Recently, this book has been very popular, and 101 also went to observe and study it, and finally saw the latest chapters, and this book does have many good aspects:

Highlight 1: Confucianism and Taoism, poetry, etc., have become a system of fantasy cultivation and a sharp weapon for scholars to kill, which is very fresh. Pen @ fun @ pavilion wWw. ｂｉｑUｇE。 ｉｎｆｏ

Highlight 2: The copyist went to ancient times, and the copying of books and pretending to be forced in the background of the fantasy of the air, compared to the great writers and other writers who copied books and comics and copied lyrics, belonged to the old wine in new bottles, and this old wine turned out new tricks, poems and songs, under the author's strong interpretation ability, it has a new life, so it is quite fresh. And readers who are interested in Chinese studies will also be intoxicated. This one is the biggest highlight of this book.

Highlight 3: The little fox slave is so cute, and the portrayal of this supporting role makes the whole book particularly uplifting and vivid.

Well, in fact, there are many advantages of this book, and it can be seen that the author's pen power is very strong, and many pretending jokes are vividly portrayed, which is worth learning from.

Today, 101 wants to re-analyze chapters 56-60, this big ** paragraph that please chooses the saint, let's learn together, how did the author design a big ** that is higher than a wave?

p.s. solemnly stated before the analysis,101 is not a group of water army,This book also has some flaws,In some author groups,101 has also talked about its shortcomings,For example, the first 5 chapters are procrastinated and obscure,However,101 is a refreshing person.,Open this post is to think that the author's big ** explosion is really good.,It's worth sharing.,Let everyone learn from it.,There's nothing else to do.。

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This large ** consists of three parts:

1. Beginning: The protagonist goes to the gate of the academy, sees that the atmosphere is not right, and then after entering the door, he is harassed by the enemy until he is forced to ask for the Holy Election. This part is the initial stage of the contradiction, and the role is to make the reader look forward to the next big **.

And the beginning is divided into two parts:

The first part is that the protagonist goes to the door and sees that the atmosphere is not right, and then the two entourages around him analyze the powerful relationship, and it can't be done to go, and it can't be done when they go, in the eyes of those two people, today is a Hongmen banquet, which is really difficult to do.

The protagonist's response is that I am a scholar, and I am upright, who can stop me from studying?

As a result, the two veteran retinues who came down from the battlefield were ashamed of themselves, and they were inspired by the protagonist and entered the gate majestically.

Why such an opening?

This is what any big ** needs to be set off, foreshadowed, and the reader's mood can rise.

In order to make the rear explode ** refreshing, the front must be suppressed, creating a feeling that the situation is very difficult and the protagonist is very troublesome.

However, don't forget, the alternating rise of contradictions and conflicts, the essence of which is that you punch me and I return your leg, this first level is that the enemy first forms a momentum oppression and makes a move. Then the protagonist is not afraid, and enters with his head held high, which is a counterattack.

This principle is the basic law of any big **, there must be both sides of the struggle, there must be rounds of exchanges, write the enemy's moves, you must write the protagonist's response, through the fight between the two sides, let the momentum go higher step by step, this can be the outbreak of the big **, do a good job of emotional accumulation.

Of course, with the exchanges between the enemy and the enemy, the most important thing is that there must be a good supporting role, and here two veterans are used to set off the protagonist, which shows the determination and courage of the protagonist, and makes the reader feel very cool.

You see, even the veterans of the battlefield are afraid, but the protagonist is not afraid, even ... What will happen to the plot later?Will the protagonist get into a fight? I have to see...

The reader's expectation is initially mobilized, and the reader's mood and expectation will not be set up without setting up the first level of the entry scene.

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The second part, which is the second level.

It was that Liu, who scolded the dean to reprimand the protagonist, saying that he was not virtuous, and listed a bunch of crimes to drive him out of the academy.

In this second round, the enemy's suppression is even more severe, it was just momentum before, I think you dare to come? Okay, you're here, aren't you, there's a kind of kid, I'll use a big hat to press you, use official coercion to suppress you, see what's wrong with you?

When writing the protagonist to fight back, remember, you still have to insert a supporting role to set off, what everyone is shocked, I'll go, what can I do?

The role is the same as the two veterans above, that is, before we write the protagonist, we must show how bad and irreparable the situation is from the perspective of the supporting role, and with their vision and vision, the protagonist is dead.

Remember this, we will write pretend, of course, the premise is that the enemy's tricks are really powerful, don't write very brain-dead, then the reader will not feel true.

Okay, the protagonist below fought back, he was a poor man, so he couldn't take the road of the bureaucratic system, and he could only rely on his own true talent to learn, so he directly asked the Holy Choice, that is, he respectfully asked the half-saint to come out to assess him, and passed, that is, the god agreed, and it was useless for others to fart!

What is written below? Is it directly written as the Holy Choice? Wrong!

The atmosphere has not yet reached its peak, and it is not cool enough to rush into ** at this time!

What do you need to do?

The author Jun has made 3 aspects of accentuation:

1. Wrote about the origin of the Holy Election, 200 years ago, a certain genius was framed, and then the Holy Election, how, from the historical source, tell the reader: Do you know? The Holy Election is very awesome, I rely on, if you don't do it, you will die, and no one dares to do that for 200 years.

Moreover, jumping away to write the origin of the Holy Election will make the reader more anxious, and the heart is tickling, I go, hurry up and write the Holy Election!

2. Focus on the reaction of everyone, the enemy looks at the protagonist like a dead dog, haha, now you are dead, it is to force you to choose. Aren't you smart? Aren't you horizontal? You dare to go to the Holy Election? Your brain is in water, right?

What about friends? I also look at the protagonist like a dead dog, ah, why are you so impulsive? Now it's okay, you're caught in the enemy's trap, you must be dead, it's over!

This part of the role is to set off, making people more worried about the fate of the protagonist, and everyone is not optimistic, which will also strengthen the effect of pretending.

3. Again, when you see this layer, 101 really wants to give a thumbs up!

The author arranged two officials, and rushed over quickly, both of them had already discussed how to save the protagonist at that time, and they also decided that the protagonist was finished, and they were preparing for the aftermath.

This part of the role is the same as the second set-off, that is, it makes people feel that the protagonist must be more auspicious and less lucky, and he is more looking forward to the plot later.

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Okay, it's almost time to flirt, and the main drama is on.

The Holy Election Begins!

The appearance of the half-saint is also a big momentum, what a thousand bells ring, it is to give people a very awesome feeling, this role is a role with the above foreshadowing, that is, to make the reader feel that it is a good guy, this assessment must be very scary.

This is the core part of the big **, it is the intermediate link, and the main point of this part is that it must be worked!

It's just that the assessment must be really difficult, so really that people feel impossible! It is impossible to pass the test, which requires the careful conception of the author.

Even if it is a little bit insufficient, and if you show timidity, all the preparations you have done in front of you will be completely blind. Readers will have the feeling of, oops, it's quite hanging, but that's actually it.

Before the official exam, the author will make it more difficult to make the exam more difficult.

The thinking time for each question is only 100 breaths, which is 1 minute and 40 seconds.

Let's take a look at the three questions:

The first is to test the pair, and the one that comes out is the overlapping word pair - pine leaf bamboo leaf leaf leaf cui.

The first question is not simple, and then use the supporting role to set off, what someone is so frightened that he rolls his eyes and faints, what everyone shouts, I damn it, is this a child student?

Then all eyes are on how the protagonist answers.

Speaking of which, 101 inserts a sentence, you must not write that the protagonist patted his head and answered, that is too simple, and it does not reflect that the protagonist uses his ingenuity.

The right thing to do is that the protagonist also frowned, and he really found it difficult, looking east and west, and wanted to find a hint for himself.

This method of writing was used in Dou Po, Xiao Yan relied on the alchemist for the first time, and he was dumbfounded when he went in and saw the facilities, he had never experienced it before, and he didn't dare to release the purple fire in his hand for a long time, for fear of scaring people.

So much so that the supporting characters feel that the protagonist is a dirt bun, which forms a contrast for the back.

Therefore, this technique is very clever, and everyone must remember not to let the protagonist answer too simply.

Next, the protagonist mutters: There are no pine trees around here, how did you come up with this pair?

The half-saint bull replied coawardly: For the saint to watch the heavens and the south and the north.

Seeing this, the 101 auction is amazing, this is a double test.

In other words, when we explicitly gave the protagonist a question, we secretly gave another question. It's like when we watch a two-person martial arts competition, this is a test on the bright side, but there are sharp knives under the soles of the feet, which is equivalent to increasing the difficulty of the competition.

It is equivalent to saying that not only does the protagonist have to make a pair, but he also has to crack the aura suppression of the demi-saint.

At this point, the reader's heart has reached the top, and the following is the stroke that breaks the game.

The protagonist answers: The sound of autumn geese is cold.

The artistic conception is higher than that of the upper couplet, and in the face of the aggressive momentum of the half-saint, the protagonist answers: The reader has been in spring, summer, autumn and winter.

As soon as this sentence came out, the aura of the half-saint was suddenly broken, and the 101 case was amazing!

At this point, let's pause, the so-called **, is to set off the momentum enough, one wave is not enough, it takes three or five times, or even seven times or eight times.

And the ** part, that is, the drama courage, must not let the reader see through it at once, and it is necessary to change it more, and temporarily jump out of some accidents to increase suspense and drama.

As for the game-breaking part, it is to make people unexpected and amazing.

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Next, the second test question: fog lock mountain top mountain lock fog, this is a palindrome pair.

As soon as it came out, the difficulty was raised, and everyone was even more surprised. They all look at the protagonist with the same eyes as dead dogs.

The protagonist must still be not easy to answer, pondering for a long time, answering: The sky is even the water, the tail of the water is the sky.

Note that the highlight here, that is, the burden eye that shakes the burden, is the two praises of the demi-saint -

The first time was "goodness", the second time was "great goodness", and 101 couldn't help but laugh when I saw this.

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The third question, before it comes out, still needs to be changed.

The protagonist has passed two levels in a row, and it seems that there is no danger along the way, right?

Okay, the author Jun added more changes, and the enemy began to jump and shout, and began to make some movements come out, which made people's hearts tug again.

Sure enough, the half-saint came up with the question, so that the reciting was like a stream, and the Analects were recited backwards.

As soon as this question came out, everyone entered a state of dementia, which ...... Isn't this impossible! The demi-saint is also in league with the enemy?

This scares the reader, impossible! Absolutely impossible!

Seeing this, 101 smiled heartily, the author must have borrowed from the classic passages in the Condor Shooting, where Huang Yaoshi tested Guo Jing, which was to let him recite the Nine Yin True Scriptures.

But the backward memorization is too nonsensical, and in the end, the author explained, this is whether the examination school can take an article as its own, as long as it is its own, then it is no problem to memorize it backwards.

And then, remember, you still can't let the protagonist pass the level too easily.

The protagonist applies for a quarter of an hour despite having a cheating cheat, and then when the review is ready, he starts to wow back!

The next cool point, naturally, everyone was shocked, the protagonist was very helpless, he just read it, and his mouth was dry, quite unhappy, in contrast to everyone's shock and worship, so the sense of pretending to be forced jumped on the paper.

Cool, very cool, very cool!

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After three levels, ** began to enter the stage of falling back and closing.

The end is naturally that the enemy is not rewarded, and he dies miserably.

The real enemy, Liu, pretends to reconcile with the protagonist, and both sides act in public, laying the groundwork for the follow-up fermentation of the contradiction, and letting the reader know that this story is not over yet, you wait and see, this is to create expectations.

Any one of them must bury new conflicts and crises.

At the same time, there must also be an unexpected joy, the demi-saint appreciates the protagonist very much and wants to accept him as a student, but the protagonist flatly refuses, so the demi-saint helps him wash the palace with the mantra. This one is also very important, the protagonist is not just pretending to be forced to finish, he must take advantage of it!

In the end, everyone still worships and worships, and then points out the challenges and opportunities that the protagonist will meet next, that is, he was sent to the state school exceptionally, where they are all talents, they will talk on paper, and they have to kill demons.

The protagonist won't, but he can't make an exception, and he has to kill the demon.

In this way, I continue to hook the reader and look down...

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Oh my mother, the analysis is finally finished, 101 is so tired that my fingers hurt, but the harvest is also huge, so pick it up again, and I will write it next time!