A few people came to Cao Town, and it was not completely unbelieving, in case they met a genius. Pen ~ fun ~ pavilion www.biquge.info

Came to the commune first, and after listening to it, several leaders of the commune laughed together, something magical happened to Li Mo, it was too normal. They picked a few things and talked about them briefly.

Of course, there are still some doubts.

Officer Zhang took them to Li's house.

"That's the composition, you used a few allusions in it, where did you know it?"

"The couplets of the Bell Tower and the Ringing Stone Street are from the old man, and the polder of Confucius is what I saw when I read the "Historical Records". ”

"You read the Chronicles?"

Li Mo hesitated slightly, if it is a general book, it is better to explain a little, these historical books, such as "Historical Records", "Zizhi Tongjian", and "Continuation of Capital Governance Tongjian" are really not easy to explain, because all his relatives and friends, including the teacher's family, will not have these historical books, at most there may be a "Historical Records", but is there a "Renewal of Capital and Governance Tongjian"?

He was stunned for a moment and said: "I have relatives in Jiucheng, I have been to Jiucheng with my grandmother, they are all working, I am bored, so I go to Jiucheng Library all day to read books and read some history books." Some places really don't understand very well, and most of them have been read over and over, including "Historical Records". But there is a polder, and my home is in the polder area, so I paid attention to it, and only then did I realize that Confucius's forehead angle was too strange, so I wrote it down. The same is true for Zhao Pusheng and Yu Tonghai, I only saw it when I watched "Renewal of Capital and Governance Tongjian". That set of history books was trivial, and it was even more of a headache to watch, but it touched my hometown, so I also paid attention to it and wrote it down. ”

In this way, it makes sense.

"Li Mo, we have also checked this history book, which records more than 10,000 people and 10,000 ships. Why did you change it to 20,000 people and 1,000 ships?"

The original text is like this: Shihe Prefecture southwest people's village, the second level, and the lack of food in the city, Yuanzhang and the generals seek to cross the river, there is no boat. There are Zhao Pusheng and Yu Tonghai, with more than 10,000 people, 10,000 boats, according to Chaohu Lake, Jieshui Village, and Luzhou Zuo Junbi has a gap, afraid of being attacked......

Li Mo replied calmly: "Teachers, you should know the difference between the two books of capital governance, although the "Renewal of Capital Governance Tongjian" records a lot of historical facts, but compared with the former, its narrative is not clear, and the language is scattered. It stands to reason that the later the ancient texts, the easier they are to understand and the easier they are to read. However, because of the chaotic language, although it was written by the Qing Dynasty, it is not as easy for people to understand as the "Historical Records", and there are many errors in it. ”

This background is that Zhu Yuanzhang has laid a foundation in Hezhou.

When it comes to Zhu Yuanzhang, you will think that he killed heroes and ministers, but he didn't know that he killed tens of thousands of officials, and he often neglected Zhu Yuanzhang's love for the people. Killing heroes is indeed for his children and grandchildren, even Li Shimin is worried that his son will not be able to suppress Li Ji, and said, son, I will put Li Ji in the field, if he has complaints, I will kill him, and if there is no complaint, he will immediately raise him, and he will thank you and be loyal to you.

When it comes to the throne, it's really hard to tell.

But killing officials, mainly for anti-corruption, so there was a strange thing in the Ming Dynasty, as long as the official embezzled five taels of silver, immediately kill the skin, make a Dengwen drum and put it in front of the county government, so that the people beat the drum and sound their grievances.

Zhu Yuanzhang did too violently, and the results were not good, the officials' salaries were small, and they were highly centralized, and the officials had a lot of power in their hands, so how could they not be greedy? The result was that the more they killed, the more corrupt officials there were.

Of course, Zhu Yuanzhang can't be blamed, after all, he has the limitations of the times, and he has done a good job. Since ancient times, from the south to the north, he is the only one who has unified the country, and he is the only one who has really driven out the Tartars. Yang Jian can't do it either, he was born in the womb, and he was born from the Xianbei regime with the "Dao Heart Demon Cultivation Dafa". Sun and Jiang were even more inadequate, lacking military talent, and unable to solve the factional problem, and even before the country was stabilized, serious corruption appeared inside.

Hezhou is the land of fish and rice, but at that time Zhu Yuanzhang had a lot of soldiers in his hands, with his character, and he didn't want to endanger the people, for the supply of the three armies, he had to turn his eyes to Jiangnan, and if he wanted to cross the river, a boat would be stumped.

Zuo Junbi, Zhao Pusheng, and Li Pusheng were originally disciples of Maitreya Sect leader Peng Yingyu, and Zhao and Li were still senior brothers. After Monk Peng was killed, Zuo Junbi was the strongest in Luzhou, Zhao and Li, and some other heroes such as Liao Yongan, Liao Yongzhong brothers, Yu Tingyu, Yu Tonghai father and son, Zhao Bozhong, Zhao Yong, Ye Sheng, Sang Shijie, Hua Gao, with Chaohu Lake as the center, live in the area from Chaohu Lake to Yuxikou, including Li Mo's hometown Cao Zhen.

Zuo Junbi sent an envoy to recruit these people, of course, everyone was not happy. Zuo Junbi then sent troops to attack, Liao Yongan met several times, but they were all defeated, and even the Chaohu base camp was occupied by Zuo Junbi.

In this case, everyone was forced to plan to attach themselves to Zhu Yuanzhang.

First, Liao Yongan sent Han Cheng to meet Zhu Yuanzhang, and then Yu Tingyu sent his son Yu Tonghai to meet Zhu Yuanzhang.

Indeed, Zhu Yuanzhang did well in Hezhou at that time, and his reputation was good, at least better than being forced to surrender to Zuo Junbi.

Everyone took the boat and people to Zhu Yuanzhang, and when they arrived at the back river of the Cao River, that is, the north of Li Mo's house, not far away, only five or six miles away, they encountered a problem. Not to go down the Yangtze River, but to Hezhou, the river is not big.

The Yuan soldiers used large building boats to hold the Machang River and other ferries, and only one small river reached Heyang, but it dried up...... It may also be shallow on its own. At this time, it was very dangerous, I was afraid that the Yuan army would detect the attack, and I was even more afraid that Zuo Junbi would chase after him.

Originally, Zhao Pusheng also looked down on Zhu Yuanzhang a little, after all, Zhu Yuanzhang was only a medium force at that time, far inferior to Chen Youliang, Zhang Xiancheng and others, and the situation was not very good, so he took his soldiers and horses, and went to Chen Youliang under Cao HN. Who knew that as soon as he walked in front, it rained heavily behind, and Zhu Yuanzhang immediately sent an envoy to take this group of people to Hezhou.

However, the "Renewal of Capital and Governance Tongjian" is extremely messy, and there are often many incidents, and everyone can't read it clearly, and there are more mistakes.

For example, in the original text, more than 10,000 people, 10,000 ships, is it one boat per person? Is it the small basin of Li Mo's family?

These are all boats operating in big rivers and big lakes, and they are also the warships that Zhu Yuanzhang used to cross the river, how can they be small?

Besides, what is this group of people doing, the good saying is a group of rebels who rebelled against the Yuan Dynasty, and the bad saying is that it is a group of water bandits, how can they raise 10,000 warships?

When Li Mo saw this in his previous life, he researched it. In the composition, of course, you can't cite the wrong data in the original text.

"This is a statement that is closer to real history, but I am an essay for a small exam, time is limited, space is limited, so I have to write hastily, if I give me a little more time, a little more space, add 1,500 words, describe some details, add some rhetoric, that essay can be fuller. I had no choice but to write like that. ”

It's a fact. Indeed, due to the limited space, the original essay was a little crowded...... But there's one key factor, age!

Several teachers smiled wryly and wrote hastily, all written like that...... It's not that you write it like that, it's that you want it to be like that.

"Why did you choose such a difficult way to write?"

"The title is my hometown, so what to write, fields, farmers, land, crops, are all rotten, so I deliberately chose a novel way of writing at that time, combining history and reality, and then there was that "Guardian". ”

"Can you expand on that? ”

Li Mo was helpless, it was true that the essay was too old-fashioned, which would make people suspicious.

Then write it.

He put away the English manuscript paper, took out a blank piece of paper again, and wrote on the white paper while thinking.

When Li Guangping and his wife heard that there were guests at home, they also rushed back from the fields.

Hearing that the teachers in the county were testing their sons, they immediately handed cigarettes and tea to several teachers again. This writing is three hours, so Li Mo misses the computer.

Even if he writes a book, he can write more than a dozen words a minute, but with his hand speed, if he uses a computer to code words, he can code more than 100 words a minute. Of course, it is impossible to write an article with more than 100 words in a minute, and you have to think about it. Even if he was fast, it took him more than three hours to barely write about 2,900 words. If it's cursive, it's written only for yourself, and there will be more. changed to regular script, and I couldn't even get two thousand words. But with this expansion, this article is even more valuable to read.

Do you still doubt it? This was written in front of everyone.

Several teachers looked at this new "composition" after expansion, and breathed in the cold air again.

Don't say that Li Mo is just a child, if you were them, you might not be able to write it.

The consequences of the expansion are different, more delicate and fuller, especially the intertwining of history and reality from time to time, the transformation of time and space, the humanistic atmosphere, and the "sour feeling"...... The sour literati, the sorcerers, so the sour feeling, all made them suspect that what they saw was not true, it should be from the hand of a middle-aged literati wearing a robe and an awe-inspiring style.

Director Zhang looked at their expressions, and just smiled hard in his heart.

It's your turn to be shocked.

A teacher handed Li Guangping a cigarette and said, "Comrade Guangping, we are here today......

He said the intention of their group, in fact, it was very simple, that is, he hoped that Li Mo would immediately change his volunteer and change it to County C.

Genius, I'm going to rob it.

And with some favorable conditions, after Li Mo entered the county middle school, all tuition and miscellaneous fees were waived, and it was guaranteed that the teachers in the county would focus on training Li Mo.

Li Mo is also a little confused, is there a talk of free tuition now?

This is just a small test, in my previous life, I heard that various colleges and universities in the college entrance examination are robbing people, but have you started to grab students in the small exam?