14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:13:46

I've found that arrogance really has a way of writing characters

14- 101st rejection (630268437) 16:14:09

Reading his books is not ambitious, just looking at the little love between men and women

"Toot toot!" whistled twice from a cleanly washed, yellow hatchback. Pen @ fun @ pavilion wWw. ｂｉｑUｇE。 infoThe turn signal lit up, and he pulled over and stopped next to Wang Yong. After the car window opened, I saw a girl in her twenties, holding a mobile phone in her hand, and said to Wang Yong: "Get in the car, you can't park here, it's troublesome for the traffic police to see it." ”

Wang Yong opened the door and got into the car speechlessly, and was not embarrassed to be exposed to the lie in front of him, looking left and right at the decoration in her car, which was full of gadgets that girls liked, and there was some warmth everywhere. After she merged into the traffic lane, she smiled and said, "It's a very delicate car, and the decoration is quite tasteful." ”

Fang Weiwei turned her head angrily and glanced at him, pouted and snorted coldly: "Hair washing room, you just stand on the street to wash? It's quite glorious to say, huh?" When Wang Yong looked at her again, he found that her hairstyle had changed, and she had permed a rice noodle curly hair, draped over her shoulders, and with her very white and tender skin, she was still very good-looking. smiled and said, "This hairstyle is not bad, it matches your face and skin, it's very foreign." ”

"Because you're bored waiting, you're idle anyway, so I went to the shampoo room to find Xiaofang to perm my hair. Fang Weiwei's pretty eyes were horizontal, and the corners of her mouth already had a smile: "I found that you have an advantage." ”

"Honest?"

"No, the skin is thick enough, and if someone exposes the lie in front of you, your face won't blush, just like a nobody, and you'll coax people with a flamboyant tongue. Fang Weiwei said regretfully: "Being a security guard is really condescending, and you should be transferred to do sales." No, no, I have to go back and tell the boss. How much profit can you create for the company if you go to sales?"

At this moment, Wang Yong's face became bitter: "Minister Fang, I admit my mistake in this matter, you let me continue to continue the promising profession of security guard." ”

"How much wine do you drink?" the smell of tobacco and alcohol is all over ......" Fang Weiwei wrinkled her beautiful nose, turned on the ventilation and said: "There is mineral water in the back seat, you rinse your mouth, and there is chewing gum in the small jar in front of you." I'll drive the car, you can take it yourself. ”

Wang Yong smiled, poured mineral water, and chewed gum again. Looking out the window, he said, "Fang Bu, where are you going to take me to?"

14- 101st rejection (630268437) 16:18:45

He didn't know how to develop this sense of language

Dawn (812321977) 16:18:48

Well, it looks very graphic

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:19:10

didn't look at it angrily, and snorted coldly

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:19:29

The pretty eyes were horizontal, and there was a smile on the corner of the mouth

It seems that the eyes are written first, and then the state of the mouth is added, and the nose is occasionally wrinkled.

Dawn (812321977) 16:20:05

It's simple and can outline a complete picture of the character's expression

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:20:12

"Honest?". Every time the actions and demeanors of the characters are added here, if I write it, most of them will add "honest?" The protagonist was stunned.

14- 101st rejection (630268437) 16:20:38

Wang Yong's face became bitter

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:20:54

Wrinkled the beautiful nose and turned on the ventilation

Dawn (812321977) 16:20:56

Well

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:21:15

Yesterday someone told me McGee's theory, what beats

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:21:25

I think we can analyze it with a beat

Dawn (812321977) 16:21:34

Tell me about it

14- 101st rejection (630268437) 16:21:46

In this scene, one of the two characters speaks and acts, and the other reacts

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:22:02

Step by step, layer by layer, first of all, I think there should be a sense of hierarchy

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:22:30

Figure out the psychological condition of the two, how to say it, and how to move the plot forward, otherwise there will definitely be a feeling of jumping out of bluntness

Rainy Night Fall (505502186) 16:22:48

Do you have an example?

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:23:05

McGee's theory, you can look it up

Dawn (812321977) 16:23:09

I think his "honest?" is enough to make my mind appear the character's expression and tone at that time, so if I add a stunned or other thing, it will be redundant, and it will even destroy the sense of the picture

Rainy Night Fall (505502186) 16:23:21

agree

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:23:42

I know, honestly, I can appreciate the benefits without emojis here, but I may ignore it when I write it myself

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:23:59

The question is, what tells the writer that this is the most accurate and the most effective?

Dawn (812321977) 16:23:58

Well, I'm too, and I'm easy to be verbose

Dawn (812321977) 16:24:06

I'd love to add action to every sentence

Dawn (812321977) 16:24:09

This is a criticism

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:24:19

Don't boil it down to a sense of language, it's too empty

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:24:57

I think only McGee's beat theory can be analyzed

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:25:35

At the beginning of this paragraph, the female protagonist is the male protagonist, and the male protagonist pretends to be confused

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:26:04

The heroine is light and angry, this is her position, I think women chase men, it's hard to say it clearly

14- 101st rejection (630268437) 16:26:29

With a little temper, a little bad, teasing the male protagonist, and talking to him, this is a woman's position

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:26:54

So she pretended to be angry because the male protagonist lied to her

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:27:16

After getting angry, he joked with him again

14- 101st rejection (630268437) 16:28:08

How did the heroine change from being angry to laughing?

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:28:25

Because the male protagonist praised her for her beautiful hairstyle

Dawn (812321977) 16:28:55

Arrogant and impermanent, I really have a good grasp of this kind of character psychology

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:29:04

Which woman is not like this, if the more you will be late, the man will say, how are you today... Especially pick the part of the other party that is well-dressed for praise

14- 101st rejection (630268437) 16:29:46

Here the heroine deliberately went to perm her hair, and the man just picked this compliment, which woman could not be happy

Dawn (812321977) 16:30:08

Well

14- 101st rejection (630268437) 16:30:21

I can't be too happy to show it, I have to hold a posture, my pretty eyes are horizontal, and there is already a smile on the corner of my mouth

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:30:52

With a look at the pretty eyes, he glanced at it highly: "Yo drink, it will please girls!"

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:30:57

There is a sense of this

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:31:21

But there was a smile on the corner of his mouth, he wanted to hold back and not smile, but he couldn't hold back, this was an instinctive laugh

Dawn (812321977) 16:31:57

These should be counted as descriptive techniques

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:32:24

"Honest?"

I think there is a deliberate lack of character movements and expressions here.,It's just blank.,It's possible that the protagonist is pretending to be here.,

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:32:34

Do you think the protagonist is pretending?

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:32:56

If you add: The protagonist is stunned, and the artistic conception is destroyed

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:33:36

"Honest?" asked with a smile on the corner of Wang Yong's mouth.

It's too revealing, and the feeling of pretending to be stupid is gone

Dawn (812321977) 16:33:35

Well

Dawn (812321977) 16:33:37

That's right

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:35:16

Then Fang Weiwei said regretfully, this is to tease the protagonist, of course, I think there must be a deep meaning behind it, the female protagonist is tempting, see what the male protagonist thinks about career development?

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:36:09

If it's an ordinary man, I'm afraid I'll pounce on it to hug Minister Fang's thighs, right? Thanks to Fang Bu's cultivation, I was about to transfer to the sales department, how about it, I was looked down upon by the heroine

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:37:04

Wang Yong's face became bitter: he said that he would continue to work as a security guard.

pretended not to be enlightened, and easily pushed back the heroine's temptation

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:37:53

As soon as the heroine saw that this topic couldn't be advanced, she changed it in time, saying how much wine she drank, going to rinse her mouth and something like that

Dawn (812321977) 16:38:13

This kind of plot is really meticulous, and it feels more difficult than writing fight scenes

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:38:28

Think about it, as soon as a person gets in the car, he smells of alcohol, why doesn't this woman say it at the beginning, and put it here?

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:38:42

Saying at the beginning is equivalent to saying, I hate you

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:39:15

made two jokes.,And then like a girlfriend, blame the male owner for drinking too much.,The male owner feels warm and considerate at this time.

Dawn (812321977) 16:39:56

Well, yes!

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:40:16

I also feel that this paragraph is indeed carefully designed by the author, and it is not written randomly with a pat on the head.

He must be very skilled in the promotion of the relationship between men and women, which is why he can design so accurately

Shadow of a Rainy Day (352543818) 16:40:43

This study is ...... It's too thin, isn't it...... Indicates that the author does not necessarily consider these yet. I think it's just a matter of setting the character and then relying on experience

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:41:05

Shadow, I think he's instinctive

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:41:13

Because I write a lot, I have a sense of language

Shadow of a Rainy Day (352543818) 16:41:29

He should be familiar with similar situations

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:41:33

We've never done it to his level, so at first glance, it's subtle

Shadow of a Rainy Day (352543818) 16:41:51

So when I write it, I have a sense of naturalness that comes easily

Shadow of a Rainy Day (352543818) 16:41:59

It's not always possible for you to come deliberately

Rainy Night Fall (505502186) 16:42:05

Alas, for the time being, I still think it's a bit profound

14- 101st rejection (630268437) 16:42:20

At least the first sentence of the male advocate is to compliment the beautiful hairstyle of the woman, do you think this hairy author who has arranged it without love can do it?

No, it's to compliment the beautiful layout in the car first, and there is more meaning here, if you come up to compliment the heroine for being beautiful, it is frivolous, how can you stare at other girls when you get in the car?

I'm rubbing! wonderful!! boys who want to pick up girls can learn more!

Rainy Night Fall (505502186) 16:42:23

It's not as easy as being familiar with the cost

Shadow of a rainy day (352543818) 16:43:00

These are really not easy to learn, so you can only practice more

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:44:15

"Wang Yong, look at the beauty?" Fang Weiwei appeared behind him a little "unconsciously", reached out and gently patted Wang Yong's shoulder, and said with a playful chuckle.

"Hehe, I'm trying to find out if there's anyone prettier than you. Wang Yong showed a look of regret and sighed: "It's a pity that I haven't found the target so far." "Girls love to listen to praise, not to mention that he is quite level. This made Fang Weiwei's face flush slightly, and she scolded with a light smile: "I see that you are still quite honest in the morning, I guess you should be a good person." I didn't expect it to be a flamboyant person, so I'm blind. ”

"Honest, good man?" Wang Yong touched his somewhat rough face, and said with a wry smile: "I don't take you to bury and scold people like this." ”

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:44:26

Looking at this paragraph again, the two are talking alone

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:44:45

It is said that men should be bad when they should be bad, and they should be serious when they should be serious

14-101st rejection (630268437) 16:45:10

This protagonist has always pretended to be honest, but his mouth is so bad

14- 101st rejection (630268437) 16:45:22

Women just eat this set

Beat Theory attached:

Beat

Inside the scene is the smallest structural component: the beat.

Beat is a type of behavioral communication in an action/reaction. These changing behaviors construct the transformation of the scene through beat after beat. Now let's take a closer look at the "lovers break up" scene above: when the alarm goes off, Chris teases Andy, and he responds kindly. As they dressed, the ridicule turned to sarcasm, and they began to insult each other. Now in the kitchen, Chris threatens Andy, "Baby, if I leave you, you're miserable...... but Andy responds to her threat: "I like that miserable life." In the garage, Chris begs Andy not to go, fearing that he will lose him forever, but he laughs at her and makes fun of her request. Finally, inside the speeding car, Chris punches up on Andy. Andy fought back and slammed on the brakes in a panic. Andy, bleeding from his nose, jumped out of the car, slammed the door shut, yelled, "We're done," and angrily left the panicked Chris.

The scene revolves around six beats, six distinctly differentiated behaviors, six distinct variations of action/reaction: first teasing, then verbal abuse, then threats and blatant defiance, then pleading and mocking, and finally turning into a violent add-on, leading to the final beat and turning point, Andy's decision and action to end the relationship, and Chris's stunned horror.

Finally, 101 to sum up, the mastery of the principle is still very necessary, I don't understand the principle of beat, I will only feel subtle when I see the big joke of arrogance, I can't analyze anything, and I can't learn it, but the essence of the principle of beat is the interaction and conflict caused by the different positions, different personalities, and different desires, and only by defining the position, character and needs accurately can we write exquisite paragraphs that meet the characters and storyline.

Here the author is very familiar with both men and women, one pursuit, the other ambiguous position; one character is bold and intelligent, the other is ** bad pretending to be stupid; one is a girl is a good compliment, like special boys, the other is a good flower and white is not picky, I want to indulge, I don't want to have anything to do with you in the future, so out of the position of not taking the initiative, if you sleep with me in the future, you are also the initiative to chase me in vain, for being in the flowers, the leaves do not stick to the body and pave the way, this is the master of the love field!