About the beginning of this novel!
Many readers have said that there is something unreasonable and unappealing at my beginning, and I took the time to read this today.
Compared with others who start with a huge scene to attract readers, and I, alas, are really some..., but I'm also improving, I hope readers and friends must be patient to see the fifth chapter before making a final conclusion, I have also thought about revising, but this is really not good to modify!
The world behind is wonderful.