101 On Writing (One Hundred and Twenty-Six) "A Chapter of Triumph

Today 101 wrote a chapter, I am very proud, I have used a lot of skills, and suddenly I have an understanding, I am here to talk to you, everyone don't brick!

The plot of this chapter is like this-

The protagonist is troubled by the enemy and the enemy's little brother.,Everyone asks where his big handful of talismans came from.,The little brother wants to grab it.,The protagonist's brother can't see it to block it.,But the enemy's little brother was shocked with his true anger and vomited blood.怂 Pen @ fun @ pavilion wWw. biqUgE怂 ļ½‰ļ½Žļ½†ļ½

Immediately, the younger brother was triumphant, saying how high his cultivation was, everyone was shocked, and the enemy stood there laughing and silent, and he was also very proud.

So far, it's suppression, and below is the explosion!

Since the enemy is in the foundation building period, and the protagonist is in the qi refining period, he can't do it directly, so he said that the talisman was given by his own backer.

The younger brother naturally doesn't believe it, because the protagonist's qualifications are very poor, how can there be such a good thing, he doesn't have it!

So the protagonist took out the transmission note and pressed it, and the little brother was still taunting there, and suddenly someone behind him asked, who are you scolding?

The little brother turned around in fright, and saw that it was the fifth senior sister, and it was also the foundation building period, and it was not as hard as his backer.

It's just that it's scolding the protagonist.

The fifth senior sister said, why are you scolding the protagonist, don't you know how to insult your fellow disciples? Not to mention that you scolded me in front of me and slapped my mouth 10 times!

This is the detonation!

However, if there is no turn, it is not exciting enough!

The younger brother looked at his backer, but who knew that the backer didn't squeak, and the backer looked straight behind the fifth senior sister.

It turned out that it was the senior sister who appeared!

The backer has a crush on the senior sister, and it's too late to tie the knot, so naturally he goes up to offer his courtesy, and everyone is so frightened that they look at the senior sister stupidly, because the senior sister is a mysterious person, and it is said that the cultivation is about to get married, and it is not much worse than the master.

This is one turn, and below is two turns.

The senior sister didn't pay attention to the enemy at all, she came to find someone, looked for a long time, saw the protagonist, and actually walked in front of him and pressed him with her aura.

The protagonist resists, the senior sister continues to press, the protagonist thinks he wants to kill him, reveals his hole cards, and uses different true qi to contend with it.

The senior sister withdrew her move, saying that it is better to save yourself than to save yourself, you are so self-conscious, and then turned around and left. (The senior sister was found by the fifth senior sister to treat the protagonist, and at first she pressed him with her aura, in order to test the degree of the disease, but she found that the protagonist had a different kind of true qi, and she couldn't cure it, saying this is to let the protagonist use the different kind of true qi to treat the disease, which is better than saving yourself by relying on others.) Since there were still many people present, she couldn't say it too clearly, so she could only say it vaguely. )

Then the senior sister walked up to the enemy and said that I hate others scolding in front of me the most, and you can take care of your little brother, and then walked away.

Here are the three turns.

In order to tie up with the senior sister, the enemy ordered the younger brother to slap himself 20 times and double the punishment!

The protagonist takes advantage of the situation to pretend to succeed!

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Why is 101 proud to write this chapter today?

I didn't think about it so much at first, but I just spread hatred first, and I plan to let the protagonist shout backer to come over later, and stimulate the contradiction between the enemy and the backer.

But when I wrote about the appearance of the fifth senior sister, I suddenly felt that it was not amazing enough, why not add a more awesome person behind her? This person still has to make the enemy jealous, and also pay attention to the protagonist, so that the protagonist's pretending to be forced by the situation is not done to the extreme?

So I joined the senior sister who had been mysterious and didn't appear.

After I finished writing, I pondered it again and became even more proud.

Why?

actually made the plot form many twists, and hit the little brother in the face first, this is an open fight, and then hit the enemy's face, this is a secret beat, this kind of double coolness, the effect is really strong.

For the next three years, the small is bigger than the big **, and the foreshadowing has been fully paved, and the hatred can be pulled enough.

But what is more proud is not only this, but the appearance of the character of the senior sister.

This character has never appeared before, just to create momentum and write about her mystery, this is the first time it came out, it is in this way that this character stands up all of a sudden, making people feel very "bright".

101 When I studied Jin Yong before, I paid attention to this technique when I watched Lu Ding Ji, and always threw the protagonist into a fierce conflict to introduce a new character.

Let's think about it, the protagonist and Kangxi knew each other, they fought, and as a result, they became good friends, and they agreed to continue the competition the next day, and now Wei Xiaobao didn't want to go home.

knew Chen Jinnan, but he was caught by the Heaven and Earth Society and wanted to be killed, but he didn't kill his head, but he also became the master of Aoki Hall, became a disciple of Chen Jinnan, and was sent back to go undercover.

Knowing Fang Yi and Mu Jianping, it was the two of them who entered the palace and were injured, and Mu Jianping was carried in the belly of a fat pig. As a result, Wei Xiaobao ate tofu for a meal and became the nominal wife.

I knew the princess, it was the princess**, who wanted to bully Wei Xiaobao, and was finally accepted by Wei Xiaobao and volunteered to be his maid.

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In short, if you think about it, the appearance of this character must be bright, it must be very unbelievable, very intense conflicts, and very interesting events.

And then either all eyes are on, or help the protagonist pretend to be a big force, in short, you can't come gently, go gently, don't take away a cloud, that's useless, and the reader is not impressed.

It must have been a strong appearance, and then a bang.

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This technique is too powerful, this chapter is obviously using the senior sister to set off the protagonist's pretense, but in fact, it is using a very bright plot to set off the appearance of the senior sister, so that the reader is deeply impressed by this character.

In the next chapter, 101 pondered and pondered, and felt that this kind of multi-purpose method in one chapter was very good, and planned to use the discussion between the senior sister and the master behind the scenes, and then highlight the protagonist, and comment on the meaning of his selling talismans.

But at the same time, in fact, this scene is used to continue to portray the character of the eldest sister, because if the character wants to be full, it can't just revolve around the protagonist, and the supporting role must also have the life of a supporting role.

But the story of the supporting characters and supporting characters cannot be irrelevant to the protagonist, it must still be for the sake of the protagonist, so that the supporting characters are fuller and the story world has a stronger sense of hierarchy!

It's like Xiao Xun'er went to kill the alchemist for Xiao Yan, which was to tell her own story from the perspective of a supporting role, but the foothold was still to set off the protagonist.

There is also a plot later, which is the level of two beautiful alchemists, and the perspective of the two uses pen and ink to talk about their own grievances, but the final force still falls on the protagonist.

All in all, this trick is awesome!

portrays the supporting characters with thick ink and color, and then uses the interaction between the supporting roles and the supporting characters to make the story world fuller, and finally uses the supporting roles to set off the protagonist, so the protagonist's pretense is even more brilliant.

That's what Jin Yong did, and so did the potatoes, and 101 finally touched the threshold of the master's skills!