"The king of picture books cares more about the connotation, and in the case of novels, it is literary to pay attention to, so the themes are mostly very profound, and our less commercial flavor is stronger, and we must try to be the most in line with the market without restricting the author's ideas. Pen × fun × Pavilion www. ｂｉｑｕｇｅ。 ｉｎｆｏ”

Ye Xi explained it again and again, saying, "So we have adopted a system of reader surveys, and whenever there is a situation that the editor and the author are not sure about, we will use some small tricks to test." ”

The way to test readers' feedback is very simple, that is, to deliberately spoil them, of course, it is not the author and editor who take the initiative to break the news, but "accidentally" leak it.

There are still a few days left before the release of the new issue of "Young Group", and the latest episode of "Dragon Ball" has been spoiled like this.

"Dragon Ball line drawings are outflowing, a sneak peek." After such a post appeared on a well-known animation information website, it was immediately reprinted everywhere.

Needless to say, the people who posted and reposted were all nights, or other people in the editorial department of "Shaotuan", although the vests were different, but it can be said that it was completely operated by one person.

What has been released is not a complete comic, but a few simple line drawings that focus on the storyboard in which Bulma and Leping look at each other and dance hand in hand, and then emphasize that the two of them hook up together.

"This ...... Why don't you let Oolong be Bulma's boyfriend if you don't have half of it? ”

Zhang Yao was stunned for a while before she reacted that "missing half" was talking about her as the author, but there is no need to worry about the nickname, this comment conveys a strong resentment.

"After chasing so many issues, you actually let me watch this, do you really think of Wukong as a child? He is set to be fourteen years old, and Bulma is only sixteen years old, why does it feel like it is divided into two situations: the world of adults and the world of children? ”

"I think it's time to abandon the publication."

"Originally, I thought that Wukong and Bulma would be like Journey to the West, going on such a fun adventure all the time, and then naturally came together, but they came out halfway to win love, what is going on?"

"At first, I thought Leping was the boss, but it turned out that he actually NTR Sun Wukong, author, what kind of trouble are you going to make?"

……

"Dragon Ball", which has not finished the opening story, is not comparable to those popular comics, but it has also accumulated a certain amount of popularity, and fans who like to surf the Internet have been blown up by this "revelation" and have expressed their dissatisfaction.

"What do you think of the expected result?" Yexi read all the readers' comments to Zhang Yao, and then asked with a smile.

"I don't think I knew much about these readers' minds before, but when I think about it, it seems to make sense." Zhang Yao really thought about it seriously, not only the reader's reaction, but also the reflection on the entire plot of the original "Dragon Ball".

In fact, in terms of style, whether it is "The King of Paintings", which pursues connotation and artistry, or "Shaotuan", which pursues the market and pursues commercialization, it is a bit extreme, no matter which one, a single pursuit is not the best.

Of course, both magazines also coordinate between artistry and commerciality, but it is not easy to strike a balance, so the impression is that "The King of Paintings" is more profound, and "Shaotuan" is too market-oriented.

It will not be a good thing not to eat the fireworks in the world, and the same is true for blindly pursuing the market, as a cartoonist, you can't blindly listen to the opinions of readers, and you can't say that you can draw how readers ask for it, so there is a high probability that readers will pit themselves.

However, the reader's opinion can also not be ignored, and the author must also consider the reader's feelings, otherwise it can only be self-entertainment, which is the case with many works in "The King of Paintings".

I just want to paint like this, whether you like to see it or not, this is the impression given by "The King of Paintings".

Where the painting is not good, you say I will change it, this is the style of "Shaotuan".

What should be insisted on should be insisted on, and it would be tragic if stubbornly insisted on what should not be insisted on, Zhang Yao looked back and thought about the plot again, from the moment Bulma and Wukong met, all the way to the bits and pieces before the android chapter, it feels quite regrettable that the two did not come together in the end.

The encounter between the two is the source of the story, the first girl Sun Wukong saw in his life was Bulma, and the first time he saw [Wow-] was also Bulma.

In the adventure journey along the way, Bulma and her invention are also the biggest support of Sun Wukong, and Bulma has participated in the basic events of the early stage and contributed a lot.

And obviously Sun Wukong is also Bulma's biggest dependence, to say that the relationship between the two must be very deep, to say that this is friendship is really a bit like a fish in the throat, this is friendship, Sun Wukong and Kiki are love? What about Bulma and Vegeta?

In my previous life, it seems that many Dragon Ball fans also had doubts about this, and they were also worried about it.

Speaking of which, he should still throw the pot to Akira Toriyama, all because his emotional drama is so bad, and this is not only the case in "Dragon Ball", but also in "Dr. IQ".

The protagonist should be married, and then find someone to marry him, and it doesn't matter what the foreshadowing is, this has always been Akira Toriyama's usual technique.

Although Zhang Yao's relationship has been blank for two lifetimes, and the emotional drama may not be as delicate and wonderful as those romance novels, at least it is not rotten to this point, at least it is okay to make a reasonable arrangement.

Removing the deep-rooted impression of "Dragon Ball", in fact, she is not happy to see the result of Bulma and Son Goku parting ways, in terms of her creative style, such a hero and heroine are bound to come together in the end.

Not only Bulma, but even Ranki and No. 18.

Ahem...... This is the result of reading too many online novels and harves/palaces, and their happy life together is the best ending.

Although it is plagiarism, there is no need to copy it as it is, although Zhang Yao thought of this before, but the perception is still not thorough enough, and now he has a clearer understanding of how to go in the future.

Seeing that she was enlightened, Yexi said: "Since there is no problem, quickly change the manuscript, and there is no problem in handing it over to me in three days, right?" ”

Zhang Yao read the sketch again, "This kind of plot that is too sudden is very convenient for revision, there is no need to change much at all, and it only takes three days for a matter of one or two pages." ”

Yunshang said: "It will take three days to change it, you should quit the rivers and lakes from now on, Yexi will lend you three days, obviously so that you can adjust the plot in the future, and this situation should be avoided." ”

"Ah, am I stupid enough to fall in the same place twice?" Zhang Yao swore an oath, and then said: "I changed the manuscript, what about the posts on the Internet?" ”

"It's simple, as long as I come forward to help you clarify."

Yexi posted a post as an editor, saying that those revelations were fake, and the sketches of "Dragon Ball" were not leaked at all, and all netizens were relieved after reading it.

A storm passed like this, and these fans had no idea that they had participated in an investigation.

"High, it's really high, what kind of trick is this, it should be said that it is a trick." Zhang Yao had to admire.

But first release the wind to test the reaction of the people who eat melons, and if it doesn't feel good, I will immediately come forward to clarify, what is going on with this strong sense of immediacy, have you seen it somewhere before?

Change, revise it immediately, Zhang Yao spread out the pen and ink, bit the pen and thought about it carefully, and copied a lot of changes in the opening story.

After Bulma became Sister Cannon, she adjusted most of the content, including the Rabbit Legion, and some of them were even deleted.

In the original work, the grandfather Sun Gohan was trampled to death by Sun Wukong, who turned into a giant ape.,Although it's an unconscious manslaughter.,But it's still a little difficult to accept emotionally.,This point has also been adjusted.。

These can only be regarded as fine-tuning, and the emotional arrangement of Bulma is an overhaul, which seems to be a simple scene, but the rest of the story will be unrecognizable.

Sun Wukong and Bulma came together, Sun Gohan Sun Wutian can be changed to the son of the two of them, so what about Vegeta? What about Trunks?

There's still a headache in the future plot.,Why don't you just end it after the big demon king roll? Anyway, strictly speaking, the best chapter of "Dragon Ball" is only here, and Akira Toriyama originally only planned to draw it here.

However, although the plot behind it is very ridiculous, and the story can be said to be completely out of control, the setting of Super Saiyan is also one of the most classic settings in anime history, and it is still worth talking about.

"Dragon Ball" should be regarded as the earliest upgrade stream work, and later those domestic fantasy web novels are basically such routines, fighting monsters and upgrading, first being ridiculed and then slapped in the face by strength......

Of course, there is also an indispensable hanging, for example, no matter how injured you are, as long as you eat one, you can recover as good as the original fairy bean, and there is also a god-defying existence like the Spirit Time House, and finally I learned the combination skills like a mecha.

Zhang Yao was so engrossed that Yun Sheng stretched out his hand and shook it in front of her eyes, and said, "What are you in a daze, what is this?" ”

"I've never seen anyone think intently, you see I'm so involved in thinking about the plot...... Hey, where's my editor? Only then did Zhang Yao react, and the night had disappeared.

Su Yunsleeve sorted out the tea set and said, "Sister Yexi has already left, and I didn't bother you when I saw that you were engrossed." How's that, this adjustment doesn't have much impact on the originally arranged plot, right? ”

How can it be that it is not big, it is almost overturned...... Well, it should be said that the impact hasn't started yet, so Zhang Yao shook his head and said, "I'm worried, I can handle it." ”

"That's good." Su Yunsleeve smiled brightly and said, "Anyway, there are three days, so you don't need to be in a hurry, do you want to drink a cup of tea to relieve it?" ”

"Okay, bring me a cup of winter melon tea."

"You should find a vending machine, or just put one in the activity room." Yunshang rolled her eyes.