101 On Writing (81) "On Layout Again"
Recently, I have been thinking about the layout of "The Legend of Deer and Ding", although 101 also wrote a post about the layout before, but it is not specific enough, but it only points out a general direction. Pen, fun, and www.biquge.info
http://www./forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=798801&fromuid=556121
Today, I talked to the people in the group about the layout, on a whim, I talked a lot, let's release the content of the direct dialogue!
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101st rejection (630268437) 2:03:43
I've now learned the layout method
It is to design the background contradiction first
nondeep(2272359455)2:04:14
The big contradiction is not easy to solve
101st rejection (630268437) 2:04:21
For example, Kangxi unified the whole country
nondeep(2272359455)2:04:27
Maybe there will be new ideas later in the writing
The 101st rejection (630268437) 2:04:33
The contradiction between him and Aobai
101st rejection (630268437) 2:04:43
He and the old emperor
101st rejection (630268437) 2:04:49
Wu Sangui
nondeep(2272359455)2:04:49
The good thing about Lu Ding Ji is that the big contradiction is there
101st rejection (630268437) 2:04:55
Zheng Keshuang
The 101st rejection (630268437) 2:05:04
It's wrong, it's the Heaven and Earth Society
The 101st rejection (630268437) 2:05:10
Cult of the Dragon
101st rejection (630268437) 2:05:12
Rosa Country
nondeep(2272359455)2:05:18
You write non-historical fiction, and your big conflict may change
101st rejection (630268437) 2:05:39
There are several contradictions, and the characters related to the design are separated, and each has a contradictory relationship
The 101st rejection (630268437) 2:05:55
Next, the protagonist is put into an interactive adventure
101st rejection (630268437) 2:06:06
The natural first step is to introduce the main character
101st rejection (630268437) 2:06:32
Jin Yong designed Mao Eighteen's joke to introduce Wei Xiaobao
The 101st rejection (630268437) 2:06:55
With a background, a personality, and a smooth background, Mao Eighteen's task was successfully completed
nondeep(2272359455)2:07:07
Online articles are generally written to the end, and the big contradiction will change.
The 101st rejection (630268437) 2:07:09
Went to Beijing
101st rejection (630268437) 2:07:32
Then let's change to a larger map
nondeep(2272359455)2:07:33
Except for historical fiction
101st rejection (630268437) 2:08:03
went to Beijing, the next step is to meet Kangxi, right?
nondeep(2272359455)2:08:06
Halfway through your novel, you suddenly realize that you can actually make the final contradiction a little bigger, what do you do?
101st rejection (630268437) 2:08:26
Then use Hai Dafu as an introduction, his role is the same as Mao Eighteen
101st rejection (630268437) 2:08:46
However, Hai Dafu is still related to the old emperor, so he began to quietly lay the line of the old emperor here
101st rejection (630268437) 2:08:59
It also leads to the forty-two chapters
nondeep(2272359455)2:09:05
For example, it was originally a fight with the true immortals, but at this time, I suddenly thought of the extraterritorial heavenly demon, and it feels good, do you want to change it?
v(914219443)2:09:14
。。。。。。。
v(914219443)2:09:22
This should be laid at the beginning
v(914219443)2:09:25
You can't help it
101st rejection (630268437) 2:09:47
The forty-two chapters wore a large number of people, Mao Dongzhu, the white-clothed Shenni, the emperor, Prince Kang and so on
nondeep(2272359455)2:10:01
A lot of writing has to be changed to the end of the contradiction
nondeep(2272359455)2:10:18
At first, I couldn't think of how to lay it out
101st rejection (630268437) 2:10:48
Hai Dafu is the palace introducer, and his role made Xiaobao familiar with Kangxi, the eunuchs, and Mao Dongzhu, and the task was completed and he left with honor
nondeep(2272359455)2:10:50
There are a lot of ideas that come out of the day-to-day updates
101st rejection (630268437) 2:11:22
Next, solve the first contradiction, Aobai
The 101st rejection (630268437) 2:11:48
If you want to kill Aobai, you have to first foreshadow how brave and domineering this person is
101st rejection (630268437) 2:12:02
And then how to catch him with a trick
101st rejection (630268437) 2:12:15
Ao Bai was imprisoned, and the Heaven and Earth Society was introduced
nondeep(2272359455)2:12:27
101 This is not easy to get
101st rejection (630268437) 2:12:32
This is a downward detraction
nondeep(2272359455)2:12:39
The big contradictions are sometimes uncertain
101st rejection (630268437) 2:12:43
It's easy to get it
The 101st rejection (630268437) 2:12:55
It's so easy to get
nondeep(2272359455)2:13:01
Ask for advice
101st rejection (630268437) 2:13:04
First, identify the contradictions in the background
101st rejection (630268437) 2:13:15
This is that Kangxi wants to unify the whole country
nondeep(2272359455)2:13:26
How do we get it
nondeep(2272359455)2:13:29
For example, Xiuzhen
nondeep(2272359455)2:13:40
Then take the analogy of Lu Ding Ji
101st rejection (630268437) 2:13:44
The following are the branch contradictions - Ao Bai, Heaven and Earth Society, Wu Sangui and so on
nondeep(2272359455)2:14:12
I still don't know how to make the world composed
101st rejection (630268437) 2:14:14
Every contradiction is connected with key characters
101st rejection (630268437) 2:14:42
The earliest was Mao Eighteen, I said his role, introduced the protagonist, took him to Beijing, and introduced him to Hai Dafu
101st rejection (630268437) 2:14:53
Hai Dafu was a key figure in the palace
The 101st rejection (630268437) 2:15:20
Hai Dafu strung to Aobai, Aobai strung to heaven and earth
101st rejection (630268437) 2:15:38
One by one, they are strung down like a relay
101st rejection (630268437) 2:15:55
It's not obtrusive
101st rejection (630268437) 2:16:22
Then every contradiction is solved, and there is foreshadowing, such as killing Aobai, which foreshadows how hateful, difficult and powerful this person is
101st rejection (630268437) 2:16:37
The old emperor of Wutai Mountain went there twice
101st rejection (630268437) 2:16:44
This contradiction was not resolved all at once
101st rejection (630268437) 2:17:26
When these things are conceived, they must be considered as a whole, at least draw the plot clues and key characters
101st rejection (630268437) 2:17:51
Take the story of Xianxia as an example, I will talk about it casually
nondeep(2272359455)2:18:01
OK
101st rejection (630268437) 2:18:09
For example, the war between good and evil factions is a contradiction in the background
It needs to be refined, what are the grievances and grievances in history?
Maybe conceive of a great war 100 years ago
The protagonist's generation, although they don't fight much, there are several major sects that are hostile
Set 3 dedicates and 3 villains
The geographical location, martial arts characteristics, and resources of the 6 sects
Then there are the reasons for the battle between good and evil, such as the passage to compete for ascension, as well as the resources for cultivating immortals
6. The grievances and grievances of the main sect
Positive 1, positive 2, positive 3, anti-1, anti-2, anti-3
Anti-1 has resources, and positive 1 is going to grab, resources appear once every 500 years, and the protagonist appears in anti-1, so the first contradiction is the war of resources
As a result, the anti-1 was destroyed, and the protagonist was captured and taken to the positive 1 to become a servitude
Night Listening to Blood 2:23:46
101 This class has risen to a higher level. . . It seems that I have realized something recently
101st rejection (630268437) 2:23:51
Then Zheng 1 sent labor to Zheng 2 to mine resources
Trigger the second contradiction
For example, train secret warriors and prepare to destroy 2
Night Listening to Blood 2:24:37
This is the compilation of story threads, which is no longer a single thread, but a three-dimensional structure of the story line
The 101st rejection (630268437) 2:24:40
Isn't the protagonist just mixing up in 2?
Therefore, the beginning of the idea is not to think about how the protagonist is
Instead, think about the contradictions of the world first, and then put the protagonist into it to interact
With the contradictions of the world, it is refined to the contradictions of the characters
In this way, each section of the plot has a supreme goal of struggle, which looks cool
Night Listening to Blood 2:26:13
Yes, the missions are all pawns in the background
Night Listening to Blood 2:26:40
If there is any force stirring up the situation behind the scenes, the background of this story is very full
101st rejection (630268437) 2:26:43
If you don't control it like this, the whole book will collapse, and it will look good at the beginning, but it will be watery at the end
Night Listening to Blood 2:26:45
Characters, not tasks
101st rejection (630268437) 2:27:22
A book of deer and ding, let me gain so much
Night Listening to Blood 2:27:21
This also solves the problem of the close relationship between the characters and the background
nondeep(2272359455)2:27:42
It's hard to write
nondeep(2272359455)2:27:52
The social environment is paved in front of Lu Ding Ji
nondeep(2272359455)2:28:03
This kind of foreshadowing is not easy to do
101st rejection (630268437) 2:28:07
This is how the Legend of Mortal Immortal Cultivation is laid out
101st rejection (630268437) 2:28:16
Think about it
Night Listening to Blood 2:28:19
Coupled with the opposing emotions of good and evil, coupled with the feelings between men and women, this is the cliché story of Romeo and Juliet
The 101st rejection (630268437) 2:28:29
His background in the big era, when he was in the human world, was very well paved
Evil invasion, demon ruins
Night Listening to Blood 2:28:57
It's like Zhu Xian, smiling proudly in the rivers and lakes, leaning on the sky and slaying the dragon
Night Listening to Blood 2:29:14
Feelings are all such opposing stories
101st rejection (630268437) 2:29:21
The old monster has been active in the human world for a long time, looking for spatial cracks everywhere
Forgetting to say that he properly conceived the outline of the human world, and then began to write this story
The spiritual realm was conceived later, so it is not as compact and beautiful as the human realm
Night Listening to Blood 2:30:27
In fact, it's like a novel that is just like a lonely novel, and I can basically restore the outline now. His story is coming to an end
101st rejection (630268437) 2:30:31
The Seven Xuanmen is to let the protagonist embark on the road of cultivating immortals
Yellow Maple Valley was growing up, and suffered a drastic change and went to the Chaotic Star Sea
But there is a contradiction between the Seven Xuanmen and the Wolf Gang, and this is pre-designed
Later, the contradiction between the two factions broke out and pushed the protagonist to a high place
Huang Fenggu also has a competitive relationship with other sects, otherwise how could there be a blood trial?
The invasion of the Demon Dao is also a conflict between good and evil factions
What kind of city lord is the chaotic star sea, and the conflict with a group of evil sects
Every time, it's a big power contradiction, and then the protagonist is thrown in, desperately fighting
Night Listening to Blood 2:34:17
Anyway, you can't let the protagonist be left alone
101st rejection (630268437) 2:34:19
From a small person, he eventually grew into an optimus giant pillar who affected the contradictions of this force
101st rejection (630268437) 2:34:34
So this sense of accomplishment is fierce
Night Listening to Blood 2:34:49
hehe
The 101st rejection (630268437) 2:35:01
But it's not okay to keep repeating it
Gotta play tricks
Ao Bai is to win by force, simple
When I arrived at the old emperor of Wutai Mountain, I went there twice, and I wrote about the conflict between monks and lamas, and there were many more tricks
One of the highlights is the Eighteen Arhats of Shaolin Temple
Wei Xiaobao shaved and became a monk
101st rejection (630268437) 2:36:29
Hey! I'll go!
Lao Tzu is enlightened again!
Have you noticed it? Every contradiction in it is presupposed to have a bright spot
Wei Xiaobao is a monk, which is definitely a highlight
Night Listening to Blood 2:37:20
hehe
Night Listening to Blood 2:37:43
It's like cross-dressing, two points of changing identity
101st rejection (630268437) 2:37:45
The wine and meat monk with a hippie smile also fell in love with the flower girl
101st rejection (630268437) 2:38:02
I don't write about it, but I just think it's interesting to see this idea
Night Listening to Blood 2:38:05
I remember watching "Magic Apprentice" at the beginning, and the cross-dressing part in it was also very amazing
The 101st rejection (630268437) 2:38:31
Escort the princess to the wedding, the guard steals, and the princess
Another highlight
Wei Xiaobao was arrested by the Heaven and Earth Society, became the hall master, and went back to Kangxi to go undercover, this is a double agent, and it is a highlight
It's the same with going to the Divine Dragon Sect, double agents
It's just different, Chen Jinnan is decent and serious
Sect Leader Hong likes to listen to sycophants, heretical sects, and the laughter is different
went to the country of Rosa to be the male secretary of the princess
bright spot
Returning home, it is the highlight of six wives sharing the same bed
Ah Ke and Zheng Keshuang ordered their mother-in-law Wei Chunhua to accompany the wine, Xiaobao and the Mongolian prince, and Sang knotted, highlights
Basically there are bright spots everywhere, no wonder Lu Ding Ji looks cool throughout