Chapter 155, You're Just a Rookie!

Ruxue's exclamation made Xiao Feng excited all of a sudden.

"Okay?" Sister Ruxue actually said this, it seems that she must have seen some bright spots.

"Sister Ruxue, have you found any good places?" Xiaofeng curled his mouth triumphantly.

"Oh, what I'm saying is, okay, it's boring, this book is really boring!" Ruxue said.

"What? So boring? It's boring, why are you still so excited? It made me happy in vain. Xiaofeng shook his head and took back his phone.

Just now, he showed Ruxue the book he wrote on his phone, but he didn't expect this result to be the same.

"Xiaofeng, are you angry?" Ruxue smiled, "It's nothing, it's the first time you've written a book." If you can write, it's already very powerful. ”

But Xiaofeng doesn't need such a compliment, "Sister Ruxue, since you say the same, then I won't write it, anyway, no one will read it." ”

Xiaofeng's mood fell to the bottom.

"Xiaofeng, I have a suggestion, do you want to listen to it?" Ruxue said sincerely.

"What advice?"

"I think that if you're going to write an online novel, you have to look at how successful writers write it, rather than doing it behind closed doors. In this way, do you know what your own shortcomings are? Observing other people's works is the best kind of learning. You'd better read other people's books first, okay? ”

"This ??????" Xiaofeng thought about it, and it was right.

After school, Xiaofeng was still sulking. However, facts speak louder than words, and what I thought was a good book was unanimously thought to be badly written by my sister, Fat Pig and even Sister Ruxue.

The click-through rate is the most objective evidence.

Although Xiao Feng was choked, he still read other people's novels on the Internet, and what he read was the novels of his master Shi Wuxie.

Shi Wuxie's book is called "Demon God Empire", from the introduction, Xiao Feng Zhi said: This book is also a legendary story about how an ordinary person became a demon god, and it is similar to the book that Xiao Feng is writing.

However, when he first started to read the first page, Xiaofeng shook his head.

Why is this great god's writing so naïve? There is neither the description of the scenery nor the rendering of the environment, the narrative is straightforward, simple and straightforward, just like a junior high school student's composition? That's it, it's also the work of the great gods?

However, suspicion is suspicion, and Xiaofeng still stubbornly watched it.

Unexpectedly, the more he looked down, the more Xiao Feng's eyes widened, and his nerves became tense with the book.

This book is like a kind of magic, attracting Xiaofeng to read chapter by chapter.

I have to admit that Shi Wuxie's writing is very straightforward, but the storyline in the book is very vivid and exciting, and there is a lot of suspense and climaxes.

The ups and downs of the plot, the fascinating story, the confusing suspense, and the thrilling scenes all made Xiaofeng fall in love with it and forget the passage of time.

Unconsciously, Xiao Feng actually read more than a hundred chapters in one go, and he didn't even let go of a soak of urine.

At the end, he slapped his thigh hard.

"God, it's really a great god!"

Finally, Xiao Feng was completely conquered by Shi Wuxie's book.

What is a great god, this is a great god!

After being excited, Xiaofeng actually dialed Shi Wuxie's phone for the first time.

"Lu Xiaofeng, is that you?"

"Yes, Shi Dashen, how do you know that it is me?" Xiaofeng was surprised.

"I've memorized your phone number to my phone, can I not know what to do?" Shi Wuxian said with a smile.

"Shi Dashen, you are really a great god!" Xiao Feng is really impressed by Shi Wuxian now.

"Xiaofeng, what's wrong with you today? Usually, I haven't seen you so excited? By the way, you're done with that book, right? I heard that you have a new book now? ”

"Well, yes, the book I opened is "The History of the Growth of Young Heroes". Xiaofeng said.

"What? "The History of the Growth of Young Heroes"? No, haven't you been writing urban romance novels? I remember that your new book seems to be called "The Beautiful President Makes Me Pet", right? "Shi Wuxie's memory is not bad.

Xiaofeng understands that this "Beautiful President Makes Me Pet" must be the new book written by my sister.

"Oh, yes, yes. I wrote two books at the same time, and I wrote both of them. Xiaofeng lied.

"Are you double-open?" Shi Wuxian was a little surprised, "Isn't this okay?" Do you have that much energy and time to write two books at the same time? ”

"Oh, master, don't worry, I have time, it's enough." Xiaofeng smiled.

Two people write two books, are you afraid that you won't have time to use them?

"Oh, then you have to work harder on your own. Oh, I'm going to go to the codeword, you called today, did you just tell me about it? ”

"Oh, no, I just want you to take a look at my "History of the Growth of Young Heroes" and give me some advice."

"Okay, then I'll take a look at your new book and give you a call, by the way, is it still your pen name?"

"No, my pen name has been changed, it should be said that there is an extra pen name, and now I am called Brother Dafeng."

"'Gale Song'?

"It's not that gale song, it's that gale brother. It's the big size, the wind and the wind, the brother and the brother. ”

"Oh, Brother Gale, I see. Your name is Xiao Feng, and your brother's name is Da Feng. Well, it's easy to remember. ”

"Master, I don't have a brother, I'm an only child."

"Of course I know, I'll make a joke with you." Shi Wuxian smiled, "Okay, then I'll see how your brother named Dafeng writes, wait." ”

"Okay."

Two hours later, Shi Wuxian hung up the phone to Xiaofeng.

"Master, how's it going? What is your opinion? "Xiaofeng is excited.

"Xiaofeng, why have you regressed in writing books? It's not an ordinary regression, it seems that it has suddenly returned to the level of a rookie who has just written a book. You're a newcomer now, huh? ”

"Hey, isn't this rookie a newcomer?" Xiaofeng was a little puzzled.

"No, we are rookies here, and newcomers are newcomers."

"What?" Xiao Feng was stunned, "This rookie, isn't that what a newcomer means?" ”

"You don't know the way, our 18K authors are divided into 9 levels and 18 floors, and this is the most basic one who is a rookie, and one who goes up is a newcomer."

"Huh?"

"When you first wrote the book, you weren't human, you were birds. The book you wrote is a bird book, and the language you write is naturally a bird language. Shi Wuxian smiled, "After the rookie stage, he can be regarded as a real person, called a newcomer." ”

Wow, dare to love me Lu Xiaofeng is not a human being now, just a little bird?

Xiao Feng's face was flushed, as if he were an angry bird.

"But, Xiaofeng, you don't have to be discouraged. After all, this is your first new book under your new pseudonym, and in fact, as long as you keep trying, you can succeed. ”

"Then can I become a god even later?"

"yes, it's up to you." Shi Wuxian encouraged.

"Oh, master, how do you feel when you read my book? Oh, you've already said it, it feels like I'm regressing, isn't it? ”

"Well, it's a little bit."

"Master, can you help me change it?" Xiaofeng said, "I'm your apprentice. ”

"This, absolutely not!" Shi Wuxian clearly refused, "Although you are my apprentice, you must modify your own works independently. The work is yours, not mine, do you have to learn to be responsible for your own work? ”

Shi Wuxian's attitude made Xiaofeng fall into the abyss again.

I thought that for the sake of the relationship between master and apprentice, this master could help him change the article.

Just now, Xiaofeng saw Shi Wuxie's article and admired it so much.

He believes that as long as the master is willing to help him change the article, his article will definitely be the same as the master's article, and there will be so many people reading it, and there will be such good results.

"Master, you can do a favor. Just once, okay? When I'm on the road later, I won't trouble you anymore. Besides, if you help me change it, no one will know about it? Xiaofeng said.

"No, absolutely not!" Shi Wuxian still said the same thing, "Xiaofeng, didn't you finish writing your last book by yourself?" Although your last book was mediocre, I still appreciate your perseverance in finishing it. However, why do you want someone else to revise your new book this time as soon as it is opened? Master, I can only give you some advice. However, how to change it must be done by yourself. ”

Then, Shi Wuxian said a lot of revisions.

Xiaofeng just coped with it, and couldn't listen to it.

For him, he can't do these changes, and he doesn't want to do them.

After hanging up the phone, Xiaofeng looked at his own article on the computer, and the more he read it, the more annoyed he became.

He stood up and slammed the mouse hard.

"Write a book, write a book, what do I write? I'm so far away from others, what do I have to compare to? ”

If before writing the book, he was overconfident. Then after writing the book, he was shaken by this successive splashes of cold water.

Perhaps, he is not the material for writing books at all.

Xiaofeng lay on the bed angrily, looking at the ceiling in despair.

His mind went blank.

After I don't know how long this happened, he touched the phone next to him.

The phone was still on the page of Shi Wuxie's "Demon God Empire".

This slave chicken and duck's mobile phone is very broken, just like Xiaofeng's mood at this time, very broken.

Compared with Shi Wuxie's book, which has more than one billion clicks, his poor book with 3 clicks is simply broken and can't be broken again.

Broken books, bird books! Broken man, birdman! Xiaofeng laughed at herself.

After being bored, he picked up the book again and read it.

Looking at it, he suddenly burst out laughing.

Ha Lu Ha ??????