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Zhang Yao and Yunsheng, who made a mistake because of their greed for a while, repented with a worried face, waiting to be forgiven, and Yexi seemed to have completely forgotten about it.

Well, in fact, she didn't explicitly mention it, because the two of them were weak-hearted.

The character design of "Love Ji Wushuang" was placed on the table, and Yexi flipped through it casually, "It's really a beautiful painting style, I know at a glance that it is from the handwriting of Teacher Yao, but it doesn't look like a comic." ”

"Well, in fact, we are making a game, preparing to participate in the exhibition at T28, this is all the character design and part of the vertical painting, and there are many pictures that Zhang Yao has not had time to draw." Although I don't know what Yexi wants to say, Yunshang still explains very honestly.

"Oh, it's actually a game, it's really amazing for high school students now, it reminds me of Teacher Xiqiu." Yexi looked amazed, and Yunshang said modestly: "Generally, it is also the top three in the world." ”

"Looks like it's going to be a pretty good game, is it eighteen forbidden?" When Yexi asked Zhang Yao and Yunshang like this, they didn't speak, although it is not a restrictive level, but "Love Ji Wushuang" is really an adult, and both of them are only sixteen years old this year.

Yexi laughed again, feeling a little demonic, and said, "It's not good for girls to make this type of game, so please be sure to give me a copy when the game is finished." ”

My sister, what are you trying to express, Zhang Yao is completely messy.

"Sister Yexi, what we were just talking about doesn't seem to be a game." Zhang Yao said weakly.

Yexi bowed her head lightly, and took out the manuscript that Zhang Yao had submitted before from her bag, "Then I won't talk about the topic of the game for the time being, I'm glad that you didn't delay the draft when you made the game, but the content of this sentence should be revised again by Mr. Yao." ”

"Ah, Sister Yexi, are you really here to reject the manuscript?" Until now, Zhang Yao still can't believe it.

The original work of "Dragon Ball" is Akira Toriyama, and this will be rejected? Is it true that comics are the same as literature, in fact, there is no standard at all, even if the works written (drawn) by the great writers (cartoonists) are handed over to the teacher for correction, the teacher will still write a large comment pointing out the problems.

Zhang Yao was stunned for a moment, and Ye Xi took out a sketch and said: "In the second episode, Bulma thought that Wukong was just a child bathing him, and you drew Chiguoguo's Wukong and even Xiao Ding Ding, and I was surprised at first." ”

The cartoon drawn by a sixteen-year-old girl seems to be really weird enough to have such a description, and Zhang Yao is a little embarrassed to think about it.

The second episode of "Dragon Ball" actually has no substance, Goku and Bulma sleep in the mountains and live in a capsule (?) Out of the house, Bulma bathes Goku, and then Goku goes into the bathroom to watch Bulma take a bath.

Then Goku took off Bulma's underwear and took a closer look, because Bulma didn't have a "ball" to startle the simple Goku......

"The story of Dragon Ball is a bit lustful from the beginning, but it doesn't hurt, and the content of the second episode is of course not out of bounds, after all, from a child's point of view, it's actually nothing at all, and it's within the scope of acceptance."

The second word was not beaten back, and now the manuscript in Yexi's hand is the fourth word.

In the third episode, Little Goku rescues a turtle and brings it to the beach, and the turtle who returns the favor brings one of the most important characters in the early stage of Dragon Ball, the Turtle Immortal.

In the fourth episode, in order to express his gratitude, the turtle immortal gave the following Douyun to Little Wukong, and the envious Bulma also asked for a gift, and happened to see the three-star dragon ball on the turtle immortal, so he asked the turtle immortal for it.

The color of the turtle fairy is also well known, and in exchange for the Dragon Ball on the condition of looking at Bulma's underwear, Bulma readily agreed, only to find out afterwards that she was not wearing panties at all, and the panties had already been taken off by Little Goku.

What the turtle immortal saw was......

In fact, there are two versions of the original work of this scene, one is that Bulma gently lifts the clothes with his hands together, and the picture reaches the vest line, and the following part is of course omitted.

There is also a Bulma who lifted her clothes with her hands wide open, and her entire ass was exposed, and the reader could clearly see that she was not wearing panties, which should be the difference between the serialization time and the single book, and Zhang Yao took the first one.

The result is still tragic, of course, now Zhang Yao doesn't feel this pornography, although the scale is a little bigger.

"Uh, what's wrong with that?" Zhang Yao asked weakly again.

Yexi said: "There is no problem with scale, but many times the plot can't just take care of the review criteria, and it should be considered more from the reader's point of view." ”

Zhang Yao nodded thoughtfully, this is true, even if she painted Bulma and married the turtle immortal, it would not be illegal for the two of them to get married and have children, and they would definitely not provoke the relevant departments, but in this case, the reader would set fire to their house.

Yexi continued: "So you have to consider the reader's feelings, Bulma is the heroine, and there are some erotic interactions with Wukong, and the audience likes to see it, but if it is taken advantage of by a character like the Turtle Immortal, the reader will not be able to accept it, and if it is published, it will definitely be protested." ”

"Well, I really didn't think about it." Zhang Yao didn't know whether to cry or laugh anymore, no matter how she was, she couldn't imagine that it would be such a reason.

"NTR is absolutely forbidden, and you have to keep in mind that unless you want to take revenge on society, you must never draw such a plot. A few years ago, there was a cartoonist in the king of painting, and he died because of drawing such a plot. ”

Zhang Yao was taken aback when she heard this, "Isn't it, it's so serious?" How did he die? ”

Ye Xi said: "Fell off the cliff and died." ”

“……”

"Sister Yexi, don't make fun of me, okay." Yexi is obviously a very gentle person, but he likes to play tricks, Zhang Yao is going crazy.

Yexi said again: "I'm not joking with you, it's because he drew the plot of NTR that the reader blocked the door, and he didn't dare to go home so he hid in the mountains, and as a result, he fell to his death." ”

"It sounds terrifying, but I didn't plan to draw the plot of NTR in the first place, so it's definitely no problem." Zhang Yao doesn't like NTR either, how can she be so disgusting that she can't eat for ten days and half a month, but she doesn't mind going to NTR to others......

Ye Xi said: "Because similar signs have emerged from this sentence, I think I should remind you in advance." Never think too much of the reader's tolerance, the slightest thing may break through their defenses, so this must be changed. ”

"Okay, I'll change it." Zhang Yao nodded helplessly.