Outside, when a group of media people were struggling to guess which sacred figure the wind was blowing, in the office building of the artillery regiment camp, there was always a light that was on from morning to night, and even at the specified time when ordinary soldiers turned off the lights and went to bed. Pen % fun % Pavilion www.biquge.info

Lin Rong sat at the bottom of the long table of the conference, next to her was Zhang Zhen with glasses, and in the middle of the table to the right, there were five battalion commanders including regiment commander Mo Jianxiong and Ren Qing.

At the long table of this meeting, I don't know who took a blank piece of paper and folded it on the table, and it read, "Soldier Assault Plot Discussion Meeting".

She deliberately exposed the omission of not being familiar with the basic knowledge of military divisions, and asked this group of old comrades to check and revise.

Lin Rong's heart was the same as Spiegel, what kind of changes had she made, she had thought about it before she came into the army, if they didn't find out, she would also find a way to knock on the side and let them revise it.

But the current situation simply subverts all her previous imagination!

Shouldn't we let the group of cute little girls from the art troupe, or the tender little fresh meat, come and revise the manuscript with her? Obviously, as long as Zhang Zhen, a veteran soldier, is in charge, why are the leaders sitting straight now, as if they were holding a military strategy meeting?

Isn't it just a matter of changing the draft?

Could it be that the troops are so strict, and the chiefs still have to sit on this matter?

"Xiao Lin, do you think this place can be modified?" Zhang Zhen flipped through the manuscript on the table, pushed down his glasses and said, "This paragraph, when it comes to the Korean battlefield, almost all the deaths of the Seventh Steel Company were canceled, and no one will sing the hand-copied lyrics after that, so they all recited it in a row, which is a bit exaggerated, isn't it? Didn't I say it earlier, did three people come back alive? We still have to be realistic, not too exaggerated." ”

Lin Rong immediately came back to her senses, she typed the whole book out, and as soon as Zhang Zhen said it, she remembered the detailed plot of this part.

But this is not where she faked a shot, it was completely original plot.

"This ......," she said, struggling to organize the language.

Just as he was about to think about rebuttal, Mo Jianxiong snapped his fingers on the table, "This plot can't be deleted, if you want to keep it, it's just to be written! It writes the tragedy of the wind and the water is cold, and the strong man will never return! If you have one more, you will be fake, and if you have one less word, you will not be magnificent!"

The five battalion commanders next to him, like a string of sugar gourds, nodded neatly, and the rhythm was the same, "You can't delete it, you can't delete it." ”

Zhang Zhen responded, and immediately lowered his head to look at the next marked place.

Lin Rong also breathed a sigh of relief, respecting the original work, it was what she wanted to uphold, and if there were no special circumstances, she didn't want to delete it at will.

After a while, Zhang Zhen raised his head again, "...... here"

But his voice was soon covered by Ren Qing's loud voice laughing.

Ren Qing didn't know where he looked, so he laughed and slapped the table, "Female doll, why didn't I notice that this book was written by a person like you who has not experienced military training...... Hahaha, the female doll is underestimating our soldiers! If my soldiers are to be seen within 10 meters, I will punish them to carry the weight for me for 10 kilometers and run away! Remove a zero, it is ten meters without a car, and five meters without a person!"

Lin Rong's swollen bun face immediately squeezed out a layer of skin folds, and he also stretched out a thumbs up, "It's amazing our artillery company, it's amazing my chief!"

Ren Qing immediately burst into laughter, his face swept away the pain from before, and he was praised by this little girl, who was extremely proud, and very proud, "Tomorrow, you will go to our battalion with me, and you can challenge the soldiers at will! I will let them show you in person! The chief said, this is a work to be shown to the people of the whole country in the future, but you can't let the masses say that my old Ren's revision in this place is bragging, you, the little author, will go with me tomorrow to see the style of our artillery with your own eyes, and be a good witness!"

Lin Rong didn't say anything, Zhang Zhen was stunned, "It's important to revise the manuscript first." ”

"Lao Zhen, you're worried again, the manuscript must not only be repaired, but also repaired well!" Mo Jianxiong waved his hand, "But some of the revisions involved in this are just like what Lao Ren said, not only can we say that we want to change, but we must make the author of this work feel that it should indeed be changed." Some of the high benchmarks of our troops are not to be put on display, they have always been upheld and implemented, and we must let Xiaolin confirm it well, Comrade Xiaolin approves it, and we will change this place again, we can't be authoritarian!"

Lin Rong's bun face squeezed again, thinking that she didn't need it at all.

Breaking her fingers, the whole text of the small pits she deliberately left behind, about thirty places...... I want her to see each one with her own eyes......

Chief, please dictate to her directly!

"Lao Zhen, you continue to continue, I won't intervene, haha!" Ren Qing looked satisfied.

Zhang Zhen rubbed his temples, took off his glasses and put them on the table, and then pushed the manuscript in his hand to Lin Rong a little, "Here, the squad leader did not give the excellent Wu Liuyi advanced, but gave the advanced to Xu Sanduo, although it promoted the storyline. However, Xiaolin, the plot here does not conform to the style of the army's clear rewards and punishments, and it needs to be changed. ”

Lin Rong touched her nose again, this is not where she moved.

But...... Reasonable.

In fact, she was also very hesitant when she was typing the manuscript for this plot.

But just as she was about to say her considerations, Ren Qing slapped the table again.

But Ren Qing slapped the table and glared, "Nonsense, Lao Zhen, you are talking nonsense again! Why did Xiao Lin write like this? You haven't read the essence at all!"

These words made Zhang Zhen angry, and he immediately turned to Mo Jianxiong, "Chief, you are commenting, can you write about this plot that goes against the principles of the army? Our artillery company, has it been advanced in the past few years?"

Mo Jianxiong coughed, "Naturally...... Yes and no. ”

Zhang Zhen's face was suddenly relieved, and he snorted at Ren Qing.

"But...... This work of art can't be completely realistic. Mo Jianxiong's words immediately made Zhang Zhen's face darken.

Lin Rong almost burst out laughing, just now he said that he wanted to write according to the actual situation, and he wanted her to go to the training ground to witness it in person, but now he said that art is not realistic, and the head of Mo Jianxiong is also absolutely amazing.

"I also think this plot is quite good. Sitting next to Ren Qing, the battalion commander with a national character face who has rarely spoken also interjected, "The theme here is closely around our troops, the principle of not abandoning and not giving up on comrades-in-arms, even if it is the stupidest and stupidest recruit, we must train him well and bring out the appearance of a soldier!

"Yes, yes," the tall and thin battalion commander who sat at the bottom of the battalion also echoed, "How could this be deleted! Without such a thing, how could Xu Sanduo finally become really advanced? It was all the painstaking training of the squad leader, and Wu Liuyi's confrontation inspired him! This kind of training method is also of great reference significance in our troops. ”

Mo Jianxiong finally concluded, "Stay!"

Zhang Zhen frowned deeply.

Lin Rong finally came back to her senses, she was a little stupid just after being slapped by several tables in a row.

Now, she finally figured out why the chiefs were here to participate in the workshop.

It turned out that this was because Zhang Zhen was afraid that Zhang Zhen would change the plot they liked!

It's just laughing and crying!