Chapter 243 The first draft of "The Camel Xiangzi of the Republic of China" has been completed

The problem of the picture sense of all novels is a problem of details. Pen ~ Fun ~ Pavilion www.biquge.info the key lies in your expression.

"Pay it back." Black and white said. This and "pay back" black and white left hand is still in his pocket, the light green on his body is still buttoned wrongly, there is a wicked smile on the corner of his mouth, he took off his sunglasses, looked at Donghuang and said.

Whether the sense of the picture is strong depends on whether you depict it carefully and whether you find the key points. To add that, if you want to be full of pictures, you should use as few mood particles as possible, whether it is speaking or descripting.

For the character of the character, my heroine is the kind of female man who is a little rougher, and the sudden change in the style of painting will be written by me as a delicate little woman, how can I avoid it in the future?

Very simple. This problem arises. It's because you're still portraying the characters, and you're not substituting the characters. For example, in the process of writing, you want to talk to a female man, but you are a cute girl, and if you write it, you will be affected by yourself. But if you put yourself in the shoes of your character and imagine what it would be like in such a situation, you know what to do.

Magic is great.,I want to ask.,I've read a lot of urban texts.,Most of the backgrounds are set before 05 years.,There's a lot of unspoken rules involved.,I think this is the routine of the urban text.----------,Break the original unspoken rules.,Establish your own rules.。 I don't know if my judgment is right, right?

I don't read much urban literature. But I venture to speculate that this setting isn't necessarily due to unspoken rules. Rather, the timeline is pushed forward by ten years compared to the timeline of the current era. A lot of things are easier to control. It's not easy to have too many unknowns. In fact, I think that after the start of the Internet era, it is not important to write an urban timeline. The key is how you write an urban essay, and now the routine of an urban essay is not in the timeline, but in the type of cool essay. How to break through the limitations of this type is the direction you should think about.

There was too little preparation for writing an essay before.,In the process of writing, there was indeed a big talk of Kavin and incoherent problems.,And there are too many sudden ideas of "doing things", although I can gradually enrich the novel, but it's too messy and messy and has no priority, what should I do?

It's best to think about it before you write. Who am I, what am I going to write about, and how am I going to write it? What style, what character of the protagonist, and then prepare the worldview. Also, if your idea of doing things is not particularly good, golden ideas, then I advise you to do less. Don't mess up your entire layout with an idea that doesn't necessarily work.

What are the main aspects of the rhythm and cool points of urban entertainment?

The key to urban literature is to be cool. Remember, pretending to be forced to slap the face must be accumulated, let the guy be arrogant for a while, this is to arouse the reader's resonance, but the collection must be fast. Don't overdo it. Whoever bullied me in our village, I directly shouted out a certain big settlement. Don't write about this kind of plot. The background of the protagonist and the social circle must be gradual. Another point is not to spread too much too often. Twenty-five chapters are enough to have a face-slapping plot. Too often the reader is also aesthetically fatigued. There is also a slap in the face for a chapter or two. If you hold it for a long time, it is easy for readers to lack stamina.

In the process of writing according to the outline, when you feel dissatisfied with writing a certain plot and feel that you can't write well, do you grit your teeth and write it down, or re-examine the plot?

If you are not satisfied, you must first think about it, is your plot not satisfied, or are you not writing well? If it's not written well, look back and read it, if you don't feel right about it, this point is the point you need to modify, and you can go back and read it after you change it. How about now? If you still feel that it is wrong, it is a problem with the plot, then you go back to the past to examine the plot, for this problem, my advice is to be sensible, and you must distinguish whether I change the article or the plot.

1. Opening remarks:

Martial arts has really become a niche, and now martial arts are basically going to die, and writing martial arts novels is either closer to Xianxia or fantasy, and traditional martial arts are basically dead. In fact, now fantasy and fairy tales have the shadow of martial arts, I personally feel that whether it is martial arts or fairy or fantasy, the attraction of readers lies in the foreshadowing of the cool point, the first three or four chapters are not happy, no one reads it, in short, it is pretending to be forced, slapping the face, and then cool, of course, if you can reveal a little of your own thoughts, it will be better, in fact, pretending to be forced, slapping the face, are all routines, the key is how you can pretend to be just right, I am learning the grasp and control of the rhythm.

For example, the description of the fight scene, I wrote it like this:

The sword falls over people's heads, and the heart is like boiling oil!

None of the people present thought that Yang Yi would make a move when he said it!

A sword was swung out, like lightning and thunder, and when everyone didn't have Fan Yang coming, they had already killed Gui Erniang and Sun Zhongjun!

Seeing the separation of the two women's heads, the blood on their necks sprayed wildly, and everyone who was sprayed with a face was stunned!

A moment later, a figure screamed at Yang Yi, it was Gui Xin Shu who had come back to his senses.

Yang Yi saw him rushing in front of him, stepping into his fist, his fist smashing towards him like a sledgehammer, his eyes lit up, "This is the ......" A palm was pushed out, under the intersection of palms and fists, Yang Yi's body shook, but Gui Xinshu took a few steps back before standing firmly, and then heard Yang Yi continue: "Broken jade fist? ”

Gui Xinshu has a dull personality and few words, at this moment, his mother-in-law was beheaded by Yang Yi with a sword in front of him, and the grief and indignation in his heart, needless to say, there is only one thought in his heart: "Kill him!" Kill him! Avenge! Avenge! Ignoring Yang Yi's questioning, he rubbed his body again and worked hard with Yang Yi.

Yang Yi laughed and said, "Okay! Good punches! Is this the Mixed Yuan Gong? You're the first master I've ever seen since I entered this world! As he spoke, he crossed his sword to his left hand and used his right hand to meet Gui Xinshu.

After staying for a while, Mei Jianhe, who saw the headless corpse lying in front of him, howled; "Master! Zhongjun! ”

Mei Jianhe stretched out his hand to help up the corpse in front of him, stretched out his hand several times, and finally lost his courage.

……

At first, the description was a little wrong, but later I found that readers like blood, and then I changed it:

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Mu Renqing shook his head and smiled bitterly: "If you two come again, you can't kill him!" Help me through! ”

Mu Renqing staggered to Yang Yi and asked in a dumb voice: "You are not far away, come to chase and kill Erniang and them, and you will not give up if you don't kill them." Let me ask you, how much benefit did the people of Hongjia Village give you to make you do this? ”

Yang Yidao: "How can you not repay the kindness of a meal?" ”

Mu Ren stood in a daze, and muttered in his mouth: "The grace of a meal? The grace of a meal! Because people took care of your meal, you went thousands of miles to hunt down and kill me, two unscrupulous people? ”

His face was full of disbelief and admiration: "Just to repay the kindness of someone for a meal? ”

Yang Yi said: "Not bad! The big husband is black and white, and the grace of dripping water is reciprocated by the spring! When they were killed, I will avenge them! ”

Mu Renqing saw that his long sword was stuck in his chest, and he did not lose his heroic spirit, he was really heroic and sharp, and he refused to let him. After watching it for a while, he said to Yang Yi: "You go!" ”

Yang Yi said: "You won't stop me? ”

Mu Renqing said: "We don't have the face to stop you, and we can't stop you!" ”

Yang Yi laughed: "So, I'll go!" Coughed suddenly, the long sword in his chest buzzed and shook, his body shook a few times, coughed a few times, and said with a smile: "Good sword, good sword!" ”

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I found that when writing martial arts novels, the most important thing is to be refreshing, crisp and neat, and this kind of description can arouse the reader's enthusiasm even more. Some people write martial arts, saying that they can't get into the theme for a long time, and they look very girly and unpleasant. (Qingluo: Is it because the sense of rhythm is not good enough?) Well, rhythm is really important, the same thing, if you don't create enough atmosphere, it will feel different to read, and sometimes you don't have that energy, and the whole style is not right. If you read Jin Yong's book and Liang Yusheng's book, you will find that the style of the two is very different. Liang Yusheng's books are a little too bookish, so I like Jin Yong's books mostly, and Liang Yusheng's books are getting fewer and fewer, and now everyone lives so impetuously, naturally I don't like the style of describing things.

(Qingluo: Therefore, the writing method of modern martial arts, to adapt to the online literature market, you must learn Jin Yong's, refreshing, smooth ~ It looks incisive.) Yes, yes, smooth, refreshing, comfortable to look at, sometimes writing, simple and rough is much better than twisting and pinching. (Qingluo: So how can we control the rhythm reasonably?) How about grasping a degree? Personally, I feel that the main thing is to create the atmosphere, not that the higher the force value, the more refreshing the point. Conflict is easy to create, tension is hard. Just like a river embankment blocking a flood, it is difficult to grasp the feeling of pleasure when it is discharged, and the climax generally accumulates slowly, find a suitable time to erupt.

Let's take Jin Yong's eagle shooting as an example, at the beginning Guo Jing was very stupid, the seven masters spent many years of hard work, he just couldn't learn the exercises, at this time the reader saw impatience, and then Ma Yu of the Quanzhen Sect appeared, and secretly passed the exercises of the Quanzhen Sect to Guo Jing, and then because of Guo Jing's stupidity, the mind is simple, and the internal strength is practiced very quickly, at this time it is a little cool, until Guo Jing meets Yang Kang, the climax begins to appear, Liang Ziweng's treasure snake can increase the power, so that Guo Jing sucks the blood, in fact, this is the hanging, That is, the gold finger. Then he met Hong Qigong, this golden finger is bigger, and he directly handed him the dragon palm, and then he found out that his girlfriend was the daughter of Huang Laoxi, and then the awesome thing is, he went to Peach Blossom Island and got acquainted with the old naughty boy Zhou Botong, not only learned to fight with both hands, but also learned the Nine Yin True Scripture,, this golden finger is so big that it is boundless! Jin Yong used Guo Jing's stupid but serious learning characteristics to tailor the eighteen palms of the dragon for him, and because he was stupid, he could learn to fight with both hands, and because he was stupid and brainless, he could memorize the entire Jiuyin True Scripture.

Now that you think about it, this Guo Jing's proper son of luck, Diaosi's counterattack! The family first got the famous car Ferrari, which is the little red horse, and then gave the little red horse to Huang Rong, who was a little beggar at the time, and won the heart of Bai Fumei and Huang Rong! (Black and white: Coolness is the seven emotions and six desires of people, the pleasure of pit people, the pleasure of harvesting things, the sense of accomplishment of doing a super difficult thing, and the expressive desire to be in the limelight and love to pretend)

Generally, pretending to be forced is reflected through contrast, so there must be a foil, such as Lu Dingji fat and thin head, there are positive and negative, you see, Guo Jing won Bai Fumei, and Jin Yong gave him a rich and handsome enemy, Ouyang Ke. Ouyang Ke also proposed to the Lord of Huangdao, Huang Rong disagreed, but Huang Yaoshi agreed!

That's when the protagonist appears. Well, so Guo Jing wants to compete with Ouyang Ke, the protagonist wants to win, and it is reasonable to win, Guo Jing is a stupid boy, but Huang Rong is Bai Fumei, and in the end, the stupid boy overturned Gao Fushuai and won Bai Fumei, which is really cool. I guess this is also the reason why Condor Archery was so popular at that time, the sense of substitution is super strong!

(Black and white: When readers read novels, they are substituting for the protagonist, and what the protagonist doesn't want to happen, and in the worst case, they will even lose their lives.) At this time, there is a tense and urgent atmosphere, and the reader will guess what the protagonist should do next to get through this crisis, so it is logical that the sense of substitution and anticipation will burst, and there will be a sense of pleasure after it is done)

Yes, create difficulties, and then solve them. In fact, the whole book is driven by constantly encountering difficulties and solving difficulties. It's like walking, the scenery is constantly changing along the way, and the protagonist gradually becomes stronger while seeing different scenery. It's actually a bit similar to urban pretending, but you don't have to use water. You have to really have the pen power to write about hydrology, and the reader doesn't hate it, you can also water. I had a few chapters of water some time ago, and I was told by readers for a long time, in fact, in the case that the branch line does not affect the main line, write a little irrelevant, climactic paragraphs, the reader likes the most, but you can't keep this climax all the time, so you have to be relaxed and orderly, in fact, it is the best to grasp the rhythm, just right.

In fact, writing a book is like tickling, the power is not too big or small, and the party is the best.

2. Q&A

How does modern martial arts express the spirit of chivalry~ Or is the spirit of chivalry still worth writing?

I think the vitality of martial arts is to have a chivalrous spirit, without a chivalrous spirit, is it still martial arts? It's a bit big to serve the country and the people, but it should be okay to see uneven roads. My current readers are encountering this, and in the Tang Dynasty, the protagonist is asked to kill the people of the Demon Gate, let go of the people of the Buddhist Gate, and attack them in groups. Some people say they should be killed, and some say they shouldn't be killed, but the protagonist has been determined, so go all the way. Because the direction of the characters needs to be supported by character. This requires that when the book is opened, the character must be set up well

It's like the protagonist you wrote about is a good person, and suddenly he goes on a killing spree, kills a lot of people, and thinks that the killing is good, which is simply inexplicable. If you want your protagonist to be a hero, then do what a hero should do, the character design is really very important, and the direction and handling of the plot completely depend on the character of the character.

What new elements have been added to Dajiangju's martial arts to make it so successful?

In fact, it is not a new element, someone has written it this way a long time ago, before me, there is no way, after me there is a copy, the key ideas are different.

is like cultivating immortals, it is about the process of cultivating immortals alone, but some people have a good entry point, and some people can't, the key is still the entry point. Some novels have not yet appeared a contradiction in the first ten chapters, basically except for the great god, I didn't dare to write like this, so the beginning should attract attention, books with good grades, the entry point is generally on the contradiction point, the beginning is an extremely tense atmosphere rendering, there is no good beginning, even if you have a good ending, it is in vain.

What else does Dajiangju have to add?

In fact, if you really want to write martial arts, you really need to have a basic understanding of martial arts novels. Know, at the very least, you have to read martial arts novels, and there is accumulation before it can explode. A book, no matter how well he writes, but since he has succeeded, he naturally has his reasons

If you are asked to describe a character fight scene, you have to be able to write, you can't just look at it, the main thing is to write, don't think about whether the writing is good or not, write first.

Opening remarks:

I'll talk about science fiction, the science fiction of online texts is actually fantasy, but the world background of the story is different.

Science fiction is based on the future world, starry sky and other worlds as the background, in which there will definitely be high-tech things, almost all science fiction books, are starry sky, otherwise it will not be long. Even if it is the end of the world, it will develop into the universe later.

The science fiction of online literature is an inclusive category, urban, fantasy, Xianxia, etc., can be integrated into it, so, as long as the imagination is enough, you can write anything.

Speaking of content, the following is imagination, precisely because science fiction is inclusive, therefore, the author's brain is big enough, and because of this, the content can be written a lot.

Let's talk about the choice of science fiction content, science fiction can write a lot of things, you can write the content of the city into it, make money and bubble beauties, just go back and forth to their respective planets, this is actually easier to write than modern cities, right? And it will not be harmonized.

There is also the practice of the universe, which is actually a fantasy, so there is no need to say much about this. Have you found that the books of the great gods, fantasy, all have a feature? My understanding is very simple, it is to let the protagonist keep fighting - at the beginning, the protagonist is a waste material, and then when he gets an adventure, he keeps fighting, and the enemies keep appearing, and he becomes stronger and stronger.

Of course, during the battle, you can write something warm, family, love, friendship, and so on. There are also the enemies of the protagonist, and when everyone writes, not all of them are bad guys......

That's all I have to say, I don't know how to say it, if you have questions, you can ask, and those who can answer must know everything.

Questions:

I'm writing about sci-fi metaverse exercises, how to write an attractive opening?

An attractive opening is actually a beginning that can arouse the reader's psychological resonance

(Black & White: So how do you create this one resonance?) Arouse all sorts of emotions in the reader, of course, positively.

Now the beginning is all formatted, first depressed, then released. Among them, when it is depressed, it is necessary to make the reader have a sense of expectation. (Black & White: So did Sig have any ideas in mind before he wrote?) There must be an idea, what do you want to write about the whole book, you know this? Don't say that everyone writes a book, there is only a beginning. Of course, before opening the book, you have to set the tone, what style you are good at. This is different for every writer, because each person has different experiences, different knowledge, and different personalities, so don't write what you're not good at.

Also, before opening a book, set a good readership, which is very important, Yang Chen said that it was mentioned in the online article, for example, I opened an article aimed at middle school students. Before most writers open the book, they are very ignorant, including the previous daily sales of more than 10,000, and the back one hit the street, there are many such authors, all of whom use new books to try, write when they are popular, and cut them if they are not popular.

Can you tell us about the current market?

Now for us, it is a golden age, there are many books of various themes, there are many popular, and in the past two years, film and television companies have purchased copyright to develop IP, and almost all of the accumulation of more than ten years of online articles has been excavated.

The web will continue to develop.

A good orgasm is written so tastelessly, how do you grasp the degree of the climax?

It's boring because in the process of writing, you make the reader lose their emotions.

Narrating a story that is about to climax, but you intersperse some irrelevant events in it to divert the reader's attention; Or it's too long to keep the reader looking forward to it. For example, the reader expected the protagonist to kill an enemy and immediately see the protagonist explode, but you procrastinated......

If you don't have the skills to control, write it out as soon as possible, in fact, if you don't reach a certain level of writing, when you write, you don't know what the climax is, it's easy to say, but in the process of writing, everyone thinks it's difficult, right?

Here's how I do it: take the story from depressing to exploding, with the events in it listed. In fact, it is equivalent to a partial outline

Once listed, you will know how to develop, which is basic, and then, plan the sub-stories and connect them.

For example: killing a disciple, leading out Tianjiao, offending the sect again, destroying the whole sect again, and finally confronting the boss of the sect, it is the climax.

In fact, there is no need to suppress this process, many people write, thinking that every story has to suppress the protagonist, but in fact, there is no need. Once listed, the goal is clear.

How can we increase the conflict between the protagonist and the enemy, and also avoid the common writing of the villain as brain-dead in routine texts...

In fact, a villain with unique feelings can be more interesting to readers.

I didn't say anything substantive today, but I've heard a lot of it, and the key is that I have to experience it, and don't doubt my writing ability at will.

Can you ask Sig to tell the newcomers about his understanding of writing?

I'm actually a newcomer, this book is better, newcomer, whether you just started writing a book, or have been pounced, just started writing, be patient. There are too few people who have become gods, although China Literature has been promoting it like this, I am sure that most of those people have been writing for at least a year or two, and I have changed more than 100 vests, so I want to report the idea that persistence will be rewarded, and I have confidence in myself and believe that I can become a god!

Why is there lazy cancer?

This is a common human disease that needs to be overcome. I'm also lazy, so I don't have much experience with this, in fact, I can overcome it by thinking about becoming a god. Although the student party does not understand the outside society and has no pressure of life, the student party is generally renewable, so work hard!

Opening remarks:

Let's not talk about the experience of hitting the street, let's go straight to the point. Let's bring you a little personal understanding of live streams, looking at the texts that appear in today's live streams. There are many types, such as the following:

1. Live game broadcast

2. Catch ghosts live broadcast

3. Live broadcast of death

4. Live broadcast of the trial

5. Shenhao live broadcast

6. Wilderness live broadcast

7. Lucky live broadcast

8. Otherworldly live broadcast

9. Plane live broadcast

10, the emperor live broadcast

11. Live broadcast of tomb robbery

Some other live broadcast novels, of course, also have them, such as entertainment anchors, which have the personal feeling of being a star stream, so I won't put it here. In addition to these, there are also magic live broadcasts, village live broadcasts, and so on. There are still many types of live broadcasts waiting for Dashen to create, and this kind of micro-innovation is much easier than the WeChat stream of Dengshen.

Of course, compared to micro-innovation, I personally recommend trying the following trend of live streaming. (Actually, I'm also following the trend)

Why is it recommended to follow the trend, let me give you a few examples to understand. The infinite death of the best live broadcast, the first to create the dead stream, this follows the trend, the starting point boutique (although it has been harmonized) Wanjie live broadcast big tyrant, Shenhao live stream, starting point boutique, urban trial live broadcast, trial live stream, starting point boutique...... In addition to these, the ugly god's otherworldly live stream, the rabbit's plane live stream, are all starting point boutiques, I believe you can see from these examples, although this type has just appeared at the starting point not long ago, but the number of its boutiques has increased very sharply. Of course, the **** lucky god anchor, the live broadcast of the death of the betta, is highly respected personally.

After following the trend, let's talk about the rhythm of the live stream, I have always thought that the live stream is very similar to the text copying stream, and the rhythm in the early stage is easier to control than other types of urban novels.

However, the live broadcast is also rhythmic, and the defeat is also rhythmic. (Personal opinion)

The most important thing is in one word, fast!

You have to make the early progress of the protagonist's live broadcast fast, tens of millions of people, not to mention thousands of rockets flying, anyway, it's all blowing, and there is a barrage, you can pick and choose.

The fast-paced and barrage are actually very much in line with the appetite of many readers at the moment, so this is one of the reasons why live streaming can get up. Let's talk about how to write a live stream.

1. Select a live broadcast type and frame the golden finger (follow the trend)

Second, the protagonist in the early stage has all kinds of hanging bombs, don't think that you can't write in the back, in short, attract readers first.

3. I don't know how to write the later stage, go and see how others write, but it is not recommended to plagiarize (no discipline)

Finally, let's recommend what genres are worth following recently.

Three-star: live game broadcast, wilderness survival

Four-star: Plane Live

Five-star: Shenhao live broadcast

Okay, that's the bragging.

Questions:

About live broadcasts, how to choose cheating?

First of all, it depends on what type of live broadcast you want to write, in fact, as long as you determine this, basically the gold finger will come out, (black and white: style and gold finger matching) I listed a lot of live broadcast types above, you can take a look, such as the live broadcast of death, your gold finger is almost, die and will not die, Shenhao live broadcast, naturally there is endless money...... Others are similar.

What does Mo Ju mean by the fast-paced barrage?

Fast-paced, mainly in the early stage, it is very attractive as soon as the live broadcast starts. I'll take myself being killed by the infinite harmony as an example, the first live broadcast, it was okay to be bitten by a poisonous snake, the audience was frightened in various ways, and then continued, it's okay to drink pesticides, then it's okay to crash, then it's okay to jump off the building, and then it's okay to thunder and not die, in short, the pace is very fast. But writing like I do, destined to be harmonized, is a typical counterexample.

There is also a barrage, and the barrage of the ugly god is definitely worth a look. The starting point is the fantasy world adventure of the live broadcast. A wonderful barrage will also add a lot of color to a book for live streaming.

If that's okay, the reader will tell you a lie, so how do you write it to make the reader accept it?

If the live stream is discussed whether it is true or false, then it can't be played, whether it is a live broadcast on the other plane, or a live broadcast of Shenhao, and so on, the cheat is a variety of reports, and many times, as long as it is not too much, readers who like the live stream will automatically ignore this, set a rebellious golden finger, as long as the audience accepts this at the beginning, then the next plot is easy to be within the reasonable range of the golden finger, and then take it as an example, anyway, the golden finger is to die and not die, the next plot, how do you want to die, It doesn't matter,

If I write a live broadcast where the protagonist doesn't have a cheat and just seeks secrets in constant exploration, such as a ghost hunting live, how should I write a climax or make the reader happy to watch?

Ghost live broadcast,I think it's the most difficult type to write.,First of all, if you don't set the gold finger,In the absence of a gold finger,As I said above,It's hard for you to explain the reasonableness,Of course,****There are a few very successful books.,It's recommended to go and see.,I don't remember the specific title of the book.。

New to the road... What do I need to do to prepare for a live stream? Do you want to collect information in advance?

Two words, follow the trend. Of course, you can also innovate slightly, now the live stream has created a lot of types, in fact, I think, there are many other types that have not appeared, it is worth developing, as for collecting information, see what type of live broadcast you write, if you write this type of live broadcast like I do, then congratulations, check the information to annoy you.

(Black & White: Realistic exaggeration, fiction is artistic processing.) Yes, it's tiring to write, and it's easy to become a niche within a niche.

I've just written a novel, I'm creating, but the writing skills don't feel good, there are too many dialogues, I feel a little naΓ―ve watching so many dialogues, I feel like a few people talking and then the plot goes down, in short, it feels weird... What to do?

It's very simple, read more books from other great gods, and yes, don't be afraid to hit the street, and update more code words. It's not that simple. As for those who feel that their dialogue is not good, it is important to look back, and maybe you will start to feel that the dialogue you wrote is good after a little revision.

Once you're done, look back and take a second look

May I ask Mo Ju, how can I grasp the climax? I've written a lot of climaxes, and every time the foreshadowing and the like are set, but every time it breaks out at the climax point, it collapses without accident, and it doesn't play its due effect! …

I think this is a problem that many writers are difficult to deal with, maybe I thought it was very cool at first, but I found it when I wrote, it seems that it is the same thing when I write there, I don't feel it anymore, and the method I take every time is, look back at the plot I wrote before, look at the content of the previous chapters, and then, make up for the legacy that I thought of before at the climax, that is, when writing this climax, what you thought of before, see if you can write it as much as possible.

(Black and white: that is, a sense of picture in the mind, in fact, sometimes to describe it in words, it does not meet the requirements at all) Yes, you summarized it perfectly. The foreshadowing was written enough in the early stage, but when it came to the climax, you didn't write out some of the cool points that should be there, so it would naturally collapse.

How to write a good relationship drama between men and women, and not cross the line

This question, between the current starting point of the various anti-pornography, generally I don't bother to write about women. So, I really can't answer it.

In fact, this is the case, no wheel which novel, the heroine is often sprayed, just a little. Some gods are quite successful in shaping female characters, so this heroine is sprayed less; The shaping is unsuccessful, and many readers see you writing this woman, and jump directly to the book,

Speaking of which, it is recommended that you avoid what you are not good at. I'm not good at it myself, so I write less.

I wrote about a villain, but why, judging by the reaction of readers, he is even more popular than the protagonist ... I'm not the protagonist of the portrayal failed

It depends on how popular this villain is, if it directly makes readers unwilling to even watch the protagonist, it is really a failure. If you create a villain who is very awesome, and readers like to watch the protagonist very much, it's a win-win. I have to find a chance to get the villain down, (Cui An: As long as the protagonist Wei Guangzheng and the supporting roles are written by Niu Bi, that is a masterpiece, refer to the beacon fire, and the cat is greasy) In this way, the protagonist is awesome, and the supporting roles are also awesome.

I have my own style of writing, but I heard that newcomers had better follow the trend, the current market tide seems to be a relaxed essay, but my style is classical and enthusiastic, so should I force to change my style to follow the tide, or insist on my own style to write?

Let's talk about my own experience on the street, I used to write vernacular text, what are the characteristics of vernacular text, slow, drag, what are the characteristics of the live broadcast text I write now, fast, brainless and cool, I can only say so much, other self-experience, anyway, the initiative to transform has benefited me a lot, of course, you can continue to adhere to your own style, there are many people who just stick to it and succeed. All I can say is that when I felt like I didn't fit into a genre, I knew I had to change.

I'm 16 years old this year, I came into contact with it in the first year of junior high school, about two or three years, at the beginning, I wrote very feeling, and I didn't think about making money, I just wanted to create a "world" but as time went by, I found that my heart became more and more impetuous, and even when I picked up the pen, I didn't know how to write...

If you really like novels and online literature, there are so many code words, and if you write more, you will feel it.

How to shape the character of the protagonist? I'm all about bringing myself into the tone and style of the protagonist.,As a result, the character's character is my character.,And my personality is a little weak.,So much so that I feel like the protagonist is also soft...

If it's your case, then you can go more crooked, many novel protagonists, at the beginning of the appearance are cowardly, this is not a problem, but when the protagonist begins to get the golden finger, it slowly becomes awesome, soft is not terrible, what is terrible is that it has always been soft.

Creative Experience:

In fact, when I was in school, I liked to read novels very much, and then at that time I read a lot of time-traveling novels, and after reading too many novels, I would be dissatisfied with some of the plots, and I felt that if I wrote it myself, I would definitely not arrange it like this, so I started to try to write.

(Su Yanci: It seems that Maomao also felt that other texts did not match the stories in his heart, and then began to write)

Yes, that's right.

Because, I like to read ancient texts, and my first book was actually an ancient text. However, as my readers know, I cheated on that book......

But then the editor told me that it is very important for an author to be able to finish a book, and to finish a book is the first milestone in his writing career, so when the second book was written, although there were not many people who read it, I still insisted on finishing it, and insisting on finishing a book is the most important thing, which is also the basis for readers to follow you, and the author who can rely on a book to become popular, after all, it is still a minority, and most authors still rely on the accumulation of popularity from book to book.

(Su Yanci: There is a book to become a god, but there are not many, it can be said that the chance is slim)

Yes, when I first started writing, my first book, the first month's manuscript fee, was only 11.9. In the second month, the manuscript fee was 200.

So, in fact, many people think that I seem to have become popular by relying on a childhood sweetheart, but before that, I had nearly half a year and had no income, so if the first book is not very good, don't be discouraged, since the first book, you have been accumulating popularity.

Q&A:

Childhood sweethearts are based on sweet pet texts, can the content be abused? After all, if you keep spoiling it, won't readers get tired of it?

In fact, when writing about childhood sweethearts, it is not recommended to write abuse, after all, the positioning of this article is here. President Wen is pampered and abused, but when the word childhood sweetheart is mentioned, everyone's first impression is still very good, and everyone thinks of sweetness.

So the tone at the beginning,It's here.,Childhood sweethearts give people the feeling of sweet text.,Pet text.,Every time I watch my childhood sweetheart, I think silently.,Why don't I have a bamboo horse?

But this article, if it's only sweet, sometimes it's a little greasy, so if I usually arrange an abusive plot, it's all arranged on the female and male partners. Therefore, it is actually a very tragic thing to be my female and male partner.

(Su Yanci: The male protagonist and the female protagonist are still favored, and the two men and two women who abuse them, such as Tong Tong's pair... I really cried when I saw it.)

Well, that pair is indeed the most abusive pair I wrote, at that time, my editor liked the male supporting role very much, and when he saw me write the male supporting role to death, he wanted to strangle me, so writing the essay was also life-threatening.

Su Yanci: For the question just now, if you want to know how to write about pets and abuse, you can go and see Shenmao's "Cute Little Qingmei: The Demon Bamboo Horse is Too Black"

Does childhood sweetheart Marwen necessarily represent Xiaobai?

This,Actually, when I first wrote about my childhood sweetheart,It was Shen Mochen and Su Tao's one.,If I look back now.,I think it's actually quite white.,But the little childhood sweetheart.,I wrote some specific scenes in it.。

These scenes are real events that will happen in our lives, for example, Xiaotu's father is a soldier and died in flood relief, Xiaotu's mother is a doctor, and when SARS comes, she can only fight on the front line without caring about her family.

(Su Yanci: This will all appear in reality)

In fact, when we watch the news, we feel that those casualties are just a number, which is more likely to resonate with readers. But behind every number is a family, and then there are things where teachers abuse students, there is physical abuse, which is corporal punishment, and there is psychological abuse, such as discrimination against this student.

So after adding these contents, Xiaobaiwen will not seem so white. Of course, the main tone is still a little white.

(Su Yanci: These are very realistic, but these things are easy to resonate with readers and move readers)

Uh-huh, that's right.

In fact, as long as I still want to relax when I read the article, after all, life has been so hard, I can get a little fun from my article, haha laughed, I don't think it's very important whether it's Xiaobaiwen or not.

(Su Yanci: Most people who read the text still hope to find warmth and emotion from the text)

Yes, that's right, that's right.

When writing the story of Takema Qingmei, can you make the story before high school occupy a large part of the content?

This depends on the length of the article, because my text is generally not very long. The number of words in my childhood sweetheart's essay is not very long, around one million words, and one of my essays is more than a million words, and I was very excited.

So the story before high school,About one-third of the word count will be arranged.,I think the story before high school is the most cute paragraph.,Two people are in love at the beginning.,Like each other.,But there's no definite relationship.,All the little ambiguities.,Be careful.,It's all in that time.。

What part of my high school life I have had, personally, I think it's a bit difficult to write, because the relationship is determined, and the two of them are left with only Tian Tian Tian, pet pet.

(Su Yanci: The plot is starting to get boring)

At this time, it's time to start abusing men and women to neutralize it, but readers will urge you to let them grow up quickly and grow up quickly, so the story before high school is better to grasp it yourself.

Su Yanci: How to continue to write the story after high school, you can still go and see the cat's "Cute Little Qingmei: The Demon Bamboo Horse is Too Black" while being abused by the dog, and on the other hand, I was moved and worried by the twists and turns of the story of the male and female partners.

Generally, the male and female protagonists can't keep abusing the dog.,Sometimes there's a bit of a cold war.,Tsundere.,All kinds of ignoring people.,In this way,How did the cat pass on from the beginning of the pet?

Generally speaking, my male protagonists are slightly older than female protagonists, like Shen Mochen is two years older than Peaches, and then Chen Yiran is seven years older than Sweetheart, and Cheng Zhiyan is also seven years older than Little Rabbit, so my male protagonists will be more mature than female protagonists.

In this way, it is rare to have a misunderstanding or something, so the plot of the junior will generally not cause conflicts between the two. Then you can only find problems from the female owner.,Because the female owner is relatively small.,Not particularly sensible.,So for people who like her.,People who approach her are defenseless.,The female owner hasn't reacted yet.,The male owner has cut off the hope of the little three.,But the male owner is more mature than her.,You can see through the purpose of those people.。

So, sometimes the male protagonist will be stuffy and jealous, obviously it's already sour, but the female protagonist doesn't know anything. I like to write this kind of drama where the male protagonist is aggrieved and can't do it, and I am jealous and eats internal injuries. At this time, you can let the male protagonist find fault with the female protagonist.

Seeing that the heroine doesn't like anything, or doesn't pay attention to her, or doesn't care about her. So I unconsciously shifted from pampering to being angry with the Cold War.

(Su Yanci: In the end, it will be the fault of the male protagonist)

Uh-huh, that's right.

But it should be noted that the male protagonist can be jealous as much as he wants, and the female protagonist must not be easily jealous, if the female protagonist is jealous, the male protagonist is still blooming, and it will be easy to be scolded.

How does childhood sweetheart Wen make the pace faster? Don't drag on for a long time?

This is actually to pay attention to your rhythm when writing, if it's a fun thing, such as the sweet interaction between the male and female protagonists, it doesn't matter if it's a little longer, but if it's a trivial thing, you still have to pay a little attention to it.

Like I write, it usually looks like five watches a day...... Ahem, it's not very interesting to say this... However, I usually make sure that there is a joke or a cute point in the day's updates, which can better attract readers.

I used to read some texts.,When I was writing the plot.,I couldn't see the male and female protagonists together for a long time.。

If it's a plot flow,Of course, there's no problem.,Because the plot is enough to attract readers to follow.,But childhood sweethearts,It's not actually a plot.,Everyone knows,Elementary school,Junior high school,High school and college,Just write it all the way.,If you can't see the interaction between the male and female protagonists in two or three days of updates.,It's very dangerous.。

After all, if you like to watch childhood sweethearts, you still come for sweetness and petting. If you don't see the male protagonist and the female protagonist together for two or three days, then what's the point.

Doesn't it make the reader feel like it's a water plot?

Actually, I personally write essays, and there are quite a lot of dialogues. But it's still that principle, the dialogue between the hero and heroine should ensure that the dog is abused, and the dialogue of other people is slightly briefer.

(Su Yanci: Dialogue should be used to promote the development of the plot)

Readers generally fall in love with your male protagonist first.,If the male protagonist comes out to speak.,Readers will have a kind of resonance.,Feel like you're talking to yourself.,But if there's a lot of supporting roles.,You'll can't help but skip it.。

(Su Yanci: Readers rush to see the dog abuse plot between the male and female protagonists)

The heroines of cats are actually very ignorant, so how does the cat shape this character in the description of the heroine?

Actually, the heroine is very well written. It's most of the girls in my life, and there are a lot of them around me.

Yes, because it's not the president's text, if you're a childhood sweetheart, the heroine is a common girl in life. Of course, most of the heroines in fairy tales are also like this, kind, brave and simple.

(Su Yanci: The plot comes from life, and the character setting can also come from life, and if it comes from life, you will be more involved when you write, because you have brought your own real feelings) Love or hate, this is all true)

That's right, that's right.

Do cats have any advice for children's shoes that are just entering this circle? When choosing a theme, what type of choice is better?

Actually, when I first started writing, everyone wrote according to their own interests, and those who like to read ancient texts will try ancient sayings at the beginning, and those who like to read modern words will try modern words at the beginning, but I suggest that everyone can try them.

(Su Yanci: What kind of subject matter do you choose?) In order to make readers who read more online articles than the author not feel bored? οΌ‰

For example, although I love to read ancient sayings, readers love to read modern sayings.

In fact, in terms of subject matter, it still depends on their respective interests, and there are many unpopular themes. Some people will be popular when they write, and some people will be average when they write, and they still have to find a path that suits them when they write, don't blindly follow the trend, and write whatever they think is popular now.

(Su Yanci: In the same sentence, interest is the best teacher, but you have to try it yourself)

Yes. It's not good to follow the trend, you have to have your own style.

Is there anything else for cats to say to inexperienced children's shoes?

Children's shoes who have just started writing must persevere, and some newcomers who have just entered the circle will really feel particularly lost at the beginning...... Only their own enthusiasm, the results may not be satisfactory, persistence is the most important.

In fact, the road of writing, the important thing is to persevere, it is not difficult to write 10,000 a day, the difficult thing is to write 10,000 a day, many people just lose in the inability to adhere to this aspect, writing or something can be practiced, adhere to this kind of really rely on yourself.

How to write?

The standard outline of the starting point of the gods! Write according to this outline, it is unreasonable not to be popular!!

1. Crossing. A small white-collar worker in the city or a cattle person in a certain field died unexpectedly and crossed into another world.

2. Talent test.

Usually born in a poor family, my parents are so poor that they have no food to eat, and they are bullied everywhere.

One year, in the village or city or in the school, there was a talent test (take a stick for you to touch or lick, whoever is good is highly talented),

The protagonist is a blockbuster, anyway, it's either a special cow B, or a special waste of firewood.

3. Depot.

Usually this is the time for the plug-in to come out.

It doesn't matter if it's a bottle or a ring, but there is a feature that it must be small in size and easy to hide.

If you get an M4A1, you're bound to be chased by a group of red-eyed T's wielding knives.

Fourth, the entrance or entry.

At this time, it is generally entangled in two issues. Small. Brother and lessons.

There are only two causes of the dispute, the United States. The female or the gentleman is arrogant.

(The vendetta of life. Hate all starts with street fights, I really don't know if it's the author's sadness. Sadness, or the sorrow of the reader. Pity. οΌ‰

Five, the door. Paida. than or learn. Courtyard. Big. Compare.

This part of the content I generally characterize as a make-up. The number of deceptions. Money. width (a large. Kagura doesn't get tired of it) because it certainly doesn't make any sense to move the whole story forward.

It is nothing more than who is recognized as a master, born well, handsome, and liked by beautiful women, and the pig's feet are killed in the posture of a dark horse, and they are cut under the horse.

Everyone exclaimed, the world was shocked, and a generation of masters was born. (It felt like I imagined myself to be the first in the class in the English test, and the college entrance examination was still only 70 points.) οΌ‰

6. Trials.

After the game, under the leadership of pig's feet, everyone went to a place that is very dangerous in the legend, but not very dangerous, to fight monsters and explosive equipment.

(It's like when my roommate yelled all day to go to the pighole and go to Walmart.) οΌ‰

When I read these chapters, I always drag them straight to the end and see what equipment Pig's Feet picks up.

Many people despise the aura of the protagonist imposed by the author,

In fact, I think it is necessary to help others shout grievances, Duan Yu, Xuzhu, Ling Huchong, and Zhang Wuji are not all the same, everyone is an NPC, so don't say it.

At this point, there should basically be about 80-1 million words, and individual gods can reach 1 million to 1.5 million. I advise you to check your own works,

If you don't meet this standard, you'd better go back to Mars. This bowl of rice is really not suitable for a literary youth with a conscience like you. *******

7. Fight monsters and upgrade the map

This part is the time when you really test your great skills, and the reason why the gods have become gods is to show their extraordinary imagination in this part.

(I mean it from the bottom of my heart.) But there are three criteria to keep in mind:

1. The monster is always a little higher or lower than the pig's foot, no level 10 trumpet is willing to brush the ultimate boss, and there is no level 40 player who kills deer and chickens there all day long;

2. Kill as much as you want, there is no environmental protection department in the other world, don't worry about the environmental pollution caused by rotting corpses.

3. Animals are always evil, and plants are always beautiful.

When you are tired of chopping, remember to let the pig's feet eat a few wild fruits and drink a few mouthfuls of mountain springs, remember, those have only one brand - "Tiancai Dibao" brand, madeinqidian.

Another tip: remember that the starting point is charged by the number of words, and every word we have is money.

Aren't you complaining about the hard work of codewords? Here's your time for easy money! If you fight and write 3,000 words, that's if you don't have an IQ; Killing a monster in 6000 words shows that you are a bit economically minded; Teach a deflated three can write tens of thousands of words, OK, you are also a great god.

Don't hack the other party to death with a knife like Gu Long (I believe that if Gu Long was born thirty years later, there would definitely be no Li Xunhuan),

I want to go through with a knife, block it, stab it back, kick it again, block it, punch it back, block it again, and send a "ah Togo" again,

and blocked...... Have you ever played the arcade Street Fighter? A few more rounds, and the word count goes up.

8. Sweep the masters of the world.

Brother Chen said: One will succeed and ten thousand bones will wither.

Therefore, the famous master must be a bastard who does all kinds of evil, and we basically don't have to feel guilty when we kill his whole family and adulterate his wife and daughter.

In addition, keep in mind that masters all have treasures, immortals all have gods, and demonic beasts all have demon pills.

Let's keep in mind that we are NPCs, we are Shanda network administrators, and the treasures of the entire server are ours.

Remember, Bai Baoshan is a small fight, Zhang Ziqiang is even more courageless, Mao Zedong has worked hard all his life and only thinks about a mouthful of braised pork,

And we are the new youth of the new era, if we don't sleep with a hundred and eighty beauties, kill hundreds of millions of people, take drugs and rob to collect protection money...... How can you be worthy of so many grievances before crossing over?

9. Sanctification and divineness.

At this time, remember that this is an alien world, and there is no bigamy or family planning law.

Three wives and four concubines are small peasant thoughts, and people like Peng Wuwang's beautiful women who are upside down and pick and choose are even more undesirable.

What we want is to create people, creatures, and heaven and earth in batches. In short, do everything you didn't dare to think about and dare to do when you were a white-collar worker in your previous life.

By this time, you are invincible in the world, and the master is lonely. What to do? It seems that life has run out of pursuits...... Count the numbers, wow, more than 3 million words, remember, there is a tenth point.

10. Open a new book.

As the saying goes: the trajectory of success can be replicated.

Let's do it again, the little white who crossed last time was replaced by a special forces, a killer, a bartender, and a stripper......

This doesn't matter, we are all gods, let's say Brother Tao, you wear it for me, and Brother Tao doesn't dare to disobey.

Didn't you call it a fighter or a king last time? This time it's called Cloud Person, Cloud Saint, Cloud Computing, or Soul Emperor, Soul Emperor or something, it doesn't matter, it's set.

Continue, last time it was a school, this time it was a school, last time it was a school, this time it was a school, in short, we are literary youth, and the diploma is still very important.

Next......

Write according to this outline, if it is not popular, it can only mean that your writing is really not even at the level of graduating from primary school.

It is recommended that you hurry up and get off TJ, it's time to go to work, it's time to go to school, and don't waste our recommendation votes!

The first release of the book "Breaking the Firmament" has long been the first place in the Baidu search list, and once overwhelmed popular searches such as QQ.

Today, the book "Breaking the Firmament" is used as an example of the outline, and this outline is restored to the original work of "Breaking the Firmament", but whether the silkworm potato has an outline is still unknown, but this book has been completed, so it is not difficult to restore it according to the book.

The outline is as follows

The name of the work

[Breaking the Sky] is a comic-style book title, and a good book title is a beautiful face. Everyone wants to pet it or admire it.

World setting

XX Empire, located in XX on the mainland, was founded by XX Emperor, and there are XX forces and certain sects in the territory.

Three. Power system

The principle absorbs the qi between heaven and earth, and this kind of energy can be set by each person.

Hierarchy

One to nine sections of the fighting qi, fighter, fighter, big fighter, fighter, fighter

Monster Level

The first-order to ninth-order demon beasts can be set to play by themselves

"Nine Constituent Systems"

protagonist

Name: Xiao Yan, traverser

Golden Finger: When he was eight years old, he got the ring that imprisoned the soul of Yao Lao, so he was absorbed into his power and became a "waste", but after liberating Yao Lao, he got the help of Yao Lao, obtained a large number of high-grade pills, high-level exercises, and his strength improved by leaps and bounds

supporting

Heroine 1. Name: Xiao Xun'er, a girl with a lively personality, and Xiao Yan are close to their sweethearts and fall in love with each other. Mantra: Brother Yan is the best.

Name: Xiao Chong, the protagonist's father, a martial artist with a calm personality, and a senior fighter. Mantra: Yan'er is the best.

In terms of roles, special attention is paid to the character's image, character, mantra, strength and other characteristics. The story is people-oriented, and only when the characters are written can there be a sense of substitution, and ordinary plots can also be written wonderfully.

Skill setting

[Bajiquan] primary exercises, divided into ten layers, each more heavy, there is an extra layer of dark energy, also known as a sound, in order to highlight the advantages of the protagonist, the protagonist practiced eighteen sounds.

The top-level exercises taught to Xiao Yan by Yao Lao are similar to fire-based magic, in a world where the fighting spirit is rampant, the power of magic is invincible, and a forbidden spell magic, the Buddha's Fury Flame opportunity can kill a piece in seconds.

[Alchemy] The top pharmacist, the technique taught to Xiao Yan by the medicine elder, made Xiao Yan soak in the high-grade medicine jar since he was a child. Taking pills is like eating sugar, so the increase in strength is extremely terrifying.

The setting of skills, generally focusing on the skills of the protagonist, is mainly used to control the rhythm.

partner

The strength should be similar to Xiao Yan, such as the Little Medicine Immortal, the Ice Emperor. This partner is mainly about the help of the protagonist. When killing the Yunlan Sect, these partners played a role.

equip

Xuanzhong ruler: Given by Yao Lao, it is equivalent to taking the best novice equipment in the early stage.

Moon Armor: The ultimate equipment that the protagonist obtains in the later stages, which can resist forbidden spells.

Equipment settings, you can refer to online games, such as legendary, open slash, dragon slayer, blood drink, or other online game equipment, this one you can find your favorite.

venture

The main line is one, going out to travel, going to the three-year appointment, Shangyun Lanzong defeated his fiancΓ©e, and washed away the humiliation of repentance.

The second main line is to destroy the soul hall and save the old medicine.

Dark line 1: The family is connected to the ancient family

Dark line 2: Become a fighting emperor

Life

The Xiao family is one of the ancient families, and the protagonist and his family don't know that these secrets were revealed when the ancient families were born one by one in the later period

power

The Xiao family, the old medicine

harem

Xiao Xun'er

Yafei

Yunyun

The harem setting, referring to the protagonist setting, is mainly to conceive women with different personalities and different appearances, and there is always one that readers like.

Mainline architecture

The test failed, it was considered a waste, the clan brother humiliated and pulled the contradiction, Xiao Xun'er helped to solve the siege, pulled the harem line, and the fiancΓ©e came to the door to repent of the marriage, opening up the big contradiction and big pit in the early stage. Get the medicine old ring, pave the way for the big climax, for details, you can go to watch [Breaking the Sky],

The three-year covenant pulls the early plot structure, mainly the character description, fighting monsters and upgrading, treasure hunting, adventure, refining medicine to win the championship, and the first million words are written closely around this route.

The most important thing is the portrayal of the protagonist.

The main structure is not to refine the content of each chapter, as long as you set the key plot line, key characters, key props, and the appearance of exercises, remind yourself what to write at any time.

1. Opening remarks:

Hello everyone, I'm picking up. You don't need to call me teacher, I'm just a shallow learner, and I'm here to chat with you today. (Qingluo: Then please tell me about your views on the various types of male frequency creations.) There are many categories of male frequency, and newcomers often don't know how to choose the right theme for themselves when creating. In terms of subject matter, generally choose what you like, know more and be good at, and then look for the mainstream theme that is close to your favorite, develop your strengths and avoid weaknesses, and give full play to your advantages. If you ask someone who likes the supernatural to write about the city, then what will be written will be greatly reduced. A lot of attention to detail is often overlooked.

(Qingluo: Which of the popular themes of male frequency do you think is more suitable for newcomers to try?) Fantasy, fast-paced, cool, pretending to be forced to slap the face, especially force. Urban literature is also possible, after all, it is close to our lives, and there is a certain space for play. To a certain extent, the sub-category works depend on the area in which the author is special, and it is most important to refer to the current popular themes, and to meet the reader's taste. After all, making money now is the mainstream for novice readers. History and the like can be considered overhead, and the modern one with a bunch of experience is more suitable for Xiaobai.

2. Q&A

How do editors judge the quality of a work when reviewing an article?

First of all, the cornerstone that determines the quality of a novel is the text, the quality of the writing skills, and the depth of the storytelling ability, to a large extent, determine the final strength of your book. There is also the plot, too routine at a glance to know that imitation is definitely not good, the routine can be, but there is still something that belongs to you and can attract readers.

Fantasy novels can't work without coolness, right? Now fantasy is very popular, and many stalks have been used, and they are often sprayed when creating. How can we shape the character of our writing?

Let's put it this way, not to mention that as an editor, as a reader, coolness is the motivation for me to read a novel, not necessarily "without coolness", you have to consider that without coolness, what other parts of your article can attract readers. To increase the adhesion, the great god can consider the structure, and the newcomer is not enough to understand the innovation, so it is recommended to take Xiaobai Shuangwen. To be honest, there are definitely not as many stalks as male stalks, so there's no need to be too entangled. Isn't it still necessary to practice calligraphy?

Some people say that through a certain outline branch line and routine skeleton, this novel can completely meet the taste of the niche, so if it is said that a new skeleton is launched, then this person will definitely hit the street?

I don't agree with that. At present, all the routines you see are not there, they are all written by people. To use an easy-to-understand analogy, writing a small white essay is like depositing money in the bank. Mainstream and with a solid income, if you want to go your own way, it's like being a venture capitalist. Success and failure, half and half. I think that unless you have a particularly good idea, and have done some consideration and research, it is better to write Xiaobaiwen to cultivate your enthusiasm and confidence in writing a book. Learning the highlights of Xiaobai, it is not recommended to innovate completely.

When it comes to fantasy, there is another important topic: the problem of world view, the structure of a world is basically not simulated by a mold, how can a newcomer establish a worldview structure suitable for his novel?

If you are a newcomer, you should mainly imitate and borrow. A completely innovative book requires a complete view of the world. The worldview of Xiaobai's routine essay can be smaller at first and write what can be used. Expand slowly in the future, don't make it clear at one time, you can keep giving readers a sense of freshness.

In the creative genre of male frequency, is the supernatural text popular? Also, how does the supernatural text begin? The supernatural texts of the female frequency are usually ghost husbands, ghost marriages or something. The supernatural of male frequency, what good direction can you choose?

After the development of the supernatural over the years, it is already a big category. Palm reading also has a special supernatural channel, good direction, these years are more obvious, such as urban weird talk, rural weird, and professional supernatural texts, such as Taoist, jumping god, fortune telling, and the like. (Qingluo: I remember that there was an online drama called "Urban Monster Talk", so what is the difference between the urban monster talk in the supernatural classification and the urban classification?) Urban weirdness doesn't go into urban classification.,We all divide this kind of text into the supernatural.,What's the difference?,Urban literature,The focus is on pretending to be forced to slap the face and flirt with the girl.,The focus of the supernatural class must be to say that Ah Piao and strange things.。

How can I tell if my text is suitable for a eunuch? Reopened, no longer written.

Whether the subject matter is mainstream, whether the grades are satisfactory, and the number of words. Three aspects. Ye Chen: Fantasy has a million words, and the city can judge fate with about 400,000 words. The city of about 400,000 words has not improved, and the future results will be relatively limited. Fantasy really needs to rely on the number of words, so you have to think about it before you write it. The supernatural is similar to the city, mainly depending on the early stage.

Ye Chen, can you talk about it first, his opinion on the supernatural text?

Ye Chen: The market for traditional supernatural is relatively limited, so the kind of supernatural that writes horror at the beginning will not be too optimistic. In the case of a large number of novice readers, the kind of book that is down-to-earth at the beginning and has a gimmick and develops in the direction of the supernatural step by step is more popular. For example, Heiyan has a book called Yin Soul Borrowing, I saw a small advertisement at the beginning, a rich girl asks for a son with a lot of money, and the protagonist is a dick, and she is very short of money, so I happened to see it, and I was moved. Why, they have a certain fantasy, and then the protagonist can have an ambiguous relationship with a female ghost, and the plot is drawn out like this. (So that's why it's said that editors can see the potential of this book according to the beginning) Such books also include hearses, forbidden places for the living, etc.,The effect of drainage in Black Rock is very good.,Black Rock is using similar works and first-person youth abuse to make the traffic up.,The data on the channel of such a book is unclear.,But it's very important for the main site.。

How to control the supernatural text to a certain extent, so that the reader can accept it. Some supernatural texts are written very bloody and terrifying, how to control this?

Ye Chen: Don't be too supernatural at the beginning, find a good entry point, start from life, and gradually find the unusual in ordinary events, the beginning of a small advertisement is a good example, this kind of thing can be seen everywhere, and then it comes out later, which is a small advertisement that only the protagonist can see, and the effect comes out immediately. To put it bluntly, the supernatural is a process in which the protagonist gradually explores the extraordinary in ordinary things. Reader enjoyment is the process of exploration, not how terrifying it is.

When describing the scene, how to perfectly render the atmosphere of the supernatural environment, and how to describe the fight scene with the ghosts?

Ye Chen: You don't need to think about these in the first tens of thousands of words, you can postpone it later, this kind of fight is mainly recommended to be thrilling or something, it's hard to say specifically, it depends on what you write. It's not ordinary to reveal in the ordinary.,This kind of atmosphere is the key.,Or take the ordinary little things as the starting point.,Yes,Chalang has a ghost wife who seems to be called a ghost wife.,The beginning is that Dick Si bought an inflatable doll.,A very ordinary and attractive beginning.,As a result, there is a problem with this inflatable doll.,Start exploring from ordinary small things.。

When writing about the supernatural, if you accidentally write it collapses. The structure can't be controlled by itself, or the plot is too big, so how can I pull the plot back in time?

Ye Chen: This is very difficult, in fact, most books are only about the creativity at the beginning, and then you can write according to the routine, such as the ghost borrowing, the small advertisement at the beginning is very cool, and there is no plot in the back, it is written as a Xiuzhen routine, and the protagonist repairs the ghost, so it is really not easy to write it and want to pull it back.

After the supernatural text is written for a long time, it will inevitably cause the problem of the protagonist's ability to be too strong, so after all, it is not easy to write a book, how to skillfully transform it into Xianxia or fantasy?

Ye Chen: Everyone has read the book of the school flower's sticker master, how to solve his method of the protagonist's overpower, go to Tianjie Island, and play in a different plane. I've seen the supernatural, the human world, after playing, go to the underworld, you can turn to physiognomy and the like, after all, this is very close. However, the structure of the map is different, the essence is the same, suspense to be honest, there are not many people to see, and there are few achievements, and some websites will have custom books that find authors for IP adaptation, which are not within the scope of newcomers' thinking.

Writing supernatural texts generally has to find a lot of information, often involving the art of Qimen Dunjia gossip, so for newcomers to write supernatural texts, does Ye Chenchen have any recommended books?

Ye Chen: This is very troublesome, you can take a look at the famous and vulgar ones, you can take a look at the Xuankong Flying Star Chart, you can take a look at the Xuankong Flying Star Chart, Yang Zhai Feng Shui Ten Days, I forgot the titles of several books, I can upload them to the group to share when I go back.

For the creation of the supernatural, does Ye Chenchen have anything else to add?

Ye Chen: It is strongly recommended to write about the supernatural to go out and walk more, and carefully observe your own life, you will find that many subjects can be written, and the grounding of the supernatural is stricter than the requirements of the city. If it's a traditional supernatural, it's still the old routine, but I can only wish you good luck, and that depends on luck. But if you want to drain the traffic, you have to see what kind of title and specific writing, wait a minute, I'll find a screenshot of the case for you to see.?

These books are all drained by other websites in this forum.,Baidu Tieba has it.,If you're interested, you can refer to it.。

What kind of requirements should be met in general recommendations, and how can a book with potential be discovered, which is worth recommending?

Ye Chen: If you have fun, you must read PK!!! (In fact, the websites of Zhangyue's subsidiaries are like this, but we will be very full~~~) to test the water and push the data increase, and there will be editors to judge. In the past, when I was chasing waves, I would give recommendations to the author coldly without any notice. to see if the data contains moisture. Prevent brushes, I hope the author understands. Preheating is actually a test of the water, but the palm reading traffic is large, unless it is a professional brush, it is difficult for private individuals. There are balances in your heart, everyone can rest assured.

How can a new author judge that his work is qualified? Is it in terms of data?

Ye Chen: I've looked at different platforms, so I asked the editor directly

[In this way, this 'editor' is actually a big man with considerable power, and I have to pay attention to it......]

Tang Zhu's "Camel Xiangzi of the Republic of China" has been completed for most of the time, and there are only seven days left before the deadline. However, Tang Zhu is confident that this time, he will definitely be able to pass the monthly test!