101 On Writing (21) "Borrowing Things to Illustrate People"

Do you still remember that 101 wrote a post "Let the Words Burn" before? There was a mention of a person's mood change, resulting in different feelings when looking at the surrounding scenery, if a person is sad, then everything is gray, if happy, everything is bright. Pen "Fun" Pavilion www.biquge.info

I didn't find an example at the time, I read "Gu Zhenren" today, it's really a good book, I see the wonders, excerpt two paragraphs, everyone savor it, and I won't say much about the redundant analysis of 101 this time.

Fang Zheng listened expressionlessly, he was used to this kind of discussion.

With his head down, he followed his brother and walked silently.

At this time, the sky was already lit up with morning light, and Fang Yuan's shadow was cast on his face.

The morning sun was gradually rising, but Fang Zheng suddenly felt that he was going into darkness.

This darkness comes from his brother, and perhaps in this life, he will not be able to break free from the huge shadow that his brother has shrouded him.

He felt a burst of depression in his chest, and even a lack of breath, a damn sensation that made him even think of the word "suffocation"!

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The brothers looked at each other.

The younger brother Gu Yue's square eyes sparkled, revealing a sharp meaning. And his brother Fang Yuan's eyes were dark and deep, like a secluded ancient pool.

Such eyes made Fang Zheng feel an inexplicable depression. It didn't take long for him to look at each other, and he subconsciously shifted his gaze to the other side.

But when he reacted, a wave of anger instantly rose in his heart.

A wave of anger at himself.

What's wrong with you? Don't you even have the courage to look at your brother?

I've changed, I've changed completely!

Thinking like this, his eyes sharpened and he swept over again.

But Fang Yuan didn't look at him anymore, but walked past him with a jar of wine in one hand, and a flat voice came: "What are you still doing in a daze, let's go." ”

Fang Zheng's breathing was chaotic, and the breath that had accumulated in his heart had no place to vent, which made him feel an inexpressible depression.

Seeing that his brother had already walked away, he had to follow quickly.

Only this time, instead of lowering his head, he raised his face towards the setting sun.

His eyes were fixed on his feet, stepping on the shadow of his brother Fang Yuan step by step.

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Post another paragraph full of meaning, 101 has read it and has deep feelings, you can try to prepare some life mottos, change them into stories and blend them into your own novels, which will definitely increase your vitality.

Every point of light in this is a Gu.

The name of the Gu is Hope.

There is one of the oldest legends, that is, the Hope Gu.

Legend has it that when this world was first formed, it was a wilderness, wild beasts were rampant, and the first human being, whose name was Renzu, appeared. He drank blood and lived a very difficult life.

In particular, there is a group of beasts, whose name is Dilemma, who especially likes the taste of Renzu and wants to eat him.

How could Ren Zu fight against this group of beasts called predicament? His food source was very unstable, and he hid in Tibet all day long, at the low end of the natural food chain, and he was almost unable to live.

At this time, there was a three-headed Gu who took the initiative to come to the door and said to Renzu: "As long as you use your life to support us, we will help you tide over the difficulties." ”

Renzu was desperate, so he had to agree to these three-headed Gu.

He first used his youth to support the largest of the three Gu, and that Gu gave him strength.

Relying on his strength, Renzu's life began to improve, and he began to have a stable source of food and the strength to protect himself. He was so brave and ruthless, and he beat a lot of difficulties. But it soon suffered. In the end, he discovered that power is not omnipotent, it also needs to be restored and cultivated, and cannot be squandered at will.

And for the entire herd of distressed beasts, his strength alone is too small.

Renzu learned from the pain and decided to use his most youthful middle-aged to support the most beautiful of the three Gus.

So, the second Gu brought him wisdom.

Renzu gained wisdom, learned to think and reflect, and began to accumulate experience. He found that many times the use of wisdom was more effective than the use of strength. With his wits and strength, he conquered many previously unconquerable targets and slain more dilemmas. And eat the meat of the trouble, drink the blood of the trouble, so as to survive tenaciously.

But the good times don't last long, and the ancestors are getting old, getting older and older.

This is because he has enshrined both the young and middle-aged to the Power Gu and the Wisdom Gu.

As soon as people get old, their muscles atrophy and their brains don't turn faster.

"Man, what more can you bring us, you have nothing left to offer us. "After the Power Gu and the Wisdom Gu discovered this, they both left ruthlessly.

Lost his strength and wisdom, he was found in a difficult situation and surrounded by a herd of beasts. He is old, he can't run anymore, his teeth have fallen out, and he can't even chew wild fruits and vegetables.

He collapsed weakly to the ground, surrounded by dense predicaments, and his heart was full of despair.

At this time, the third Gu said to him, "People, you worship me, I can get you out of trouble." ”

Ren Zu said with tears in his eyes: "Gu, what else can I have? You see, both the Strength Gu and the Wisdom Gu have abandoned me. And I was left with only old age. Although old age is not worth mentioning compared to young age and middle age, if I offer all my old age to you, my life will end immediately. I'm surrounded by predicament now, but I'm not going to die for a moment. I want to live longer, even for a second. So you go, I can't worship you anymore. ”

The Gu said, "Among the three Gus, I have the least requirements. Man, all you have to do is give me your heart, and that's it. ”

"Then I'll give my heart to you. Ren Zu said, "But Gu, what can you bring me? Now in this desperate situation, even if the Strength Gu and Wisdom Gu return to my side, they can't change it." ”

Compared to the Power Gu, this Gu body was the weakest, just a small point of light. Compared to the Wisdom Gu, this Gu was the most dim, and could only emit a faint white light, which was not gorgeous at all.

But when people gave their hearts to this Gu, this Gu suddenly bloomed with infinite light, and in this light, the predicaments shouted in horror: "This is the Hope Gu, withdraw quickly, we are most afraid of hope in our predicament." ”

The herd of distressed beasts suddenly retreated in a hurry.

Renzu was dumbfounded, and from that moment on, he knew - in the face of difficulties, he gave his heart to hope.

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Finally, I would like to share some methods for personal practice writing:

1. Extensive reading: mainly to read the popular books on the new book list, read quickly, mainly practice the grasp of "new ideas", how to better focus on "new ideas" YY, and grasp the popular trends.

2. Intensive reading: Mainly read high-quality or very good reputation books, not necessarily books of great gods, the purpose is to learn the strengths of others in a targeted manner and improve their weaknesses. For example, the narrative and layout of learning tomatoes, Chendong's digging pits, the climax of the copy of forgetting words, the theme creativity of Sanshao, the enthusiasm of potatoes, and the arrogant characters and writing......

3. Imitation: For good paragraphs and good ideas after intensive reading, 101 will imitate them in his novels.

4. Rewrite: For the good paragraphs after intensive reading, 101 writes again in your own style, and then compares to see where the charm is different, so as to grasp the subtleties of the original work more deeply.

5. Read books on writing principles and techniques, such as "Novel Writing Tutorial".

6. Writing reading notes, such as this kind of empty post, helps 101 organize his thoughts and fill in the gaps.

7. Communicate with other authors and readers, and discuss some of the confusion and experience of writing.

8. Write more. (If you don't learn, you don't think, if you don't learn, you die)

To sum up, writing a novel is a systematic and complex project, which requires a variety of knowledge and skills to become a god, so basically it is similar to the rules of mastering a foreign language, 101 When I was in college, my English was very poor, and I only passed more than 10 exams twice, once copied and once blinded. Later, after work, I got the hang of it, I knew how to learn, I watched English movies every day, I learned with interest, I wrote down the words I saw on the side of the road in the car, and through pronunciation memory, I could basically remember a word in 1 second, and it was not easy to forget.

The vocabulary is enough, the reading is enough, listening, speaking, reading and writing go into battle together, and I am fascinated to learn every day, and finally English is really powerful.

Practicing writing novels is also a truth, this is a profession that needs to be understood and have skilled operation experience, if you want to progress, you can't do without it!

Read more, think more, write more, communicate more, and persevere, yes!