Bagpipes (358099028) 19:37:54

What do you want to hear tonight?

Let's talk about the big climax

Burning Love (304193492) 19:41:39

Yesterday Sanzang mentioned this

South Shore Qianmo (54764431) 19:41:57

As long as you have the climax laid the ground, it will naturally come out

Night Listening to Blood 19:41:55

Sanzang mainly mentions burying hooks

19:44:52

If the foreshadowing is not written, the climax will not be refreshing

Bagpipes (358099028) 19:45:05

There are ups and downs, and a big climax has at least three or five hundred thousand words to pave the way

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 19:45:07

I feel better about which work I talked about before, so I can talk about it well, and everyone will see it, and then talk about it again

Bagpipes (358099028) 19:45:43

For example, the six major sects in the Heaven and Dragon Slayer besieged the Guangming Summit

Night Listening to Blood 19:45:56

Just like ooxx, foreplay is the most important, the problem is that most people don't understand or don't do it well

Bagpipes (358099028) 19:46:01

This is a classic climax layout, right? Since Zeng Aniu met the team of the Emei faction, this climax has been paved

Bagpipes (358099028) 19:47:00

In the end, mixed in the team of the Emei faction, all the way to the top of the light, the climax was completely pushed to the peak, and then the protagonist showed his might, harvesting the position of the sect leader and a group of subordinates, which is the residual heat of the climax

Bagpipes (358099028) 19:47:24

The front and back plays are necessary, the front play is promoted, and the back play is still evocative

Bagpipes (358099028) 19:49:39

The bandits have no money, they need money, right? This is the introduction of the climax, when they have no money, they have to go down the mountain to rob and find a target, and then advance step by step, ambush caravan attack, there are several battles of wits and courage in the middle, and finally the robbery is completed, the damage and the spoils of war are counted, and then they sit on the ground and share the spoils

Bagpipes (358099028) 19:50:51

This is a climax, from the introduction to the end of the climax, when writing, pay attention to leaving an introduction for the next high trend, such as what kind of backing background does the person who robbed, although he grabbed the money, he provoked a certain official who was in charge of 100,000 troops

Bagpipes (358099028) 19:52:21

The climax advancement process is also divided into several kinds, like this profit-making climax, to remind the reader from time to time how important this thing is to the protagonist, and must be obtained, and it can't be crushed like an online game monster farm

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 19:52:40

This, it doesn't seem to be a big orgasm, it's just an ordinary orgasm. Pen × fun × Pavilion www. ｂｉｑｕｇｅ。 ｉｎｆｏ

Burning Love (304193492) 19:52:48

It is to pull out the next plot when the climax is not over or there is still residual heat, so that the reader can't stop

Bagpipes (358099028) 19:53:08

The follow-up I mentioned is a passive climax, paying attention to creating a sense of urgency, and the protagonist is at stake, tugging at the reader's nerves

rhythm

Night Listening to Blood 19:38:16

The rhythm of the climax

Night Listening to Blood 19:38:35

How to write wave after wave of climax is addictive

South Shore Qianmo (54764431) 19:39:16

ditto

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 19:40:12

Wave after wave of climax? Wait a minute, you should ask first, how to write a big climax

Bagpipes (358099028) 19:40:16

The rhythm of the climax is similar to that of a curve rally

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 19:40:36

Write the kind of climax that can grab the reader, let the reader finish reading, feel that the book is really cool, and want to see such a cool climax

Night Listening to Blood 19:40:49

I always can't grasp this rhythm, and I write and write

Bagpipes (358099028) 19:40:53

Talking about the climax layout?

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 19:41:07

Let's talk about the big climax

South Shore Qianmo (54764431) 19:41:15

Well, especially the one after the other

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 19:41:23

Do you all think you can write a big orgasm?

Nan'an Qianmo (54764431) 19:41:44

The main reason is that the rhythm is not grasped enough

Burning Love (304193492) 19:41:39

Yesterday Sanzang mentioned this

South Shore Qianmo (54764431) 19:41:57

As long as you have the climax laid the ground, it will naturally come out

Night Listening to Blood 19:41:55

Sanzang mainly mentions burying hooks

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 19:42:00

Well, I mentioned it, but I didn't mainly talk about the big climax

The wind is light and the clouds are light 19:42:02

The climax layout, preferably exemplified

Bagpipes (358099028) 19:42:16

Is it the rhythm between the climaxes or the rhythm that pushes the climax?

South Shore Qianmo (54764431) 19:42:25

So whether to listen to the climax or listen to the rhythm today

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 19:42:19

From beginning to end, a big orgasmic process,,

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 19:42:34

Listen to the climax first, otherwise the climax is not well written, where is the rhythm?

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 19:42:40

It's not an ordinary orgasm, it's a big orgasm,,

South Shore Qianmo (54764431) 19:43:00

I think that without rhythm, no one will necessarily see your orgasm go ...

Night Listening to Blood 19:43:05

Well, ditto

Burning Love (304193492) 19:43:25

What I want to ask is how to set the stage for the climax, and how to set the stage for the climax

Nan'an Qianmo (54764431) 19:43:39

Especially at the beginning, there is no rhythm, it is estimated that you will run away after reading a thousand words, and no matter how well the climax is written, no one will read it

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 19:43:35

I'm dizzy, the climax is a pearl, and the rhythm is a line,,,

South Shore Qianmo (54764431) 19:43:54

Let's talk about it in a row

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 19:43:50

Of course, write the pearl first, and then think about how to thread the needle

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 19:44:23

Just like writing an orgasm, you first have to know the cool point,

South Shore Qianmo (54764431) 19:44:30

Whatever, you have to learn anyway

Burning Love (304193492) 19:44:27

There is no orgasm without foreshadowing, and the key is that foreshadowing is easy to humiliate

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 19:44:51

When talking about the climax, we should take the chapter of the famous work as an example

Bagpipes (358099028) 19:44:51

The orgasm should be like a roller coaster

Night Listening to Blood 19:44:52

If the foreshadowing is not written, the climax will not be refreshing

Bagpipes (358099028) 19:45:05

There are ups and downs, and a big climax has at least three or five hundred thousand words to pave the way

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 19:45:07

I feel better about which work I talked about before, so I can talk about it well, and everyone will see it, and then talk about it again

Bagpipes (358099028) 19:45:43

For example, the six major sects in the Heaven and Dragon Slayer besieged the Guangming Summit

Night Listening to Blood 19:45:56

Just like ooxx, foreplay is the most important, the problem is that most people don't understand or don't do it well

Bagpipes (358099028) 19:46:01

This is a classic climax layout, right? Since Zeng Aniu met the team of the Emei faction, this climax has been paved

Bagpipes (358099028) 19:47:00

In the end, mixed in the team of the Emei faction, all the way to the top of the light, the climax was completely pushed to the peak, and then the protagonist showed his might, harvesting the position of the sect leader and a group of subordinates, which is the residual heat of the climax

Bagpipes (358099028) 19:47:24

The front and back plays are necessary, the front play is promoted, and the back play is still evocative

Bagpipes (358099028) 19:49:39

The bandits have no money, they need money, right? This is the introduction of the climax, when they have no money, they have to go down the mountain to rob and find a target, and then advance step by step, ambush caravan attack, there are several battles of wits and courage in the middle, and finally the robbery is completed, the damage and the spoils of war are counted, and then they sit on the ground and share the spoils

Bagpipes (358099028) 19:50:51

This is a climax, from the introduction to the end of the climax, when writing, pay attention to leaving an introduction for the next high trend, such as what kind of backing background does the person who robbed, although he grabbed the money, he provoked a certain official who was in charge of 100,000 troops

Bagpipes (358099028) 19:52:21

The climax advancement process is also divided into several kinds, like this profit-making climax, to remind the reader from time to time how important this thing is to the protagonist, and must be obtained, and it can't be crushed like an online game monster farm

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 19:52:40

This, it doesn't seem to be a big orgasm, it's just an ordinary orgasm.

Burning Love (304193492) 19:52:48

It is to pull out the next plot when the climax is not over or there is still residual heat, so that the reader can't stop

Bagpipes (358099028) 19:53:08

The follow-up I mentioned is a passive climax, paying attention to creating a sense of urgency, and the protagonist is at stake, tugging at the reader's nerves

Meditation (10725250) 19:53:19

The climax is when all the important characters you write appear on

Bagpipes (358099028) 19:53:29

Isn't it a big climax, I'm an example, dear, didn't I personally write a big climax for you to see

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 19:53:53

That's why I said take your impressionistic web novel as an example,,,

Burning Love (304193492) 19:53:59

Then leads to the next climax, so that the climax is layered on top of each other, completely pushing the plot to the highest peak

Bagpipes (358099028) 19:54:02

The plot of the big climax is either a large-scale treasure hunting copy, such as the Void Heaven Temple in mortals, and the major awesome bosses appear on the stage to compete for the greatest benefits

Bagpipes (358099028) 19:54:28

Either it's a conspiracy type, and there is a boss who is secretly calculating how the protagonists on both sides of the protagonist go back and forth with each other

Bagpipes (358099028) 19:55:04

See the big with the small

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:00:19

There are too many urban cultural constraints

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:00:39

Combat class can write the feeling of blood boiling

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:00:48

The plot of the city is on the soft side

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 20:00:53

At least for long-time readers like me, the coolness of killing an enemy is not as high as the coolness of humiliation

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:01:20

..... I've been reading books for six or seven years, and I don't have much feeling for the city

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 20:01:55

I also watch Xianxia fantasy, and I still think that killing is just cool

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:02:00

Maybe it has something to do with my personality, I like straight fights, small fights, and if it's not interesting, I will turn the world upside down

Burning Love (304193492) 20:02:20

It's all great gods

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 20:02:23

There are a lot of cool points in online articles, and killing people is only the most commonly used and can be used repeatedly without major problems, but because of this, the coolness will decrease significantly.

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:02:25

I like to read cult monk texts

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 20:02:58

Then, what you said is turning the world upside down, it is not murder, it is cool to break the rules

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:03:44

Well, I hate the hypocritical joke that wants to kill people and flaunts how noble they are

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:04:03

It's obviously a murder and a treasure, but you have to pretend to be a victim

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:04:21

That's why I rarely watch Xianxia

The Origin of Sin (444567949) 20:04:41

Killing people is fighting monsters, just see if that person is worth killing

Burning Love (304193492) 20:05:08

My book is set to fight and kill people with small climaxes, and the big climax doesn't kill people

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 20:05:51

Killing is a means of creating an orgasm, not an orgasm itself, at least I personally feel so

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 20:07:23

Killing is the means to solve the problem, and the climax is what problem is solved, or the process of solving. It's still hard to say

101(630268437)20:11:12

I think for newcomers, description, and writing are secondary, and if you know YY, this is amazing

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 20:11:43

YY, it's cool

101(630268437)20:12:02

This is the most important thing

101(630268437)20:12:37

No, YY is a problem of thinking, and thinking is the most difficult thing to correct

101(630268437)20:12:52

Writing and description can be slowly supplemented

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 20:13:51

I've just learned to write coolly, but it's not cool enough to write badly, so I want to discuss the climax

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 20:14:13

The cool point is the basic, and the good cool point forms a big climax, which is the subscription guarantee

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 20:14:44

In fact, creativity is the easiest to be a god, but creativity is rare, so my idle goal is to study the climax.

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:15:49

I think you can learn the dungeon orgasm method first

(908018502) 20:16:06

It's not enough to have some benefits in the middle

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 20:16:48

Quest Climax is only suitable for combat, and cannot be universally applied to all genres

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 20:17:21

I write about the city just to exercise the cool points and climaxes of non-combat.

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:17:25

Don't think about any big climax in urban literature, it's not easy to write, it's basically ambiguous

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:19:35

The basic technique of the city is to pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger, ambiguous, plus fighting, suspense or something, these elements are mixed and matched

101, when I was bored, I didn't read the book of the great god. I go to the books that aren't signed. Find the shortcomings in it, and then think about whether you have this problem.

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:32:59

Just make up an example of a big climax to show you, the protagonist got a message, someone found out that a certain ancient cave is how many thousands of years ago, a powerful alchemist's cave mansion, this cave is likely to have a direct promotion of a large realm of XX Dan, and there is also a longevity pill that can increase a hundred years of longevity, the protagonist is moved, cultivation needs all kinds of opportunities, a hundred years of life in a hurry, if you can't improve the realm, it will turn into loess, so he plans to try his luck, the kind of pill that improves a big realm, can't get it, can mix a pill of Shouyuan Dan, it's not bad, so he teamed up with people on the road, met other monks on the road, and the plot happened to a number of strong people when he was about to arrive at the location of the caveThe amount began to increase, and the protagonist began to hesitate a little, but at this time, I got another news, only monks with fire spirit roots can enter the cave, and the forbidden protagonist happens to have fire spirit roots, which is undoubtedly good news, no matter how awesome the master is, it may not happen to have fire spirit roots, so the difficulty is reduced a lot

Centennial (460424166) 20:33:47

It is undoubtedly a portrayal of characters

Writing

plot

plot

structure

atmosphere

Text harness

YY

Codeword speed

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:34:39

The process of entering the plot occurred, and several protagonists finally mixed in with X teammates, but found that the crisis was bigger than expected, and they could die at any time, but they accidentally triggered a ban and obtained a thing, which is a complete set of sword formations or so-and-so props in the hands of the protagonist, which can explode in an instant with huge lethality

The wind is light and the clouds are light 20:35:06

It's a little bit of a feeling

The wind is light and the clouds are light 20:36:11

The discovery of the big climax needs an introduction, a cool foreshadowing, a foreshadowing, a combination of many elements, and a one-time outbreak at a specific time

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:37:01

You can get rid of a master in seconds, so that the protagonist's confidence is a little more enhanced, and then there are various conflicts with other monks, these conflicts are designed by yourself, and the process of getting Shou Yuan Dan is not easy, although the top masters don't pay much attention to it, but the monks who are higher than themselves will still be eyeing it, especially some old monsters who are about to reach the limit, but the protagonist has the props he just got to save his life, so he got it by wit and coincidence, but he wanted to go out and was unwilling to see what other treasures he had

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:37:23

Isn't it too much to write ....

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:37:48

That's an example of what I did on the spot

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:38:17

Do you want to keep making it up?

The wind is light and the clouds are light 20:38:54

For example, the example of the bagpipes.,The news that the protagonist got is the introduction.,How cool and cool it is after explaining it is to create a sense of expectation.,And then teaming up with others on the way to the side plot is the side plot.,You can do a lot of follow-up foreshadowing in the side plot.,Or fill in some of the front pits.,This is also a necessary link.。

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:39:18

Did the wind light notice my button?

The wind is light and the clouds are light 20:39:38

Not yet, I'm also patting and typing

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:39:42

Originally, the strength of the protagonist was not enough to obtain the final treasure, but I had to lay the groundwork step by step to make this impossible possible

God said. You're too simple, 20:39:47

You can take a break and listen to the lectures of the great gods

Handwriting (13945805) 20:40:06

In my opinion, the discussion feels that the climax is the collection of characters in the early stage, the collection of various plots, and the biggest accident, which paves the way for the later stage. That's pretty much it, right? Who's going to add it......

The wind is light and the clouds are light 20:40:08

This session is one of the cool points of the climax, right?

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:40:36

At the same time, he is also hinting to the reader that the protagonist is likely to get better treasures

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:40:57

Shaping expectations is the process of constantly suggesting that the reader can see hope, but not too much

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:41:17

The same benefits coexist with crises, and it is inevitable that some minor setbacks will not go smoothly all the way

God said. You're too simple, kid 20:41:22

It's usually three chapters, a small climax, ten chapters or so, and a big climax, right?

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:41:33

This is a theoretical value

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:41:58

If there are two or three chapters and a small button under the button, the reader can also read it

God said. You're too simple, 20:42:50

What is it like in general

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:43:06

In fact, the protagonist can definitely get good things, but we can't tell the reader directly, the protagonist has an aura, all the way is plug-ins and adventures, to create a false impression that the protagonist may get, but the crisis is too great, or it may not be obtained, and he will lose his life, creating a feeling of crisis and opportunity

101(630268437)20:43:57

I understand, it is to let the reader not be sure about the direction of the plot, and if you are not sure, you will look forward to reading it

101(630268437)20:44:09

The so-called god turn, the thunder of forgetting words, is this effect

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:45:02

If you want to make the reader can't wait to open the next chapter, there are many skills, and what happened to the protagonist is the most common, in addition, suspense literature and science will also use suspense to hook the reader's curiosity and desire for knowledge, and some readers will create an embarrassing scene, such as a college student who is about to graduate, but when he goes to find a tutor, he meets a mentor and a girl, and the tutor will not be afraid that he will say it and make it difficult for him because of this matter

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:45:25

The example given above is the climax of the Forgotten Treasure Dungeon

101(630268437)20:45:39

This is unexpected, right?

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:45:42

I keep seeing that I hope to get the benefits, but there is a great crisis

Handwriting (13945805) 20:45:46

The crisis comes from itself, from the hostilities, from the situation......

God said. You're too simple, kid paper, 20:46:11

I remember 101 said a little bit to me before

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 20:46:27

This copy culminates, say what I think.

1. Bright and compacted. It is superficially to give the protagonist a lower goal, but to point out that there is a higher goal, the reader vaguely expects it, and the old reader will know that the protagonist is likely to get, which is the reason why they read it.

2,Regarding one-time props,I don't recommend being a master of seckill,It's best to have a strong protection ability or escape ability,Let the protagonist get,And then leave safely,This can also naturally lead to the next big plot - or a master chasing,Or someone spreads news,Everyone besieges the protagonist。

Of course, it is also possible to destroy the enemy in the dungeon.

Anyway, I personally feel that one-time items kill enemies, which is very ruin the sense of escalation.

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:46:36

The climax is the shaping of a situation, an environment in which crises and opportunities coexist, and the protagonist relies on himself and a little adventure

God said. You're too simple, kid paper, 20:47:13

Jin Yong's condor shooting, when Guo Jing and Huang Rong went to find Huang Yaoshi to prepare for marriage.

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:47:24

The eternal view is very correct, because I am in labor, and the consideration will definitely not be too thorough, so some flaws are inevitable

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:47:37

When you write, you must consider reasonableness

God said. You're still too simple, 20:47:43

Repeatedly turning corners and bringing people into the ......

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 20:47:44

Well, right,

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:48:48

This is one of the climactic writings, and the other is a conspiracy, similar to the usual Mission Impossible in urban movies

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 20:49:06

I couldn't read Mission Impossible when I was a child, and I was not interested in it when I grew up, tragedy

God said. You're too simple, 20:49:13

There are many plots in this, which are like that according to normal thinking, as a result, Jin Yong's pen has created a different and previous result......

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:49:36

The protagonist is involved in a conspiracy because of something, creating suspense layer by layer, and finally unraveling the puzzle, killing the boss, and getting a reward to pass the level

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:50:10

This is just an example, there are actually a lot of climax techniques, and the bright top one is different from the technique of the online article

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:50:38

His protagonist Zhang Wuji is quite low-key, like playing soy sauce, but he still creates a big climax

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:50:53

How to write it has to work the outline

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:51:26

Let's talk about this first, and then let's talk about something

Handwriting (13945805) 20:51:57

Get the big move (goldfinger) and start to be awesome

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:52:18

When I read the novel, I can't see that there are many finished books, and usually there is no interest in this part in the middle and back, I don't know if you have encountered it

101(630268437)20:52:22

Authenticity, bagpipes, didn't you say yesterday that there was research on this?

101(630268437)20:52:46

Yes, I don't like to watch it in the middle of the plot because of the weak plot

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:52:46

I think it's probably my personal preference that doesn't suit everyone

101(630268437)20:53:04

Look at the new idea of the golden finger at the beginning, up to 200,000 words, and don't read it

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:53:06

Let's not talk about the stickiness of the plot

101(630268437)20:53:12

Good

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:53:51

How can a novel be counted at 2 million words to reduce the reader's stickiness, and I have been thinking about it before

South Shore Qianmo (54764431) 20:54:21

Mmmm, I don't usually watch VIPs

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:54:50

There are usually several situations where the plot collapses, the writing is ungraspable, the writing deviates, and the theme at the beginning deviates, and then there are several situations where the plot is highly repetitive, and similar climaxes are used repeatedly

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:55:44

Not to mention the collapse and deviation of the writing, the plot cannot be controlled, so you can only rely on learning more and writing more

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:56:23

Let's talk about the repetition of this plot, for example, in the book Killing God, there is a climax that is used repeatedly, from the beginning to more than 5 million words, and the book is used no less than 50 times

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:57:21

The protagonist's strength is not high, and when he encounters a group of people with a high realm, he looks down on and disdains him in various ways, until the protagonist first appears, and finally breaks out and slaps his face, and the NPCs are shocked

101(630268437)20:57:41

I'll go, 50 times, and you can still watch it?

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:57:46

This itself is a small paragraph that pretends to be a slap in the face, and if you use it too much, readers will naturally run

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:57:58

There is no rut, there is really no book to read

The Origin of Sin (444567949) 20:58:32

The author's setting is good, there are many places in the middle that are tired, but it is also refreshing when it erupts

101(630268437)20:58:38

I feel that it's not just a repetition of the joke, the protagonist keeps stepping on others, no one cares about him, and I won't read it after repeating 30,000 words

The wind is light and the clouds are light 20:58:48

I've finished killing the gods.。。。 My feeling is that the pace of changing maps in this book is too fast. Especially the first map.,It's changed directly in a few chapters.,The characters in it have just been shaped and it's useless.,Several forces in it.,A few empires or something.,Haven't appeared yet.。。。 The foreshadowing is very powerful

Meditation (10725250) 20:58:51

Because the online article is fast food, it must be written like this. At first glance, it is very attractive, but after watching too much, it will vomit

The wind is light and the clouds are light 20:59:37

Many of the settings in God Killing are really good, but it feels like the plot has always been repetitive, similar to what bagpipes said, it has always been suppressed, and then exploded.

Bagpipes (358099028) 20:59:38

During the Chinese New Year, people in my other group are complaining that the New Year is boring, in fact, this is a phenomenon of concentration of cool points, when I was a child, I didn't have money to eat a good meal, and I had to wait until the New Year a year to be satisfied, so the New Year was very cool, and now I can often eat new clothes, and I can buy it whenever I want

Meditation (10725250) 21:00:01

So the cool point should be appropriate

Bagpipes (358099028) 21:01:17

So cool point, be cautious about what to use, 30,000 words, small climax, 100,000 words, big climax, this is not good, it is best to pave the way under a big climax, many small climaxes, push a book high, there are two or three big climaxes, it is enough, not too much, each big climax should have its own characteristics, it can't be all copies, and the protagonist can't always be calculated

The wind is light and the clouds are light 21:01:22

For example, a poor bastard accidentally got 10,000 yuan for the first time, which is very cool. The second time I unexpectedly got 10,000 yuan, which was still very cool. The 10,000th time I accidentally got 10,000 yuan, and the reader vomited

South Shore Qianmo (54764431) 21:02:11

The second time I accidentally got 30,000 yuan, and then I met the robbers, so I will continue to watch

The wind is light and the clouds are light 21:02:13

Is there an example of the protagonist designing someone else's orgasm?

The wind is light and the clouds are light 21:02:26

The point is not that it is not the second time ... It's the 10,000th time.

South Shore Qianmo (54764431) 21:02:45

I mean, the same construction, I won't look at it the second time

Bagpipes (358099028) 21:02:50

It's also a way to replace it, and then at the end of each chapter, or every two or three chapters, a small button, a big climax, is a big button, so that readers look forward to small buttons, which can be suspenseful, ambiguous, counterattack, or other techniques, mixed into the plot, don't let the reader feel that the plot has been repeated, basically the reader will not run

Bagpipes (358099028) 21:03:52

The key points are jammed so that the reader can't wait to turn to the next chapter

The wind is light and the clouds are light 21:04:24

It feels like the current novels are all about the protagonist getting into someone else's trap, and then giving the reader an intuitive feeling that the protagonist must be dying, but in the end, the protagonist broke out and counterattacked, which is the climax of this example.

Glory Years 21:04:53

Teacher Xiuzhen's life record?Isn't that the protagonist always in trouble, and then keeps slapping his face? That's it, although the characters have changed, and the forces have changed, but it still has to be that cool point, and I'm tired of watching too much

Brilliant (946939785) 21:05:00

It's normal, novels are originally made up of crises.

The wind is light and the clouds are light 21:05:55

I know it's normal, I mean we can go another route to set the orgasm, not with different scenes, but with different routes

Bagpipes (358099028) 21:07:21

Let's talk about the flexibility of the plot, a snowball rolling down from the top of the snow peak, it must be getting bigger and bigger, but this can only write a big plot, because it must be rolling down the mountain, readers can basically guess it, but some small plots have to play a little more, such as the return of the master of urban literature, similar to the school flower sticker of the second generation of the fishman, and when you meet a beautiful reader, you will guess that you must be receiving, and if you receive more, the reader will be bored

Bagpipes (358099028) 21:07:59

When the author finishes writing a book and sends it out, many readers will guess the plot below, and occasionally there will be an unexpected surprise that they can't guess or diametrically opposed

Bagpipes (358099028) 21:08:51

Why do you have to accept the protagonist when you meet a woman, and the woman can fill a shuttle bus and can't have a female enemy, or can't look down on the protagonist at all?

The wind is light and the clouds are light 21:08:53

It feels like an accident, and it makes sense.

Bagpipes (358099028) 21:09:07

Yes, that's what it means, and it's unexpected

Bagpipes (358099028) 21:09:29

I don't know if you've seen the movie and TV jokes of Mr. Storyteller

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 21:09:31

But if you meet a beautiful woman who doesn't accept it,,, this example is really not good, or rather than writing, it is better not to write

Meditation (10725250) 21:10:09

He will definitely accept it, but he will defeat her and let her worship her

Bagpipes (358099028) 21:10:15

When Mr. Storyteller tells a story, he often encounters an audience member who interrupts and says, "What must be going to happen to the protagonist of XXX?" At this time, Mr. Storyteller usually immediately changes the plot to give him a big reversal

The wind is light and the clouds are light 21:10:36

It is to let the reader involuntarily imagine the plot for the reader, and predict the next direction, but the result is different for him, and it seems more reasonable to think about it carefully.

Bagpipes (358099028) 21:10:40

The more bones you can't gnaw, the more you can't get it, the more attractive a woman is, and it's too easy to get it, and it's boring

Bagpipes (358099028) 21:12:27

Try to show some clues in advance, so that the reader can guess, but not sure

Bagpipes (358099028) 21:14:15

The common way to pull a sense of anticipation is nothing more than why the protagonist should do what happened to him

Bagpipes (358099028) 21:14:57

Foreshadowing surprises can be used

Bagpipes (358099028) 21:15:03

I'm afraid there will be no warning

Bagpipes (358099028) 21:15:19

For example, the protagonist and the master have a decisive battle, and suddenly a volcanic eruption burns the opponent to death

Bagpipes (358099028) 21:15:27

This reader has to scold his mother

Bagpipes (358099028) 21:16:19

If you tell the reader in advance that this is a volcano, an earthquake zone, and a volcano erupts later, it would be a little mentally prepared and not feel too abrupt

101(630268437)21:17:16

Reasonable, and beneficial to the protagonist

Bagpipes (358099028) 21:17:57

Surprise... If you have laid the groundwork for 300,000 words in the previous article, and suddenly the opponent dies violently for this battle, then there is no surprise

The wind is light and the clouds are light 21:18:08

The main thing is that this ending of yours is completely unfounded, and normal people will not do it.

Brilliant (946939785) 21:18:19

There is a major misunderstanding in the example of Fengyunju, normal people will not burn money.

Brilliant (946939785) 21:18:30

It's basic common sense,

Bagpipes (358099028) 21:18:37

Burning a wallet can be written as a suspense

Brilliant (946939785) 21:18:48

To talk about things with common sense is to find something to do with nothing.

Bagpipes (358099028) 21:18:51

For example, when you open your wallet and see a photo, the protagonist's face suddenly changes, and then burns it

101(630268437)21:18:58

Liu Bang fought a city, and the prisoners were all wanted, but they wanted to give it to Xiang Yu, and Fan Xu below was annoyed, saying that many brothers had died in this city, and it was good to keep the captives to replenish the soldiers by themselves.

Fan Xu's thoughts are normal people's thinking;

Liu Bang said, I want a captive, Xiang Yu suspects that I have an antipathy, I can't ask for it, this is the thinking of a master outside the world.

Bagpipes (358099028) 21:19:03

Common sense is the easiest way to shape suspense, and it works particularly well

Bagpipes (358099028) 21:19:16

It's curious to know that it won't be

The wind is light and the clouds are light 21:20:03

Liu Bang: There are traces to follow

Brilliant (946939785) 21:20:16

Bagpipes (358099028) 21:17:58

Surprise... If you have laid the groundwork for 300,000 words in the previous article, and suddenly the opponent dies violently for this battle, then there is no surprise

If you lay the groundwork in advance, and then go to write about the volcano, this is off topic, and it has nothing to do with the cool point, and it has nothing to do with how the opponent died.

101(630268437)21:20:29

If it can be interpreted in favor of the protagonist and the reader agrees with it, you can create such an unexpected anomaly

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 21:22:18

Regarding volcanoes, it is necessary to make the volcano a support, and the protagonist is the main force to kill the enemy.

If the volcano is too strong and the noise dominates, how can the protagonist be shown to be awesome?

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 21:22:28

Killing the enemy is not cool at all, the protagonist is awesome, it is cool

The wind is light and the clouds are light 21:22:46

The kind of beauty that is angry with the spirit of the king is posted upside down, and now there are more than N people who write it, especially the protagonist is still a poor bastard, not handsome, and has no background, can you explain it? And it's not a beauty who falls in love with him

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 21:22:58

Killing is to show that the protagonist is awesome, and then cool.

It's not that killing people is cool, unless it's that kind of national art flow

Bagpipes (358099028) 21:23:01

The protagonist's strength is invincible, and it is okay to consciously take the initiative to cause a volcanic eruption

Brilliant (946939785) 21:23:15

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 21:22:28

Killing the enemy is not cool at all, the protagonist is awesome, it is cool

You are actually the protagonist cool, provided that the reader must be brought into the protagonist.

Bagpipes (358099028) 21:30:51

That's basically the end of what I'm going to talk about

Qiting Wind (100217406) 21:30:51

Ask a thing, the main thing must be to keep getting practical benefits to be cool?

Bagpipes (358099028) 21:31:30

The benefits don't have to be on the surface

The wind is light and the clouds are light 21:31:43

The most important thing is to learn to promote and suppress first

Bagpipes (358099028) 21:32:12

For example, the protagonist helped a stranger with low strength, and in the future, this person was awesome and helped the protagonist when he was in trouble, which is also a hidden benefit

Bagpipes (358099028) 21:34:41

..... The one who is smooth sailing is Gao Fu and handsome

The wind is light and the clouds are light 21:34:44

Let the protagonist have a sense of crisis at all times

Bagpipes (358099028) 21:34:53

What a tribulation it is for the sling silk to counterattack

The wind is light and the clouds are light 21:35:25

Even Gao Fushuai will have an invisible sense of crisis, no one in this world will have smooth sailing, that is, it is smooth sailing, let's write that he is afraid of death, and then he needs all kinds of cultivation to become an immortal

The wind is light and the clouds are light 21:35:50

Your protagonist hasn't suffered because you haven't found his weaknesses

Qiting Wind (100217406) 21:35:57

For example, the protagonist doesn't know what to do when he encounters someone who is much stronger than him

The wind is light and the clouds are light 21:36:53

As far as An Gao Fushuai is concerned, the woman he likes has a more powerful person who likes it, and you should have a sense of crisis at this time. In the end, you defeat him in various ways and get the beauty back, this is the desire to promote and suppress first

Bagpipes (358099028) 21:37:42

The starting point of the opening cut should be pressed as much as possible

Bagpipes (358099028) 21:38:06

There is a lot of room for improvement when it is pressed to a level similar to that of ordinary people

Bagpipes (358099028) 21:42:10

If an ant wants to kill an elephant, it must first grow to the size of an elephant, and it needs all kinds of resources to make it grow

The wind is light and the clouds are light 21:43:30

Then the sense of crisis must always exist, not the ultimate villain, there must always be the kind that is a little stronger than you, you have to work hard to upgrade, otherwise you will die immediately

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 21:44:50

Now the sense of crisis is too strong, and it is not good. It should be said that the sense of crisis is better to continue a big plot, then solve the crisis, and then give the protagonist a relatively positive or neutral goal.

There is a crisis from beginning to end, readers will be annoyed, and if there is a slight problem with the crisis, readers will abandon the book

Burning Love (304193492) 21:45:02

Let's talk about one of my copies:I used to get a thing.,I didn't know what the use was.,A copy of the accidental and a fire spirit book has a feeling.,When everyone else is competing for treasure.,The protagonist has been trying to subdue the spirit of the book.,In the end, it succeeded.,But the fire spirit monster was accidentally released.,Finally, the group was wiped out.,And the protagonist also got the illustrated book and stimulated the copy ban.,And teleported out thousands of miles away! Okay,Mainly because there are too many people offended.,Take care of a map!How about this?

The wind is light and the clouds are light 21:45:50

It's not a sense of crisis all the time. And each sense of crisis is different, not necessarily the kind that wants to die or live. For example, if you are a brother in the same sect, your junior brother cultivates faster than you, which is also a sense of crisis

The wind is light and the clouds are light 21:46:05

Well, not required.

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 21:46:22

Wind light, I understand, your definition of a sense of crisis is different from our normal understanding,,, yours is too broad,

Qiting Wind (100217406) 21:46:26

And if there is a slight problem with the crisis, the reader will abandon the book

How to say this sentence

hlshr(1239733885)21:46:31

Character is shown through the events, battles, crisis manifestations and so on that pig's feet encounter, not by words

The wind is light and the clouds are light 21:47:26

Well, if this sense of crisis doesn't exist, your plot will be flat

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 21:47:33

Passion

You're going crazy for a copy of this.

The protagonist just got the treasure.,You should kill all sides right away!,You actually ran away.,,Change the map,,Resolutely can't write like that.

Bagpipes (358099028) 22:04:45

It's useless to write less about the exterior scenes outside the protagonist's field of vision

The wind is light and the clouds are light 22:05:10

It's too concise.,This is an appearance.

Bagpipes (358099028) 22:05:26

It's the appearance that must be concise

Bagpipes (358099028) 22:05:45

Does the moon outside shine again have anything to do with the protagonist?

Bagpipes (358099028) 22:05:49

Could it be that the protagonist is admiring the moon?

Bathing without bubbling (403741169) 22:05:53

If you want to write about the killing machine on a moonlit night, you can describe more scenery

Bagpipes (358099028) 22:06:53

Use the focus of the protagonist's gaze to describe other irrelevant things, and try to be as concise as possible so that the reader knows what the general environment is like

The wind is light and the clouds are light 22:07:16

Well, let's cut it off, I was trying to set off the scenery of that place

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 22:07:25

Moonshine is time, and this is very important

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 22:07:39

I prefer a one-sentence description of the scenery, the time, and the environment

Bagpipes (358099028) 22:12:34

The trade-offs of detailed descriptions

To show a realistic picture, it is not necessary to write all the details. Or some people say that the more detailed the writing, the more authentic the work will be

I don't see it that way. There's nothing wrong with being detailed, but don't ---- don't ---- write out every detail. Otherwise readers

will be annoyed to death.

They follow you to a scene. They see something that the protagonist sees, or something that the protagonist doesn't. It doesn't matter. It is important that they see the actions of the protagonist, the reactions to the scenes, the decisions made. Alternatively, you may add some details as foreshadowing or leads. In addition, the atmosphere of the scene will also give them some impressions and feelings.

In addition to these three, the rest of the details should be discarded as much as possible.

Here's an example. Our protagonist walks up the hill. The mountains are undulating, the grass is green, the breeze is blowing, the sun is shining, the stream is flowing, and the shepherds are coming

Singing, women playing, wild deer galloping, white clouds drifting, goshawks flying high, flowers full of nose......

How many words do it take to write it all? I don't know. It doesn't matter. The important thing is, will the reader read it? If they want to see a picture of a landscape, they can go to a photographer, why bother with a writer to write a long paragraph and then try to find out what the landscape looks like between the lines.

The protagonist walks up the hill and there are so many things in front of him. Can he see it? Even if he sees it, he

Did he really pay attention? Even if he did, did those things arouse any emotion in his heart?

If you can't combine with and interact with the characters, the details become meaningless. Since it's not about the characters, who cares

It?

Therefore, the first key to detail description is the trade-off.

A pauper woman walks up a hill. She saw the wild deer galloping and smelled the flowers. She sighed how hard her life was and when she would be able to get out of it...... It would be nice to have the opportunity to marry a nobleman.

What about the other landscapes? She didn't see it, or she didn't pay attention to it.

A noble woman walks up a hill. She saw green grass and a small stream flowing. She remembered that there was a young man with whom she had kissed on the grass, and his fiery body was like the sun at the moment. Now she is married to a nobleman, and although she has a privileged life, she can no longer find the innocence, simplicity, and freedom of the past.

What about the other landscapes? She didn't see it, or she didn't pay attention to it.

Now our little knight, Leon Kirasad, is walking up the hill. His gaze swept over the landscape, looking straight into the distance. He saw the mountains

undulating, silently standing at the end of the horizon. There is a war going on on at the front, and he is not old enough to go to war. He sighed,

He looked up at the blue sky and white clouds, and the goshawk was flying high. When will he be able to make a career and gain honor? Like a goshawk in the sky, majesticly

Looking down on the earth, he is admired by all......

What about the other landscapes? He didn't see it, or he didn't pay attention to it.

That's enough. That's telling.

The details of the scene that appear in the novel must be related to the characters. This kind of relationship is either due to the character's personality, occupation, thoughts at the moment, etc., or because a certain scene detail arouses a certain thought and emotion in the character's heart. If this is not possible, it should be discarded.

Let's try to write another paragraph.

He walked up the hill and lay down lazily. The fatigue of last night's battle still hadn't subsided, and his mana hadn't recovered yet. He looked at his sleeping companions at the foot of the hill and knew that they would probably have to rest here for a day.

He spread his hands flat, arranged them in a large zigzag, and closed his eyes to recuperate. Suddenly, his eyebrows twitched slightly. The animal tamer's instinct tells him what happened. He didn't open his eyes, just raised his right hand slightly and drew a circle, whispering a single word. Then, a cool, slippery object ran down his fingers and wrapped around his wrist. He folded his arms and held them up in front of him to look at it.

"Little thing, you must not have eaten today, have you?" he whispered. The white-flowered snake raised its head, swallowed its red tongue from time to time, and stopped obediently

At his fingertips.

"That's good. He said. His gaze swept to the side, and he suddenly shuddered. Just a few feet to the right, a large flower peeked out of the flowers.

It swayed in the breeze and stood proudly among dozens of wildflowers, like a noble queen. It has seven exaggerated blue-purple petals, and the heart of the flower is a bewitching blood red, like the lips of a beautiful woman, spitting out a fragrant tongue to lure him over.

There was a strange grunt in the trainer's throat. He stared at the flower, his face changed instantly, and a strange light shot out of his eyes,

It seems to be tender, but it is mixed with hatred. Suddenly, he rolled over and got up, grabbed the flower, and clenched his fists almost in frenzy.

Pinch and knead. The poor flower immediately turned like mud, and dark red juice ran down between his fingers.

Don't be obsessed with flowers. I don't want to see anything about her!

The beast tamer suddenly roared and threw out the white snake. He stumbled down the hill when he met the archer's confused eyes.

What's wrong with you?"

"Let the snake bite. The trainer said annoyedly.

"Didn't you say that animals listen to you?" said the thief scoffingly, "the tooth marks on your hands can't be the marks of intimacy, right?"

The beast tamer ignored it, just shook off the medicine box and quickly rummaged through it, his face was pale, and he didn't say a word.

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In this scene, I left out most of the details and only wrote about snakes and flowers. The animal trainer didn't notice the other scenery because he didn't care. If he doesn't care, the reader won't care about ---- things that don't make sense to the protagonist, what's the use of writing it?

The details are sometimes like water, and sometimes they need to be like gold.

Bagpipes (358099028) 22:14:18

Don't get into the bad habit of writing scenes

Bagpipes (358099028) 22:15:25

I once met such a strange author, his first chapter talks about the protagonist studying in a private school, and uses about 1800 words to write the scene, shrinking from the streets of the outer city, and the camera of each street, courtyard wall, gatehouse, all described....

Eternal Fire (1842589053) 22:15:58

There is nothing wrong with writing landscapes, but one should be concise, and the other should be focused.

Bagpipes (358099028) 2013-5-911:31:29

Different types of novels are actually satisfying the YY needs of readers, satisfying a certain dream of their novels, and thinking more about which part of the people you want to show them, whether they will like it is the first thing to consider, this is a war, an ambush set up for a certain aspect of the reader

Instead of just pulling an inspiration out of my head and thinking this thing is good, I must write about it

Commercial online articles must use business concepts to create their own products, online novels are not engaged in literature, nor are they expressing emotions, looking for resonance, this is a commodity, just like a humorous joke encyclopedia, to pass the time for readers, to create happy or sad emotions to vent

Do you understand?

Just now, I told my daughter-in-law about online writing and sent it to everyone to see

Dawn (812321977) 2013-5-911:32:57

reasonable

The Origin of Sin (444567949) 2013-5-911:33:18

Your daughter-in-law was also dragged into the pit by you?

415098637(415098637)2013－5－911:35:56

Hello everyone, newcomer, please advise

Bagpipes (358099028) 2013-5-911:36:02

Eun University has just graduated and is in a period of confusion about work

Don't be discouraged, the gods are all like this, although they all want to write what they like, but they are still relying on the market and business, I don't believe that Sanshao can't write better things

I've seen a paragraph where Sanshao and his friends fart in the group, and the writing and wording are very good

But his writing is white and naïve

People write like this on purpose, in order to make money and to write the story

When literary psychology collides with commercial online literature, it is not a choice between two but a balance

How to wrap up your artistic style and sell it by commercial means

That's the way to go

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101 spit it out:

Bagpipe is currently the buyout emperor, and he has a lot of experience in writing theory, thinking that many things in the world are common to novels, such as the skills of the writer, such as the perception of reality, and so on.

Listening to him pick up the principles of writing, I have a feeling of looking at the problem from another angle and suddenly realizing it.

Very good!