Chapter 31 Essay "Walking"
Ke'er was at a loss for the wrong questions on the test paper, but after Cheng Feng's interesting induction, the doubts and difficulties that plagued her at the beginning were easily solved. Pen | fun | pavilion www. biquge。 info
Cheng Feng said to Ke'er: "Now I give some ideas, and then you can also follow this idea to summarize, as long as we find the right method, in fact, learning itself is full of fun." ”
Kerr nodded, and then she took out the English test paper, Cheng Feng took a look, and felt that among so many subjects, Kerr had the best English score, but some words were always unrememberable, and there were misspellings in the exam.
"These words are hard to remember, is there a good way to remember English words?" Ke'er asked Cheng Feng for help.
Cheng Feng's mind turned, and he extracted tips and methods for memorizing words from the memory palace. Soon, Cheng Feng wrote on scratch paper: "economy, economy. Cheng Feng said: "This word can be remembered like this: 'relying on farmers'." ”
One of the English questions is spelling words, but Ke'er often can't remember the word 'economy', which leads to a deduction of points, and Cheng Feng memorizes it according to the Mandarin homonym of the word 'economy'.
At first, Ke'er was confused, but when she linked the pronunciation of 'economy' to 'rely on farmers', she immediately laughed knowingly.
"Yes, if the economy wants to develop, it has to rely on the farmers." Ke'er hurriedly memorized the word list, lest she forget it again after a while.
Immediately afterwards, Keer asked Cheng Feng again, "How do you remember 'custom, customs'?" ”
Cheng Feng replied: "Stuck them?." ”
"'Landlord, landlord'?"
"Too lazy to work."
"'Ambition, ambition'?"
"I will win"?
"'Strong, strong'?"
"Dead strong?"
"'Admire, envy'?"
"Uh,?."
"'temper, temper'?"
"Too splash."?
"'pregnant, pregnant'?"
"A man?."
"'Ambulance, ambulance'?"
"I can't die."
Keer asked questions continuously, and Cheng Feng continuously gave Mandarin homonyms to make it easier for Keer to remember. When it came to 'ambulance', Kerr couldn't help but laugh, "Ambulance, ambulance", 'I can't die. How vivid and apt!
It is precisely because of this that the words that Ke'er couldn't remember before were memorized in this way! This method is fun to live with, unlike the previous memorization of words, and the words are remembered firmly, and there is no fear that they will be forgotten later!
"Uncle Cheng, I love you to death!" Don't look at Ke'er's delicate dripping, she looks like a soft girl, but in fact she is a swaggering female man! At this time, it was difficult to hide the excitement in his heart, so he had to hug Cheng Feng.
However, Cheng Feng stopped Ke'er's behavior, because today this little girl has already kissed her face fiercely, if she is still hugged by Ke'er at Sun Lili's house, it is estimated that she will be accused of seducing underage girls.
When Sun Lili cleaned up the table, she passed through the side hall and saw Cheng Feng tutoring Ke'er's homework, so she said: "Ke'er asked me about my homework before, but my level is limited, and I can't answer. ”
Ke'er is still very grateful to Cheng Feng in her heart, because usually when she comes home, she sees pictures of her parents arguing! It's good for your parents to be able to talk to you quietly, let alone ask them for homework. Now Cheng Feng has made up for Ke'er's homework in an interesting way, and Ke'er regards this 'weird Shu Xiao' as a relative.
However, mathematics and English can be improved by the methods taught by Cheng Feng, but the biggest headache for Keer is composition. The other questions in this monthly Chinese exam are answered better, and there is no big problem, but the Chinese writing is off topic, and the teacher only gave 30 points as a comfort score for the 60-point essay question.
If you want to improve your essay score, you don't have to teach the method to improve it quickly, you also need to read a lot of excellent sample essays to be able to improve your essay score in a real way.
Cheng Feng helped Kerr re-examine it as a topic, clarified the central idea and writing direction of the composition, and let Kerr know how to review the topic clearly, and in the future, Kerr will also write essays according to the methods taught by Cheng Feng, at least to ensure that the written articles will not go off-topic.
Although she received counseling from Cheng Feng, her face still seemed to be cloudy. She took out a notice of the essay contest from her school bag, which was an essay contest jointly organized by the middle schools of the entire Beijing Normal School, with the aim of students and parents to participate in writing together, so that children's writing skills can be improved and the relationship between children and parents can be enhanced.
It's just that...... Kerr's parents quarrel and divorce every day, where do they still have the heart to watch Kerr's homework? Not to mention writing essays with Kerr, Kerr only feels like an abandoned orphan, how she wants her parents to be reconciled and return to that harmonious family!
But these are just their own delusions! Parents are usually busy with work, and they don't have time to listen to their hearts...... Or where they have a lot more important than their own ticket.
Cheng Feng also heard about the situation at Ke'er's family from Sun Lili's mouth, and this essay competition notice was like an invisible sword stabbing Ke'er's heart, Cheng Feng couldn't help but sympathize with Ke'er, or this ghost spirit is strong on weekdays, in order not to let people see through the fragility in her heart.
Cheng Feng comforted Ke'er and said, "Okay, let me participate in this essay contest with you...... What is your most memorable memory with your parents? ”
Ke'er originally planned to write an article by herself, and it would be a matter to hand it in, but she didn't expect Cheng Fengfeng to take the initiative to participate in this essay contest with her! Ke'er held her cheeks and thought about it, and said: "During the summer vacation two years ago, I went to my grandmother's house to play...... How I want to go back to that time! It was a dull time, but I felt very happy. ”
Kerr then described her grandmother, father, and mother walking in the fields with her. Cheng Feng listened to it, and it could be seen that Ke'er was very worried about that good time. According to the scene described by Ke'er, Cheng Feng immediately thought of an article "Walking" written by Mo Huaiqi in his previous life.
"Walking", essay, by Mo Huaiqi, written in 1985. Because it is a kind of "emotion of life", it is destined to be lyrical, "because I am not good at poetry, it becomes prose". Therefore, the genre is often not deliberately chosen by the author, but is really just a natural result. In the previous life, this article was included in the first volume of the seventh grade of the People's Education Edition as the first lesson article.
The language of "Walking" is simple and simple, but the connotation is rich and intriguing, and the article is like an olive, and the more you chew it, the more you feel it.
"Alright, Kerr, you can use your father's vision to write an essay called 'Walking'. I'll show you how to write it. ”
Cheng Feng said, searched for the original text of "Walking" from the memory palace, and combined with Ke'er's personal experience, he made a few changes.