101 On Writing (123) "On Goldfinger Again"
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:14:49
Demon, do you know how the sense of anticipation arises around the golden finger?
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:15:16
My feeling is that you can't let the reader read it all at once. Pen, fun, pavilion www. biquge。 info
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:15:20
The treasure must be mutilated
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:15:23
I've thought a lot about that today
【Tucao】The demons in the group (470424257) 18:15:35
The function must be slowly revealed with the improvement of cultivation
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:15:37
How to lay the groundwork before taking it?
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:16:09
For example, in the fairy reversal, after the protagonist gets the heavenly reversal pearl. At first I didn't know anything about it
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:16:22
Then, slowly, I found a function that I had in my try
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:16:36
With the improvement of cultivation, it was discovered that Situ Nan was hidden in the Heavenly Reverse Pearl
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:16:37
You are the malleability of the golden finger
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:16:50
This is how to write it after you get it
【Tucao】The demons in the group (470424257) 18:16:56
Get the foreshadowing before?
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:17:01
You didn't know before you took it, did you?
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:17:10
I really don't understand this
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:17:20
First of all, it is necessary to create a situation in which some kind of resource is extremely scarce
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:17:28
For example, Dou Po is the scarcity of pills
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:17:33
Well
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:17:34
yes
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:17:36
Alchemists are scarce and have a high status
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:17:52
When he got out of the marriage, Nalan coaxed the protagonist to refine his qi and disperse it
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:17:57
Everyone's eyes are hot
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:18:19
At that time, a bottle of refining qi dispersion could make earth-shaking changes in people
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:18:42
First form a, this kind of thing, or this kind of gold finger
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:18:45
In this way, due to the scarcity of pills and the scarcity of alchemists, everyone rushed to grab them
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:18:47
The world is lacking
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:18:49
Very lacking
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:18:56
came out with a slightly similar one, which is awesome hehe
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:19:07
Once the protagonist has mastered this golden finger, the reader will have strong anticipation
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:19:15
En
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:19:21
Cheating is open, and the feeling of refreshment is also easy to come out
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:19:21
yes, I didn't quite understand this before
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:19:30
Look at mortals
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:19:43
The protagonist is a deflated calf, and it is very difficult to improve his cultivation
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:19:54
Mo Lao collected medicine for him everywhere, and he went out for half a year
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:20:00
How many people are fighting for Tsukidan
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:20:00
En
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:20:10
It shows that among mortals, these medicinal materials and pills are very lacking
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:20:11
Very scarce
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:20:12
In the end, the protagonist has a small bottle, ripening drugs, refreshing
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:20:24
When one appears, many, many people rush to grab it
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:20:27
Look at the Devouring Starry Sky again
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:20:28
That's right
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:20:42
Is it difficult to become a martial artist, it is too difficult, how many people can't pass the exam
【Active】The End of the World (444983110) 18:20:47
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:20:58
Well, they are hundreds of thousands of people in high school, only three
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:20:59
Once you become a warrior, the return is not big, big, high villas
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:21:02
Addressing employment
[Tucao] free Miro (10000163) 18:21:05
That's right, I used to look at mortals and always thought that the small bottle was cool, but I didn't think about it deeply, but now I understand,
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:21:06
No, it's a quasi-martial artist. It's not really covered yet
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:21:07
Warrior
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:21:22
And among all the martial artists, the most awesome is the spiritual master
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:21:27
En[img]file:///C:/Users/ADMINI~1/AppData/Local/Temp/%7D$$SH8F5BOR8W96(N@%60FVY4.gif[/img]
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:21:33
The protagonist's golden finger is precisely in this regard
【Active】The End of the World (444983110) 18:21:36
A brother is a brother
【Tucao】The demons in the group (470424257) 18:21:53
That's the cool point
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:21:55
I will list a few great gods at random, all of them are in this aspect of foreshadowing
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:22:12
Illustrated, they have the secret of dark alloy finger laying
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:22:19
That's one thing
【Active】The End of the World (444983110) 18:22:23
First brother, begging**
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:22:24
On the other hand
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:22:36
The protagonist must have a big crisis and is cornered
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:22:46
Mortal, it is Mo Lao who wants to kill him
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:22:59
Dou Po is Xiao Yan's three-year covenant and a coming-of-age ceremony
【Active】The End of the World (444983110) 18:23:00
This aspect has never been thought of
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:23:12
A master of all professions in the other world who pretends to be a criminal, at the beginning, the protagonist is the warehouse trumpet. The first chapter was written in just a few thousand words, and many materials that shocked the world in the protagonist's warehouse were like garbage in the eyes of the protagonist. But others were amazed
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:23:16
Devouring, it is the protagonist who faints in the college entrance examination and will have a problem with future employment
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:23:22
Well
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:23:31
Crisis, implicit pressure
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:23:40
These crises are big, big enough to require a huge turnaround
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:23:41
When there is pressure, there is motivation. Talent is not bland
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:23:49
Often at this time, goldfinger came into being
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:24:05
Therefore, it is double coolness and double expectation
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:24:21
One is the cool of solving the crisis, and the other is the cool of opening up in the face of scarce resources
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:24:31
En
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:24:31
Oh, yes
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:24:45
Let's talk about the third aspect
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:24:52
The fun and malleability of gold fingers
【Active】The End of the World (444983110) 18:24:53
yes, that's awesome
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:25:05
That's what you just said, the cheat needs to be tapped, and there are more and more functions
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:25:06
In the martial arts, the pressure of the clan is great. The scarcity of runemasters. It's just a combination of these two
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:25:20
I really don't want to know. I'm shocked when I think about it
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:25:26
There is still a mystery behind the gold finger that needs to be solved
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:25:39
For so many years, the books have been written in vain[img]file:///C:/Users/ADMINI~1/AppData/Local/Temp/~(H)[A[%7D_FC3OBSP~]S%60RV8.gif[/img]
【Tucao】free Miro (10000163) 18:25:41
Malleability this,Excellent in the world of martial arts,,
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:25:50
The fourth element
【Active】The End of the World (444983110) 18:25:59
Wu Dong Qiankun didn't write like that
【Tucao】free Miro (10000163) 18:26:01
Wu Ji's golden finger is very strong,,
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:26:03
[img]file:///C:/Users/ADMINI~1/AppData/Local/Temp/3]6GJ(EWN[K2P[Z6B%606B%602H.gif[/img]Listen to your words, better than ten years of reading
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:26:13
Because of the protagonist's golden finger, others are jealous, crazy robbing, and plotting
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:26:17
In the martial arts, the pressure of the first 30,000 words is clan comparison
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:26:27
After the clan comparison, it is the great pressure of the father's great hatred
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:26:28
For example, Han Li's small bottle was remembered by the people of the Upper Realm
【Active】The End of the World (444983110) 18:26:45
[img]file:///C:/Users/ADMINI~1/AppData/Local/Temp/3]6GJ(EWN[K2P[Z6B%606B%602H.gif[/img]Listen to your words, better than ten years of reading
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:27:02
These 4 elements are to make the gold finger more refreshing and more exciting
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:27:14
Let's talk about the fifth
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:27:23
Open up new worlds
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:27:51
The conspiracy of the golden finger, the extension of the golden finger, the pressure of the big crisis, and the scarcity of resources.
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:27:55
Four elements
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:27:59
I was excited today when I saw that Han Li had obtained the Changchun Gong from behind him and was able to officially start his immortal life, and the vast world of immortal cultivation was waiting for him
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:28:14
At that time, he covered his scrolls and pondered
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:28:36
Forget to say that you first built a low-martial world
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:28:46
Martial arts there are the highest level
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:28:55
Immortal cultivators are god-like beings
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:29:15
This can be regarded as a way to change the map
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:29:17
But the protagonist coincidentally began to cultivate immortals, and he still took the most rubbish exercises
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:29:22
Oh, yes
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:29:23
Listen to me
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:29:27
You say
【Tucao】free Miro (10000163) 18:29:34
[img]file:///C:/Users/ADMINI~1/AppData/Local/Temp/%7D$$SH8F5BOR8W96(N@%60FVY4.gif[/img]
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:29:45
But when he finally discovered that this most rubbish exercise was actually the key to opening the higher world
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:29:54
Do you say excited or not?
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:30:40
agitated
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:30:50
This cool, I have become a person who has jumped out of the Five Realms and is not in the world
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:31:34
These five directions are all directions that use the golden finger to write expectations and write cool directions
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:31:43
Especially the last one, it's too important
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:32:03
It allows us to write something very ordinary and make it very cool
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:32:23
Why is there a book where the protagonist is not happy at all as soon as he stretches out his finger to destroy a planet
【Active】The End of the World (444983110) 18:32:28
I haven't seen mortals yet
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:32:30
That's right, that's what it's called
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:32:42
In some books, the protagonist can just set fireballs, which is very cool
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:33:03
It is that all the author's previous pen and ink has created a world where the fireball technique is against the sky
【Active】The End of the World (444983110) 18:33:09
That's cool
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:33:13
Oh, yes
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:33:18
All of them are fighting with their fists and feet
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:33:24
This is the root of the cloud
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:33:28
Suddenly, the protagonist uses the fireball technique
【Active】The End of the World (444983110) 18:33:34
What a cool word
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:33:39
Moreover, this fireball technique belongs to the upper world
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:33:44
Damn, that's cool!
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:33:44
En
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:34:07
A group of people were holding big knives, and suddenly one person took out three or eight big covers. I don't feel good.
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:34:28
If a group of people use machine guns, and you take out a three-eight big cover, others will think you're an idiot
【Active】The End of the World (444983110) 18:34:35
In fact, this is the contrast
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:34:51
1.Scarce resources 2.Crazy robbery by everyone 3.Goldfinger malleability mystery 4.The key to the high-level world 5.The protagonist's own crisis needs to be solved by Goldfinger
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:34:55
Well
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:35:05
With contrast, you can shape a lot
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:35:07
For example, One Piece
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:35:30
The protagonist is an out-and-out middle school second boy who didn't even go to the deep sea, so he yelled every day to be the king of the pirates
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:35:44
If such a protagonist comes out directly, the audience probably really thinks he is an idiot
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:35:46
I suddenly thought so deeply and excited today, and it seemed that I had grasped the golden key to becoming a god in online literature
【Active】The End of the World (444983110) 18:35:51
The most common and important technique for writing cool is contrast
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:36:11
By the way, there are, actually
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:36:24
There are books that don't have any of these, but the novelty of the main gold finger
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:36:25
However, Oda-sensei has created a timid, scared, and cowardly crew. This crew member appeared first, and then all kinds of fear, all kinds of cowardice, all kinds of cowardice. In the end, the protagonist appears, who is not afraid of power and is determined to be the king of the pirates.
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:36:32
Get a gold finger that no one has ever seen
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:36:35
In this way, the contrast comes out. I also feel that Luffy is awesome
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:36:39
This is also a usage
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:36:53
En
【Tucao】The demons in the group (470424257) 18:36:55
You continue
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:37:19
That's pretty much it, mainly highlighting scarce resources, and everyone is crazy about grabbing them
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:37:30
These two are easy to ignore by general authors
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:37:37
Eun, I feel like I've realized a lot with Brother 1 today
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:37:46
The novelty of the remaining golden finger, the protagonist crisis, and the malleability are not bad
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:37:58
If I don't talk about it today, I guess I really can't think of this
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:38:13
The key to a new world is a very high-end usage
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:38:40
Goldfinger, I used to think that it would be constantly extended so that readers could not see the bottom at once. Then, keep improving his functions to surprise others
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:39:00
Well, you're ignoring the foil of your surroundings
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:39:07
So it's not cool enough
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:39:08
Now, I know that goldfingers must be scarce when the times come true. To be unique in the world, dark and cool.
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:39:25
Thank you so much
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:39:29
And before and after use, there is a huge contrast in status
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:39:36
The crowd reacted strongly
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:39:41
It all has to be cooperated
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:39:44
Actually, you can call Uncle One[img]file:///C:/Users/ADMINI~1/AppData/Local/Temp/3]6GJ(EWN[K2P[Z6B%606B%602H.gif[/img]
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:39:53
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:40:04
I went grocery shopping and cooking, and walked around
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:40:08
Well, these potatoes are made seamlessly
[Tucao] free Miro (10000163) 18:40:17
I'm done
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:40:18
When I write a book, I break this bottleneck
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:40:19
Okay, bye-bye. I'm going to write the opening chapter
【Active】The End of the World (444983110) 18:40:23
I learned a lot again
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:40:27
I comprehend it and can break through
The 101st rejection (630268437) 18:40:38
If you write blindly, it's hard to make leaps and bounds
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:40:42
Eun, I really learned a lot
【Tucao】free Miro (10000163) 18:40:45
I feel like I thought of something of myself, but I didn't do it well,
【Tucao】free Miro (10000163) 18:41:06
In fact, it's really a long distance to learn and use, and the understanding is still not very good
【Tucao】The demons in the group (470424257) 18:41:47
In the past, my boss said, you bear child, do you know why you can't break through the bottleneck in front of you? It's because you haven't studied enough.
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:41:57
Now I understand, it turns out that I am really too far from understanding everything
[Tucao] The demons in the group (470424257) 18:42:15
As long as the online text does not fall, follow the first uncle to old age