Chapter 19: In the Sakura Cafe
The sound of those many discussions was not small, and Ye Su'er's voice was not small. Pen? Interesting? Pavilion wWw. biquge。 info
Kasumigaoka Shiyu, who was packing her schoolbag, naturally noticed it.
Kasumigaoka Shiyu raised his head and suddenly saw Ye Su'er standing at the door.
I saw the good-looking brows of Kasumigaoka Shiyu, and it was slightly in an instant.
Seeing Kasumigaoka Shiyu frowning, Ye Su'er couldn't help but feel a sinking in her heart, it seems that this is not welcome to herself......
Ye Su'er was a little helpless, but it was not okay if she didn't come to Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu, she still didn't know too much about light novels, and these things had to be asked by an insider, and they couldn't be searched on the Internet.
Kasumigaoka Shiyu picked up the schoolbag and walked over directly, and then left the classroom directly.
This is actually ignoring Ye Su'er.
The feeling of ignoring it like this makes Ye Su'er a little uncomfortable, and such a tsundere closed-door soup, as long as it is not shaking, it will basically be uncomfortable.
Ye Su'er naturally couldn't be shaking.
Looking at the back of Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu leaving, Ye Su'er hesitated for a moment, but still chased after him.
The two quickly left the school building and walked around the campus.
Kasumigaoka Shiyu walked in front, and Ye Su'er followed.
After following for a while, the two left the campus together and came to the cherry blossom avenue outside the campus.
Ye Su'er hesitated for a moment, but finally spoke: "Senior sister, are you angry?" ”
"I'm not angry, why should I be angry, it's just that because of your matter, I have some unnecessary rumors and a little headache." Faced with Ye Su'er's question, Senior Sister Shiyu of Xiazhiqiu no longer ignored it after all, and said slowly.
"But that's anger." Ye Su'er said helplessly.
"Not angry!" Kasumigaoka Shiyu said stubbornly.
"Okay...... Not angry. In the face of the somewhat stubborn Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu, Ye Su'er could only compromise and say: "Today's rumors are all misunderstandings, and I can't help it, I don't know, why are there so many rumors around me, so that I can't make friends well, in fact, I also have a headache!" ”
Ye Su'er's tone was rather distressed.
Hearing such words, Kasumigaoka Shiyu suddenly stopped.
Because Ye Su'er was following closely, she accidentally bumped into it directly.
But fortunately, this time it didn't knock down Shiyu Shiyu.
Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu turned around and glanced at Ye Su'er, Ye Su'er who was covering her forehead at this time looked extremely cute, which made Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's heart soften, and her anger disappeared completely, and she asked slowly: "Those rumors are really not from you?" ”
"How could it be that I passed it on? Why would I do such a thing! It's impossible! Ye Su'er hurriedly waved her hand and explained, but her heart was relieved, it turned out that Senior Sister Shiyu of Xiazhiqiu was a little angry, because of this.
"That's it......" Kasumigaoka Shiyu nodded slightly, no longer mentioning this topic, but asked, "You came to me, is there anything wrong?" ”
"Yes, I hope to be able to discuss it with Senior Sister." Ye Su'er nodded and said.
"Discuss? What to discuss? ”
"Of course it's a novel." Ye Suer said as a matter of course, "I thought of three stories today, so I used pen and paper to describe the outline of these three stories, the plot points of the inheritance, the conflict, and the characters-I hope that the senior sister can point out which book is more suitable for submitting light novels." ”
"That's right...... Wait, you say, three? Hearing this, Kasumigaoka Shiyu nodded, but quickly realized something and hurriedly asked.
"Yes, three, what's wrong?" Ye Su'er asked a little strangely.
"It's nothing, I'm just a little surprised that you can come up with three stories in one day, and shape the outline, plot points, and characters of all three stories - it's not an easy task." Kasumigaoka Shiyu shook his head and said, "Of course, I haven't seen your story yet, so I can't make a conclusion, so let me help you take a look." ”
"Okay, thank you, senior sister." Ye Su'er finally breathed a sigh of relief when she saw that her senior sister agreed.
"Let's go to the coffee shop over there." Kasumigaoka Shiyu said lightly.
"Okay."
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The coffee shop that Kasumigaoka Shiba is talking about refers to a coffee shop next to the school, at the end of Sakura Avenue, and the name of this coffee shop is Sakura Cafe.
Although the reputation is a bit cheesy, the décor is not vulgar at all, with a classical style and some modern features, in addition, the various details of the coffee shop are also well set up.
The location of the café is very good, sitting by the window on the second or third floor of the café, you can clearly see the cherry blossom avenue, and many cherry blossoms flutter in the wind.
Every year when the cherry blossoms are in full bloom, the business of this coffee shop is very good, and the window seat is never empty.
At this time, Ye Suer and Kasumigaoka Shiyu walked into this coffee shop, found a random place to sit down, and ordered two cups of coffee.
The waiter said wait a moment, then turned to leave.
Ye Su'er immediately took out the notebook in her schoolbag and handed it to Kasumigaoka Shiyu.
Kasumigaoka Shiyu nodded slightly, opened the notebook, and began to look at it seriously.
For Ye Su'er, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu doesn't know much, only that she is very famous, and she is invincible and cute, and she seems to have a unique charm, attracting people around her all the time, even if she is a person with a cold personality, after getting along with Ye Su'er for a while, she can't help but have some good feelings for her.
Obviously, such an arrogant rookie author is the existence she hates the most......
Kasumigaoka Shiyu didn't think much about it, and began to look at Ye Suer's first story.
Soon, Kasumigaoka Shiha's face showed some surprise.
Writing a novel is not difficult to say, nor is it easy to say.
Whether it is a light novel or a traditional novel, anyone can write it, but the difficulty of writing a good novel is beyond many people's imagination.
The novel is not without a threshold, but because the threshold is in it.
In fact, many new authors, their works, are more like a kind of arrogant self-congratulatory, wrong expression, different logic, full of errors and omissions, sentences are not smooth, many problems, simply not too common, but this is not a fatal problem, a fatal problem, but the story of those authors itself, is not a good story.
However, Kasumigaoka Shiyu did not find these problems in Ye Su'er's body.
If Ye Su'er brings not an outline, but the first few thousand words of the light novel. Then, just with a paragraph of text, Kasumigaoka Shiyu may not be able to find out what is wrong with it, but if it is an outline, she can see a lot of things.