101 On Writing (One Hundred and Fifteen) "Talking about Sherlock Holmes."
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I've been reading Sherlock Holmes recently, a novel
This guy is a master of pretending
A story of more than 10,000 words, from beginning to end
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This tone is perfect for writing online articles
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is always very calm, and then is solving the case, and says to Watson, let's go and coffee
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Or, let's go to the opera
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Otherwise, this case is solved, and the criminal will come back by himself, so what, Watson, you book a ticket, let's book a bus back to London in 1 hour
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Dragging
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Or just babble to yourself and say, Watson, you plan to stop investing in South Africa, right?
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Watson was frightened, I'll make up, brother, how do you know I'm not doing it?
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Then the old thief smiled, first, you have talcum powder in your mouth, which means that you played billiards last night; second, you will play billiards with Lao Wang; third, you told Lao Wang a few months ago that Lao Wang wanted you to invest in South African minerals; fourth, your checkbook is locked in my drawer; fifth, you didn't come to my checkbook; sixth, you don't plan to invest. Pen % fun % Pavilion www.biquge.info
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Comrades, Sherlock Holmes was written in 1890, more than 100 years ago, and it turns out that the protagonist has to pretend to be forced, how many years ago it was the truth!
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Really, this character archetype can be imitated
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Lu Xiaofeng is the Chinese version of Sherlock Holmes
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Lu Xiaofeng is a big-fitting coerced trafficker
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To write the author of the reborn great writer is to imitate the prototype of Sherlock Holmes, and his protagonist is also so calmly and wildly
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It's just a calm frenzy, and I can try this character in my next book
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It's not high-profile at all
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It's very low-key.,But the aura of the whole body.,I'm going.。。。
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For example, when the police solve the case, he coaxes him to squeeze in, saying that I have important clues
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The policeman said, "What kind of clues?"
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He said, I can't say that it is important to catch the criminals, race against time, and take me to see the scene first
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The police are like followers, following him
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I asked the maid first, and the maid said that when she heard the gunshot, she ran out of the door, and the smell of gunpowder was very strong
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Then Holmes pretended to be forced, turned to Watson and the police, and said, "Pay attention, this sentence is very important, and I will explain it to you in a moment."
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Yes, the supporting characters must be well coordinated
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When I entered the house and looked at the scene, the police said that they had committed suicide, and the woman had killed the man, and some had killed herself
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Not necessarily, Sherlock Holmes said
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The doctor also said that there were two bullets in the chamber of the gun, one into the man's chest and the other into the woman's head
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And he said, "Did you take out the bullet?" Are you sure?
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The doctor stared
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Next, this product went around the window, everyone else was inexplicable, the windows were closed, and it was obviously a fight between the two
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What else to watch?
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Then the creature pointed to the window frame and said, "Look, there's a bullet hole here, it's the third bullet."
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The police and the doctor were stunned and said, "How did you know there were bullet holes?"
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This product is very disdainful to say, because I have been looking for it!
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The implication is that I already knew there were bullet holes here, unlike when you look at it and say it's two bullets
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It's just pretending to be forced throughout
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Even at the end, he wrote a letter to trick the criminal into coming over and throwing himself into the net
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Really, there is still a lot more to read the book, especially the classics, there must be something outstanding
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I was shocked that the writing pretense of 100 years ago was so powerful!
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Look, there are definitely benefits
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He's also very dense with this cool point
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For example, more than 10,000 words, every 3,000 words, let the protagonist pretend to be forced once
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Get some mystery that readers can't guess and let Holmes puncture it
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Watson is purely the embodiment of a stupid reader
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Watson represented me, the reader, and Watson was shocked, as if the reader had been fooled
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The way he writes this is to tease the reader
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It can be seen that the master of a hundred years ago is also super **!
Comments: Everyone's reply to let me refine the skills of Sherlock Holmes pretending, I think-
1. To set up a game, for example, in "Dancing Villain", the first game is to guess that Watson is not investing in South Africa, the second game is to guess the bullet hole, the third game is to crack the secret of the dancing villain, and the fourth game is to trap criminals.
It's like when we write a joke in a book to show the superhuman superiority of the protagonist, not only to shock the supporting characters in the book, but also to impress the readers, so this kind of joke has to be buried very deeply!
In this book, the author shows the secret to setting up this scary trick, just tell someone the beginning and end of something, and omit the reasoning process in between, and the other person will be startled.
For example, I can say to someone, "You ate McDonald's at noon, right?"
The other party was shocked, how do you know?
I said, you have salt grains in your mouth, no one will eat salt on purpose, only McDonald's french fries will sprinkle fine salt grains on them, so you must be eating french fries. And the lunch break at noon is only an hour, and there is only one McDonald's nearby, and there is no KFC, so you must be eating McDonald's.
As soon as this kind of analysis comes out, the reader will suddenly realize that he will admire the protagonist's thoughtfulness and observation.
2. That is, the protagonist must be calm, and treat big and important things as a game, even if 10,000 guns are pointed at the brain, he will say, what, please bring me a cup of coffee to drink. In fact, he may be nervous, but the less nervous he is, the more nervous the enemy becomes, and while he is drinking coffee, he can also observe the enemy and think of ways to get out. Of course, the premise is that the author has already thought of a way to break the game.
3. This kind of writing has great limitations, it can't portray the psychology of the protagonist, as soon as he writes his speculation or something, the puzzle will be broken, and he can only write about his emotional ups and downs through bystanders, and write that he did something inexplicable, which arouses the curiosity of readers, so Watson needs to accompany him at all times.
4. It is necessary to make good use of supporting roles to set off, generally let the supporting characters first put one thing into a dead end and mislead the reader, and then Sherlock Holmes found another way, from this seemingly dead end road, out of a bright road, causing the supporting characters and the reader to be shocked.
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In short, this character archetype is very useful, writing urban doctor essays, fantasy Xiao Yanliu, you can use it well.