It is indeed good news that the first volume of a single book will be published, but such good news is completely expected, so there is not much surprise coming out of Yexi's mouth. Pen, fun, pavilion www. biquge。 info

Because the influence of "Youth Solo Troupe" itself is, as long as it is not a work that has been cut in half, it is a sure thing, everything is reasonable.

I didn't feel much of a surprise in the first place, but the news of the rejection followed, and Zhang Yao's mood was only depressed, very depressed and depressed.

"Sister and brother love is very popular in the entertainment industry, and even with this is a cute point, you are now telling others that the hero's Monkey King and the heroine's Bulma are not official matches?"

Yunshang, who had expressed her dissatisfaction before, also continued: "Do you want to say that they are really just a brother and sister relationship, how does this feeling seem to be an excuse for the scumbag protagonist in a vulgar TV series?" ”

"Hey, whether it's treated as a brother or sister by the other party, the premise is that one party loves the other, are Wukong and Bulma like this? Did I say that? ”

Zhang Yao had the face of a diehard, and said, "Who stipulates that the hero and heroine must be a couple?" Don't talk to me about my sister and brother love CP, my sister doesn't eat this set. ”

"But you didn't hint that Bulma would be with Leping before, and suddenly the two sides looked at each other, could it be that you want to express your love too quickly and have no time to take precautions? If you really want to say that, I'm going to throw up. ”

"That's what it is, it's all sung in the song, love comes too fast like a tornado, and you can't leave the storm circle and can't escape ......"

"Who has sung such a song, don't think that just a few words of lyrics can be said."

Yunshang pursed her lips, and Su Yunsleeve also said: "Sister and brother love is indeed very popular now, I thought that Bulma was two years older than Sun Wukong and the height difference was deliberately arranged for such reasons, but I didn't expect it to be ......"

Zhang Yao couldn't help but rub her forehead again, feeling that she was angry, obviously it was the plot of the original book, is it really so unacceptable?

Yexi held the teacup and listened to their arguments silently, and only after they all stopped did she say: "The question of whether Bulma and Sun Wukong are official matches will be put aside for now, in that case, how do you want to arrange Sun Wukong?" ”

Yexi drank the tea and put down the teacup, paused and continued: "Although the theme that our young group has always advocated is youth and dreams, emotional drama can also be regarded as a part of it, and if it is handled well, it can add icing on the cake to the work, and it will be more popular with readers." ”

"How can it be handled well, do you think it's appropriate to talk to a sixteen-year-old girl about emotional drama?" Not to mention that she is a sixteen-year-old girl now, Zhang Yao's feelings in her previous life were also blank, and she couldn't help crying when she thought about it.

"Emotional drama can be the icing on the cake, if it is not handled well, it doesn't matter if it is not handled in one stroke, the point is not to hold back." This should be the second half of the above sentence, because it was only said twice because it was intended, but it can be regarded as an answer to Zhang Yao's question.

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Seeing that Zhang Yao seemed to want to entangle on this issue, Yun Sheng knocked on the table and said, "Please don't change the topic, I'm also very interested in how Sun Wukong is going to arrange for you, I didn't write these in the outline script before." ”

"Of course, Sun Wukong's wife is Qiqi, his grandfather and the Bull Demon King are brothers, and they are very well-connected, right?"

"The doorman is a ghost to you, why don't you say that Sun Wukong's wife is the little girl when she met Oolong? If you don't say it, I thought Kiki, the daughter of the Bull Demon King, was a dragon character. ”

Yun Sheng rolled her eyes violently, and Su Yunsleeve also nodded, "I also thought Qiqi was just a supporting role." ”

It's no wonder that they think so, there are too many such characters in "Dragon Ball", and the current plot is actually connected by small stories, and there is no connection between them at all except for the clue of Dragon Ball, so many characters will not appear again after appearing once.

Zhang Yao has cut and modified the plot, and the main body is still the same.

Of course, even if the original book says that Kiki is a dragon, it doesn't matter at all, she doesn't appear much in the world, and she basically doesn't participate in the incident, and the role task in the later stage is nothing more than to give birth to Sun Wukong, and then stare at Sun Gohan to study.

Thinking of this, Zhang Yao suddenly felt that this might really be a problem.

Yexi then said, "Then do you mean that you want the character of Kiki to be the protagonist?" In this case, it's not a big problem, you tell me about Kiki's appearance in the future, and I'll try to help you make reasonable adjustments. ”

"In the future, of course, Kiki's appearance is to marry Sun Wukong, isn't there already such an agreement......"

Yun Sheng suddenly realized when she heard this, "Oh, then you mean that you will marry the senior who made an appointment with you in the future?" ”

"Hey, why are you talking about this all of a sudden? Who's got an appointment with him? Zhang Yao jumped up as if she had been stepped on by her tail.

"It's not all one nature." Yunshang shrugged indifferently, and Zhang Yao immediately wilted.

She has nothing to say, she did think of this plot when she first drew it, she originally thought it was a very pure plot, but when Yunshang said this, she suddenly felt bad.

Su Yunsleeve was on the side, she must have heard of the so-called campus legend, and Yexi's smile once again took on the taste of a demon, "It turns out that there is an agreement in reality, so it was arranged like this?" ”

"I change, can't I change it non-stop? Don't talk to me about any kind of ghost agreement in the future, or I'll turn against you. Zhang Yao's persistence was easily destroyed in the end.

Su Yunsleeve said: "If Kiki doesn't appear in the future story, and she and Wukong get married directly without any emotional development, I think this arrangement is really bad, especially when Bulma has been with her." ”

Zhang Yao spread his hands in response, who made the god of Toriyama Ming himself emotionally sparse.

Ye Xi raised the teacup that had been filled with Su Yun's sleeves again, and said, "Don't think I'm alarmist, if you publish this manuscript, what will the readers' reactions be, in fact, it's clear by simply doing a test, do you want to try it?" ”

"How to test?" Zhang Yao asked subconsciously.

Yunshang shrugged her nose, took two breaths and said, "I seem to have smelled the conspiracy." ”

Zhang Yao has already made up her mind to change, and it doesn't matter if she tests it or not, but in this way, you can see what readers in this time and space think, so I'm looking forward to it.