246 Work Discussion Session 02 (2nd Update)

Zhang Zhen had a headache, looked at the regiment commander and battalion commander sitting at a table, and felt that his work had been greatly challenged, and he couldn't go on. Pen, fun, pavilion www. biquge。 info

"Hey, Mo Tuan, Ren Ying, I understand what you mean. But we are now proofreading the first draft, and then revising it into a film and television script, a drama script. The two-hour drama is long, and the serial drama is thirty episodes long, which must be cut. Zhang Zhen also wanted to slap the table, but there was no progress at all in the morning.

Lin Rong sighed, she had heard before that "Soldier Assault" was the first version in the form of a drama, but she really hadn't seen it.

"In the case of dramas, you have to cut some subplots and reduce some characters. She approvingly agreed.

But immediately there was a crackling bang on the table in the opposite circle.

"No!" Ren Qing was the first to object.

The other 23rd battalion commander who was sitting at the bottom of the camp also shook his head, "It's not easy to delete it, right? Isn't it okay to make a 50-episode TV series and make a 10-hour drama?"

Lin Rong's eyes widened again, her edema had improved a little today, and the leaders who stared out of her eyes could see it at a glance.

Ren Qing immediately pointed at her, "Delete, where do you say you can delete it, are you willing to delete it?" Wu Liuyi, Chengcai, that old squad leader, are you willing to delete it......! I don't agree!"

Lin Rong was speechless when asked, and he really admired the original author in his heart, this masterpiece was impeccable in the hearts of a group of veterans.

Through the stacking of these words, the author perfectly outlines the soldiers of this unit. Those characters who leap on the page, those recruits and veterans who are different, even if they have different personalities and sighs at the end, they all have a burning military soul that cannot be easily erased!

As long as this military spirit is there, this group of old leaders will not agree to delete any character, or even any detail that moves them and excites them.

If you want to delete it, it really seems like you're going to fight with them!

Zhang Zhen also realized that if he continued like this, he would really not be able to end the revision work.

He rubbed his eyebrows, and had no choice but to back down, "Then let's correct the details of the mistakes and omissions first, and then talk about the deletion of the plot." ”

Mo Jianxiong's face agreed, and the battalion commanders all looked like they should have been like this a long time ago.

Zhang Zhen was so angry that he felt that he couldn't talk to this group of old stubborns who didn't know what art was.

"Here, Comrade Xiaolin, in order to thank the squad leader, Xu Sanduo brought two eggs on his body during the confrontation exercise, and was finally discovered by infrared, this place is a bit wrong, and it ...... in the actual exercise" Zhang Zhen frowned.

Before he finished speaking, a group of battalion commanders on the opposite side stretched their necks again.

"Oh, Lao Zhen, you haven't participated in the drill, it's not an exaggeration!

"Yes, yes, yes, it's true! The eggs are hot......"

"There's no stupid guy to try it this year, and it's a demerit ......"

"Hahaha, eggs, I like this paragraph! Although it's an exaggeration, I've been in the car all the way, how can it be higher than body temperature? However, I think this section is a bit of an unexpected surprise, it's pretty good!"

"Speaking of drills, I remembered that when I first joined the team, it was really cool to win the first place, and it was a shame for the whole team to lose. It's very realistic!"

"Isn't it, Lao Ren, I heard that your class was the most powerful back then!"

"Hahahaha...... Win and win!"

Zhang Zhen: "......"

Lin Rong: "......"

I really can't go on!

The two literati looked at each other and smiled bitterly.

Or the old man is right, it's really a show to meet a soldier, and it can't be explained.

After several discussions, Zhang Zhen, who was bruised all over his body, finally gave up, and only corrected some obvious mistakes and omissions later.

Because of Lin Rong's deliberate mistakes on some troop weapons at that time, a group of old battalion commanders couldn't laugh, and when Zhang Zhen said that he would be here today, they couldn't wait to apply to Mo Jianxiong and take Lin Rong to their battalion for on-the-spot observation.

"Let's go, let's go. Mo Jianxiong is obviously in a good mood.

After today's discussion, judging from the performance of the battalion commanders, this work is deeply loved by them, and he feels relieved to look like a calf protector.

When the work is really filmed, let those old chiefs in Beijing see it, and it will definitely make them feel that this is a masterpiece.

At this moment, he looked at Lin Rong's eyes, and he was satisfied. If you want to be a rookie now, you have to chase this little girl for everything.

looks likeable, has a silly and resolute personality, knows how to endure hardships and stands hard work, but is so talented.

It is not an exaggeration to say that it is one in a million!

"We have a few young cadres who are very good. Lao Ren Lao Li, Xiao Lin has been in the army these days, you can take her around and get to know our outstanding young cadres!" Mo Jianxiong walked on the playground in the camp with his hands behind his back, and looked back at Lin Rong, who was also walking energetically, and felt that he couldn't say what he liked.

Fertilizer and water don't flow into outsiders' fields!

"Xiaolin, you have a good exchange with our excellent soldiers, maybe there will be a sequel to "Soldier Assault" soon!"

The battalion commanders' eyes all lit up, looking at Lin Rongna as if they were looking at those extremely meaningful guns that had been discontinued around the world, "Yes, yes, Comrade Xiaolin, you come to our battalion one by one, and we will let the company commander, squad leader, and advanced soldiers talk with you!

Mo Jianxiong coughed, feeling that his original intention was distorted by these people. But soon his face was silent and smiled, anyway, the same way, as long as you chat more, there is always a chance for the big head soldiers below.

If one can't do it, can't a hundred people take down a little girl!

"Okay! That's it, starting tomorrow, Xiaolin, you follow Lao Ren first, and the day after tomorrow you will go to Lao Li, and then Lao Qin...... Let them talk one-on-one, talk well, and don't interfere with our group of old things. Mo Jianxiong waved his hand and pointed to the country, "This inspiration always comes out of nowhere, I want to give the young man a chance to find a feeling ......"

Lin Rong smashed it, smashed it, how did he think that the more he heard this, the more strange he felt?

Whatever, though!

The point is that what Mo Tuan is saying now is exactly the same as the thoughts that flashed in her heart before!

"Chief, you are really wise!" Lin Rong's Dalmatian-like face showed a very dog-legged smile.

Mo Jianxiong looked at her with the kind gaze of an elder, and after good things came in pairs, this little girl would definitely think that he was more wise.

Lin Rong smashed his mouth, and he couldn't wait to go up and hug the other party's thigh, "Your suggestion made Xiao Linzi think of another brilliant idea!"

Several battalion commanders listened to the footsteps and looked at her excitedly!

Mo Jianxiong's footsteps were also stunned, "So fast...... There's a sequel?"

Zhang Zhen almost tripped over himself, and his body shook.

Lin Rong: "......"