Chapter 154 and one chapter write about ten people, just like a meeting!

Still, Xiaofeng started to write books.

He didn't understand anything, so he didn't understand anything and started his own "virgin writing".

Ignorant people are fearless, and it is precisely because of their ignorance of online articles that Xiaofeng is not afraid of anything and dares to write anything.

Xiaofeng's pen name is "Brother Dafeng", which is homophonic to "Dafeng Song", which also fully expresses his desire to change his name and be a "big brother".

His first book, with no idea or outline, was written entirely on the fly.

His favorite is martial arts novels. Since he was a child, he wanted to be a hero.

The protagonist of this novel is a teenager named Lu Fengyun. The name of this protagonist is actually the overlap of the names of Xiaofeng and Xiaoyun.

This story tells the legend of this young man who learned martial arts and became a martial arts master in the first generation.

However, Xiaofeng only wrote the beginning, less than a thousand words, and it arrived at eleven o'clock.

Xiaofeng also felt that he had written enough today, so he posted this chapter on the Internet.

Closing the computer, he went to meditate cross-legged again.

After meditating, Xiaofeng slept beautifully.

In the next few days, Xiaofeng became a little interested in writing books, and every day as usual, he was a thousand words in code and published on the Internet.

However, after three days on the website, the book had 3 hits. And the only 3 clicks were made by Xiaofeng to read his own work, which means that no one reads this book at all.

No one watched, so I had to find someone to watch.

Xiaofeng had no choice but to pull her sister Xiaoyun, who was coding words, into her room and forced her to read her book.

"What are you writing about?" After reading the ten thousand books, Xiaoyun shook his head, "Ten characters were written at the beginning, who remembers?" Also, why did you write three chapters, and the protagonist hasn't appeared yet? ”

"Sister, this is called foreshadowing, 'the big head is behind', what do you know? The ten people in front,This is the top ten masters of the rivers and lakes.,I'll give the reader an introduction first.,And then the hero comes out.,So that the protagonist seems to be more powerful than the ten of them? ”

"What kind of sect is your hero? Will it be more powerful than them? Xiaoyun asked.

"There's no sect yet, it's still a little dick, and I don't have any martial arts."

"What? Is it a newcomer? My sister frowned, "What are you doing?" A newcomer, who has written three chapters without coming out, and you have written so many masters in front of you, who reads your book? Who knows what you're writing? No, you have to change! You write like this, and no one reads. ”

"How do you change that?"

"The protagonist of the first chapter is about to come out, and the life story should be a little bizarre. For example, the identity of the protagonist is very special, the descendant of a martial arts master; Or, when the protagonist is born, there is a vision, such as something red light fills the house, and the sun and moon change color. ”

What the? A house full of red light? The sun and the moon change color? Sister, do you think I'm writing Liu Bang's biography?

"Sister, what are you? The protagonist came out in the first chapter, and there was no foreshadowing? It's so boring. Xiaofeng shook his head, "I think, it's better to write like me, there is foreshadowing, layers are high, and the more readers read it, the more interested they become." ”

"Foreshadowing what? By the time you're done, all the readers have run out? I'm telling you, you don't foreshadow, go straight to the topic, and write directly about the main character. You can't start with this, no one will look at it. ”

"Sister, don't worry, someone will watch it." Xiaofeng is still very stubborn.

Sister, you must be jealous when you see that I write well, right?

"Well, since you think someone is reading it, then you can write it like this." Xiaoyun turned his head angrily and left.

Xiaofeng, you self-righteous guy, how long have I been writing, how long have you been writing? You don't believe me?

If you don't listen to the old lady, you will suffer in front of you.

Sure enough, another day passed, and the book was still clicked as a duck egg, untouched.

Xiaofeng panicked now, so he had to call Fat Pig again.

"Brother, have something to do with me? Isn't it your Manly cousin's business? ”

"Why is it Manly again?" Xiao Feng was annoyed, "You won't die if you don't have Manli?" It's not like that. ”

"What's that?" Fat Pig asked.

"I'm writing books. Didn't I tell you that I opened a new book? ”

"Really? A good thing. Fat Pig said, "Brother, what's the name of your book?" ”

"Oh, the title of the book is 'The History of Young Heroes'." Xiaofeng said.

"What? Hahaha! Fat Pig laughed, "Brother, you, why did you choose such a dirty name?" ”

"The title of the book is dirty? Eh, that's a spectacular name, huh? You see, heroes, history, are very heroic! Xiaofeng can't stand other people's criticism of himself, "In addition, what does the title of the book matter, you still have to read the content, it is guaranteed to be good!" ”

"Really? Okay, send me the link and I'll show you. ”

"Okay, then I'll send you the link, you can read it seriously for me, and give me more valuable comments."

Ten minutes later, Fat Pig called.

"Brother, kill me!" The fat pig's first sentence startled Xiaofeng.

"What's wrong? Are you sick? ”

"Brother, I'm not sick. But I can't stand your book! Fat Pig said.

"For what? My book is not written in English, you can't read it for Mao? ”

"Brother, what kind of nonsense are you writing? After watching it for a long time, I didn't see the protagonist, and I don't know what you want to say? The clouds and mountains are covered in fog, and I feel dizzy when I see it. "Fat Pig tells the truth.

"Cloud Mountain Fog Cover? The view I wrote about is not bad, huh? "Xiaofeng did write a misty scene.

That scene, that artistic conception, made Xiaofeng himself intoxicated, and he was reborn compared to Li Taibai.

"Brother, do I read novels, or do I watch you write poems? You wrote that paragraph, good guy, five hundred words, just wrote a paragraph? ”

"Do you know Mao? This is necessary for rendering. I haven't learned the "Huangshan Pine" in our Chinese textbook, and people have written more than 1,000 words about the scenery? ”

"Less, that's prose, okay? Also, these days, who else reads martial arts novels, and moreover, is it still a traditional martial arts novel? ”

Xiao Feng suddenly became angry, "You are not allowed to slander my first love!" ”

"Your first love?" Fat Pig is stupid.

"Yes, martial arts novels are my first love, I think at the beginning, for it, I forgot to sleep and eat, people are thinner than daylily!"

"Brother, that's a yellow flower, not a daylily!" Fat Pig corrected.

"What do you know? This daylily is thinner than a goldenrod! Xiao Feng was annoyed, "Martial arts novels are my favorite, I don't write this, what do I write?" ”

"Brother, you're a foreigner. It's not impossible for people to write martial arts now, but what people write is fantasy martial arts, which is the kind of fairy sword and fairy legend, do you know the Tao? ”

"That's it? Oh, what I know is the fantasy novel that smashed Venus with one punch and shattered Mars with one kick? ”

"That's right!" Fat Pig smiled, "You still write traditional martial arts, it's just against the trend." ”

"Come less, those fantasy books are all nonsense, do you believe it?" Xiaofeng scoffed.

For many opinions of fat pigs, Xiaofeng couldn't listen to them.

"Fat pig, after talking for a long time, is there really nothing in my book?"

"No, brother, there is one good one." Fat Pig said.

"What?"

"Well, I didn't see a typo." Fat Pig smiled.

Xiao Feng died, "Fat pig, let me tell you, I won't help you get out of Yomanli!" ”

"Brother, what are you doing? What do you say? If you don't talk about it, it's better to be a king! ”

"Go and be the king yourself. Fat Pig, let me tell you, if no one reads this book again, I won't help you ask Manli, you wait and see. ”

Fat Pig panicked now, "Brother, why are you like this?" No one reads your book, what's the matter with me? ”

When he said this, Xiaofeng also calmed down.

"Alright then, Fat Pig, you give me another week, I'm going to write this book well, I must write it well."

"What? You're going to have another week? I, I've been waiting until the daylilies are cold? "Fat Pig is in a hurry.

"I've been coding words for the past few days, and people are worse than daylily, so what does it matter if you're cold? Such a thin daylily, whether it is cold or not, there is nothing to eat! ”

"Well, well. Brother, I'll give you another week, you can't change it anyway? "Fat Pig had to give in.

"I know it!" Xiaofeng hung up the phone angrily.

Sister and Xiaoyun both splashed cold water, and Xiaofeng's heart also wavered.

The next day, he simply found Ruxue.

Ruxue is a language teacher, so she must not be bad at judging literary works.

Unexpectedly, after reading it, Ruxue actually laughed.

"Xiaofeng, why does your book look like a Politburo meeting? The first chapter introduces ten people, and also introduces each person's situation in detail, what is the background, sect, martial arts, weapons, hobbies. However, at the end, I can't remember any of them. ”

"Sister Ruxue, isn't it that I want to introduce them first and pave the way for the protagonist. In the future, what the actor wants to learn is the kung fu of these people? Xiaofeng explained.

"One person learns ten martial arts?" Meng Xue was surprised, "I only learned one martial art from my master, and I didn't know it clearly." How can your protagonist learn ten martial arts by himself? You're not afraid that he won't digest it if he eats too much? ”

"No, no, no!" Xiaofeng shook his head, "My protagonist is a natural martial arts wizard, and he will learn it as soon as he learns it." ”

"Oh, that's right." Ruxue nodded and continued to read.

Suddenly, she shouted, "Good! ”??????