After eating and drinking enough to pay the bill, Li Quan quickly found an excuse to get up and leave. Pen @ fun @ pavilion wWw. ｂｉｑUｇE。 ｉｎｆｏ

The ascendant two-person offensive and defensive alliance is at a time when the love affair is hot, and it will be more dangerous to stay here for a moment.

Fifteen minutes later, Li Quan returned to the apartment, and it was okay to think about it in the afternoon, and the first draft and outline sent to Meng Editor in the morning should have been reviewed, after all, it took a lot of effort, Li Quan wanted to hear what kind of judgment the editor in charge would have.

Walking to the computer desk in the study and sitting down, Li Quan realized that he had probably stayed up late in the morning, and he clearly remembered that he had turned off the computer, but now the computer was in standby mode.

But this kind of thing naturally didn't hurt, he shook the mouse and tapped the keyboard, and the screen quickly lit up, and the gray penguin icon in the lower right corner also wobbly reconnected.

Meng didn't reply to himself on the penguin, but the penguin mailbox prompted a new email.

Li Quan, who unfortunately suffered from obsessive-compulsive disorder, couldn't see the red dot and the Arabic numeral 1 the most, so he quickly clicked on the icon of the mailbox, and the browser automatically opened and jumped to the page of the inbox.

Ah,Sure enough, it's an email from a cute editor.。

I probably found it difficult to explain clearly on the chat software, so I spent a lot of time writing emails.

Li Quan thought so, and snickered in his heart, if the quality of his original manuscript was too poor, Meng Bian would definitely not spend so much energy on it, this time it seems that there is a play.

Sure enough, the first sentence of opening the email made him happy.

The quality of this manuscript is good, compared with the previous few times there is too much progress, the so-called accumulation, I think it should be time to produce results.

Hey.

Li Quan grinned, and the mouse wheel slid down.

However, although the opening is quite good, there are some important points that I hope you should pay attention to in the subsequent writing process.

Uh-huh.

Meng Bian's guidance was tactful, and Li Quan immediately nodded and humbly accepted the teaching.

First, the main line of the outline is not clear.

Due to the limitation of the subject matter, the works of the daily department are basically unable to support the whole work with a grand world view and upgrade system, which leads to the fact that the length of the work is generally not long, and the length of successful commercial works is the first priority. If you want to achieve results with your daily works, you must have a clear main line. Because only when the main line is clear, can the foundation of the whole work be built, and continue to add bricks and tiles to it, and finally become a skyscraper.

Second, there are too many places where neta or memes are used, and there are too many times. 、

It is true that the use of neta related to the theme in the early stage of the work can play a role in attracting readers and building a sense of substitution, but as the plot progresses and develops, the unique characters and narrative style in the work should be slowly established.

As far as your manuscript is concerned, the plot of the last few chapters is getting better, and there is no need to still use Neta as often as you did in the first few chapters, you can reduce the frequency appropriately.

Third, the image of the supporting characters is relatively thin and not three-dimensional and plump enough.

According to the originally drawn route of campus youth romantic comedy, in addition to the heroine, there must be at least two main female characters and a group of female supporting characters with distinctive characteristics.

This is reflected in your outline, but in reality, it is not reflected much in terms of character design and plot design.

This may have something to do with the fact that you've been single for too long and don't know girls, but in order to create a successful campus youth romance comedy, such a difficulty must be overcome.

I'll go!

Li Quanzheng kept nodding yes, and Meng Bian suddenly made up for him in the guidance.

Who said that if you haven't been in love, you won't be able to write a romantic comedy, a certain light novel writer has been dumped in pursuit of a well-known voice actor one after another, doesn't he still write industry pills every day.

This stab made Li Quan a little annoyed, but fortunately, it was the last one.

This is the end of Meng Editor's guidance, and at the end of the email, I told him that the novel can be uploaded today, and the book number will be sent to her as soon as possible after the 10,000 words are completed, so as not to be signed by other editors.

Whew――

This is considered to have passed the internal sign, right?

Li Quan, who has successfully signed a contract many times, is naturally not very excited about signing this kind of thing, but after all, the beginning of this time seems to be very satisfactory to the editor-in-charge.

It's time for the results.

If this dream comes true, it's really worth a little restlessness.

Li Quan closed the browser and returned to the desktop, opening the document of his original manuscript.

Don't be in a hurry to upload it first, follow the instructions of the Meng editor to see if there is room for improvement.

"Main story, main story, neta, neta, supporting role, supporting role, main story......"

Li Quan silently recited the few keywords given by Meng in a circle, and spent more than twenty minutes reviewing the 30,000 words he had carefully written.

Then he nodded thoughtfully, dragged a wad of manuscript paper and a pen from his right hand, and began to write on the paper.

After about five minutes, Li Quan put down the pen and stretched, although the keyboard typing is much faster, but after all, it is most reassuring to write down important things on paper.

With these changes, it's only a matter of time before the results come out, right?

Li Quan smiled proudly and complacently, completely forgetting his past as a street fighter, as if his road to godhood was about to unfold solidly after opening the browser and uploading the article.

"One, two, three, open ......"

He ceremoniously lowered the mouse on the arrow in the lower left corner of the browser icon, and was about to count down to his path to godhood, when suddenly a sound of "Di Di Di Di" interrupted him.

The penguin icon at the bottom right of the desktop kept flashing, and at such a critical juncture, someone came to bother again.

Li Quan let go of his right hand holding the mouse, scratched his head with some annoyance, and then clicked on the constantly flashing penguin icon.

This penguin account is a trumpet, and originally only one person was added to the Meng editor, but later the Meng editor gave the account number to the sweater god, and the god also added Li Quan's friend.

The cute weaving of nature at noon will not have such a positive enthusiasm for work, and the message can only be sent by the sweater god.

Never mind. An hour and a half late will not delay the journey of becoming a god, so let's see what the great god says first.

Li Quan quickly regrouped his mood and clicked on the penguin's dialog box.

I thought to myself, I was able to write a good manuscript and outline this time, but I relied on the guidance of the great god, and it was still early to cross the river, and now I can't dismantle the bridge by myself.

So he quickly sent a few flattering emojis, and then typed in a click: "What does the great god command?" ”