went back to Kangxi to go undercover, this is a double agent, and it is a highlight

It's the same with going to the Divine Dragon Sect, double agents

It's just different, Chen Jinnan is decent and serious

Sect Leader Hong likes to listen to sycophants, heretical sects, and the laughter is different

went to the country of Rosa to be the male secretary of the princess

bright spot

Returning home, it is the highlight of six wives sharing the same bed

Ah Ke and Zheng Keshuang ordered their mother-in-law Wei Chunhua to accompany the wine, Xiaobao and the Mongolian prince, and Sang knotted, highlights

Basically there are bright spots everywhere, no wonder Lu Ding Ji looks cool throughout