101 On Writing (One Hundred and Sixteen) "A Brief Talk" Douluo

Recently, 101 has been studying online texts, and the previous research was Jin Yong Gulong, which is not quite the right direction for online writing, so now it is a bad supplement to read online texts!

I just finished reading the first 300 chapters of "Wuji World", this book is very interesting, the layout of the first 46 chapters can be called a classic textbook, and it belongs to the model of fast hot literature, haha...... However, today's post is not an analysis of "Wuji World", it can be regarded as a warm-up, and it will be analyzed in the future. Pen Fun Pavilion wWw. biquge。 info

Okay, let's talk about "Douluo Continent".

I haven't read Tang San's books for a long time, because I heard that his books are all routine texts and lack of changes, so I flipped through them before, and felt that the text was indeed relatively simple and straightforward, not vivid enough, so I never read it.

Later, I made up for the online reading, forcing myself to read books that I never read, and slowly my taste changed, if it was a book with good grades, 101 could see some flavor, no matter whether I could finish it or not, at least I could see why people succeeded.

This...... Maybe it's your own progress, right?

Then, let's use the principles of the protagonist's motivation, pressure line, and rally line to analyze Douluo Continent and see how he attracted 101.

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This book belongs to the beginning of weak contradictions, the same books have "Panlong" and "Perfect World", all of which are written from children's practice, and they have practiced 10 or 20 chapters, and there are no villains to bully the protagonist, which is called a weak contradiction start.

But a weak contradiction does not mean that there is no pressure.

In the first 20 chapters of Douluo, the first pressure is - in the prologue, the protagonist has to jump off the cliff of ghost sorrow because he has developed a powerful secret weapon, but he violates the rules of the sect, and he has to die in order to die.

The first feeling of this pressure to the reader is that he is unwilling for the protagonist, hoping that he will start over and use those awesome secret weapons and exercises, so this first pressure has worked, giving the reader a sense of expectation.

The second pressure is - the protagonist's cultivation in the second chapter, he can't break through, and he doesn't know what went wrong?

This pressure is very good, it follows the first one, doesn't the first one make the reader look forward to the rise of the protagonist? Well, it tells the reader that the protagonist is in trouble, and if this trouble is not solved, he will not be able to rise, which is equivalent to deepening the first pressure.

The pressure line continues to pressurize!

But while maintaining the pressure, it is not to beat the protagonist to death with a stick, what he shows is that he jumps and jumps far away, indicating that the exercises brought by the previous life have improved his strength, which makes the reader expect the protagonist to pretend to be forced, because he has information asymmetry, and he already has the conditions to pretend to be forced in another world.

The third pressure is - in the third chapter, the protagonist actually has a fucking dad who doesn't cook, is cold to his son, and is an alcoholic. The son still has to serve him.

This is still pressure along the previous pressure line, because the protagonist wants to become stronger and become a soul master, but Dad won't let it!

But...... Remember, never kill the protagonist's hopes with a stick! Fuck dad even agrees with his son to learn how to strike iron with him, and throws him an iron ingot to beat 10,000 times.

Seeing this, the pressure line was not loosened, and it was more tense than before. At the same time, the suspense has also been enhanced, from expecting the protagonist to become stronger, tinkering with the best secret weapon, and gradually transforming into understanding what this fucking dad is all about?

Awesome no, this is the development of the great god, and under the premise of not loosening the pressure, it begins to enhance the suspense.

The fourth pressure is - forget the first few chapters, anyway, the protagonist goes to the soul test, and he is an inferior soul and is despised by the host.

But...... Remember, never kill the protagonist's hope with a stick! The protagonist protested and gave him another soul power test, and when he was hungry, he was full of soul power!

And...... The mystery of the second pressure is revealed here, it turns out that you need to improve your soul ring in order to continue cultivating.

It's true that the pressure is gradually rising, but at the same time, we must give hope, and at the same time, we can also break the previous pressure, which is the compensation mechanism, so that the reader is nervous and rewarding excitement.

So, readers naturally look forward to watching the protagonist go home and tinker with that soul ring to improve his strength.

The fifth pressure is - due to the protagonist's outstanding test performance, the village chief comes to the door to let the protagonist go to the academy to study, but the fucking dad doesn't agree!

Seeing this, 101 was very angry, what kind of fucking dad is this? such a big person, and let his 5-year-old son cook for himself, either the brain is funny, or there is a major reason behind it, so it aroused a strong curiosity.

As mentioned earlier, stress is always accompanied by hope.

Next, the protagonist said to the fucking father, I actually have a second soul power, which is a hammer, and it is shown to Dad, and Dad was instantly shocked and excited, muttering What can you avoid following the old path of your dead mother, double soul physique!

This is the first ignition point that appears after reading 10 chapters! It seems that Tang San's book is not white at all, he can also write about human nature, write more complex plots, at least this fucking daddy's arrangement, and the cliff jump at the beginning, it is not simple.

At the same time, the author did not forget to click on the line that struck iron before, and the protagonist took out the iron ingot, which had been knocked 10,000 times, and it had been refined into steel, and his father was even happier and began to give him specific instructions on how to strike iron.

So, the iron skill +2, the soul skill +2, the hidden weapon +1, the protagonist completes the skill preparation after the appearance.

After that, I entered the academy and pretended to win with my friends, and after 20 chapters, I gradually introduced the battle between people.

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Looking around, Tang San's "Douluo Continent" has the following characteristics in terms of the protagonist's motivation, pressure, and pull-

1. The protagonist's motive is clear, that is, to become a strong man and reproduce the glory of the Tang Sect, so his single-minded cultivation has become stronger, and his initiative has always been strong.

2. The pressure line continues to increase, and there are always various difficulties in the struggle of the protagonist to realize his wishes, first the problem of qualifications, and then the problem of the father.

3. The rally line, mainly played by the novelty of the system, one of the major features of Tang San's book is that it sells the system at the beginning, which makes people look forward to seeing what the system of the soul master looks like, so revealing a little at a time makes people want to stop.

4. The relationship between the pressure line and the pull line is handled better, which increases the pressure and pull at the same time, but also allows the protagonist to constantly get rewards through his excellent character and ability, which makes people feel slightly happy.

Final Summary:

Although Tang San's books are very routine, the system of each of his books can be innovative, and then the story unfolds around the new system, which makes people feel familiar, but there are new ideas.

At the same time, his characterization is more dramatic, fucking dad and obedient son, which is an interesting relationship in itself. It's like a new wine in an old bottle.

The most important thing is that the pressure line, the rally line, and the motivation of the protagonist are mastered perfectly, and there will never be deviations, or the rhythm of the writing is out of line - this one is the most important and important!

Insufficient:

Due to the weak contradiction and the lack of a more hearty **, I hurriedly looked through the college part, which was all small fights between classmates, and it was difficult to form a life and death parting, and the emotions were up and down, which was similar to the idea of writing "Xiuzhen World".

However, this may also be a major feature of Tang San, after all, many of his books are loved by elementary and junior high school students, and they just like this kind of concise, bright, and innovative books.