"We walked in the fields: me, my mother, my wife and daughter. Pen & Fun & Pavilion www.biquge.info

Mother didn't want to come out. She is old, her health is not good, and she feels very tired when she walks a little farther. I said that it was for this reason that I should go more, and my mother nodded convincingly, and went to get her coat. She listened to me as much as I did when I was a kid......"

Under the guidance of Cheng Feng, Keer began to bury her head in writing on the text, and she wrote very seriously one stroke at a time, and it seems that she also wants to win the ranking in this essay competition. In this way, it may be possible to draw the attention of both parents to themselves.

"But my wife and I walked slowly, steadily, carefully, as if what I had on my back and what she was on was the whole world."

When Kerr finished writing the last paragraph, she carefully checked whether the article was smooth and coherent, whether the punctuation was used accurately, and corrected the typos a little, and the article was completed.

The article "Walking" is actually Mo Huaiqi's description of his family of four walking in the field, the text of the whole article is simple and unpretentious, and the words are full of family affection. People can't help but empathize with it when they read it, and feel that such a mundane thing is happening around them.

It doesn't need to be vigorous, and it doesn't need too many flowery rhetoric to embellish. Or family affection is the most unpretentious, the most delicate emotion. Reading this article, Ke'er thought of the broken family now, and her eyes couldn't help but turn red.

It's just that Ke'er didn't want Cheng Feng to see her tears, she rubbed her eyes and asked, "Uncle Cheng, this article is written from my father's point of view...... Is there really nothing wrong with this way of writing? Ke'er conceived this article according to Cheng Feng's guidance, which she had never tried to write.

"Although the article is written from your father's perspective, as long as the article shows true feelings, it can only impress the judges...... Don't worry, just hand in the article. ”

Cheng Feng felt that this article was a prose written by Mo Huaiqi, a great writer in his previous life! This article was even selected into the junior high school Chinese textbook, if this article did not get a ranking in this competition, it is really intolerable.

There is no clear restriction on the subject matter of this essay competition, only students are required to record their daily life, and the composition is required to have a sense of truth.

It was already more than ten o'clock in the evening after Cheng Feng finished tutoring Ke'er, Cheng Feng said hello to Sun Lili's family, and left in a hurry. Kerr put the written essay in her school bag, waited for the school to go to school tomorrow, and handed in the finished essay.

Xiangyang Middle School is a key middle school in the North District of Jingshi, and its admission rate is among the best in the North District. It is also because Xiangyang Middle School has a strong learning atmosphere and pays attention to the all-round development of students. The 'Parent-Child Essay Contest' jointly organized by several companies in the North District also attracted the attention of Xiangyang Middle School.

IN THE SECOND (3) CLASS OF JUNIOR HIGH SCHOOL, A GROUP OF MALE CLASSMATES GATHERED AROUND IN THE MORNING, AND THESE MALE CLASSMATES WERE GOSSIPING TOGETHER, AND THEIR ATTENTION WAS FOCUSED ON ONE CLASSMATE'S IPAD.

"Ahhh......h ZHOU BIN, YOU BROUGHT AN IPAD INSTEAD OF IT TO PLAY GAMES, BUT USED HIM TO READ NOVELS, WHAT KIND OF NOVEL IS THIS? A thin-looking male classmate nicknamed Oda asked.

Zhou Bin said proudly: "THIS IPAD IS A GIFT THAT MY PARENTS SOLD ME WHEN THEY TRAVELED TO THE UNITED STATES...... Those Android games are boring to death, you little kids like to play, and I'm now chasing the novel "Zhu Xian" on the Internet, which is much more interesting than the game. ”

Or Zhou Bin is so keen to watch "Zhu Xian", and led a craze for watching "Zhu Xian" in the class. Or Zhang Xiaofan entered Qingyunmen at the same age as these male classmates, or the ignorant love described in the book resonated with the male classmates, so the momentum of the whole class chasing "Zhu Xian" did not slow down.

However, as the class teacher and Chinese teacher of the second (3) class of junior high school, Ji Xiaojun also noticed that there were students in the class chasing online novels, she felt that these online novels were not nutritious, and chasing these online novels would only delay her studies, so she repeatedly ordered and forbade the students in the class to watch the novel "Zhu Xian".

in the office.

Ji Xiaojun was reviewing the essays handed in by his classmates, and the article "Father" in front of him was neatly written by Chen Li, the representative of the Chinese class in the class.

Ji Xiaojun looked at this article and smiled with satisfaction, Chen Li is worthy of being the representative of the section appointed by herself, not to mention the gorgeous language, the more important composition structure is decent, it is indeed a good work, if you want to say that the only deficiency is that this article is as old-fashioned as a textbook, and it does not let Ji Xiaojun see anything new.

"Out of 100, this article can score 80 points. Let's take a look at the following essays, if there is no better essay, I have to send "Father" to the class for the election. ”

Ji Xiaojun muttered to herself, she didn't have classes in the afternoon, she was in the office all afternoon to correct the composition, and seeing that there were still a few texts, she finished correcting them, so far she still felt that Chen Li's "Father" was the best article in the class.

However, when Ji Xiaojun opened a composition text, he saw the title of the essay with the word "Walking". This couldn't help but arouse Ji Xiaojun's great interest.

Because she corrected more than 40 articles in the class, the students all used straight to the point, just like Chen Li's essay "Father", which can be seen at a glance to praise the greatness of father's love, and what theme does the previous "Walk" express? The title alone is enough to attract Ji Xiaojun to continue reading.

"We walked in the fields: me, my mother, my wife and daughter ......"

Ji Xiaojun originally thought that the article was so strange, it was the student who wrote the article from his father's point of view, and at first he thought the article was bland, but after reading it, he felt that the environment was well described, and the writing was very meaningful, which attracted Ji Xiaojun to continue reading.

“…… But the mother touched her grandson's little brain and changed her mind: 'Let's take the path.' Her eyes followed the path: there were golden cauliflowers, two neat rows of mulberry trees, and a sparkling fish pond at the end. 'Where I can't go, you carry me on your back.' My mother said to me. ”

So we walked in the sun towards the cauliflower, the mulberry tree, and the fish pond. When I got there, I squatted down and picked up my mother, and my wife also squatted down and picked up my daughter. My mother, though tall, was very thin and naturally not heavy; Although her daughter is very fat, she is young after all, and she is naturally light. But my wife and I walked slowly, steadily, and carefully, as if what was on my back and what was on her back added up to the whole world. ”

Ji Xiaojun finished reading the whole "Walk" in one go, and she closed her eyes. The thoughts in my heart were originally as horizontal as a mirror, but this "Walk" was like a stone thrown into the water, stirring up waves and waves...... Ji Xiaojun's thoughts couldn't calm down for a long time, especially the last paragraph of text was written very straightforwardly, which made Ji Xiaojun's eyes redden.

The scenes in the article are so similar, some things may happen around you and me. After reading this article, Ji Xiaojun couldn't help but think of his elderly father and mother in the countryside.

"I don't know how they're doing from afar?" Ji Xiaojun couldn't help but wonder, the place where he works is thousands of miles away from the countryside, or he can only talk to his parents on the phone at night to relieve his worries!

"By the way, who wrote this article exactly?"

Ji Xiaojun quickly flipped to the front of the text, and it was written 'Zhou Keer'. In Ji Xiaojun's impression, Zhou Keer's composition level is not high, and the last Chinese monthly test essay was off-topic, thinking that this "Walk" is so good, it must be Zhou Keer's father who helped him write it.

And writing the essay from the perspective of the father affirms Ji Xiaojun's inference, but this 'parent-child essay contest' is to let the children complete the essay with their parents, so Ke'er's approach is not cheating.