Although the reason for rejection may sound a bit nonsense, it actually makes a lot of sense when you think about it. Pen & Fun & Pavilion www.biquge.info

Different groups will always have different aesthetics and preferences, and there are cultural barriers between the East and the West on the same earth, and it is completely understandable that the degree of acceptance is completely different across the distance of two time and space.

Looking back, Zhang Yao felt that the lower half of Bulma Chiguoguo's body in "Dragon Ball" was watched by the turtle immortal, and this scene was nothing special, in fact, it was also an inertial thinking left over from childhood.

When I was a child, I didn't know much about watching "Dragon Ball", and I didn't think about the question of whether it was green or not, so of course it didn't matter if it was this kind of plot.

Now put yourself in your shoes, if your girlfriend is looked at by another man, it must be a very embarrassing thing, and it is psychologically difficult to accept.

What's more, Bulma still deliberately let the turtle fairy see it, if it was placed in an online novel, countless netizens would have exploded, what kind of heroine is this, it's just a green tea.

The author who writes this kind of plot picks up the bricks thrown by the reader is definitely enough to build a house, and it is strange not to be sprayed to death, and maybe he can't escape the reader's resentment without changing the vest.

Change, it has to be changed, and it's not just this scene, Bulma's setting should also be adjusted.

In the early stages of "Dragon Ball", Bulma is not only a nymphomaniac, but also seems too open, and her purpose in finding Dragon Ball is to make a wish to find a handsome Prince Charming.

is nothing, and it seems that this point of openness needs to be revised, and it would be tragic if the reader really scolded Bulma for being a green tea and didn't read it.

In fact, it's not just Bulma, their family is quite open-minded, the first time Little Wukong went to Bulma's house, Bulma's mother said that she wanted to go with them to find a handsome guy.

And her father's first reaction was to ask them to bring a beautiful woman back, although it may be just a joke, but it is also very revealing.

The editor said well, never think too much of the reader's tolerance, she thinks it's a joke, but what if the reader is more serious? It's better to put an end to it in advance.

"The question is how to change it?" Thinking about this, the first problem Zhang Yao faced was how to change the fourth sentence.

The fact that the turtle fairy is a perverted old man can't be moved, his character can not only be used for funny, but also related to a lot of plots later, Kulin Ke just went to the door after what he liked.

"How do I know, you ask me?" Yun Sheng didn't raise his head, indicating that he couldn't give any advice.

"It's better to just let Bulma wear safety pants, because I didn't find my underwear in the morning, so I happened to change into the safety pants when I wore a short skirt, which is reasonable, and this can also hint by the way that she is actually quite a conservative person."

Yunshang looked at Zhang Yao's school skirt and said, "Is this the so-called art that comes from life and is higher than life?" ”

Zhang Yao's childhood memories of "Dragon Ball", in addition to anime, there is also a live-action movie made in Taiwan, although this movie is thunderous enough from the perspective of later generations, but it is also very enjoyable to watch when I was a child.

There is also a scene in this movie where the turtle immortals take advantage of the heroine, and their solution is to make Zhu Bajie (Oolong) become the heroine to coax the turtle immortals.

This is also a good way, but unfortunately the oolong has not appeared yet, so it is still reliable safety pants.

Knowing that he was wearing safety pants and not afraid to look at it, he promised that the turtle fairy had deceived the dragon ball, so that not only would he not respond to readers with low defense, but also reflect Bulma's cleverness, and there was nothing more suitable than this.

In the end, the reaction of the turtle immortal also had to be modified.,Originally, I saw that the body and mind were more exciting than I imagined.,Now it's going to turn into the unwillingness to see the safety pants.。

"Thank you, Sister Cannon, thank you for the safety pants. Long live Sister Cannon, long live safety pants. Zhang Yao, who had always firmly believed that safety pants were the worst invention in the world, was cheering for safety pants at this time.

After the fourth episode was published, everything was calm and did not cause any reader interviews, on the contrary, the feedback from the reader survey was not bad.

After four episodes, it also indicates that "Dragon Ball" has passed the preferential period, and if the next four consecutive episodes (because it is a bi-weekly episode) rank in the bottom three in the survey results, it will be cut in half.

No matter how good the works are after the halving, they can only go to the "Solo Singer Square" to end after serializing a few paintings, although this magazine is to avoid too many and created works that are cut in half, but in fact, most of the works that have been cut in half are still unfinished, and it can only be said that there are no eunuchs, and there is more or less an ending.

The influence of this magazine is much smaller, and it will be cut in half, which also shows that it is not popular, no matter what type of creation, for the creator, it is hard for no one to read it.

No one wants to watch it, and few people can stick to it.

In principle, the works serialized in "Solo Singing Square", if the popularity can be brought back to life, you can still continue to return to the serialization of "Young Troupe", but after being cut in half by the latter, the author still draws at his own pace, although there are, but there has never been one that can be killed.

After four episodes, "Dragon Ball" ranked fifteenth in the survey results, although the story has not really unfolded, but with its profound skills, beautiful painting style and humorous story, many readers still expressed their expectations.

Speaking of which, it may be because of the influence of this body, if it weren't for Zhang Yao's deliberate control, her painting style would be more suitable for drawing girl's comics, and in the absence of being able to imitate Toriyama's painting style, the comics have a more bright feeling, and you can see the girl-like shadow.

She felt a little awkward, but it made sense to others.

Yunshang also read the results of the investigation for the first time, shook his head and said: "It's only the fifteenth, girl, you have to continue to work hard, this can only be regarded as barely standing on the relegation line, and you may be stuck at any time." ”

Before this, because the new works did not participate in the ranking during the preferential period, it was not clear what the results were before, and I didn't have to refer to it, but it will definitely be higher and higher, and Zhang Yao still has this confidence.

"The first time I participated in the rankings, I was already satisfied with this ranking, and I don't believe that the plot behind it can still make people slide down."

More exciting stories are yet to come, and the rankings can only get higher and higher.

"Alright then, since everything is going well with your comics, let's talk about the game." After school, Yunshang put away the books and said with a bitter face: "Why did the previous program be good, but it collapsed directly as soon as the copywriting and CG were embedded?" ”

"How do I know, you ask me?" Zhang Yao rolled her eyes and replied.

Yunshang didn't know anything about painting, and Zhang Yao didn't know anything about writing programs, and when they encountered problems, the two could only stare at each other, and they could hardly help each other before.

"Ahh Yunshang grabbed her head and looked up to the sky and roared twice, people who didn't know the truth thought she was deceived when they heard it, so what could they regret it.

"I'm checking today, what is the BUG, I really can't do it, I can only take it back and ask someone for help."

The production process of the game was frustrated, Yunshang walked dejectedly beside Zhang Yao and went to the activity room together, on the lawn on the left in front of the door of the complex, a boy stood under the tree and looked at the sky stupidly.

Seeing the two of them coming, his expressions became very deep, and he wiped his hair and said, "Today's wind is so noisy." ”

A gust of wind blew very appropriately, blowing the branches of the trees, blowing the boys' school uniforms, and also blowing the skirts of Zhang Yao and Yunshang's ears, Zhang Yao's hip-length hair fluttering in the wind.

Such a shot has a strong sense of immediacy, Zhang Yao shook her head again and again to throw the picture of brain supplement out of her mind, her eyes turned into beanie eyes, and she pointed at the boy and asked Yunsheng, "What's the situation, did you take the wrong medicine?" ”

"I guess I didn't take any medicine, right?"

"Idiots are contagious, too, so don't hurry up." Zhang Yao dragged Yunshang and was about to leave, but she couldn't drag her.

Yunshang stared at her for a while, and then said, "Hey, pretend to be stupid, right, campus legend, you forgot?" ”

"I'll go, it's the goods." Zhang Yao reacted, and then spread his hands, "Don't you say that I really forgot, didn't I just bump into it by accident, who can remember so much." ”

If everyone in this situation has to remember, how many people will remember in this life.

After pretending, this guy walked up to Zhang Yao and looked down. There's no way, her height of 43 meters is really a little short, and she can't look at eye level at all.

As soon as this guy approached, he smiled and said, "Senior Sister Zhang Yao, I know the author of Dragon Ball, Yao 1/2 is you." ”

"Huh?" Zhang Yao had no idea what he wanted to express.

"Because I saw your sketch that day and it was completely right, I knew it was you. But don't worry, I won't tell anyone, it's our little secret. ”

"Huh?" Now Zhang Yao is confused.

"I've signed up for the voice actor training class, and I'll work hard in the direction of voice actor in the future, and when I become a famous voice actor and your work is animated, let's get married."

"Huh?" A thunderbolt flashed in Zhang Yao's inner world, and 10,000 grass and mud horses roared by.

"That's it." This guy didn't dwell on it, and left with great strides after finishing speaking.

Watching him walk and jump, this is a beautiful panic.

"Hahaha, I'm laughing to death, what kind of bloody plot is this." Yunshang had completely lost her image with a smile, squatting on the ground holding her stomach, and almost didn't lie down and roll.

Zhang Yao had a black line in his head, "The point is who has made an agreement with her, he also looks up to my image, and he is not afraid of being regarded as a criminal." ”

"Legal Lori, who can refuse." Yunshang laughed for a long time, and only said this after laughing so much that she didn't have the strength to say so.

Zhang Yao, who came back to her senses, was already covered with goosebumps, and the impact on her was too strong, "No, I have to vomit for a while." ”

"Ah, it's there so soon?"

", I'm disgusted." Zhang Yao covered her mouth and ran into the building, her mind full of the words "I was actually confessed by a man", which flew over like a barrage of dense repetitions.