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Sister Yu Qingmei occasionally comes to ask for advice, and Li Mo will answer, but the enthusiasm is obviously not as good as before, in fact, Li Mo has always held an attitude of resignation, otherwise wouldn't it be too easy to capture a Lori's heart? Although that is a bit shameless.

Li Mo put two blank pieces of manuscript paper on the table, which were not manuscript paper, but large white paper that he had cut into small sheets.

A piece of manuscript paper is full of English letters.

For the sake of speed, I don't want to be tidy.

After writing it, I revised it over and over again, and finally it became a complete ghost drawing. But Li Mo can know it himself.

What Li Mo did was copying, not exactly copying, and the process of copying was equivalent to rewriting, and large-scale revisions were made in many places. Continue to leave blank space between each line so that you can make another change.

However, the second draft will not be as large as the first draft, and the third draft will be finalized.

The progress was also nearly half a year slower than he expected, but it was still too late.

While he was writing, Director Zhang walked to Li's house with a few people. Li Mo put away the manuscript paper, stood up to make tea for them, and Director Zhang said: "They are teachers from the county admissions office. ”

Li Mo was stunned for a moment, he only filled in one volunteer, that is the city No. 1 Middle School, how did someone come from the county?

"Classmate Li Mo, you wrote an essay during the exam. One said.

"Teacher, do you mean that "Guardian"?"

The results of the primary examination have not come down yet, and the teachers of the county admissions office already know the results, of course, what they care about is which high scores, ordinary scores, they will not look at them. Then looking at the results, I was a little unconvinced, because the first place was 266.5 points.

Later, there will be shocking high scores in the small examination in Baoling County from time to time, but now it is only 81 years, look at the admission score line of the college entrance examination, it is rare to have more than 250 points in the small examination.

What made them even more depressed was that the volunteer they filled in was from the city, and it was just this one volunteer.

How is it possible to get this high score, not to mention anything else, you can easily deduct 3.5 points for an essay, don't think that the deduction is too much, that is, this score will be deducted, and the essay is still a high-scoring essay.

Some students wrote their essays so miserably that they couldn't even read the teachers who corrected the papers, so they just rewarded a few points. Several teachers found Li Mo's test papers, but in fact, they were still volunteers, if they filled in the county, there would be no such thing at all.

Looking at the language first, Li Mo deducted three points in the language, naturally 0.5 points, and the mathematics is still a full score. However, they still look at the Chinese test paper with suspicion, and do not think that a score of 117 in the Chinese test is often more difficult than a full score in the mathematics test.

I saw the problem right away, and the essay was a perfect score.

Full score essay?

Is it possible?

Ask the writer to come and write the essay, and you will be deducted half a point.

The essay test question is my hometown, and the title on Li Mo's test paper is "Guardian", which is not a big problem, as long as the theme is written in my hometown.

A few people looked around the test paper.

The number of words in composition is not much, and it is impossible for students to write how many words they are required to write in a small test.

But this essay is not short:

In the "Historical Records", it is recorded that Confucius was born and was the first to go to the top of the polder, because of his name Qiuyun. The polder top, meaning Confucius's forehead is high around the middle depression. Wei, and can be dismantled into soil, the same sound as soil silt. In ancient times, people filled in the embankment and enclosed the fields in the lake, which happened to be high and low in the middle, so they called this kind of water conservancy project Wei.

My hometown is in a large polder, which resembles willow leaves, so it is called willow leaf polder. There is a river, and the river is called the Cao River.

During the Three Kingdoms, Wei and Wu held on to each other for decades, so they were famous and often became the talk of the people in their hometown, but I also knew another history, another history related to the rise of a dynasty.

Zhu Yuanzhang hoarded troops and Yang, there was no food in the city, and he and the generals conspired to cross the river, but they had no boat. It just so happened that Zhao Pusheng and Yu Tonghai had 20,000 people and 1,000 boats, according to Chaohu Lake. Because they had a gap with Zuo Junbi in Luzhou, they were afraid of being attacked by Zuo, so they sent an envoy to ask for Zhu Yuanzhang. Zhu Yuanzhang high-fived Xu Da happily and said: "Fang is planning to cross the river, and the Chaohu water army is attached, and I will help me." ”

However, when the fleet arrived at Liuyewei, Zhao Pusheng heard that the river to Heyang was shallow and dry, and he was afraid that he would lose his ground. At this critical time, heavy rain fell from the sky and the valley overflowed, Zhu Yuanzhang immediately sent someone to take Yu Zhou to Heyang, and the vigorous battle of Quarry Rock also kicked off......

There is a town in Liuyewei, the name is Cao Town, the southeast is high and the northwest is low, so the southeast is called the East Mountain. It is rumored that there was a bell tower on the east mountain, which was full of bells, and when the wind blew, the crisp bell could be transmitted by the wind for more than ten miles. Now that the tower is gone, it has been melancholy for a long time. However, there is also a place of interest, that is, the Xiangshi Street under the head of the East Mountain, people walk on it, the stone slab will make a good sound, so in ancient times, the literati who had good things came out with a couplet: Xiangshi Street Street Ringing Stone Stone Stone Stone Stone Ringing. I've heard that someone has a couplet, but I don't know about it.

I walked out of Ringstone Street and arrived at the docks.

There are some ferries on the side of the wharf, which are full of people who come to buy things on the other side, going or coming, talking and laughing from time to time, and the laughter seems to make the clear river ripple with joy.

I looked at the river and thought that Zhao Pusheng went to Chen Youliang along this river back then, and it seemed that he later gave Zhu Yuanzhang a headache. If he hadn't made this decision at that time, would the Ming Dynasty have had another founding general with his ability? But if he had become a general of the Ming Dynasty, what would have happened to him later? He Shui didn't tell me the answer.

For thousands of years, no matter the rise of the dynasty, no matter the rise and fall of the river, it has been silently guarding the countless creatures in the polder, watching them grow old day by day, watching babies born with a cry......

Several teachers were dumbfounded.

And they don't seem to have seen this kind of style.

In fact, it was an essay written by Li Mo imitating Yu Shiyu.

Some people call it cultural prose, and Li Mo in his previous life called it a broken essay.

The characteristic is that it focuses on history, nature, and humanistic atmosphere, and has a unique literati style, and Li Mo's article is far from being as good as this, but Li Mo is also not far behind, first, the time is too short, and second, it is limited to space, or it is written in detail, where to write? Is it written to the reverse side of the volume? Of course, the level is indeed much worse than others.

The feelings are delicate and introverted and melancholy, which is different from other essays, such as the last sentence of "In Praise of the Poplar": Let those who look down on the people, despise the people, and stubbornly regress people praise the aristocratic Nanmu (which is also straight and beautiful), and despise this very common and easy-to-grow poplar, but I want to praise the poplar tree loudly!

Another example is "Falling Peanuts", its language is simple enough, but there is also a sentence in the middle. Daddy then said, "So be like peanuts, because it's useful, not great, pretty things." I said, "Then a man should be a useful person, not a great and decent person." Daddy said, "This is my hope for you." ”

Although there is some truth, it always makes people feel more or less numb, but such language is rare in Yu Qiuyu's prose. The delicacy in Li Mo's composition is far from good, but there is a little bit of turbidity.

The other is broken, although the general prose is scattered, but the form is scattered but the spirit is not scattered, and the central idea is clear.

Yu Qiuyu's article seems to be written wherever he thinks.

Of course, it's not really about where to write, it also has a central idea and main line, but it's very vague.

The same is true of Li Mo's composition, which seems to be very broken, first writing about Wei, then writing about the river, and then it came to Zhu Yuanzhang. then wrote about the monuments, and then wrote about the people who crossed the river, and then it was on Zhao Pusheng, and only the last sentence was written about the guard, the polder.

If you have to say that the central idea is clear, this essay is too unqualified. But is that really the case?

The most important thing is that Li Mo has several allusions, but he is not forced to use them, and the allusions are also the body of the composition!

Maybe it was really broken, but when several teachers read the last sentence, they all gasped and got goosebumps all over their bodies.

"Isn't that a bit off-topic?" one teacher asked.

"I didn't run, he wasn't talking about the polder, but what was he talking about?"

It is the mystery of this little composition, which is linked to the previous article, this guardian can be interpreted in a variety of ways, it can be interpreted as the spirit of the ancestors, it can refer to the resilience of the entire race, it can also refer to other ...... And the whole composition immediately came alive and had a spirit.

Several teachers didn't read too much, after all, it was written by a child.

"No, elementary school student, how do you know so much?" said another teacher, unconvinced, and then looked for information.

Can that be wrong?

This is a piece of information that Li Mo had checked when he wrote an online article in his previous life, and he went to his hometown, not only did he check it, but he also remembered it very clearly.

A few teachers still looked at this essay strangely, it was still not right, with the faint sense of vicissitudes and turbidity of this article, it would not have been written by a child. Don't talk about the small test, even if it is placed in the college entrance examination, this essay will also give high scores.