"You can't talk about orders, you handed over the original manuscript and outline to the editor today, right?"

The great god was still paying attention to Li Quan's original manuscript in his busy schedule, which made him a little flattered, and quickly replied: "I handed it in, and she has already replied to my email and made some suggestions." Pen & Fun & Pavilion www.biquge.info"

"What did the editor say?"

The content of the email is ready-made, Li Quan reopened the mailbox Ctrl+C and then Ctrl+V, and pasted the original words of Meng Bian as they were.

At the top of the penguin chat box, the "typing" prompt on the opposite side quickly disappeared, and I thought I was reading the comments seriously.

After about three to five minutes of careful reading, the "typing" prompt resurfaced. However, the sweater god on the opposite side should have knocked cautiously, and there was no information for a long time.

Li Quan naturally waited a little anxiously, but he knew that it was quite impolite to interject at this time, so he picked up the mobile phone on the table, and waited for the advice from the other side while scrolling through the sports forums he often visited.

After reading three posts and tearing up with five netizens who had different opinions from him, the penguin on Li Quan's desktop finally rang again.

He put down his phone and moved his gaze back to the computer screen, and the great god sent a paragraph that was not too long, but it was by no means short.

I was also worried about the lack of clarity of the main line. Campus works of the daily department,Generally, you need a clear predetermined goal or an activity location that can be used as the core of the plot.,Whether it's doing galgame together.,Or join the same student club.,There must be a meeting point of interpersonal relationships.,Otherwise, it's difficult to make the storyline coherent and compact with the hero alone.。

Ah, the great god's opinion was also to the point, Li Quan groaned for a while, and quickly tapped the keyboard and replied: "Then what should I do now?" Because my sister's setting is a high school student.,It seems difficult to interact with the male protagonist who is a college student on campus.,The unclear thing about the main line has been set in stone.,Is the end of hitting the street already doomed? ”

"I can't say that, I have said a long time ago that creating popular fiction is a process of selling delusions and creating expectations.

"German orthopedics is the best delusion for a specific group of readers, as long as the character image of the sister is created, the reader's sense of expectation will naturally arise, even if the main rhythm is a little chaotic, it will not affect the reading experience.

"Moreover, I think the setting of my sister's life experience is also very interesting, very unexpected, let's mention this question from time to time, and it can also keep readers curious and continue to chase it."

The guidance of the sweater god seems to be quite appropriate, but it sounds somewhat subtle.

"In other words, are you asking me to directly abandon the setting of the main story and make up for it from other aspects?" In the face of the earnest teachings of his predecessors, Li Quan unconsciously used honorific titles.

"It's an exaggeration to say that you give up. After all, fiction is not a comic, and the way of expression is a little thin, and I mean that you should play to your strengths and avoid weaknesses, and work more on other areas that are easier to improve, and try to be as perfect as possible. ”

"The word perfect always feels a little inexplicably scary."

"That is, it is a limit of thought, of course, perfection cannot be achieved, but we must try our best to pursue it. For example, the editor's comments later ......"

"What does the Great God have to say?"

At this time, he didn't care about being polite or impolite, and the humble and studious Li Quan was first mobilized by the sense of expectation created by the great god, and he typed and asked urgently.

"Neta's problems are different from each other, and it is good to use it appropriately, or you can follow the editor's advice to raise it first and then suppress it. But this supporting role...... It's still a little more thoughtful. ”

"In other words, my current character design is too sloppy?"

"I guess that's a little bit like that. When we first decided on the subject of the writing, it was because you did have an unusual life experience, and suddenly you had a beautiful sixteen-year-old sister. That's a good thing for you to write. But the other heroines,Most of them are the standard in romantic comedies.,What childhood sweethearts who have been abused.,The cute junior sister who comes up with favorability and is directly full.,The senior sister who is so noble and cold that she doesn't talk to you at all.,These are not very common in life.。 Detached from your actual life experience, it feels a bit ethereal to read. ”

Li Quan didn't consider whether the other party suddenly said such a subtle word, whether there was any other profound meaning, or whether he was simply talking a cliché.

All he heard was the questioning and slander of the great god about his present life.

It's easy to be single for 20 years before ushering in the first spring, how can you endure this kind of groundless accusation?

So Li Quan blurted out...... Ah, no, it's a knock-out reply: "Whether it's a childhood sweetheart, or a senior sister or sister, it's really in my current life, right?" ”

"Huh?" The sweater god on the opposite side didn't have too many doubts, it seemed that he was a little closer to Li Quan than he imagined, "That's really a pretty good material resource." ”

Drawn......

Li Quan was a little depressed when he saw these two words, no matter how you think about what happened last week's weekend, it can't be said to be a pleasant experience.

"So, in order to perfect your personality, I strongly recommend that you take materials a few more times, at least you will gain a lot this time, right?

"Even if the harem is as easy as me, I would never have imagined that my sister would be forced to date with illness.

"There is a saying that life is more exciting than drama."

This guy's performance is definitely a little too excited, Li Quan faintly feels that something is wrong, but he can't say what the problem is.

But Meng Editor's recognition of the original manuscript today made Li Quan seriously think about the sweater's proposal, and a little more different life experience may really be beneficial to the creation of novels, right?

"How? What do you think? Childhood sweetheart or cute sister? Which one do you want to date first? ”

This attitude of being more anxious than the male protagonist is really suspicious.。

Li Quan almost suspected that he was someone close to him who didn't think it was a big deal to see the excitement.

But in the world you live in, you can casually meet a great god who has made more than 10,000 orders?

The probability of this kind of thing happening is too low, Li Quan grabbed his messy and greasy hair, pouted and sent a reply to the great god.

"You don't have to worry about it, Ben Bang Street will naturally arrange it."

This was followed by an arrogant look.

"Yo, it seems that the editor-in-charge and my recognition have boosted some self-confidence, be careful if Taiji comes, happy and sad?"

"That's not going to happen to me."

Well, the scar forgot the pain, and Li Quan brazenly set up such a flag.