Ye Suer didn't look like a newcomer at all. Pen × fun × Pavilion www. ｂｉｑｕｇｅ。 ｉｎｆｏ

Kasumigaoka Shiyu thinks so, not to mention the outline of this first novel, whether it is good or bad, on the main line of the outline, the branch line, the plot points of the vicarious Qihe, the setting and arrangement of the conflict, the world view of the background setting, and the shaping of the characters, which are not something that a newcomer can do.

As far as these outlines are concerned, Ye Suer said that she had never written a light novel, or even read it, and Kasumigaoka Shiyu didn't believe it.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu glanced at Ye Su'er, wanted to speak and stopped, but finally didn't speak, lowered his head and continued to read the second story.

The first story,The quality is very good.,It's also very novel.,This kind of novel has never appeared in the light novel market at present.,Of course,Among the novels that were rejected by the editor.,Whether there is such a thing.,Kasumigaoka Shiyu doesn't know.。

But to be honest, although the quality is good, Shiyu Kasumigaoka doesn't like such novels.

The ingenuity of this novel is too heavy, compared with the characters, the narrative of the theme, it focuses more on the rereading of the plot, the personal growth of the protagonist, and the current royal road novels are somewhat similar, but there are some subtle differences. In short, it doesn't feel like a light novel.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu's evaluation is very accurate, and he can see the key almost at a glance, if Ye Su'er knows Kasumigaoka Shiyu's thoughts, he will definitely be amazed by how powerful Kasumigaoka Shiyu is.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu doesn't know if such a story can be published or if it can be a big hit......

The reason is simple, Kasumigaoka Shiyu has never seen this type of novel.

Shaking his head slightly, Kasumigaoka Shiyu began to look at the second story.

Compared with the previous story, the second story has a lot less conflict, and pays more attention to character building, in addition to various settings, such as the belief system and the pantheon, such as the hybrid mad demon Sadness, such as the protagonist is an unprecedented big demon king.

This is also a good story, and compared to the previous one, Kasumigaoka Shiwa prefers such a story to the first one.

However, Kasumigaoka Shiyu has to admit that both the first story and the second story are quite good, and it doesn't look like it's from a newcomer at all!

So, what about the third theme? What is it?

For a while, Kasumigaoka Shiyu was even a little looking forward to it.

After reading the outline of the second story, Kasumigaoka Shiyu looked at the third story.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu looked very slowly, Ye Su'er's font was very beautiful, her expression was very strong, and it was easy to understand what she was talking about, even so, she still read it very slowly, while reading it, thinking about it over and over again, she seemed very serious.

Ye Su'er didn't urge, and quietly waited for Kasumigaoka Shiyu to finish reading.

At this time, the waiter took two cups of coffee, smiled and said, "Your coffee, please enjoy." ”

"Okay." Ye Su'er nodded and began to enjoy her coffee.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu looked at the outline seriously, and didn't even raise her head, as if she hadn't noticed.

Ye Su'er drank her coffee slowly, seriously looking at Kasumigaoka Shiyu's face.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu's skin is very good, and it is not an exaggeration to describe it as if the skin is creamy, and the pink lips are very thin, and at this time the mouth is pursed, like a slightly closed pink rose, with slightly drooping eyes and slender willow eyebrows, which makes people really unable to find fault.

In addition, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's other figure is also very good, the two soft things on his chest, Ye Su'er has been visually inspected, and his little hands can't hold it at all, which is much more spectacular than himself and Qi Qi. I still remember the moment when Sister Kasumigaoka Shiyu leaned down slightly, the whiteness that appeared, and the ravines that made people want to explore, were simply one of the most beautiful scenery in the world.

- What a stunner!

A stunner who wants people to keep playing with in the palm of his hand.

Ye Su'er commented in her heart, of course, it is absolutely impossible for her to say this kind of thing, if she opens her mouth and flirts with her at will, even if it is her, I am afraid that she will be arrested as a pervert.

After about twenty minutes, Kasumigaoka Shiyu finally finished reading the outlines of the three stories and returned the notebook to Ye Su'er.

"How?" Ye Su'er asked, "Which of these three stories is more suitable for writing and publishing?" ”

"Hmm......" Listening to Ye Su'er's words, Kasumigaoka Shiyu pondered for a moment, obviously thinking about it.

She drank some coffee slowly, and the temperature of the coffee was just right, neither hot nor cold.

After taking a sip of coffee, after a while, Kasumigaoka Shiyu slowly spoke: "The three stories are very good, the first is an urban genre, the second is an otherworldly novel, and the third is a love story - in my personal opinion, it is better for you to write the second one." ”

"Write a second one?" Ye Su'er's eyes lit up, nodded, and said, "That's ......"

To be honest, the choice of three stories, Ye Suer is also more inclined to the second one.

The second Otherworldly Western Fantasy Light Novel, the content will be more interesting to write, and the restrictions will not be too great.

If you write the first one, the urban background will have a lot of restrictions, and it is not a good situation for the development of the novel.

The third love theme is even more restrictive, and Ye Suer is not very good at writing love stories.

So for her, the second of the three stories is the best choice compared to the other two.

"Still, there's a lot to be aware of." Kasumigaoka Shiyu thought about it and began to talk to Ye Su'er about what to pay attention to.

Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu said a lot, Ye Su'er listened carefully and wrote them down one by one.

Soon, Kasumigaoka Shiyu finished speaking, and at the end, she suddenly asked, "Have you ever written light novels before?" ”

"Huh? Haven't you written about it? What's wrong? Ye Su'er was stunned for a moment, shook her head and said.

"I haven't written ......" Kasumigaoka Shiyu frowned slightly, seeing that Ye Su'er's expression didn't look like he was lying, he couldn't help but think, is there really a genius in this world......?

"I think your outline is very well developed, and the novel is very purposeful, not at all like a new author, who doesn't know what he's writing about. So I think you've written novels before...... Otherwise, it shouldn't be like this. Kasumigaoka Shiyu directly said the doubts in his heart.

"Well, when I was in junior high school, I used to write about things on the Internet as a hobby. Over time, I have gained some experience. Ye Su'er thought for a moment and said.

"That's ......" Kasumigaoka Shiyu was relieved when she heard this.

INTERVIEWER In Japan, there is actually such a thing as online articles.

However, Japanese online literature simply refers to novels serialized on the Internet, which are not published or charged, and are completely a hobby situation.

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