Goshin 18:24:37

Recently, I encountered a very depressing problem, and I really have no clue, so I asked you for advice......

Didn't I write a fantasy buyout these days? The pen "Fun" Pavilion www.biquge.info basically follow the kind of commercial white routine.

Recently, I wrote about 500,000 words, and when I looked back, I found a lot of flaws and problems, and there were many bugs, and many of the problems were also caused by the fact that the original setting was not done well.

Moreover, I feel that what I wrote myself is purely for the sake of profit, and I feel tired of killing over and over again.

In addition, I read two good Western fantasy books not long ago, and I suddenly found that my personality is more inclined to write about the kind of delicate things (of course, it feels like water injection...... ）

All in all, I mainly feel that there are too many things to kill for the sake of killing in my own writing, and I feel tired of writing.

In addition, I also feel that the character portrayal is too thin and I am not satisfied......

When I write it now, although I have a detailed outline, I always feel that something is missing between the lines, and I don't feel it......

distress

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101st rejection 18:34:24

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101st rejection 18:36:47

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101st rejection 18:37:55

The problem you said happened to be the first time I experienced it, I wrote 690,000 words in my novel, and I was very confused for a while, I was very irritable when I wrote, I had no emotion, and the things that came out were also dry, the characters were fake, and the plot was not combustible

101st rejection 18:38:26

Then I went to read the books of the great gods and compared what I had written before

101st rejection 18:39:14

I found that the book of the great god painted a lot of brush and ink to render the atmosphere, set off the characters, set off the characters, there are not many kinds of killing brushes and inks, mainly to build momentum, and to portray the psychology of the characters

101st rejection 18:39:28

So I wrote these 3 dragon empty posts

101st rejection 18:39:44

However, this is just a technique, and when I actually write it, I still don't feel it

101st rejection 18:40:32

I compared what I had just written, and I found that the novel I wrote 17 years ago was so emotional, although the structural techniques were still jerky, but they were emotional, and the characters were full of emotions

101st rejection 18:41:26

This shows that when everyone first writes novels, they write the stories they want to tell the most, and at that time, they didn't want to write anything, they just wanted to write it, and it was very uncomfortable to hold it in their hearts, so the stories and characters were very emotional

101st rejection 18:42:01

But after experiencing setbacks and learning various skills, I will forget the impulse, the passion, and the feeling of writing books before

101st rejection 18:42:59

At this time, you have to calm down, think about the story over and over again, think about the value of your life, ask yourself why you want to write a novel, in other words, brew your emotions.

101st rejection 18:44:10

When you ignore the grades, even if the book hits the street and no reader reads it, but the author is still full of emotions and wants to write this story, then it will be, and then use rendering, accentuation, foil and other skills, the story will look good when it is written, and at this time it will actually be successful, and you will be moved first, and the reader will be impressed.

Gojin 18:45:53

Indeed, my heart has been a little out of the book lately, and I have no emotions

101st rejection 18:46:11

This is one of the most difficult bottlenecks to break, and it is not too much to say that it is a demon

101st rejection 18:46:40

You see that after some great gods became famous, their works suddenly lost their feelings, such as the early works of Tomato, which were full of emotion

101st rejection 18:47:04

It's just that the heart is not quiet, the impetuous, and the pure and stirring mood that I wrote at the beginning is gone

Goshin 18:47:10

It's a lot better now, a few weeks ago, when I just finished reading the two Western fantasy genres of Arcane Constellation and Wizarding World, I was tired, and I was directly tired of the routine Xiaobaiwen

101st rejection 18:48:06

Before writing a book, don't rush to write, listen to more passionate songs, watch emotionally turbulent novels and movies, or something

101st rejection 18:48:34

Then think more about the plot on weekdays, which actually helps you integrate into the plot and characters, and the pen will not be too jerky

101st rejection 18:49:41

In terms of skills, it is to master the rendering, accentuation, foiling, and strengthening the psychological description of the characters, and you will naturally use it when the mood arises

Goshin 18:49:42

I also bought the two books mentioned in your previous post, but I haven't finished reading them, and after reading some of them, I found a lot of problems with what I wrote before.

I remember one that said that all the retreats of the protagonist should be blocked, and the characters should be forced to change (which is probably what it means)

When I compared, I suddenly found that when I wrote the beginning, I didn't think about it so deeply at all, and the preferential treatment given to the protagonist was simply too much.

If you look at it now, you will find that those "retreats" that are not blocked have become bugs......

101st rejection 18:50:13

You're right about that

101st rejection 18:50:42

I'll give you an example, it turns out that you are playing in the wild, and you are a little famous in the circle, and amateur players can't beat you

101st rejection 18:51:10

Then you worship a professional player who teaches you all kinds of scientific moves, and you realize that you have done something wrong before

Goshin 18:51:19

Well, indeed.

Recently, I've been trying to work on rendering and other things, but I didn't have a specific practice before, so when I write like this, the speed becomes very slow.

Compared with the original thousands of an hour, my heart became impetuous, and I couldn't write.

Mindset is also an issue

101st rejection 18:51:27

At this time, you will be very discouraged, and you will no longer be able to let go of the ball, and you will shrink back

101st rejection 18:51:49

It's all normal, I've been in that state for the first few months

Goshin 18:52:10

Well

101st rejection 18:52:20

What should be done is to calm down and practice that kind of scientific action little by little, which is the right way

Wuzhen 18:52:34

I now think back to a previous experience.

At that time, I was also looking for some fantasy texts that were newly popular on the starting point list

101st rejection 18:52:45

When you are proficient and the basic movements are mastered, one day you will have emotions, and you will get up all of a sudden

Goshin 18:52:57

I remember reading a lot of new things, I thought it was very touching, I had a lot of ideas at that time, and then for a while, it was very smooth when I wrote

Goshin 18:53:14

I can't get enough of writing four or five chapters a day

101st rejection 18:53:17

I watched Zhu Ziqing's spring last night, the back, I rubbed, and I was full of emotions

Goshin 18:53:23

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Goshin 18:53:28

Texts of the year

101st rejection 18:53:48

Well, be sure to find this kind of beautiful article, which is also very sensational, to brew emotions

Goshin 18:53:57

I was double open a while ago, and I contacted someone yesterday, and one of them was pushed off

101st rejection 18:54:01

Or you can watch Zhu Xian, Zhang Xiaofan's big competition

Gojin 18:54:11

It's because I've been discovering more and more recently that it's a waste of time to simply accumulate words like this

Goshin 18:54:23

I don't even have time to think about the plot carefully, and I am tired of the mechanical code words every day

101st rejection 18:54:35

Look at it, and you will say, "I'm rubbing, this feeling is great!"

Goshin 18:54:45

101st rejection 18:54:45

Writing a book is a pleasure!

Wuzhen 18:54:51

Well, yes

Goshin 18:54:53

When I first started writing

Goshin 18:54:57

That's how it feels

101st rejection 18:54:59

If you don't enjoy it, your heart is upset and lost

Goshin 18:55:02

Recently, I found that feeling is gone

Goshin 18:55:14

Sitting in front of the computer is quite dazed

101st rejection 18:55:45

You can try it first with the method I said, I am currently using this method to break the bottleneck, I feel a little useful

Goshin 18:55:51

Well

101st rejection 18:56:28

Of course, don't relax your skills, skills are the foundation, and your mood is to play on the spot, both of which are indispensable.